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RS at 13:39, 4 October 2017

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	“Who knows…? But I heard that he can’t sleep…”		“Who knows…? But I heard that he can’t sleep…”

	“I think his name is {{furigana\|Kusla~~\|Interest~~}}.”		“I think his name is {{furigana\|Interest\|Kusla}}.”

	“Kusla… such a vile name. I think two of my good friends were ruined by debt.”		“Kusla… such a vile name. I think two of my good friends were ruined by debt.”

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RS at 18:07, 27 September 2017

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	“The Restless Alchemist.”		“The Restless Alchemist.”


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Teh Ping at 15:33, 14 August 2013

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	Kusla called out from within his cell.		Kusla called out from within his cell.

	Inside, it was reminiscent of ~~grassland~~ - filled with autumn insects chirping ~~as they flew about~~.		Inside, it was reminiscent of a meadow - filled with autumn insects chirping.

	~~This vibrant life~~ all ~~around Kusla came to~~ a ~~halt in unison the moment he spoke.~~		Up till now they had been buzzing noisily, but at his voice they all fell into a sudden silence

	~~To Kusla, the only thing that didn’t seem~~ to ~~stop were the gusts of frost, mercilessly expanding the weather’s icy touch~~.		The frigid wind continued to howl in their place.

	“Let’s chat.”		“Let’s chat.”

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	Kusla called out from within his cell.		Kusla called out from within his cell.

	Inside, it was reminiscent of grassland - filled with autumn insects chirping as they flew about ~~the containment’s shadowy corners~~.		Inside, it was reminiscent of grassland - filled with autumn insects chirping as they flew about.

	This vibrant life all around Kusla came to a halt the moment he spoke.		This vibrant life all around Kusla came to a halt in unison the moment he spoke.

	To Kusla, the only thing that didn’t seem to stop were the gusts of frost, mercilessly expanding the weather’s icy touch.		To Kusla, the only thing that didn’t seem to stop were the gusts of frost, mercilessly expanding the weather’s icy touch.

Teh Ping: Edited by AmbientQualia to match the style used by Yen Press for Spice and Wolf (same author).

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Edited by AmbientQualia to match the style used by Yen Press for Spice and Wolf (same author).

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Hayashi s at 11:15, 1 July 2013

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	Kusla called out from within his cell.		Kusla called out from within his cell.

	The ~~room~~ was ~~reminiscent of grasslands,~~ filled with ~~autumn~~ insects chirping ~~as they flew about its shadowy corners~~.		The place was filled with the autumun insects chirping, making it feel like one was walking through a meadow.

	~~This life inside came to~~ a ~~halt all at once as he spoke~~.		Up till now they had been buzzing noisily, but at his voice they all fell into a sudden silence.

	~~The~~ frigid wind ~~was the only thing that didn’t stop, only expanding the reach of its icy touch~~.		In their place the frigid wind continued to howl.

	“Let’s chat.”		“Let’s chat.”

	He wanted to stand, but his cold and exhausted body was extremely stiff. This man, {{Furigana\|Interest\|Kusla\|margin=12}}, was feared by everyone; but he was really no different from everyone else. His height was slightly above average, but his physique was not markedly robust. He considered himself to have a fearless complexion, but he was never called a handsome man. In a crowd, it would be very likely that nobody would recognize him. He was once knocked down by a carriage, and his broken wrist ~~repaired~~ itself ~~neglectfully~~, giving him one distinct feature.		He wanted to stand, but his cold and exhausted body was extremely stiff. This man, {{Furigana\|Interest\|Kusla\|margin=12}}, was feared by everyone; but he was really no different from everyone else. His height was slightly above average, but his physique was not markedly robust. He considered himself to have a fearless complexion, but he was never called a handsome man. In a crowd, it would be very likely that nobody would recognize him. He was once knocked down by a carriage, and his broken wrist failed to repair itself properly, giving him one distinct feature.

	Given his unremarkable composition, the two weeks of prison life would naturally cause his body to weaken. Kusla felt the pain on his joints and a slight dizziness as he endeavored to stand.		Given his unremarkable composition, the two weeks of prison life would naturally cause his body to weaken. Kusla felt the pain on his joints and a slight dizziness as he endeavored to stand.
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	Badum. A sound seemingly rang out as the two guards’ jaws dropped.		Badum. A sound seemingly rang out as the two guards’ jaws dropped.

	It was already past midnight, and this was the ~~devil’s time~~ - a time in which even the priests slept.		It was already past midnight, and this was the witching hour - a time in which even the priests slept.

	The guards, hastily recovering themselves in alarm, recoiled and raised their spears.		The guards, hastily recovering themselves in alarm, recoiled and raised their spears.
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	This time, the younger spoke.		This time, the younger spoke.

	“Yo-you’ve already been granted the death penalty by the Church, and you’re no different from a dead person now. So...why should we agree to		“Yo-you’ve already been granted the death penalty by the Church, and you’re no different from a dead person now. So...why should we agree to your deal? If it’s an appeal, we can listen. Know your place here!”
	your deal? If it’s an appeal, we can listen. Know your place here!”

	“Fine, just open this door like usual and strip everything from me.”		“Fine, just open this door like usual and strip everything from me.”

	If the guards could.		If only the guards could.

	It was not uncommon to see people incarcerated for stealing bread - their standing snatched away from them, abandoned in this harsh cold to die. This was a prison, a dreaded place.		It was not uncommon to see people incarcerated for stealing bread - their standing snatched away from them, abandoned in this harsh cold to die. This was a prison, a dreaded place.
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	Kusla felt he had just heard their true thoughts in the guard’s tone.		Kusla felt he had just heard their true thoughts in the guard’s tone.

	There were very few people given the ominous title of ‘Interest’, the death penalty by the Church, and left to suffer in a prison cell. To		There were very few people given the ominous title of ‘Interest’, the death penalty by the Church, and left to suffer in a prison cell. To Kusla, there was ample reason to await seeing the guards embrace darkness.
	Kusla, there was ample reason to await seeing the guards embrace darkness.

	Both of them stepped forward in unison.		Both of them stepped forward in unison.

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	If the guards could.		If the guards could.

	It ~~wasn’t~~ uncommon to see people incarcerated for stealing bread - their standing snatched away from them, abandoned in this harsh cold to die. This was a prison, a dreaded place.		It was not uncommon to see people incarcerated for stealing bread - their standing snatched away from them, abandoned in this harsh cold to die. This was a prison, a dreaded place.

	Despite the immense dread and the fear associated with prisons and their captives, though, it was those who were taken to prisons not visible to the public at all who were the most terrifying.		Despite the immense dread and the fear associated with prisons and their captives, though, it was those who were taken to prisons not visible to the public at all who were the most terrifying.

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