Mahou Sensou:Volume 1 Prologue - Revision history

Shadowmaster850 at 11:47, 5 August 2014

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	This light emanated from several small spheres floating around her like balls of flame.		This light emanated from several small spheres floating around her like balls of flame.

	Radiating a soft, yellowish light, the three spheres dipped and bobbed as they followed her every movement.		Radiating a soft yellowish light, the three spheres dipped and bobbed as they followed her every movement.

	Responding to her call, the young man turned his head to gaze back at her. He, like she, was similarly shadowed by three spheres of light.		Responding to her call the young man turned his head to gaze back at her. He like she, was similarly shadowed by three spheres of light.

	These, however, glowed eerily with a pale white light.		These however glowed eerily with a pale white light.

	He coldly turned to face her, clothed not in the uniform she was accustomed to seeing, but rather in a white shirt and jeans.		He coldly turned to face her, clothed not in the uniform she was accustomed to seeing, but rather in a white shirt and jeans.
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	As Mui neared the youth, reaching for his arm, a sharp pain flashed across her cheek.		As Mui neared the youth, reaching for his arm, a sharp pain flashed across her cheek.

	Before she knew what had happened, she found herself on the ground.		Before she knew what had happened she found herself on the ground.

	"...Nii-, Nii-san..."		"...Nii-, Nii-san..."
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	"...Nii-san?"		"...Nii-san?"

	Mui, however, looked up tentatively with hope.		Mui, however looked up tentatively with hope.

	Unfortunately, the sneer filling her brother's face, an expression she'd never before seen him wear, quickly replaced any such feelings with despair.		Unfortunately, the sneer filling her brother's face, an expression she'd never before seen him wear, quickly replaced any such feelings with despair.
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	Teardrops traced the angry red lines her brother had left on her cheek.		Teardrops traced the angry red lines her brother had left on her cheek.

	Seeing Mui in this state, the youth's irritation turned impetuous.		Seeing Mui in this state the youth's irritation turned impetuous.

	With hate-filled eyes he drew his saber from its leather scabbard at his waist, and pressed its point between her eyes.		With hate-filled eyes he drew his saber from its leather scabbard at his waist, and pressed its point between her eyes.

	"Are you going to kill me?" Mui asked, her eyes still moist with tears.		"Are you going to kill me?" Mui asked her eyes still moist with tears.

	"I won't kill you. Your abilities, after all, are needed by we <Trailers>. Don't misunderstand, though; I could kill you without the slightest hesitation. And you call someone like that your brother?"		"I won't kill you. Your abilities, after all, are needed by we <Trailers>. Don't misunderstand, though; I could kill you without the slightest hesitation. And you call someone like that your brother?"
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	"Yes, I'll never give up. I'll do whatever it takes to return you to normal."		"Yes, I'll never give up. I'll do whatever it takes to return you to normal."

	At any moment, the saber's tip might pierce on through.		At any moment the saber's tip might pierce on through.

	However, she'd sooner die here to his blade than abandon him.		However she'd sooner die here to his blade than abandon him.

	"Nii-san, I beg you! Come back with me!"		"Nii-san, I beg you! Come back with me!"
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	Mui's desperate cries were covered up by an earsplitting thunder, the sound coming from the depths of the tunnel behind the young man.		Mui's desperate cries were covered up by an earsplitting thunder, the sound coming from the depths of the tunnel behind the young man.

	It couldn't possibly have been a train, however.		It couldn't possibly have been a train however.

	The station the two found themselves in was abandoned like some desolate subterranean temple, and power had long since been cut.		The station the two found themselves in was abandoned like some desolate subterranean temple, and power had long since been cut.
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	As Mui calculated her chances, yet another motorcycle silently appeared from the other side. She'd been caught in an ambush.		As Mui calculated her chances, yet another motorcycle silently appeared from the other side. She'd been caught in an ambush.

	Once more, she called out for her brother.		Once more she called out for her brother.

	"Nii-san!"		"Nii-san!"

