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	In a room of the Fort Lux, Tigre, Olga and Matvey had gathered.		In a room of the Fort Lux, Tigre, Olga and Matvey had gathered.

	As Matvey who ~~kowtowed~~ and apologized, Tigre laughed and forgave him. Although it would be good if he did not cooperate with Olga, shelving himself who was not able to admonish the young Vanadis, Tigre could not blame the tough-looking sailor.		As Matvey who prostrated and apologized, Tigre laughed and forgave him. Although it would be good if he did not cooperate with Olga, shelving himself who was not able to admonish the young Vanadis, Tigre could not blame the tough-looking sailor.

	Incidentally, Matvey was monitored by soldiers. He was imprisoned, that was why he safely managed to survive. The curve sword he was wearing when in disguise was taken up before he met with Leicester.		Incidentally, Matvey was monitored by soldiers. He was imprisoned, that was why he safely managed to survive. The curve sword he was wearing when in disguise was taken up before he met with Leicester.

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	"By the way... What would you do if General Leicester came out?"		"By the way... What would you do if General Leicester came out?"

	Feeling a little uneasy, Tigre asked Simon. Though it would be good if he smashed to atoms by the black bow, if he luckily managed to escape, it would be frightening. Both Tigre and Olga have already erase traces of fight.		Feeling a little uneasy, Tigre asked Simon. Though it would be good if he was smashed to atoms by the black bow, if he luckily managed to escape, it would be frightening. Both Tigre and Olga have already erase traces of fight.

	"If that happened, of course, we would surround him and take his head."		"If that happened, of course, we would surround him and take his head."

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	"-Heeey, still alive?"		"-Heeey, still alive?"

	Suddenly, from the distance, came a sound. And also the sound of armor. Looking over there, nearly ten mercenaries with Simon at the vanguard were moving ~~toward~~ them. They were dumbfounded by this horrible sight, and even forgot to be cautious of the surroundings.		Suddenly, from the distance, came a sound. And also the sound of armor. Looking over there, nearly ten mercenaries entered with Simon at the vanguard were moving towards them. They were dumbfounded by this horrible sight, and even forgot to be cautious of the surroundings.

	As Simon came up in front of Tigre and Olga sitting on the floor, while looking around the uncanny marks of destruction, asked.		As Simon came up in front of Tigre and Olga sitting on the floor, while looking around the uncanny marks of destruction, asked.
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	Sure enough, Tigre proposed an excellent plan.		Sure enough, Tigre proposed an excellent plan.

	Camouflaging the number here by employing the ~~collar people~~, making the soldiers lurk in the northern woods and, before dawn, making a surprise attack from the west where the daylight did not reach, and opening the north gate and letting the army invade the Fort.		Camouflaging the number here by employing the nearby townspeople, making the soldiers lurk in the northern woods and, before dawn, making a surprise attack from the west where the daylight did not reach, and opening the north gate and letting the army invade the Fort.

	These were almost the same measures as those of Tallard's strategy given to Ludra. However, in Tallard's strategy, since Tigre could not grasp Asvarre soldiers, he gave the soldiers someone who they could trust as a Commander, and made a surprise attack from the west side of the walls.		These were almost the same measures as those of Tallard's strategy given to Ludra. However, in Tallard's strategy, since Tigre could not grasp Asvarre soldiers, he gave the soldiers someone who they could trust as a Commander, and made a surprise attack from the west side of the walls.
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	He could not help but leak a sigh of admiration. Having tested Tigre's ability in this matter, he honestly praised him.		He could not help but leak a sigh of admiration. Having tested Tigre's ability in this matter, he honestly praised him.

	''---While being a person from Brune, he is also a person able to think of the people of a foreign country. So that the employed ~~collar people~~ don't get injured, he made distributions taking it into account as much as possible.''		''---While being a person from Brune, he is also a person able to think of the people of a foreign country. So that the employed townspeople don't get injured, he made distributions taking it into account as much as possible.''

	Ludra thought that the problem was there: Sooner or later, Tigre would notice the falsehood of Tallard's words, and he would probably not forgive Tallard.		Ludra thought that the problem was there: Sooner or later, Tigre would notice the falsehood of Tallard's words, and he would probably not forgive Tallard.

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	"Please explain."		"Please explain."

	It was Olga's first time speaking, ever since she had settled down, in both mind and body. However, it was also hard for both of them even to open their mouthes because of extreme exhaustion. The two people leaned, side by side, on the only wall to escape from the destruction, and like that trailingly sat on the floor.		It was Olga's first time speaking, ever since she had settled down, in both mind and body. However, it was also hard for both of them to even open their mouthes because of extreme exhaustion. The two people leaned, side by side, on the only wall to escape from the destruction, and like that trailingly sat on the floor.

	"Before that, apologize."		"Before that, apologize."
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	He could not help but leak a sigh of admiration. Having tested Tigre's ability in this matter, he honestly praised him.		He could not help but leak a sigh of admiration. Having tested Tigre's ability in this matter, he honestly praised him.

