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	===Prologue===		===Prologue===

	'''''“You can’t live if you aren’t tough enough. You don’t have the right to live if you aren’t compassionate enough.”'''''		'''“You can’t live if you aren’t tough enough. You don’t have the right to live if you aren’t
			'''compassionate enough.”
	'''――――――――Chandra “PLAYBACK”'''		'''

			'''――――――――Chandra “PLAYBACK”'''

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	I didn’t even have a single clothe. The cell phone grasped in my left hand was my last possession.		I didn’t even have a single clothe. The cell phone grasped in my left hand was my last possession.

	~~On reverse of~~ impatience, my limbs which had grown thin in the underground dungeon didn’t move as I wished.		In contrast to my impatience, my limbs which had grown thin in the underground dungeon didn’t move as I wished.

	I tripped.		I tripped.
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	“Our meeting here is our <Destiny>.”		“Our meeting here is our <Destiny>.”

	~~The girl with the sunset coloured hair just smiled at me, ""I seized her neck from below as if I was to strangle her.~~		The girl with the sunset coloured hair just smiled at me, even though I was strangling her.
	~~“Our meeting here is our <Destiny>.”~~

	The girl with the sunset coloured hair just smiled at me, even though I was ~~tightening my grip on~~ her ~~neck~~."

	In the night sky as the background, a full moon floated beside her face.		In the night sky as the background, a full moon floated beside her face.

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	I didn’t even have a single clothe. The cell phone grasped in my left hand was my last possession.		I didn’t even have a single clothe. The cell phone grasped in my left hand was my last possession.

	On ~~contrary to my~~ impatience, my limbs which had grown thin in the underground dungeon didn’t move as I wished.		On reverse of impatience, my limbs which had grown thin in the underground dungeon didn’t move as I wished.

	I tripped.		I tripped.
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	“Our meeting here is our <Destiny>.”		“Our meeting here is our <Destiny>.”

	The girl with the sunset coloured hair just smiled at me, even though I was ~~strangling~~ her.		The girl with the sunset coloured hair just smiled at me, ""I seized her neck from below as if I was to strangle her.
			“Our meeting here is our <Destiny>.”

			The girl with the sunset coloured hair just smiled at me, even though I was tightening my grip on her neck."

	In the night sky as the background, a full moon floated beside her face.		In the night sky as the background, a full moon floated beside her face.

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	“W-What is this ~~place…Which~~ way..”		“W-What is this place…which way..”

	Fleeing as if swimming through the blue night.		Fleeing as if swimming through the blue night.
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	I slowly removed my hands from her neck, while fighting with the violent frenzy inside of me.		I slowly removed my hands from her neck, while fighting with the violent frenzy inside of me.

	Why was I driven by ~~suck~~ killing intent? I don’t know what to do anymore. The ringing in my ears is almost making me go crazy. The feeling of fury which completely foreign to me was trying to lead me astray.		Why was I driven by such killing intent? I don’t know what to do anymore. The ringing in my ears is almost making me go crazy. The feeling of fury which completely foreign to me was trying to lead me astray.

	I, what did I get myself into.		I, what did I get myself into.

Sirgoodguy: hi I was bored :D Rakudai has to many editors not really needed :v

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hi I was bored :D Rakudai has to many editors not really needed :v

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	This place, it ain’t Japan at all…		This place, it ain’t Japan at all…

	The fields expanding before were just simply too endless. An unknown scenery with groves of trees. Even a spec of artificial light		The fields expanding before were just simply too endless. An unknown scenery with groves of trees. Even a spec of artificial light couldn’t be spotted, let alone human habitation.
	couldn’t be spotted, let alone human habitation.

	I stopped at the sudden sense of despair.		I stopped at the sudden sense of despair.
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	“Help…”		“Help…”

	I didn’t even have a single clothe. The ~~cellphone~~ grasped in my left hand was my last possession.		I didn’t even have a single clothe. The cell phone grasped in my left hand was my last possession.

