Madan no Ou to Vanadis:Short Story - Revision history

ArchmageXin at 04:20, 20 May 2013

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			'''Note: This story suppose to come from part of a DVD set that include an actual music package. What you see here is indeed the entire story.'''


	This is a story of when Tigre was a captive living in Leitmeritz.		This is a story of when Tigre was a captive living in Leitmeritz.

Par74583: I mistranslated a bit.

2013-05-19T10:26:43Z

I mistranslated a bit.

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	Ellen, who suddenly burst in without knocking the door, said this with a serious face. For Tigre, who had been lying on the bed sleeping, he was flabbergasted as he stared at her. Even if he told her to get out, he doubted that this silver-haired Vanadis would comply. Regardless, he was her captive and in the end couldn’t argue.		Ellen, who suddenly burst in without knocking the door, said this with a serious face. For Tigre, who had been lying on the bed sleeping, he was flabbergasted as he stared at her. Even if he told her to get out, he doubted that this silver-haired Vanadis would comply. Regardless, he was her captive and in the end couldn’t argue.

	“...Ok, ok. So, there’s no ~~one~~ here, huh?”		“...Ok, ok. So, there’s no where to hide here, huh?”

	“No problem. I only need to wait for the clamor to die down...”		“No problem. I only need to wait for the clamor to die down...”

Noobarta at 19:24, 18 May 2013

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	“I-it is not that big of a deal. —I only played a bit. I can play it again for you, if you wish.”		“I-it is not that big of a deal. —I only played a bit. I can play it again for you, if you wish.”

	Tigre nodded smilingly and Ellen once more picked up the shamisen. Ellen, herself, seemed to be in high spirits. Reminiscing, she realized she hadn’t ~~touch~~ a shamisen for about two years and it's been long since she had been praised. There's nothing else but to go along with the flow now.		Tigre nodded smilingly and Ellen once more picked up the shamisen. Ellen, herself, seemed to be in high spirits. Reminiscing, she realized that she hadn’t touched a shamisen for about two years and it's been long since she had been praised. There's nothing else but to go along with the flow for now.

	Afterwards—Lim heard the silver-haired Vanadis playing the shamisen and it was not too soon later did she reach the room the two of them were in.		Afterwards—Lim heard the silver-haired Vanadis playing the shamisen and it was not too soon later did she reach the room the two of them were in.

Nukie at 01:16, 11 May 2013

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	Ellen, who suddenly burst in without knocking the door, said this with a serious face. For Tigre, who had been lying on the bed sleeping, he was flabbergasted as he stared at her. Even if he told her to get out, he doubted that this silver-haired Vanadis would comply. Regardless, he was her captive and in the end couldn’t argue.		Ellen, who suddenly burst in without knocking the door, said this with a serious face. For Tigre, who had been lying on the bed sleeping, he was flabbergasted as he stared at her. Even if he told her to get out, he doubted that this silver-haired Vanadis would comply. Regardless, he was her captive and in the end couldn’t argue.

	“...Ok,ok. So, there’s no one here, huh?”		“...Ok, ok. So, there’s no one here, huh?”

	“No problem. I only need to wait for the clamor to die down...”		“No problem. I only need to wait for the clamor to die down...”
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	Ellen, having been praised, blushed, and proceeded to fiddle with the shamisen.		Ellen, having been praised, blushed, and proceeded to fiddle with the shamisen.

	“I-it is not that big of a deal. ~~——I~~ only played a bit. I can play it again for you, if you wish.”		“I-it is not that big of a deal. —I only played a bit. I can play it again for you, if you wish.”

	Tigre nodded smilingly and Ellen once more picked up the shamisen. Ellen, herself, seemed to be in high spirits. Reminiscing, she realized she hadn’t touch a shamisen for about two years and it's been long since she had been praised. There's nothing else but to go along with the flow now.		Tigre nodded smilingly and Ellen once more picked up the shamisen. Ellen, herself, seemed to be in high spirits. Reminiscing, she realized she hadn’t touch a shamisen for about two years and it's been long since she had been praised. There's nothing else but to go along with the flow now.

	~~Afterwards——Lim~~ heard the silver-haired Vanadis playing the shamisen and it was not too soon later did she reach the room the two of them were in.		Afterwards—Lim heard the silver-haired Vanadis playing the shamisen and it was not too soon later did she reach the room the two of them were in.

