Mahou Sensou:Volume 1 Chapter 1 - Revision history

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	He had a firm conviction that if he fought with that magician again he would emerge victorious.		He had a firm conviction that if he fought with that magician again he would emerge victorious.

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	It was the second day of summer vacation, even though there were no lessons, the school was filled with a lively atmosphere from the energetic students who had come here for club activities.		It was the second day of summer vacation, and even though there were no lessons, the school was filled with a lively atmosphere from the energetic students who had come here for club activities.

	“Takeshi, you’re going to the dojo, right?”		“Takeshi, you’re going to the dojo, right?”

Xionol: /* Part 5 */

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Part 5

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	“…nega…kete.”		“…nega…kete.”

	He realized that was person, they sounded female, but her words were too soft to be audible.		He realized that was a person, they sounded female, but her words were too soft to be audible.

	“Is someone there?”		“Is someone there?”
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	“Um, are you okay?”		“Um, are you okay?”

	The spot where he touched her transmitted a burning heat. If he looked closely, he saw she was repeatedly breathing hard from her mouth. It was if she had sprinted with all her might. Upon further inspection, Takeshi noticed that her knees were bleeding.		The spot where he touched her transmitted a burning heat. If he looked closely, he saw she was repeatedly breathing hard from her mouth. It was as if she had sprinted with all her might. Upon further inspection, Takeshi noticed that her knees were bleeding.

	“What should I do?”		“What should I do?”
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	"It's impossible after all, this is a bad way to carry someone."		"It's impossible after all, this is a bad way to carry someone."

	Using these words as a justification, Takeshi turned around and used both his hands to feel around for her thighs. He put one leg under each arm and once more got up from the ground with her on his back. This was much easier than when he dragged her, however, it would be dreadful other people saw this situation.		Using these words as a justification, Takeshi turned around and used both his hands to feel around for her thighs. He put one leg under each arm and once more got up from the ground with her on his back. This was much easier than when he dragged her, however, it would be dreadful if other people saw this situation.

	Takeshi started to hurry, he hoped that he would not be seen by anybody else. With this wish inside, Takeshi ran to the school building as he carried this unknown girl.		Takeshi started to hurry, he hoped that he would not be seen by anybody else. With this wish inside, Takeshi ran to the school building as he carried this unknown girl.

Xionol: /* Part 4 */

2015-03-04T02:26:27Z

Part 4

Xionol: /* Part 3 */

2015-03-04T02:12:39Z

Part 3

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	Gekkou, who was the younger brother, and Takeshi were born one year apart and were very close to each other.		Gekkou, who was the younger brother, and Takeshi were born one year apart and were very close to each other.

	However, there was an incident that marked a turning point which caused Gekkou to avoid ~~Takashi~~, his mother and father also dealt with it in the same way. From that date everything changed, every time his mother saw him she was indifferent, his father would return every day, and his younger brother completely hated him now.		However, there was an incident that marked a turning point which caused Gekkou to avoid Takeshi, his mother and father also dealt with it in the same way. From that date everything changed, every time his mother saw him she was indifferent, his father would return every day, and his younger brother completely hated him now.

	~~Takashi~~ could not even remember the last time he laughed in this house.		Takeshi could not even remember the last time he laughed in this house.

	Just to get along with his family, he had to breathe quietly so he didn't meet anyone.		Just to get along with his family, he had to breathe quietly so he didn't meet anyone.
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	“I really wish tomorrow would come quickly.”		“I really wish tomorrow would come quickly.”

	He looked out the window towards the Isoshima Residence, planted in the garden there was unknown broadleaf tree whose leaves swayed in the breeze, a large shadow jumped from the leaves and branches, “What an eerie looking shadow,” murmured Takeshi.		He looked out the window towards the Isoshima Residence, planted in the garden there was an unknown broadleaf tree whose leaves swayed in the breeze, a large shadow jumped from the leaves and branches. “What an eerie looking shadow,” murmured Takeshi.

	“It would be nice if time would go by faster.”		“It would be nice if time would go by faster.”

	The tree branches moved slightly as if it ~~nodded~~ in agreement.		The tree branches moved slightly as if it nodding in agreement.

	“If I could leave this house, anywhere would be better, even hell itself.”		“If I could leave this house, anywhere would be better, even hell itself.”

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Part 2

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	“Well, it’s just a natural result.”		“Well, it’s just a natural result.”

	Haa, Takeshi let out an exaggerated sigh, “Well, at least it’s better than being a delinquent.”		"Haa," Takeshi let out an exaggerated sigh, “Well, at least it’s better than being a delinquent.”

