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	“Perhaps there is a greater Alchemist who might be more suitable for you, my lord?”		“Perhaps there is a greater Alchemist who might be more suitable for you, my lord?”

	The Azami’s Crest unit already had its own proper ~~alchemist~~ with the title of “Doctor.”		The Azami’s Crest unit already had its own proper Alchemist with the title of “Doctor.”

	By all rights, Kusla should not have been able to go to Kazan, but he’d maneuvered his way into things.		By all rights, Kusla should not have been able to go to Kazan, but he’d maneuvered his way into things.
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	Kusla was initially convinced that the fact that he and the others had been called on for trivial matters like examining the tributes, but that was not the case. In any organization, there are those who plot to rise through the ranks for the sake of political power. Alchemists were no exception.		Kusla was initially convinced that the fact that he and the others had been called on for trivial matters like examining the tributes, but that was not the case. In any organization, there are those who plot to rise through the ranks for the sake of political power. Alchemists were no exception.

	Although if someone actually made it up to the upper echelon of the Knights just by currying favor with various people, that too could probably be regarded as a kind of ~~alchemy~~.		Although if someone actually made it up to the upper echelon of the Knights just by currying favor with various people, that too could probably be regarded as a kind of Alchemy.

	“But even setting that aside, I’m still concerned,”		“But even setting that aside, I’m still concerned,”
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	“Is that what Irine said?”		“Is that what Irine said?”

	Irine, who was traveling with them, was two, three years older than Fenesis and the daughter of a ~~blacksmith~~.		Irine, who was traveling with them, was two, three years older than Fenesis and the daughter of a Blacksmith.

	At Kusla’s question, Fenesis awkwardly averted her eyes. She probably thought that if she admitted that it was Irine, she might be tattling, but telling a lie was against God’s teachings.		At Kusla’s question, Fenesis awkwardly averted her eyes. She probably thought that if she admitted that it was Irine, she might be tattling, but telling a lie was against God’s teachings.
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	At that laugh, Fenesis herself probably realized this was an implausible excuse and her face immediately reddened.		At that laugh, Fenesis herself probably realized this was an implausible excuse and her face immediately reddened.

	When they first met, she really had thought Kusla and Weyland were sorcerers, and she would get worked up trying to find evidence of heresy. But having learned the reality about Alchemists, she did not have such thoughts. In fact, Fenesis wanted to become a skilled ~~alchemist~~ who is able to play an active role as Kusla’s partner.		When they first met, she really had thought Kusla and Weyland were sorcerers, and she would get worked up trying to find evidence of heresy. But having learned the reality about Alchemists, she did not have such thoughts. In fact, Fenesis wanted to become a skilled Alchemist who is able to play an active role as Kusla’s partner.

	So surely she was trying to hide something with that absurd excuse.		So surely she was trying to hide something with that absurd excuse.
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	“You mean a craftsman cannot bear to stay still?”		“You mean a craftsman cannot bear to stay still?”

	Most ~~blacksmiths~~ began working before dawn and toiled before the forge until after midnight. Kusla knew full well that Irine was the sort of person who could not idle around.		Most Blacksmiths began working before dawn and toiled before the forge until after midnight. Kusla knew full well that Irine was the sort of person who could not idle around.

	But watching her for the past few days, he also felt that, even if she was as restless as usual, she appeared to be trying to forget something.		But watching her for the past few days, he also felt that, even if she was as restless as usual, she appeared to be trying to forget something.
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	She had the veil of her nun habit over her head, but by no means was it to show how pious she was.		She had the veil of her nun habit over her head, but by no means was it to show how pious she was.

	Surely there was a reason why a young girl like Fenesis was with the ~~alchemist~~ Kusla and his group.		Surely there was a reason why a young girl like Fenesis was with the Alchemist Kusla and his group.

	She was not a normal young girl, but rather, one whose bloodline was said to be cursed, for she had a characteristic of non-humans brought from faraway lands; under her veil were the pointed ears of a beast.		She was not a normal young girl, but rather, one whose bloodline was said to be cursed, for she had a characteristic of non-humans brought from faraway lands; under her veil were the pointed ears of a beast.
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	“Good grief, you’re like a young apprentice, always causing trouble.”		“Good grief, you’re like a young apprentice, always causing trouble.”

	Irine, who worked in a ~~blacksmith’s~~ workshop, had the nosy disposition of a meddler.		Irine, who worked in a Blacksmith’s workshop, had the nosy disposition of a meddler.

	It was said that she instigated Fenesis into laying the trap the other day.		It was said that she instigated Fenesis into laying the trap the other day.
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	“Is the situation in Kazan okay? You’re working alongside that Alzen, aren’t you?”		“Is the situation in Kazan okay? You’re working alongside that Alzen, aren’t you?”

	As was the widow of the Guild Leader, Irine had taken the position of Guild Leader of the ~~blacksmith’s~~ association of the port town Gulbetty. Despite not being respected by anyone and having a hard time, Irine did not complain. That was because she firmly believed in the promise with her husband, a respected craftsman, that she would take over the position and lead the association.		As was the widow of the Guild Leader, Irine had taken the position of Guild Leader of the Blacksmith’s association of the port town Gulbetty. Despite not being respected by anyone and having a hard time, Irine did not complain. That was because she firmly believed in the promise with her husband, a respected craftsman, that she would take over the position and lead the association.

	Even Irine, who was usually adamant, seemed uneasy about the future. Kusla understood well that the rumor from the cooks was a clumsy excuse, and given her personality, she could not really tell complicated lies.		Even Irine, who was usually adamant, seemed uneasy about the future. Kusla understood well that the rumor from the cooks was a clumsy excuse, and given her personality, she could not really tell complicated lies.
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	“Of course.”		“Of course.”

	As befitting ~~alchemy~~ which turns lead to gold, Kusla changed his expression to a smile.		As befitting Alchemy which turns lead to gold, Kusla changed his expression to a smile.

	Fenesis was still reluctant, but finally sighed with resignation, and also seeming a bit happy, falteringly began to tell him about the scene she saw long ago.		Fenesis was still reluctant, but finally sighed with resignation, and also seeming a bit happy, falteringly began to tell him about the scene she saw long ago.

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