96.226.46.175 at 07:03, 10 May 2013

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	Tigre nodded smilingly and Ellen once more picked up the shamisen. Ellen, herself, seemed to be in high spirits. Reminiscing, she realized she hadn’t touch a shamisen for about two years and it's been long since she had been praised. There's nothing else but to go along with the flow now.		Tigre nodded smilingly and Ellen once more picked up the shamisen. Ellen, herself, seemed to be in high spirits. Reminiscing, she realized she hadn’t touch a shamisen for about two years and it's been long since she had been praised. There's nothing else but to go along with the flow now.

	~~Later——Lim~~ heard the silver-haired Vanadis playing the shamisen and it not too soon ~~until~~ she ~~reached~~ the room the two of them were in.		Afterwards——Lim heard the silver-haired Vanadis playing the shamisen and it was not too soon later did she reach the room the two of them were in.

96.226.46.175 at 07:01, 10 May 2013

2013-05-10T07:01:43Z

96.226.46.175: Fixed some things, added some flavor.

2013-05-09T08:12:44Z

Fixed some things, added some flavor.

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	This is a story when Tigre was a captive living in Leitmeritz.		This is a story of when Tigre was a captive living in Leitmeritz.

	“Let me hide here for a bit, I ~~have been~~ discovered trying to steal food.”		“Let me hide here for a bit. I was discovered trying to steal food.”

	Ellen who suddenly burst in without knocking the door, said this with a serious face. For Tigre ~~that was~~ lying on the bed sleeping was ~~astonished~~ as he ~~looked~~ at her. Even if he told her to get out, he ~~doubt~~ that this silver haired ~~vanadis~~ would ~~probably~~ comply. He was her captive, in the end he couldn’t ~~resist anyway~~.		Ellen, who suddenly burst in without knocking the door, said this with a serious face. For Tigre, who had been lying on the bed sleeping, he was flabbergasted as he stared at her. Even if he told her to get out, he doubted that this silver-haired Vanadis would comply. Regardless, he was her captive and in the end he couldn’t argue.

	“~~...~~...Ok ok, so there’s no one here huh?”		“...Ok,ok. So, there’s no one here, huh?”

	“No problem, I only need to wait for the clamor to die down~~...~~...”		“No problem. I only need to wait for the clamor to die down...”

	After inspecting the room ~~for~~ a ~~while~~, Ellen’s attention was caught by a shamisen attached to the wall.		After inspecting the room a bit, Ellen’s attention was caught by a shamisen attached to the wall.

	“A shamisen, where ~~the hell does~~ that come from?”		“A shamisen, where did that come from?”

	“From ~~gamble, the~~ other person didn’t have money, so he gave this to me instead.”		“From gambling. The other person didn’t have money, so he gave this to me instead.”

	Gambling with the soldiers he is close to is one of Tigre’s few ~~entertainments~~.		Gambling with the soldiers he's close with is one of Tigre’s few pastimes.

	“Really~~, play~~ it for me.”		“Really? Play it for me.”

	“Sorry, but I ~~do not~~ know how to play the instrument, can you teach me?”		“Sorry, but I don't know how to play the instrument, can you teach me?”

	Tigre ~~snappingly~~ replied. ~~The~~ image of a girl wielding a sword, this usually gives people the impression that she is unsuited for playing music. ~~But~~ Ellen ~~smilingly~~ walked over to the shamisen.		Tigre snappishly replied. An image of a girl wielding a sword---this usually gives people the impression that she would be unsuited for playing music. However, Ellen walked over to the shamisen, smiling all the while.

	~~“Well, I will~~ demonstrate it for you then.”		“I'll demonstrate it for you then.”

	Picking up the shamisen, Ellen proceeded to sit down besides Tigre~~. Lightly~~ stroking the shamisen with her fingertips.		Picking up the shamisen, Ellen proceeded to sit down besides Tigre, lightly stroking the shamisen with her fingertips.

	In the next moment, a vivid and lifelike melody ~~resounded~~, overflowing from the gap between her fingers.		In the next moment, a vivid and lifelike melody reverberated through the air, overflowing from the gap between her fingers.

	~~“I have touched for several occasions already~~ since shamisen is an ~~instruments~~ available to the commoners.”		"I'm used to this, since the shamisen is an instrument available to the commoners."

	While ~~fluently stroking~~ the chords, Ellen displayed a pleasant smile, the tiny room was quickly filled with the song’s ~~melodies~~. It was as if the silver haired girl was dancing.		While expertly plucking the chords, Ellen displayed a pleasant smile and the tiny room was quickly filled with the song’s melody. It was as if the silver haired girl was dancing.

	Considering her delighted expression, it would seem that this is her ~~favourite’s~~ song. ~~A fleeting~~ feelings struck Tigre as if ~~overlapping~~ with the notes. Such a calming music.		Considering her delighted expression, it would seem that this is her favourite song. Fleeting feelings struck Tigre as if it overlapped with the notes. Such calming music, he thought.