	That remark was immediately rejected.		That remark was immediately rejected.
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	“Wouldn’t that be a life of smooth sailing!”<ref>I guess the easiest understanding would be the easy life</ref>		“Wouldn’t that be a life of smooth sailing!”<ref>I guess the easiest understanding would be the easy life</ref>

	Three people were ~~tried~~ to imagine who would be their wife, Takeshi too, even though he understood it he did not have the willpower to deny it. Besides it’s not like he could, regardless of how many times he repeated it to himself.		Three people were trying to imagine who would be their wife, Takeshi too, even though he understood it he did not have the willpower to deny it. Besides it’s not like he could, regardless of how many times he repeated it to himself.

	“I’ve said everything I want to say.”		“I’ve said everything I want to say.”
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	“No no! I am at the limits of envy.”		“No no! I am at the limits of envy.”

	“It’s seriously ~~enviable”~~		“It’s seriously enviable.”

	“Oh, but didn't you say you were going to Law School?”		“Oh, but didn't you say you were going to Law School?”
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	After he failed in that unpleasant situation, what's left in life may only be atonement.		After he failed in that unpleasant situation, what's left in life may only be atonement.
	Takeshi's future was too far away, what he could see in front and ~~back of~~ him was an abyss that spread out in all directions, it was too realistic and familiar that he became depressed.		Takeshi's future was too far away, what he could see in front and behind him was an abyss that spread out in all directions, it was too realistic and familiar that he became depressed.

	☆☆☆		☆☆☆

108.244.6.37: /* Part 1 */

2015-03-04T01:59:55Z

Part 1

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	Takeshi who was walking next to her could not help but notice her features, slender shoulders, raised eyebrows with eyes that gave a look of determination, her tightly closed mouth with pink colored lips and elegant chin line. Except for the light pink chap stick she had no other makeup on, despite this, she still had an attractive figure.		Takeshi who was walking next to her could not help but notice her features, slender shoulders, raised eyebrows with eyes that gave a look of determination, her tightly closed mouth with pink colored lips and elegant chin line. Except for the light pink chap stick she had no other makeup on, despite this, she still had an attractive figure.

	If 10 youths of the same age were asked, all of them would agree she was cute, if pressed any further they would all say ~~the~~ she was a rare beauty in a class by herself.		If 10 youths of the same age were asked, all of them would agree she was cute, if pressed any further they would all say that she was a rare beauty in a class by herself.

	Kurumi, aware that she was being watched, lifted her head to look at Takeshi.		Kurumi, aware that she was being watched, lifted her head to look at Takeshi.
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	In Kurumi's world the only worries she had were to be in the same class as Takeshi, eating lunch with him every day, and to be able to rely on him without causing problems, but while that may be true, she should still make friends, even so, there was no reason for her to say that.		In Kurumi's world the only worries she had were to be in the same class as Takeshi, eating lunch with him every day, and to be able to rely on him without causing problems, but while that may be true, she should still make friends, even so, there was no reason for her to say that.

	It would be expected that a boy would need considerable courage to interfere with a girl bonding, but maybe that was Kurumi's inner desire. Maybe it would have been better if someone had always been angry~~, even~~ so, while walking next to her, Takeshi would send periodic glances her way, it was hard to believe how many times these feelings would be put away~~, in~~ some respects, Isoshima was a nice and diligent girl.		It would be expected that a boy would need considerable courage to interfere with a girl bonding, but maybe that was Kurumi's inner desire. Maybe it would have been better if someone had always been angry. Even so, while walking next to her, Takeshi would send periodic glances her way, it was hard to believe how many times these feelings would be put away. In some respects, Isoshima was a nice and diligent girl.

	There was no way for Takeshi to know of her feelings as Kurumi walked like puppy waving her hand with a beaming smile.		There was no way for Takeshi to know of her feelings as Kurumi walked like a puppy, waving her hand with a beaming smile.

	☆☆☆		☆☆☆

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	However, there was an abnormality.		However, there was an abnormality.

	From the man’s hand departed something similar to shining smoke.		From the man’s hand departed something that was similar to shining smoke.

	A gas which was a pale light blue color like the sky on a clear, sunny day was drifting from both his hands.		A gas which was a pale light blue color like the sky on a clear, sunny day was drifting from both his hands.
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	Abruptly, Mui grabbed onto Takeshi’s Kendo Gi.		Abruptly, Mui grabbed onto Takeshi’s Kendo Gi.