	On reverse of impatience, my limbs which had grown thin in the underground dungeon didn’t move as I wished.		On reverse of impatience, my limbs which had grown thin in the underground dungeon didn’t move as I wished.
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	“My {{furigana\|<King>\|Lugal}}. So we finally meet.”		“My {{furigana\|<King>\|Lugal}}. So we finally meet.”

	Vivid scarlet hair with big ~~emrald~~ green eyes. The same age? Or maybe a bit younger.		Vivid scarlet hair with big emerald green eyes. The same age? Or maybe a bit younger.

	A baby-face which was strangely fascinating. Just like a fairy from a ~~fairytale~~.		A baby-face which was strangely fascinating. Just like a fairy from a fairy-tale.

	She wore an old fashioned long dress that reminded me of the ones from a foreign country I once saw.		She wore an old fashioned long dress that reminded me of the ones from a foreign country I once saw.
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	My heart had gone into a fear frenzy, and my ears rang insanely.		My heart had gone into a fear frenzy, and my ears rang insanely.

	The second most important thing next to my life, the cell phone which I had dropped when I tripped was now in her hands. I was instantly		The second most important thing next to my life, the cell phone which I had dropped when I tripped was now in her hands. I was instantly dominated by a frenzy that even surprised me.
	dominated by a frenzy that even surprised me.

	“G-Give it back!”		“G-Give it back!”
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	I slowly removed my hands from her neck, while fighting with the violent frenzy inside of me.		I slowly removed my hands from her neck, while fighting with the violent frenzy inside of me.

	Why was I driven by suck killing intent? I don’t know what to do anymore. The ringing in my ears is almost making me go crazy. The		Why was I driven by suck killing intent? I don’t know what to do anymore. The ringing in my ears is almost making me go crazy. The feeling of fury which completely foreign to me was trying to lead me astray.
	feeling of fury which completely foreign to me was trying to lead me astray.

	I, what did I get myself into.		I, what did I get myself into.
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	And for some reason, those words weren’t for me, but felt like it was for something deep inside of my eyes.		And for some reason, those words weren’t for me, but felt like it was for something deep inside of my eyes.

	And just like that, the overwhelming ringing in my ears started to calm down, and then it disappeared altogether. And the frenzy I		And just like that, the overwhelming ringing in my ears started to calm down, and then it disappeared altogether. And the frenzy I couldn’t do anything about also disappeared, as if it was a lie from the beginning.
	couldn’t do anything about also disappeared, as if it was a lie from the beginning.

	Did I here wrong? I just met her but she said my name just now.		Did I here wrong? I just met her but she said my name just now.
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	It felt like a small muttering escaped from her lips.		It felt like a small muttering escaped from her lips.

	~~“…Who…are~~ you?....My ~~name…why~~ do you know it.”		“…Who… are you?....My name… why do you know it.”

	I don’t know why, but this girl knew me!?		I don’t know why, but this girl knew me!?
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	From yellow to orange, than it turned scarlet.		From yellow to orange, than it turned scarlet.

	An aura that resembled a heat haze, it changed its colours rapidly on a ~~moments~~ notice.		An aura that resembled a heat haze, it changed its colours rapidly on a moment’s notice.

	The light on her back which resembled wings rose towards the heavens as if matching with her strides.		The light on her back which resembled wings rose towards the heavens as if matching with her strides.
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	She calmly walked towards the ‘Failures’, and as if being overwhelmed, they looked at her with a distant view.		She calmly walked towards the ‘Failures’, and as if being overwhelmed, they looked at her with a distant view.

	But the ‘Failures’ gathered one after another and quickly formed a ring to surround her. The measly bit of ‘reason’ they had was		But the ‘Failures’ gathered one after another and quickly formed a ring to surround her. The measly bit of ‘reason’ they had was immediately replaced by ‘bestiality’.
	immediately replaced by ‘bestiality’.

	The artificially created beasts with a thirst for blood simultaneously attacked the petite girl.		The artificially created beasts with a thirst for blood simultaneously attacked the petite girl.

