Maria-sama Ga Miteru:Volume17 Chapter 1 1 - Revision history

Leviticus: format

2018-11-27T05:03:35Z

format

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	===<noinclude>Everyone's Farewell Presents </noinclude>Part 1===		===<noinclude>Everyone's Farewell Presents </noinclude>Part 1===

	"I'm sorry, what was that again?" Yumi asked in front of the M Station gates. Before checking herself in the mirror, she had heard — quite well — a perfectly reasonable answer.		"I'm sorry, what was that again?" Yumi asked in front of the M Station gates. Before checking herself in the mirror, she had heard—quite well—a perfectly reasonable answer.

	"'I worry because sometimes you act boldly.'"		"'I worry because sometimes you act boldly.'"
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	"No, not that."		"No, not that."

	Hey, that's all the way back to when we rode the bus from in front of the school to the M Station North gate! That's rewinding the tape too much. ~~Not five minutes ago; at~~ most, one minute ago. ~~<!-- Note 1 -->~~ Yumi thought she might be playing innocent, but contrary to that, her onee-sama's face held a serious look.		Hey, that's all the way back to when we rode the bus from in front of the school to the M Station North gate! That's rewinding the tape too much. At most, maybe one minute ago, not five. Yumi thought she might be playing innocent, but contrary to that, her onee-sama's face held a serious look.

	To either side of the couple, people rushed hurriedly by. Some people caught the train here, others got off the train. In the evening, the area around the ticket gate was crowded with people returning from school or work.		To either side of the couple, people rushed hurriedly by. Some people caught the train here, others got off the train. In the evening, the area around the ticket gate was crowded with people returning from school or work.
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	That's what she said. Definitely.		That's what she said. Definitely.

	(What should I do here? Laugh it off as a joke?) ~~<!-- Note 2 -->~~		(What should I do here? Laugh it off as a joke?)

	Yumi was lost. It seemed futile; could she laugh it off smoothly? If she laughed at something meant to be serious, Sachiko-sama could be rather annoyed. Two choices: ~~Make~~ the wrong choice and it would determine her onee-sama's mood. Now, which one? It was too hard for Yumi to decide. As soon as she tried to laugh "ha ha," Sachiko-sama folded her arms and grumbled.		Yumi was lost. It seemed futile; could she laugh it off smoothly? If she laughed at something meant to be serious, Sachiko-sama could be rather annoyed. Two choices: make the wrong choice and it would determine her onee-sama's mood. Now, which one? It was too hard for Yumi to decide. As soon as she tried to laugh, "ha ha," Sachiko-sama folded her arms and grumbled.

	"We did not buy any last year. Should you have the opportunity, please buy either one of them."		"We did not buy any last year. Should you have the opportunity, please buy either one of them."
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	"Ah."		"Ah."

	(I wonder if it wasn't a joke.) ~~<!-- Note 3 -->~~		(I wonder if it wasn't a joke.)

	"Have a fun trip."		"Have a fun trip."

	And then, as if to bring the topic to an end, Sachiko-sama straightened Yumi's tie. Because of that, Yumi could not make any further inquiries. ~~At that moment~~, her onee-sama departed.		And then, as if to bring the topic to an end, Sachiko-sama straightened Yumi's tie. Because of that, Yumi could not make any further inquiries. After their token display, her onee-sama departed.

Leviticus: Clean up

2017-12-20T08:36:42Z

Clean up

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	Hey, that's all the way back to when we rode the bus from in front of the school to the M Station North gate! That's rewinding the tape too much. Not five minutes ago; at most, one minute ago. <!-- Note 1 --> Yumi thought she might be playing innocent, but contrary to that, her onee-sama's face held a serious look.		Hey, that's all the way back to when we rode the bus from in front of the school to the M Station North gate! That's rewinding the tape too much. Not five minutes ago; at most, one minute ago. <!-- Note 1 --> Yumi thought she might be playing innocent, but contrary to that, her onee-sama's face held a serious look.

	To either side of the couple, people rushed hurriedly by. Some people caught the train here, others got off the train ~~here~~. In the evening, the area around the ticket gate was crowded with people returning from school or work.		To either side of the couple, people rushed hurriedly by. Some people caught the train here, others got off the train. In the evening, the area around the ticket gate was crowded with people returning from school or work.

	"I asked if there was anything you'd like as a souvenir. And then you said?"		"I asked if there was anything you'd like as a souvenir. And then you said?"
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	"Then I don't know what I should buy and bring back. You said, 'If you feel so strongly.' After that preface, didn't you say something?" Yumi thought she had misheard, so she asked again. "What did you say just now?"		"Then I don't know what I should buy and bring back. You said, 'If you feel so strongly.' After that preface, didn't you say something?" Yumi thought she had misheard, so she asked again. "What did you say just now?"

	"What?~~" Without hesitation, Sachiko-sama said "~~Roma Manjuu or Firenze Senbei."		"What? 'Roma Manjuu or Firenze Senbei'?" Sachiko-sama answered, without hesitation.