	Because of her excessive use of force, the uniform was being ~~strectched~~ in opposite directions and nearly fell off his shoulder.		Because of her excessive use of force, the uniform was being stretched in opposite directions and nearly fell off his shoulder.

	“I DON’T WANT TO.”		“I DON’T WANT TO.”
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	Scowling, Tsuganashi said some dangerous words.		Scowling, Tsuganashi said some dangerous words.

	“It can’t be helped. ~~I’ll~~ have to take her with force.”		“It can’t be helped. We'll have to take her with force.”

	“Understood.”		“Understood.”
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	Suddenly, for a minute, Takeshi thought about his brother Gekkou.		Suddenly, for a minute, Takeshi thought about his brother Gekkou.

	In Gekkou’s eyes, ~~I wonder~~ if he ~~sees me~~ in ~~this~~ way?		In Gekkou’s eyes, Takeshi wondered if he saw him in the same way?

	No, the eyes of that guy……		No, the eyes of that guy……

	The glare from his eyes ~~seethed with hatred, it would have been better if he~~ was tinged with heat.		The glare from his eyes was tinged with heat and seethed with hatred.

	In this way he was cold and heartless.		In this way he was cold and heartless.
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	His arms and chest had thick muscles, Takeshi understood that the man must have done some form of martial arts.		His arms and chest had thick muscles, Takeshi understood that the man must have done some form of martial arts.

	He had ~~sharp~~ eyes and when he smiled his mouth became distorted.		He had piercing eyes and when he smiled his mouth became distorted.

	If anyone saw his appearance standing before a convenience store, it would be a most unpleasant meeting and they would want to leave as quickly as possible.		If anyone saw his appearance standing before a convenience store, it would be a most unpleasant meeting and they would want to leave as quickly as possible.
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	Takeshi did not understand the situation, it would be abnormal if he could.		Takeshi did not understand the situation, it would be abnormal if he could.

	~~Nothing~~ could be seen hanging from the man’s waist.		At first nothing could be seen hanging from the man’s waist.

	~~At a glance the~~ leather belt worn around his waist looked normal, however, there was a scabbard affixed with a sword sheathed.		The leather belt worn around his waist looked normal, however, there was a scabbard affixed with a sword sheathed.

	Takeshi had seen a real sword several times before, whether it was fake or genuine, there was a hilt protruding from the sheath.		Takeshi had seen a real sword several times before, whether it was fake or genuine, there was a hilt protruding from the sheath.
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	It’s the same even now.		It’s the same even now.

	Among the four people the man with ~~sharp~~ eyes ~~was~~ the most ~~talkative~~, he was permitted to take action, he squeezed the handle of his sword he moved towards the middle of the room with Takeshi in his line of sight.		Among the four people the man with piercing eyes talked the most, he was permitted to take action, he squeezed the handle of his sword as he moved towards the middle of the room with Takeshi in his line of sight.

	Takeshi had to do something to distract the man’s attention and search for another way to escape.		Takeshi had to do something to distract the man’s attention and search for another way to escape.
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	Moving several steps to the side, Takeshi grabbed the broom that was leaning against the wall.		Moving several steps to the side, Takeshi grabbed the broom that was leaning against the wall.

	Using his foot, he broke of the straw part of the broom ~~forcible~~ and was left with just the handle.		Using his foot, he broke off the straw part of the broom forcibly and was left with just the handle.

	He ~~seriously~~ wielded it to ensure there were no obstructions to his body.		He wielded it seriously to ensure there were no obstructions to his body.

	Having done that, the broom became a long rod shaped weapon.		Having done that, the broom became a long rod shaped weapon.
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	It was already too late anyways, the man had drawn his sword and was energetically approaching.		It was already too late anyways, the man had drawn his sword and was energetically approaching.

	Takeshi could see an ominous glint reflected of the drawn sword.		Takeshi could see an ominous glint reflected off the drawn sword.

	Truly there was a difference from a Japanese sword, you could see it was a thick double edged blade meant to be used as a tool to kill a human and not to just strike them.		Truly there was a difference from a Japanese sword, you could see it was a thick double edged blade meant to be used as a tool to kill a human and not to just strike them.

Jin ssi: /* CHAPTER 1: Magic Girl In The Summer */

2014-09-21T17:22:50Z

CHAPTER 1: Magic Girl In The Summer

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Jin ssi: /* CHAPTER 1: Magic Girl In The Summer */

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CHAPTER 1: Magic Girl In The Summer

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	As the shadow approached Mui's brother, Tsuganashi, it looked even smaller.		As the shadow approached Mui's brother, Tsuganashi, it looked even smaller.
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	For a moment, Takeshi thought the youth was a middle school student.		For a moment, Takeshi thought the youth was a middle school student.