	Soon, the song ended, Ellen ~~finally~~ let out a melodious tone as she smiled triumphantly at Tigre, ~~Tigre~~ who ~~just recovered~~ his ~~sense a bit later~~ applauded.		Soon, the song ended and Ellen let out a melodious tone as she smiled triumphantly at Tigre. Tigre, who was late to come back to his senses, applauded.

	~~“This is~~ really surprising~~, it is~~ so good, well, very fascinating.”		“That was really surprising. It was so good and, well, just very fascinating.”

	Ellen having been praised, blushed~~, then she~~ proceeded to fiddle with the shamisen.		Ellen, having been praised, blushed and proceeded to fiddle with the shamisen.

	“I, it is not that big of a deal. ——I only played a bit, I can play it again for you, how about it?”		“I-it is not that big of a deal. ——I only played a bit. I can play it again for you, so how about it?”

	Tigre smilingly ~~nodded,~~ Ellen picked up the shamisen ~~again~~. Ellen herself, ~~apparently~~ seemed to be in high ~~spirit~~. Reminiscing, she hadn’t touch a shamisen for about two years, long since she had been praised. There is no way but to go along with the flow now.		Tigre nodded smilingly and Ellen once more picked up the shamisen. Ellen, herself, seemed to be in high spirits. Reminiscing, she realized she hadn’t touch a shamisen for about two years and its been long since she had been praised. There is no way but to go along with the flow now.

	Afterwards——Lim heard the silver haired ~~vanadis played~~ the shamisen, not ~~long after that~~ she ~~reached~~ the room the two of them were in.		Afterwards——Lim heard the silver-haired Vanadis playing the shamisen and not too soon did she reach the room the two of them were in.

69.165.203.247 at 23:24, 8 May 2013

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	Ellen who suddenly burst in without knocking the door, said this with a serious face. For Tigre that was lying on the bed sleeping was astonished as he looked at her. Even if he told her to get out, he doubt that this silver haired vanadis would probably comply. He was her captive, in the end he couldn’t resist anyway.		Ellen who suddenly burst in without knocking the door, said this with a serious face. For Tigre that was lying on the bed sleeping was astonished as he looked at her. Even if he told her to get out, he doubt that this silver haired vanadis would probably comply. He was her captive, in the end he couldn’t resist anyway.

	“......Ok ok, so there’s ~~none~~ here huh?”		“......Ok ok, so there’s no one here huh?”

	“No problem, I only need to wait for the ~~clamors~~ to die down......”		“No problem, I only need to wait for the clamor to die down......”

	After inspecting the room for a while, Ellen’s attention was caught by a shamisen attached to the wall.		After inspecting the room for a while, Ellen’s attention was caught by a shamisen attached to the wall.

Par74583 at 16:25, 8 May 2013

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	Tigre smilingly nodded, Ellen picked up the shamisen again. Ellen herself, apparently seemed to be in high spirit. Reminiscing, she hadn’t touch a shamisen for about two years, long since she had been praised. There is no way but to go along with the flow now.		Tigre smilingly nodded, Ellen picked up the shamisen again. Ellen herself, apparently seemed to be in high spirit. Reminiscing, she hadn’t touch a shamisen for about two years, long since she had been praised. There is no way but to go along with the flow now.

	Afterwards——Lim heard the silver haired vanadis played the shamisen, not long after she reached the room the two of them were in.		Afterwards——Lim heard the silver haired vanadis played the shamisen, not long after that she reached the room the two of them were in.

Par74583 at 15:53, 8 May 2013

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	Tigre smilingly nodded, Ellen picked up the shamisen again. Ellen herself, apparently seemed to be in high spirit. Reminiscing, she hadn’t touch a shamisen for about two years, long since she had been praised. There is no way but to go along with the flow now.		Tigre smilingly nodded, Ellen picked up the shamisen again. Ellen herself, apparently seemed to be in high spirit. Reminiscing, she hadn’t touch a shamisen for about two years, long since she had been praised. There is no way but to go along with the flow now.

	Afterwards——Lim heard the silver haired vanadis played the shamisen, not long after she reached the room.		Afterwards——Lim heard the silver haired vanadis played the shamisen, not long after she reached the room the two of them were in.

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	“Let me hide here for a bit. I was discovered trying to steal food.”		“Let me hide here for a bit. I was discovered trying to steal food.”