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	“Help…”		“Help…”

	I didn’t even have a single ~~clothe~~. The cell phone grasped in my left hand was my last possession.		I didn’t even have a single cloth on. The cell phone grasped in my left hand was my last possession.

	In contrast to my impatience, my limbs which had grown thin in the underground dungeon didn’t move as I wished.		In contrast to my impatience, my limbs which had grown thin in the underground dungeon didn’t move as I wished.
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	“Our meeting here is our <Destiny>.”		“Our meeting here is our <Destiny>.”

	The girl with the sunset coloured hair just smiled at me, even though I was ~~strangling~~ her.		The girl with the sunset coloured hair just smiled at me, even though I was tightening my grip on her neck.

	In the night sky as the background, a full moon floated beside her face.		In the night sky as the background, a full moon floated beside her face.
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	I slowly removed my hands from her neck, while fighting with the violent frenzy inside of me.		I slowly removed my hands from her neck, while fighting with the violent frenzy inside of me.

	Why was I driven by such killing intent? I don’t know what to do anymore. The ringing in my ears is almost making me go crazy. The feeling of fury which completely foreign to me was trying to lead me astray.		Why was I driven by such killing intent? I don’t know what to do anymore. The ringing in my ears is almost making me go crazy. The feeling of fury which was completely foreign to me was trying to lead me astray.

	I, what did I get myself into.		I... what did I get myself into.

	I just cried, while being confused.		I just cried, while being confused.

	A white hand touched my ragged face covered with mud, sweat and tears.		A white hand touched my ragged face covered with mud, sweat, and tears.

	Her eyes were close enough for me to touch, and as if I was imprisoned by those enchanting eyes, my body stopped moving.		Her eyes were close enough for me to touch, and as if I was imprisoned by those enchanting eyes, my body stopped moving.
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	And for some reason, those words weren’t for me, but felt like it was for something deep inside of my eyes.		And for some reason, those words weren’t for me, but felt like it was for something deep inside of my eyes.

	And just like that, the overwhelming ringing in my ears started to calm down, and then it disappeared altogether. And the frenzy I couldn’t do anything about also disappeared, as if it was a ~~lie~~ from the beginning.		And just like that, the overwhelming ringing in my ears started to calm down, and then it disappeared altogether. And the frenzy I couldn’t do anything about also disappeared, as if it was a farce from the beginning.

	Did I ~~here~~ wrong? I just met her but she said my name just now.		Did I hear wrong? I just met her but she said my name just now.

	“……If it’s like this…..”		“……If it’s like this…..”

	It ~~felt~~ like a small muttering escaped from her lips.		It seemed like a small muttering escaped from her lips.

	“…Who… are you?....My name… why do you know it.”		“…Who… are you?....My name… why do you know it.”
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	“U-Uwah-!”		“U-Uwah-!”

	Before my ~~wondering~~ line of sight, I saw them. The monstrous figures right at the bottom of the hill.		Before my wandering line of sight, I saw them. The monstrous figures right at the bottom of the hill.

	A man with a crocodile’s head, a panther with three human heads, a woman who grew countless beasts’ legs. They gathered one by one with		A man with a crocodile’s head, a panther with three human heads, a woman who grew countless beasts’ legs. They gathered one by one with
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	She returned a bright smile to me who was rashly telling her to stop.		She returned a bright smile to me who was rashly telling her to stop.

	~~“it’s~~ okay, it’s okay. We’ll meet again soon. Since that’s our <Destiny>.”		“It’s okay, it’s okay. We’ll meet again soon. Since that’s our <Destiny>.”

	She turned around after saying that. And from her back, phosphorescence started to scatter about.		She turned around after saying that. And from her back, phosphorescence started to scatter about.
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	The light on her back which resembled wings rose towards the heavens as if matching with her strides.		The light on her back which resembled wings rose towards the heavens as if matching with her strides.

	She calmly walked towards the ‘Failures’, ~~and~~ as if being overwhelmed, ~~they~~ looked at her with a distant view.		She calmly walked towards the ‘Failures’, who as if being overwhelmed, looked at her with a distant view.

