Leviathan:Volume 7 Chapter 4 - Revision history

Zzhk: priding requires a preposition such as on, in, or upon; the ____ (adjective) can be used as a noun, e.g. the strong, the weak, etc

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priding requires a preposition such as on, in, or upon; the ____ (adjective) can be used as a noun, e.g. the strong, the weak, etc

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	Sakuraba-senpai—Hal had definitely heard this name before.		Sakuraba-senpai—Hal had definitely heard this name before.

	Priding his superior investigation abilities, he spent all his time chasing scoops outside of school.		Priding upon his superior investigation abilities, he spent all his time chasing scoops outside of school.

	Since he seldom visited the clubroom, Hal had never seen him before. They met at last today...		Since he seldom visited the clubroom, Hal had never seen him before. They met at last today...
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	This part of his memories was quite vague, but there was something he remembered clearly—		This part of his memories was quite vague, but there was something he remembered clearly—

	The sensations from his right hand came in two categories. The really small ~~sensation~~ belonged to Asya while the ~~overflowing abundance~~ was Orihime's.		The sensations from his right hand came in two categories. The really small belonged to Asya while the overflowingly abundant was Orihime's.

	Having personally experienced how they felt to his touch, his memory could not possibly be mistaken.		Having personally experienced how they felt to his touch, his memory could not possibly be mistaken.

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	The dragonslaying sword had forcefully pierced this energy source of a dragon's body.		The dragonslaying sword had forcefully pierced this energy source of a dragon's body.

	Forget about a puny human, in his current state, there was no he could move a dragon king's body.		Forget about a puny human, in his current state, there was no way he could move a dragon king's body.

	"I suppose I'll... rest for a bit."		"I suppose I'll... rest for a bit."

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	His chest—the heartmetal—was hurting. The wound had clearly closed up—Hal did not know if someone performed first aid on him—but it seemed to be rupturing now.		His chest—the heartmetal—was hurting. The wound had clearly closed up—Hal did not know if someone performed first aid on him—but it seemed to be rupturing now.

	The dragonslaying sword had forcefully pierced this energy source of dragon's body.		The dragonslaying sword had forcefully pierced this energy source of a dragon's body.

	Forget about a puny human, in his current state, there was no he could move a dragon king's body.		Forget about a puny human, in his current state, there was no he could move a dragon king's body.

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	This part of his memories was quite vague, but there was something he remembered clearly—		This part of his memories was quite vague, but there was something he remembered clearly—

	The sensations from his right hand came in two categories. The really small belonged to Asya while the overflowing abundance was Orihime's.		The sensations from his right hand came in two categories. The really small sensation belonged to Asya while the overflowing abundance was Orihime's.

	Having personally experienced how they felt to his touch, his memory could not possibly be mistaken.		Having personally experienced how they felt to his touch, his memory could not possibly be mistaken.
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	For some reason, contact with the girls had decreased the synchronization between Hal's soul and the queen.		For some reason, contact with the girls had decreased the synchronization between Hal's soul and the queen.

	That was probably ~~teh~~ reason. When the wound was inflicted on the queen's chest, only 30 or 40% was reflected onto Hal. As a result, he survived luckily.		That was probably the reason. When the wound was inflicted on the queen's chest, only 30 or 40% was reflected onto Hal. As a result, he survived luckily.

	Putting aside for now why "the sensation of breasts" would have this kind of effect.		Putting aside for now why "the sensation of breasts" would have this kind of effect.

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	Sakuraba-senpai—Hal had definitely heard this name before.		Sakuraba-senpai—Hal had definitely heard this name before.

	Priding in his superior investigation abilities, he spent all his time chasing ~~scoop~~ outside of school.		Priding his superior investigation abilities, he spent all his time chasing scoops outside of school.

	Since he seldom visited the clubroom, Hal had never seen him before. They met at last today...		Since he seldom visited the clubroom, Hal had never seen him before. They met at last today...

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	Two white arrowheads suddenly appeared over Rushalka's head and hurtled towards the dead center of the three hundred Raptors in the sky that were biding their time to launch a heavy offensive.		Two white arrowheads suddenly appeared over Rushalka's head and hurtled towards the dead center of the three hundred Raptors in the sky that were biding their time to launch a heavy offensive.

	Thus, through ~~Asyand~~ Rushalka's desperate efforts and magical power, a technique of assured annihilation was unleashed.		Thus, through Asya and Rushalka's desperate efforts and magical power, a technique of assured annihilation was unleashed.

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	Inside the barrier created by Pavel Galad...		Inside the barrier created by Pavel Galad...

	A great battle was taking place the mysterious ruins resembling an open-pit mine. Four witches and four leviathans were cornered.		A great battle was taking place in the mysterious ruins resembling an open-pit mine. Four witches and four leviathans were cornered.

	A huge number of Raptors had them heavily surrounded.		A huge number of Raptors had them heavily surrounded.

2016-10-29T11:55:25Z

Part 5

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