	"Is that what you said?"		"Is that what you said?"
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	That's what she said. Definitely.		That's what she said. Definitely.

	What should I do here? Laugh it off as a joke? <!-- Note 2 --> ~~Yumi was lost. It seemed futile; could she laugh it off smoothly? If she laughed at something meant to be serious, Sachiko-sama could be rather stern.~~		(What should I do here? Laugh it off as a joke?) <!-- Note 2 -->

	Two choices. Make the wrong choice and it would determine her onee-sama's mood. Now, which one? It was too hard for Yumi to decide. As soon as she tried to laugh "ha ha," Sachiko-sama folded her arms and grumbled.		Yumi was lost. It seemed futile; could she laugh it off smoothly? If she laughed at something meant to be serious, Sachiko-sama could be rather annoyed. Two choices: Make the wrong choice and it would determine her onee-sama's mood. Now, which one? It was too hard for Yumi to decide. As soon as she tried to laugh "ha ha," Sachiko-sama folded her arms and grumbled.

	"We did not buy any last year. Should you have the opportunity, please buy either one of them."		"We did not buy any last year. Should you have the opportunity, please buy either one of them."
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	"Ah."		"Ah."

	I wonder if it wasn't a joke. <!-- Note 3 -->		(I wonder if it wasn't a joke.) <!-- Note 3 -->

	"Have a fun trip."		"Have a fun trip."

	And then, as if to bring the topic to an end, Sachiko-sama straightened Yumi's tie. Because of that, Yumi could not make any further inquiries. At that moment, her onee-sama departed.		And then, as if to bring the topic to an end, Sachiko-sama straightened Yumi's tie. Because of that, Yumi could not make any further inquiries. At that moment, her onee-sama departed.

Leviticus: Form, Structure

2017-10-31T08:24:13Z

Form, Structure

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	===<noinclude>Everyone's Farewell Presents </noinclude>Part 1===		===<noinclude>Everyone's Farewell Presents </noinclude>Part 1===

	"I'm sorry, what was that again?"		"I'm sorry, what was that again?" Yumi asked in front of the M Station gates. Before checking herself in the mirror, she had heard — quite well — a perfectly reasonable answer.

	~~In front of the M Station gates、Yumi asked. Before checking herself in the mirror, she had heard quite well a perfectly reasonable answer.~~		"'I worry because sometimes you act boldly.'"

	" 'I worry because sometimes you act boldly.' "

	Just like rewinding a cassette tape, Sachiko-sama replayed a few words. Impressive, but unfortunately not the answer Yumi was asking for. Just a few words before that.		Just like rewinding a cassette tape, Sachiko-sama replayed a few words. Impressive, but unfortunately not the answer Yumi was asking for. Just a few words before that.

	"No, before that." Yumi said.		"No, before that," Yumi said.

	"Before that? Well, 'Even if your shoulders slump low, keep your spirits high.' "		"Before that? Well, 'Even if your shoulders slump low, keep your spirits high.'"

	"A bit more."		"A bit more."

	"A bit more? 'The field trip starts tomorrow, huh' ...?"		"A bit more? 'The field trip starts tomorrow, huh'. . . ?"

	"No, not that."		"No, not that."

	~~Hey、that~~'s all the way back to when we rode the bus from in front of the school to the M Station North gate! That's rewinding the tape too much. Not five minutes ago~~. At~~ most, one minute ago.		Hey, that's all the way back to when we rode the bus from in front of the school to the M Station North gate! That's rewinding the tape too much. Not five minutes ago; at most, one minute ago. <!-- Note 1 --> Yumi thought she might be playing innocent, but contrary to that, her onee-sama's face held a serious look.

	Yumi thought ~~maybe her onee-sama was~~ playing innocent, but contrary to that, her onee-sama's face held a serious look.

	To either side of the couple, people rushed hurriedly by. Some people caught the train here, others got off the train here. In the evening, the area around the ticket gate was crowded with people returning from school or work.		To either side of the couple, people rushed hurriedly by. Some people caught the train here, others got off the train here. In the evening, the area around the ticket gate was crowded with people returning from school or work.

	"I asked if there was anything you'd like as a souvenir. And then ~~onee-sama~~ said?"		"I asked if there was anything you'd like as a souvenir. And then you said?"

	"Didn't I say 'For you all to return safely is a souvenir better than anything' ?"		"Didn't I say: 'For you all to return safely is a souvenir better than anything'?"

	"Yes, you said that."		"Yes, you said that."

	Yumi was staggeringly happy to hear those words. Because after one week, ~~I can~~ be "a souvenir better than anything". But.		Yumi was staggeringly happy to hear those words. Because after one week, she could be "a souvenir better than anything." But . . .

	~~"Then I don't know what I should buy and bring back. Onee-sama said,~~
	~~'If you feel so strongly'~~. ~~After that preface, didn't you say something?"~~

	~~Yumi thought she had misheard~~. ~~So she asked again: "What did you say just now?"。~~

	"What?"		"Then I don't know what I should buy and bring back. You said, 'If you feel so strongly.' After that preface, didn't you say something?" Yumi thought she had misheard, so she asked again. "What did you say just now?"