	But the ‘Failures’ gathered one after another and quickly formed a ring to surround her. The measly bit of ‘reason’ they had was immediately replaced by ‘bestiality’.		But the ‘Failures’ gathered one after another and quickly formed a ring to surround her. The measly bit of ‘reason’ they had was immediately replaced by ‘bestiality’.

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	I didn’t even have a single clothe. The cell phone grasped in my left hand was my last possession.		I didn’t even have a single clothe. The cell phone grasped in my left hand was my last possession.

	On ~~reverse of~~ impatience, my limbs which had grown thin in the underground dungeon didn’t move as I wished.		On contrary to my impatience, my limbs which had grown thin in the underground dungeon didn’t move as I wished.

	I tripped.		I tripped.
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	I slowly removed my hands from her neck, while fighting with the violent frenzy inside of me.		I slowly removed my hands from her neck, while fighting with the violent frenzy inside of me.

	Why was I driven by such killing intent? I don’t know what to do anymore. The ringing in my ears is almost making me go crazy. The feeling of fury which ~~was~~ completely foreign to me was trying to lead me astray.		Why was I driven by such killing intent? I don’t know what to do anymore. The ringing in my ears is almost making me go crazy. The feeling of fury which completely foreign to me was trying to lead me astray.

	I~~...~~ what did I get myself into.		I, what did I get myself into.

	I just cried, while being confused.		I just cried, while being confused.

	A white hand touched my ragged face covered with mud, sweat, and tears.		A white hand touched my ragged face covered with mud, sweat and tears.

	Her eyes were close enough for me to touch, and as if I was imprisoned by those enchanting eyes, my body stopped moving.		Her eyes were close enough for me to touch, and as if I was imprisoned by those enchanting eyes, my body stopped moving.
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	And for some reason, those words weren’t for me, but felt like it was for something deep inside of my eyes.		And for some reason, those words weren’t for me, but felt like it was for something deep inside of my eyes.

	And just like that, the overwhelming ringing in my ears started to calm down, and then it disappeared altogether. And the frenzy I couldn’t do anything about also disappeared, as if it was a ~~farce~~ from the beginning.		And just like that, the overwhelming ringing in my ears started to calm down, and then it disappeared altogether. And the frenzy I couldn’t do anything about also disappeared, as if it was a lie from the beginning.

	Did I here wrong? I just met her but she said my name just now.		Did I here wrong? I just met her but she said my name just now.
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	“……If it’s like this…..”		“……If it’s like this…..”

	It ~~seemed~~ like a small muttering escaped from her lips.		It felt like a small muttering escaped from her lips.

	“…Who… are you?....My name… why do you know it.”		“…Who… are you?....My name… why do you know it.”
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	“U-Uwah-!”		“U-Uwah-!”

	Before my ~~wandering~~ line of sight, I saw them. The monstrous figures right at the bottom of the hill.		Before my wondering line of sight, I saw them. The monstrous figures right at the bottom of the hill.

	A man with a crocodile’s head, a panther with three human heads, a woman who grew countless beasts’ legs. They gathered one by one with		A man with a crocodile’s head, a panther with three human heads, a woman who grew countless beasts’ legs. They gathered one by one with
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	She returned a bright smile to me who was rashly telling her to stop.		She returned a bright smile to me who was rashly telling her to stop.

	~~“It’s~~ okay, it’s okay. We’ll meet again soon. Since that’s our <Destiny>.”		“it’s okay, it’s okay. We’ll meet again soon. Since that’s our <Destiny>.”

	She turned around after saying that. And from her back, phosphorescence started to scatter about.		She turned around after saying that. And from her back, phosphorescence started to scatter about.
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	The light on her back which resembled wings rose towards the heavens as if matching with her strides.		The light on her back which resembled wings rose towards the heavens as if matching with her strides.

	She calmly walked towards the ‘Failures’, ~~who~~ as if being overwhelmed looked at her with a distant view.		She calmly walked towards the ‘Failures’, and as if being overwhelmed, they looked at her with a distant view.