	''---While being a person from Brune, he is also a person able to think of the people of a foreign country. So that the employed collar people don't get injured, he made distributions taking it into account as much as possible.''		''---While being a person from Brune, he is also a person able to think of the people of a foreign country. So that the employed collar people don't get injured, he made distributions taking it into account as much as possible.''

	Ludra thought that the problem was there: Sooner or later, Tigre would notice the falsehood of Tallard's words, and he would probably not forgive Tallard.		Ludra thought that the problem was there: Sooner or later, Tigre would notice the falsehood of Tallard's words, and he would probably not forgive Tallard.
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	When the day was about to end only by such work, a hectic (hurried) report was brought to the Fort.		When the day was about to end only by such work, a hectic (hurried) report was brought to the Fort.

	"Prince Elliot leading 30000 pirates has landed. It is still unknown whether he will be ~~aim~~ at this Fort or Valverde, but they are in a distance of about two days from here."		"Prince Elliot leading 30000 pirates has landed. It is still unknown whether he will be aiming at this Fort or Valverde, but they are in a distance of about two days from here."

	Shiver spread throughout the body. They did not receive report that the port town of Mariajo fell. While avoiding showing anxiety (impatience) to his face, Ludra asked.		Shiver spread throughout the body. They did not receive report that the port town of Mariajo fell. While avoiding showing anxiety (impatience) to his face, Ludra asked.

	"Did Mariajo ~~fell~~...?"		"Did Mariajo fall...?"

	The soldier shook his head to say "No".		The soldier shook his head to say "No".
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	"Then, I must go calm the soldiers for now."		"Then, I must go calm the soldiers for now."

	With his usual smile, Ludra left the meeting room. With quick steps, but at a calm pace as to not let people feel uneasy. Olga opened ~~wide~~ her eyes at the remaining two, and said with admiration.		With his usual smile, Ludra left the meeting room. With quick steps, but at a calm pace as to not let people feel uneasy. Olga opened her eyes wide at the remaining two, and said with admiration.

	"I feel like I caught a glimpse of a king's ability."		"I feel like I caught a glimpse of a king's ability."

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	"Please explain."		"Please explain."

	It was ~~the~~ first ~~sentence of Olga who~~ had ~~visual and auditory finally~~ settled down. It was also hard for both of them even to open their ~~mouth~~ because of extreme exhaustion. The two people side by side ~~leaned~~ on the wall ~~which escaped~~ from destruction, and like that trailingly sat on the floor.		It was Olga's first time speaking, ever since she had settled down, with both mind and body. It was also hard for both of them even to open their mouthes because of extreme exhaustion. The two people leaned, side by side, on the only wall to escape from the destruction, and like that trailingly sat on the floor.

	"Before that, apologize."		"Before that, apologize."

	Tigre ~~with~~ an indignant face ~~overlooked~~ Olga beside him. ~~Olga~~ snorted and turned her face away. ‘I didn’t do anything bad’. She advocated without words.		Tigre had an indignant face overlooking Olga beside him. She snorted and turned her face away. ‘I didn’t do anything bad’. She advocated without words.

	Tigre blankly looked up at the early morning sky from the hole opened into the ceiling.		Tigre blankly looked up at the early morning sky from the hole opened into the ceiling.

	''---It seems ~~like the~~ control ~~did not work~~ as usual......''		''---It seems I couldn't control it as usual......''

	The hole roughly extended right above from the Commander room. The gray dragon clad in black light had devoured the monster and flew to the sky afterward.		The hole roughly extended right above from the Commander room. The gray dragon clad in black light had devoured the monster and flew to the sky afterward.

	''---Perhaps is it because I overdid it by shooting two arrows successively?''		''---Perhaps it is because I overdid it by shooting two arrows successively?''

	"I..."		"I..."

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	It was the first sentence of Olga who had visual and auditory finally settled down. It was also hard for both of them even to open their mouth because of extreme exhaustion. The two people side by side leaned on the wall which escaped from destruction, and like that trailingly sat on the floor.		It was the first sentence of Olga who had visual and auditory finally settled down. It was also hard for both of them even to open their mouth because of extreme exhaustion. The two people side by side leaned on the wall which escaped from destruction, and like that trailingly sat on the floor.

	"Before that, ~~(you)~~ apologize ~~(first)~~."		"Before that, apologize."

	Tigre with an indignant face overlooked Olga beside him. Olga snorted and turned her face away. ‘I didn’t do anything ~~bad (I’m not in the wrong)’~~. She advocated without words.		Tigre with an indignant face overlooked Olga beside him. Olga snorted and turned her face away. ‘I didn’t do anything bad’. She advocated without words.

	Tigre blankly looked up at the early morning sky from the hole opened into the ceiling.		Tigre blankly looked up at the early morning sky from the hole opened into the ceiling.
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	Tigre changed the topic. Though very explicit, Simon, being fascinated by the Commander room which was half blown away, ~~not aware (~~inattentively) answered.		Tigre changed the topic. Though very explicit, Simon, being fascinated by the Commander room which was half blown away, inattentively answered.