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	“It will anger sensei<ref>Teacher</ref> if you wear those clothes.”		“It will anger sensei<ref>Teacher</ref> if you wear those clothes.”

	Takeshi pointed at the bright red T-shirt while Ida’s formed a sneer.		Takeshi pointed at the bright red T-shirt while Ida’s face formed a sneer.

	“Things like wearing a uniform during a holiday are meant for the military right?”		“Things like wearing a uniform during a holiday are meant for the military right?”
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	Because of his outward appearance, Ida was known as a flamboyant person around school.		Because of his outward appearance, Ida was known as a flamboyant person around school.

	That did not mean that there were no other students with dyed hair, many of the sensei did not worry about that, Ida was just unusual because he was assertive and had a fierce presence, furthermore, he had evil looking eyes and used the Osaka dialect,<ref>It's generalized as Kansai dialect, but the author specifically wrote Osaka-ben</ref> so even another classmate wouldn't readily approach him.		That did not mean that there were no other students with dyed hair, many of the sensei did not worry about that. Ida was just unusual because he was assertive and had a fierce presence, furthermore, he had evil looking eyes and used the Osaka dialect,<ref>It's generalized as Kansai dialect, but the author specifically wrote Osaka-ben</ref> so even another classmate wouldn't readily approach him.

	Takeshi was one who rarely concerned himself over such details.		Takeshi was one who rarely concerned himself over such details.

	“I don’t really care,” Takeshi said as Ida raised his eyebrows.”		“I don’t really care,” Takeshi said as Ida raised his eyebrows.

	“You don’t care!”		“You don’t care!”
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	Ida hung his head.		Ida hung his head.

	“Then maybe I should become a free spirit like Ida, I'll dye my hair, wear a T-shirt like that and then it wouldn't be strange for me to talk with you right?”		“Then maybe I should become a free spirit like Ida. I'll dye my hair, wear a T-shirt like that and then it wouldn't be strange for me to talk with you, right?”

	Ida opened his eyes wide when he heard Takeshi's suggestion, it seemed like it was a good idea to him.		Ida opened his eyes wide when he heard Takeshi's suggestion, it seemed like it was a good idea to him.

	“Stop! That would be no good! If such a thing ever happened I would beat you on the head in my own way and send you off to the hospital.		“Stop! That would be no good! If such a thing ever happened I would beat you on the head in my own way and send you off to the hospital. The T-shirt is one thing, but what possessed you to say your other ideas!?”

	The T-shirt is one thing, but what possessed you to say your other ideas!?”

	“I can probably guess which store Ida bought that T-Shirt from.”		“I can probably guess which store Ida bought that T-Shirt from.”
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	“Ida?”		“Ida?”

	“....It...it's no good...you, haha...have an amusing imagination. "Heh, heh.”		“....It...it's no good...you, haha...have an amusing imagination. Heh, heh.”

	For a long time, Ida was rolling on the ground laughing~~, when~~ it finally subsided, he looked up with watery eyes.		For a long time, Ida was rolling on the ground laughing. When it finally subsided, he looked up with watery eyes.

	“You say want to look like me but frankly that would be too much and you should just stop!”		“You say you want to look like me but frankly that would be too much and you should just stop!”

	“Is that so?”		“Is that so?”
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	“Keep that appearance! The T-shirt is out of the question!”		“Keep that appearance! The T-shirt is out of the question!”

	After saying that last thing with laugh, Ida stood up and ran away.		After saying that last thing with a laugh, Ida stood up and ran away.

	"So it wouldn't be suitable?" Takeshi muttered immediately and started to walk in the direction of club building.		"So it wouldn't be suitable?" Takeshi muttered immediately and started to walk in the direction of the club building.

	When Takeshi arrived at the club building another first year member was already inside changing clothes.		When Takeshi arrived at the club building another first year member was already inside changing clothes.
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	Takeshi began to hurriedly change his clothes when a friend called out to him.		Takeshi began to hurriedly change his clothes when a friend called out to him.

	“Weren’t you with Ida a little ago? I was watching you talk to him.”		“Weren’t you with Ida a little while ago? I was watching you talk to him.”