	But the ‘Failures’ gathered one after another and quickly formed a ring to surround her. The measly bit of ‘reason’ they had was immediately replaced by ‘bestiality’.		But the ‘Failures’ gathered one after another and quickly formed a ring to surround her. The measly bit of ‘reason’ they had was immediately replaced by ‘bestiality’.

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	I slowly removed my hands from her neck, while fighting with the violent frenzy inside of me.		I slowly removed my hands from her neck, while fighting with the violent frenzy inside of me.

	Why was I driven by such killing intent? I don’t know what to do anymore. The ringing in my ears is almost making me go crazy. The feeling of fury which completely foreign to me was trying to lead me astray.		Why was I driven by such killing intent? I don’t know what to do anymore. The ringing in my ears is almost making me go crazy. The feeling of fury which was completely foreign to me was trying to lead me astray.

	I, what did I get myself into.		I... what did I get myself into.

	I just cried, while being confused.		I just cried, while being confused.

	A white hand touched my ragged face covered with mud, sweat and tears.		A white hand touched my ragged face covered with mud, sweat, and tears.

	Her eyes were close enough for me to touch, and as if I was imprisoned by those enchanting eyes, my body stopped moving.		Her eyes were close enough for me to touch, and as if I was imprisoned by those enchanting eyes, my body stopped moving.
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	And for some reason, those words weren’t for me, but felt like it was for something deep inside of my eyes.		And for some reason, those words weren’t for me, but felt like it was for something deep inside of my eyes.

	And just like that, the overwhelming ringing in my ears started to calm down, and then it disappeared altogether. And the frenzy I couldn’t do anything about also disappeared, as if it was a ~~lie~~ from the beginning.		And just like that, the overwhelming ringing in my ears started to calm down, and then it disappeared altogether. And the frenzy I couldn’t do anything about also disappeared, as if it was a farce from the beginning.

	Did I here wrong? I just met her but she said my name just now.		Did I here wrong? I just met her but she said my name just now.
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	“……If it’s like this…..”		“……If it’s like this…..”

	It ~~felt~~ like a small muttering escaped from her lips.		It seemed like a small muttering escaped from her lips.

	“…Who… are you?....My name… why do you know it.”		“…Who… are you?....My name… why do you know it.”
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	“U-Uwah-!”		“U-Uwah-!”

	Before my ~~wondering~~ line of sight, I saw them. The monstrous figures right at the bottom of the hill.		Before my wandering line of sight, I saw them. The monstrous figures right at the bottom of the hill.

	A man with a crocodile’s head, a panther with three human heads, a woman who grew countless beasts’ legs. They gathered one by one with		A man with a crocodile’s head, a panther with three human heads, a woman who grew countless beasts’ legs. They gathered one by one with
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	She returned a bright smile to me who was rashly telling her to stop.		She returned a bright smile to me who was rashly telling her to stop.

	~~“it’s~~ okay, it’s okay. We’ll meet again soon. Since that’s our <Destiny>.”		“It’s okay, it’s okay. We’ll meet again soon. Since that’s our <Destiny>.”

	She turned around after saying that. And from her back, phosphorescence started to scatter about.		She turned around after saying that. And from her back, phosphorescence started to scatter about.
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	The light on her back which resembled wings rose towards the heavens as if matching with her strides.		The light on her back which resembled wings rose towards the heavens as if matching with her strides.

	She calmly walked towards the ‘Failures’, ~~and~~ as if being overwhelmed~~, they~~ looked at her with a distant view.		She calmly walked towards the ‘Failures’, who as if being overwhelmed looked at her with a distant view.

	But the ‘Failures’ gathered one after another and quickly formed a ring to surround her. The measly bit of ‘reason’ they had was immediately replaced by ‘bestiality’.		But the ‘Failures’ gathered one after another and quickly formed a ring to surround her. The measly bit of ‘reason’ they had was immediately replaced by ‘bestiality’.