	Ellen, who suddenly burst in without knocking the door, said this with a serious face. For Tigre, who had been lying on the bed sleeping, he was flabbergasted as he stared at her. Even if he told her to get out, he doubted that this silver-haired Vanadis would comply. Regardless, he was her captive and in the end he couldn’t argue.		Ellen, who suddenly burst in without knocking the door, said this with a serious face. For Tigre, who had been lying on the bed sleeping, he was flabbergasted as he stared at her. Even if he told her to get out, he doubted that this silver-haired Vanadis would comply. Regardless, he was her captive and in the end couldn’t argue.

	“...Ok,ok. So, there’s no one here, huh?”		“...Ok,ok. So, there’s no one here, huh?”
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	After inspecting the room a bit, Ellen’s attention was caught by a shamisen attached to the wall.		After inspecting the room a bit, Ellen’s attention was caught by a shamisen attached to the wall.

	“A shamisen~~, where~~ did that come from?”		“A shamisen. Where did that come from?”

	“From gambling. The other person didn’t have money, so he gave this to me instead.”		“From gambling. The other person didn’t have money, so he gave this to me instead.”
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	“Really? Play it for me.”		“Really? Play it for me.”

	“Sorry, but I don't know how to play ~~the~~ instrument~~, can~~ you teach me?”		“Sorry, but I don't know how to play that instrument. Could you teach me?”

	Tigre snappishly replied. An image of a girl wielding a sword---this usually gives people the impression that she would be unsuited for playing music. However, Ellen walked over to the shamisen, smiling all the while.		Tigre snappishly replied. An image of a girl wielding a sword---this usually gives people the impression that she would be unsuited for playing music. However, Ellen walked over to the shamisen, smiling all the while.

	“I'll demonstrate it for you then.”		“I'll demonstrate for you then.”

	Picking up the shamisen, Ellen proceeded to sit down ~~besides~~ Tigre, lightly stroking the shamisen with her fingertips.		Picking up the shamisen, Ellen proceeded to sit down beside Tigre, lightly stroking the shamisen with her fingertips.

	~~In the~~ next moment, a vivid and lifelike melody reverberated ~~through~~ the air, overflowing from the gap between her fingers.		The next moment, a vivid and lifelike melody reverberated throughout the air, overflowing from the gap between her fingers.

	"I'~~m used to~~ this, since the shamisen is an instrument available to the commoners."		"I've some experience with this, since the shamisen is originally an instrument available to the commoners."

	While expertly plucking the chords, Ellen displayed a pleasant smile and the tiny room was quickly filled with the song’s melody. It was as if the silver haired girl was dancing.		While expertly plucking the chords, Ellen displayed a pleasant smile and the tiny room was quickly filled with the song’s melody. It was as if the silver haired girl was dancing.
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	Considering her delighted expression, it would seem that this is her favourite song. Fleeting feelings struck Tigre as if it overlapped with the notes. Such calming music, he thought.		Considering her delighted expression, it would seem that this is her favourite song. Fleeting feelings struck Tigre as if it overlapped with the notes. Such calming music, he thought.

	~~Soon~~, the song ended and Ellen let out a melodious tone as she smiled triumphantly at Tigre. Tigre, who was late to come back to his senses, applauded.		Eventually, the song ended and Ellen let out a melodious tone as she smiled triumphantly at Tigre. Tigre, who was late to come back to his senses, applauded.

	“That was really surprising. It was so good and, well, just very fascinating.”		“That was really surprising. It was so good and, well, just very fascinating.”

	Ellen, having been praised, blushed and proceeded to fiddle with the shamisen.		Ellen, having been praised, blushed, and proceeded to fiddle with the shamisen.

	“I-it is not that big of a deal. ——I only played a bit. I can play it again for you, ~~so how about it?~~”		“I-it is not that big of a deal. ——I only played a bit. I can play it again for you, if you wish.”

	Tigre nodded smilingly and Ellen once more picked up the shamisen. Ellen, herself, seemed to be in high spirits. Reminiscing, she realized she hadn’t touch a shamisen for about two years and ~~its~~ been long since she had been praised. There ~~is no way~~ but to go along with the flow now.		Tigre nodded smilingly and Ellen once more picked up the shamisen. Ellen, herself, seemed to be in high spirits. Reminiscing, she realized she hadn’t touch a shamisen for about two years and it's been long since she had been praised. There's nothing else but to go along with the flow now.

	~~Afterwards——Lim~~ heard the silver-haired Vanadis playing the shamisen and not too soon ~~did~~ she ~~reach~~ the room the two of them were in.		Later——Lim heard the silver-haired Vanadis playing the shamisen and it not too soon until she reached the room the two of them were in.