	Without hesitation, Sachiko-sama said "Roma Manjuu or Firenze Senbei."。		"What?" Without hesitation, Sachiko-sama said "Roma Manjuu or Firenze Senbei."

	"Is that what you said?"		"Is that what you said?"
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	That's what she said. Definitely.		That's what she said. Definitely.

	What should I do here? Laugh it off as a joke? Yumi was lost. It ~~seems~~ futile: laugh it off smoothly? If she laughed at something meant ~~seriously~~, Sachiko-sama could be rather stern.		What should I do here? Laugh it off as a joke? <!-- Note 2 --> Yumi was lost. It seemed futile; could she laugh it off smoothly? If she laughed at something meant to be serious, Sachiko-sama could be rather stern.

	Two choices. Make the wrong choice and it ~~will~~ determine onee-sama's mood. Now, which one? It was too hard for Yumi to decide. As soon as she tried to laugh "ha ha", Sachiko-sama folded her arms and ~~grumble~~.		Two choices. Make the wrong choice and it would determine her onee-sama's mood. Now, which one? It was too hard for Yumi to decide. As soon as she tried to laugh "ha ha," Sachiko-sama folded her arms and grumbled.

	"We did not buy any last year. Should you have the opportunity, please buy either one of them."		"We did not buy any last year. Should you have the opportunity, please buy either one of them."

	"...~~where~~ are they sold?"		". . . Where are they sold?"

	"I could not buy any so how ~~could~~ I know?"		"I could not buy any, so how would I know?"

	"Ah."		"Ah."

	I wonder if it wasn't a joke.		I wonder if it wasn't a joke. <!-- Note 3 -->

	"Have a fun trip."		"Have a fun trip."

	And then, as if to bring the topic to an end, Sachiko-sama straightened Yumi's tie. Because of that, Yumi could not make any further inquiries. At that moment, her onee-sama departed.		And then, as if to bring the topic to an end, Sachiko-sama straightened Yumi's tie. Because of that, Yumi could not make any further inquiries. At that moment, her onee-sama departed.

Ziggr: /* Everyone's Farewell Presents */ + "Part 1" header

2017-09-26T02:09:43Z

Everyone's Farewell Presents: + "Part 1" header

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	===<noinclude>Everyone's Farewell Presents</noinclude>===		===<noinclude>Everyone's Farewell Presents </noinclude>Part 1===

	"I'm sorry, what was that again?"		"I'm sorry, what was that again?"

Ziggr: new translation

2017-09-26T02:01:09Z

new translation

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===<noinclude>Everyone's Farewell Presents</noinclude>===

"I'm sorry, what was that again?"

In front of the M Station gates、Yumi asked. Before checking herself in the mirror, she had heard quite well a perfectly reasonable answer.

" 'I worry because sometimes you act boldly.' "

Just like rewinding a cassette tape, Sachiko-sama replayed a few words. Impressive, but unfortunately not the answer Yumi was asking for. Just a few words before that.

"No, before that." Yumi said.

"Before that? Well, 'Even if your shoulders slump low, keep your spirits high.' "

"A bit more."

"A bit more? 'The field trip starts tomorrow, huh' ...?"

"No, not that."

Hey、that's all the way back to when we rode the bus from in front of the school to the M Station North gate! That's rewinding the tape too much. Not five minutes ago. At most, one minute ago.

Yumi thought maybe her onee-sama was playing innocent, but contrary to that, her onee-sama's face held a serious look.

To either side of the couple, people rushed hurriedly by. Some people caught the train here, others got off the train here. In the evening, the area around the ticket gate was crowded with people returning from school or work.

"I asked if there was anything you'd like as a souvenir. And then onee-sama said?"

"Didn't I say 'For you all to return safely is a souvenir better than anything' ?"

"Yes, you said that."

Yumi was staggeringly happy to hear those words. Because after one week, I can be "a souvenir better than anything". But.

"Then I don't know what I should buy and bring back. Onee-sama said,
'If you feel so strongly'. After that preface, didn't you say something?"

Yumi thought she had misheard. So she asked again: "What did you say just now?"。

"What?"

Without hesitation, Sachiko-sama said "Roma Manjuu or Firenze Senbei."。

"Is that what you said?"

That's what she said. Definitely.

What should I do here? Laugh it off as a joke? Yumi was lost. It seems futile: laugh it off smoothly? If she laughed at something meant seriously, Sachiko-sama could be rather stern.

Two choices. Make the wrong choice and it will determine onee-sama's mood. Now, which one? It was too hard for Yumi to decide. As soon as she tried to laugh "ha ha", Sachiko-sama folded her arms and grumble.

"We did not buy any last year. Should you have the opportunity, please buy either one of them."

"...where are they sold?"

"I could not buy any so how could I know?"

"Ah."

I wonder if it wasn't a joke.

"Have a fun trip."

And then, as if to bring the topic to an end, Sachiko-sama straightened Yumi's tie. Because of that, Yumi could not make any further inquiries. At that moment, her onee-sama departed.