Hiyono: I always screw up names somehow =/

2014-01-27T15:19:41Z

I always screw up names somehow =/

Hiyono: Redone.

2014-01-25T16:38:21Z

Redone.

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PROLOGUE

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	While asking, Miu wet eyes stares directly at his brother.		While asking, Miu wet eyes stares directly at his brother.

	“ I ~~dont~~ want to kill you, because you are important to the <Trailers>therefore I ~~dont~~ care if you die here now. So do you still accept me as your brother? ”		“ I don't want to kill you, because you are important to the <Trailers>therefore I don't care if you die here now. So do you still accept me as your brother? ”

	Miu nodded immediately.		Miu nodded immediately.
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	——I thought that i was able come together with my own brother.		——I thought that i was able come together with my own brother.

	I ~~dont~~ want to lost him in this place.		I don't want to lost him in this place.

	From the other side of the dark tunnel, a large motorcycle running in the railway track.		From the other side of the dark tunnel, a large motorcycle running in the railway track.

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	Nii-san! ”		“ Nii-san! ”

	Aiba Miu yelled out while running down the stairs on the dark train subway.		Aiba Miu yelled out while running down the stairs on the dark train subway.

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	She used the back of her hand to wipe away her tears and banish the thoughts of those two men away from her mind. Then she ran down, down the empty streets.		She used the back of her hand to wipe away her tears and banish the thoughts of those two men away from her mind. Then she ran down, down the empty streets.

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Darklor: Prologue translation by courtesy of 13thdan

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Prologue translation by courtesy of 13thdan

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Nii-san! ”

Aiba Miu yelled out while running down the stairs on the dark train subway.

Through light can’t see anywhere, her surroundings lightly shone because of a spear of light floating around similar to a fireball.

The 3 lights that shining yellowish white and slowly swaying adheres according Miu’s movement.

The Young Man turned around at her voice. He was standing in front and accompanied of 3 lights like similar to hers.

She looked closely and she saw the Young Man wearing white shirt and jeans. Miu seeing that uniform rather familiar to her.

“ Hey Nii-san! , I’m looking for you. Let’s return together. ”

When the time she approach and tried to grab his arm… Miu feel a sharp pain towards to her.

When the time Miu notice that she was thrown to the ground .

“ Ni……Nii-san ”

I realize that i was beaten desperately by my own brother.He look and smile quietly.

Despite of cold eyes seeing Miu.

“ Nii-san? ”

Still. Miu hold his brother hand but his brother take off his.

The Young Man is making a callous smile that I’ve never seen, my chest becomes painful.

Suddenly, His face got distorted and grin in bad mood.

In the first time, He open his mouth.

“ Why are you crying? ”

Miu notice that she was crying.

“Nii-san please remember, mother, father , and i, I do not believe on it that you din’t remember us”

Her cheeks got reddened and her tears got flowing and went his brother hand.

Because of Mui attitude, Young Man’s bad mood expression change into irritation.

With a look approaching hatred. As soon at he look at Miu, he pulled out his sword from the leather belt around his waist. He thrust it almost right between her eyebrows.

” Are you going to kill me? ” She said.

While asking, Miu wet eyes stares directly at his brother.

“ I dont want to kill you, because you are important to the <Trailers>therefore I dont care if you die here now. So do you still accept me as your brother? ”

Miu nodded immediately.

“ I dont give up what ever it takes when it comes to Nii-san. I will do anything”

The tip of the sword is pointed between her eyebrows.

Still, Miu is not willing to let go his brother even he can stab her in any moment.

“ Nii-san please! Let’s return together ”

Miu was desperate to appeal when it suddenly interrupted by a digging sound hurting the ear.

It was heard from the depths of a tunnel to the neighboring station.

I was not because of the train coming.

This is a yard station that has not been use now by the people because it is a dead subway so there is no way that the train will come here.

Miu look straightly in his brother’s back but Young Man was gazing at the other side of the railway track instead of Miu.

When he understood the approaching vibrating engine sound, the Young Man return his sword to his waist.