	"It's over. It could be seen almost from anywhere that the Commander room was blown away by a strange black light. Did you see General Leicester?"		"It's over. It could be seen almost from anywhere that the Commander room was blown away by a strange black light. Did you see General Leicester?"

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	Tigre said that, after about a count of three, Olga whispered the word of apology "Sorry".		Tigre said that, after about a count of three, Olga whispered the word of apology "Sorry".

	After Tigre gently stroked her head, Olga's body ~~slanting (slantly)~~ leaned on the young man as she felt relieved. Tigre did not reject her, and left it so. Feeling the warmth coming from the girl's body, he leaked a sigh of relief. At last, the feeling that it was finally over surged.		After Tigre gently stroked her head, Olga's body leaned on the young man as she felt relieved. Tigre did not reject her, and left it so. Feeling the warmth coming from the girl's body, he leaked a sigh of relief. At last, the feeling that it was finally over surged.

	"I will tell you later what I can say. Also, please do not talk about this to anyone."		"I will tell you later what I can say. Also, please do not talk about this to anyone."
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	"I don't know, either"		"I don't know, either"

	Tigre shook his head. Although Olga stopped her action to think about something for a moment, she nodded as to show that ~~she agreed with the young man (~~she was of the same opinion).		Tigre shook his head. Although Olga stopped her action to think about something for a moment, she nodded as to show that she was of the same opinion.

	They didn't know what happened, either. "Let's put it this way" Tigre decided to do so.		They didn't know what happened, either. "Let's put it this way" Tigre decided to do so.
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	The second worry was about Tigre. This one might be more serious.		The second worry was about Tigre. This one might be more serious.

	The day before leaving Valverde, Tallard gave the plan for the capture (of the Fort) to Ludra, but at the same time, he said to:		The day before leaving Valverde, Tallard gave the plan for the capture of the Fort to Ludra, but at the same time, he said to:

	'Test the ability of Tigrevurmud Vorn.'		'Test the ability of Tigrevurmud Vorn.'
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	Sure enough, Tigre proposed an excellent plan.		Sure enough, Tigre proposed an excellent plan.

	Camouflaging the number here by employing the collar people, making the soldiers lurk in the northern woods and, before dawn, making a surprise attack from the west where the daylight did not reach, and opening the north gate and letting the army invade (the Fort).		Camouflaging the number here by employing the collar people, making the soldiers lurk in the northern woods and, before dawn, making a surprise attack from the west where the daylight did not reach, and opening the north gate and letting the army invade the Fort.

	These were almost the same measures as those of Tallard's strategy given to Ludra. However, in Tallard's strategy, since Tigre could not grasp Asvarre soldiers, he gave the soldiers someone who they could trust as a Commander, and made a surprise attack from the west side of the walls.		These were almost the same measures as those of Tallard's strategy given to Ludra. However, in Tallard's strategy, since Tigre could not grasp Asvarre soldiers, he gave the soldiers someone who they could trust as a Commander, and made a surprise attack from the west side of the walls.
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	The soldiers collected the corpses whether those of enemies or allies and buried them, and washed away blood stuck within the Fort with water. This was an epidemic counter-measure as well as a measure to get rid of the ill feeling of those who surrendered. Tigre and the others also helped.		The soldiers collected the corpses whether those of enemies or allies and buried them, and washed away blood stuck within the Fort with water. This was an epidemic counter-measure as well as a measure to get rid of the ill feeling of those who surrendered. Tigre and the others also helped.

	When the day was about to end only by such work, a ~~hectic (hurried)~~ report was brought to the Fort.		When the day was about to end only by such work, a chaotic report was brought to the Fort.

	"Prince Elliot leading 30000 pirates has landed. It is still unknown whether he will be aiming at this Fort or Valverde, but they are in a distance of about two days from here."		"Prince Elliot leading 30000 pirates has landed. It is still unknown whether he will be aiming at this Fort or Valverde, but they are in a distance of about two days from here."

	Shiver spread throughout the body. They did not receive report that the port town of Mariajo fell. While avoiding showing anxiety ~~(impatience) to~~ his face, Ludra asked.		Shiver spread throughout the body. They did not receive report that the port town of Mariajo fell. While avoiding showing anxiety on his face, Ludra asked.

	"Did Mariajo fall...?"		"Did Mariajo fall...?"
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	Matvey blurted out with an unprecedented seriousness in his tough look. To which Tigre calmly shook his head, and continued with a smile.		Matvey blurted out with an unprecedented seriousness in his tough look. To which Tigre calmly shook his head, and continued with a smile.

	"Not yet. But, I had a similar experience before, and I came through it ~~(I broke out the storm)~~."		"Not yet. But, I had a similar experience before, and I came through it."

	'Therefore, I will somehow manage; I will do it.'		'Therefore, I will somehow manage; I will do it.'