	Anyone going to the clubroom would have seen them.		Anyone going to the clubroom would have seen them.
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	“He’s not really a bad guy,” Takeshi said as he put on the navy blue hakama.<ref>Traditional Japanese clothing worn by men, though today you can see both sexes wearing it</ref>		“He’s not really a bad guy,” Takeshi said as he put on the navy blue hakama.<ref>Traditional Japanese clothing worn by men, though today you can see both sexes wearing it</ref>

	“Well, you may be right. It does appear that way a little. Though if the sensei saw you together they might say otherwise.”		“Well, you may be right. It does appear that way a little. Though if the sensei saw you together they might say otherwise.”

	The Sakuraya Senior High School is prep school for students who plan on attending university, the moment they are first years, many of		The Sakuraya Senior High School is a prep school for students who plan on attending university, the moment they are first years, many of
	them will pay careful attention to their grades.		them will pay careful attention to their grades.

	Takeshi understood that there was connection between Ida and his grades, he would be really surprised to know that his classmates would say that was exactly why they kept their distance.		Takeshi understood that there was a connection between Ida and his grades, he would be really surprised to know that his classmates would say that was exactly why they kept their distance.

	To other classes, Ida appeared to be unfortunate.		To other classes, Ida appeared to be unfortunate.

	Ida would pay attention to the sensei during lectures, Takeshi who was also in the same class witnessed it~~, still~~, being together never had an effect on their grades.		Ida would pay attention to the sensei during lectures, Takeshi who was also in the same class witnessed it. Still, being together never had an effect on their grades.

	“That guy is pretty ordinary, when I spoke with him today he said he had makeup classes, I think, appearance aside, he's pretty serious.”		“That guy is pretty ordinary, when I spoke with him today he said he had makeup classes. I think, appearance aside, he's pretty serious.”

	Takeshi calmly defended his friend and shrugged his shoulders.		Takeshi calmly defended his friend and shrugged his shoulders.
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	"If you say so. In middle school there were rumors about that guy from various people that hung out in front of the station once awhile, they said he got into a fight with another school."		"If you say so. In middle school there were rumors about that guy from various people that hung out in front of the station once awhile, they said he got into a fight with another school."

	Did you even verify the credibility of that rumor? Besides, setting aside the fact it's old, you would expect that he would have had to of come back with one or two injuries. As I thought it's simply just a rumor.		"Did you even verify the credibility of that rumor? Besides, setting aside the fact it's old, you would expect that he would have had to of come back with one or two injuries. As I thought it's simply just a rumor."

	Suddenly, after his friend heard that, he covered his eyes with his arm.		Suddenly, after his friend heard that, he covered his eyes with his arm.

	“Really, you and that guy,” he said as mimicked crying.		“Really, you and that guy,” he said as he mimicked crying.

	“What do you mean?”		“What do you mean?”
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	Takeshi was amazed when heard that, and he softened his smile.		Takeshi was amazed when heard that, and he softened his smile.

	“Thank you for concern, but I'll be okay.”		“Thank you for your concern, but I'll be okay.”

	It's not good for someone's health if they are always worried.		It's not good for someone's health if they are always worried.
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	Lightly tapped on the shoulder, his friend retreated one step, two steps. Then he suddenly jumped back and opened the door.		Lightly tapped on the shoulder, his friend retreated one step, two steps. Then he suddenly jumped back and opened the door.

	“Well, I'll be going ahead of you~~, since~~ you're the last one, make sure to shut the door, yoroshiku!”<ref>Generally a greeting when meeting someone, in this case it's being used as "I'm counting on you"</ref>		“Well, I'll be going ahead of you. Since you're the last one, make sure to shut the door, yoroshiku!”<ref>Generally a greeting when meeting someone, in this case it's being used as "I'm counting on you"</ref>

	“Oi!” As it was, he needed to quickly run to the dojo. “Taku,<ref>Words of exasperation</ref> it can’t be helped.”		“Oi!” As it was, he needed to quickly run to the dojo. “Taku,<ref>Words of exasperation</ref> it can’t be helped.”
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	If he was late for training, the second year senpais<ref>Senior, sometimes written as sempai</ref> would force him to do the days chores.		If he was late for training, the second year senpais<ref>Senior, sometimes written as sempai</ref> would force him to do the days chores.

	He would have to atone in his outfit, Takeshi finished changing his clothes and hurried out of the clubroom.		He would have to atone in his outfit. Takeshi finished changing his clothes and hurried out of the clubroom.

	He started to run under the blazing sun drenched in sweat.		He started to run under the blazing sun drenched in sweat.