At the same time.. Miu stand up.

When the moment that Miu tried to grab the Young Man’s arm , He stood back quickly.

——I thought i was found him.

——I thought that i was able come together with my own brother.

I dont want to lost him in this place.

From the other side of the dark tunnel, a large motorcycle running in the railway track.

When my brother trying to leave, Suddenly my body didn’t move.

The motorcycle was obviously intended for him.

She knew that it would take him away from her, but her body would no longer respond.

Yet her brother wanted to capture her, as a gift to them.

If both of them were captured, there was no chance of saving her brother.

She had to retreat.

——If only there was one enemy…

There was only one person on the motorcycle.

Mui had wanted to fight back, but when she saw a second motorcycle appear a little way behind the first, she realized that it was all a trap.

She yelled at her brother again.

“Nii-san!!”

I hope you’ll come with me.

I want to hold on to your hand and leave together.

But she only saw a cold sneer on his face.

The two people in the motorcycles had stopped at the platform.

Yet Mui could only see her brother’s face.

“I beg you, please come with me!”

They approached him, they still wore their helmets and it was impossible to know what they looked like.

Mui felt the grief of separation overwhelm her but she ran back, towards the stairs.

A strong gust of wind suddenly rammed into her back.

“Kyaa!”

She tripped over while hearing the heavy footsteps of the two men rapidly approach her.

She knew what they had done.

Her palms and knees were still painful, but Mui got up, starting to run again.

She took two steps at a time up the staircase. She bit her lip in pain.

She wanted to be patient, but she still couldn’t stop her tears.

Soon, she was all alone again.

She will finally see the sky again.

She was welcomed by the dim sunlight of a cloudy day.

Even so, it was still too bright for her and she couldn’t help squinting.

She took out a holster from the pocket of her skirt and inside, there was a gun. She looked back and facing the darkness of tunnel, she pulled the trigger.

The flash disappeared somewhere deep inside. Mui took a deep breath before climbing the last couple of stairs.

She used the back of her hand to wipe away her tears and banish the thoughts of those two men away from her mind. Then she ran down, down the empty streets.

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	"Nii-san!"		"Nii-san!"

	Aiba ~~Miu~~ called out as she descended the stairs leading to a dimly lit subway platform.		Aiba Mui called out as she descended the stairs leading to a dimly lit subway platform.

	Though none of the lights in the area were lit, her surroundings were nonetheless covered in a hazy glow.		Though none of the lights in the area were lit, her surroundings were nonetheless covered in a hazy glow.
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	"Nii-san, I've been looking for you for so long. Please, come home with me!"		"Nii-san, I've been looking for you for so long. Please, come home with me!"

	As ~~Miu~~ neared the youth, reaching for his arm, a sharp pain flashed across her cheek.		As Mui neared the youth, reaching for his arm, a sharp pain flashed across her cheek.

	Before she knew what had happened, she found herself on the ground.		Before she knew what had happened, she found herself on the ground.
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	The youth's only reaction to the scene before him was a wintry smile.		The youth's only reaction to the scene before him was a wintry smile.

	The contemptuous look in his frigid eyes filled ~~Miu~~ with fear.		The contemptuous look in his frigid eyes filled Mui with fear.

	"...Nii-san?"		"...Nii-san?"

	~~Miu~~, however, looked up tentatively with hope.		Mui, however, looked up tentatively with hope.

	Unfortunately, the sneer filling her brother's face, an expression she'd never before seen him wear, quickly replaced any such feelings with despair.		Unfortunately, the sneer filling her brother's face, an expression she'd never before seen him wear, quickly replaced any such feelings with despair.
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	Teardrops traced the angry red lines her brother had left on her cheek.		Teardrops traced the angry red lines her brother had left on her cheek.

	Seeing ~~Miu~~ in this state, the youth's irritation turned impetuous.		Seeing Mui in this state, the youth's irritation turned impetuous.

	With hate-filled eyes he drew his saber from its leather scabbard at his waist, and pressed its point between her eyes.		With hate-filled eyes he drew his saber from its leather scabbard at his waist, and pressed its point between her eyes.

	"Are you going to kill me?" ~~Miu~~ asked, her eyes still moist with tears.		"Are you going to kill me?" Mui asked, her eyes still moist with tears.

	"I won't kill you. Your abilities, after all, are needed by we <Trailers>. Don't misunderstand, though; I could kill you without the slightest hesitation. And you call someone like that your brother?"		"I won't kill you. Your abilities, after all, are needed by we <Trailers>. Don't misunderstand, though; I could kill you without the slightest hesitation. And you call someone like that your brother?"

	~~Miu~~ nodded.		Mui nodded.

	"Yes, I'll never give up. I'll do whatever it takes to return you to normal."		"Yes, I'll never give up. I'll do whatever it takes to return you to normal."
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	"Nii-san, I beg you! Come back with me!"		"Nii-san, I beg you! Come back with me!"

	~~Miu~~'s desperate cries were covered up by an earsplitting thunder, the sound coming from the depths of the tunnel behind the young man.		Mui's desperate cries were covered up by an earsplitting thunder, the sound coming from the depths of the tunnel behind the young man.

	It couldn't possibly have been a train, however.		It couldn't possibly have been a train, however.
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	There simply wasn't any way a train would have made its way here.		There simply wasn't any way a train would have made its way here.

	Though ~~Miu~~ continued to watch her brother, he had since turned to face the tunnel behind him.		Though Mui continued to watch her brother, he had since turned to face the tunnel behind him.

	As the sound neared them, it became apparent that it was the roar of engines they heard. He sheathed his blade.		As the sound neared them, it became apparent that it was the roar of engines they heard. He sheathed his blade.

	~~Miu~~ rose to her feet.		Mui rose to her feet.

	The young man suddenly thrust his hand out, seeking her arm, but ~~Miu~~ had already stepped back.		The young man suddenly thrust his hand out, seeking her arm, but Mui had already stepped back.

	-- It's been so long and so hard finding Nii-san...		-- It's been so long and so hard finding Nii-san...
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	A motorcycle emerged from the tunnel's lip.		A motorcycle emerged from the tunnel's lip.

	~~Miu~~ knew her brother was about to be taken once more, but her body refused to move.		Mui knew her brother was about to be taken once more, but her body refused to move.

	Because she understood that her brother aimed to deliver her to them.		Because she understood that her brother aimed to deliver her to them.
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	Seated atop the motorcycle was a lone rider.		Seated atop the motorcycle was a lone rider.

	As ~~Miu~~ calculated her chances, yet another motorcycle silently appeared from the other side. She'd been caught in an ambush.		As Mui calculated her chances, yet another motorcycle silently appeared from the other side. She'd been caught in an ambush.

	Once more, she called out for her brother.		Once more, she called out for her brother.
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	The two other riders, one in front, and one behind, approached, stepping onto the platform.		The two other riders, one in front, and one behind, approached, stepping onto the platform.

	~~Miu~~'s gaze never left her brother.		Mui's gaze never left her brother.

	"Please, please come with me!"		"Please, please come with me!"
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	The identities of the two men striding toward her were obscured by the helmets they wore.		The identities of the two men striding toward her were obscured by the helmets they wore.

	~~Miu~~'s heart was wracked with sorrow at having to part from her brother once more. Nonetheless, she turned and began to race toward the stairs.		Mui's heart was wracked with sorrow at having to part from her brother once more. Nonetheless, she turned and began to race toward the stairs.

	A gale struck her from behind.		A gale struck her from behind.
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	A yellow light flashed down the stairwell. Without taking the time to confirm the result, she continued to rush up the stairs before her.		A yellow light flashed down the stairwell. Without taking the time to confirm the result, she continued to rush up the stairs before her.

	Leaving the voices of the shouting men behind her, ~~Miu~~ wiped her tears and raced across the empty street.		Leaving the voices of the shouting men behind her, Mui wiped her tears and raced across the empty street.
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