Maria-sama Ga Miteru:Volume17 Chapter 1 2 - Revision history

Leviticus: form

2018-11-27T05:14:26Z

form

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	"Yeah."		"Yeah."

	In elementary school, I had to come home in the middle of a trip. In middle school, my mother followed along and watched from the shadows so that my classmates would not see her. But this time, no special treatment. I have graduated from my usual spot at the teacher's side. I look forward to taking this trip ~~—~~ the same as all my friends.		In elementary school, I had to come home in the middle of a trip. In middle school, my mother followed along and watched from the shadows so that my classmates would not see her. But this time, no special treatment. I have graduated from my usual spot at the teacher's side. I look forward to taking this trip in the same stride as all my friends.

	"Let's take the train since we're young," Yoshino suggested, tugging on Rei-chan's shirt. Three people from the Hasekura family, three people from the Shimazu family. A total of six people cannot all fit into a single taxi.		"Let's take the train since we're young," Yoshino suggested, tugging on Rei-chan's shirt. Three people from the Hasekura family, three people from the Shimazu family. A total of six people cannot all fit into a single taxi.

Leviticus: Clean up

2017-12-21T06:55:20Z

Clean up

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	===<noinclude>Everyone's Farewell Presents </noinclude>Part 2===		===<noinclude>Everyone's Farewell Presents </noinclude>Part 2===

	It has become an established routine that whenever there is an event, the Hasekura and Shimazu families would get together and go out for dinner.		It has become an established routine that whenever there is an event, the Hasekura and Shimazu families would get together and go out for dinner. New Years, Setsubun, Hina-matsuri, Ohigen, Obon, Christmas. Really, any excuse they could come up with for a lively get-together. Shinto, Buddhist, Christian; they'd mix and match, it didn't matter. If situations prevented celebrating on that particular day, a few days before or after was close enough. It was a chance to get together with close relatives. It would be rude to dampen everyone's spirits.

	New Years, Setsubun, Hina-matsuri, Ohigen, Obon, Christmas. Really, any excuse they could come up with for a lively get-together. Shinto, Buddhist, Christian; they'd mix and match, it didn't matter. If situations prevented celebrating on that particular day, a few days before or after was close enough. It was a chance to get together with close relatives. It would be rude to dampen everyone's spirits.

	(Well, I know they're doing this because I had such a weak body before.)		(Well, I know they're doing this because I had such a weak body before.)
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	Stepping out of the restaurant ahead of everyone, Yoshino looked up at the night sky and took a deep breath. The stars were so beautiful.		Stepping out of the restaurant ahead of everyone, Yoshino looked up at the night sky and took a deep breath. The stars were so beautiful.

	In the past, I ~~could not~~ go far or play sports, so taking this trip was unimaginable. For special days, all we could do was go to a nearby place and eat delicious food. But thanks to the surgery, this child now has a healthy body. The time had come to gradually reevaluate this rut we were stuck in. Also, father's belly is starting to resemble that of a raccoon. <!--Original TL was "tanuki", or raccoon dog. -LV -->		In the past, I couldn't go far or play sports, so the possibility of taking this trip was unimaginable. For special days, all we could do was go to a nearby place and eat delicious food. But thanks to the surgery, this child now has a healthy body. The time had come to gradually reevaluate this rut we were stuck in. Also, father's belly was starting to resemble that of a raccoon. <!--Original TL was "tanuki," or raccoon-dog. -LV -->

	(First . . . All this for a school trip? Why the big send-off party?)		(First . . . All this for a school trip? Why the big send-off party?)

	Even though I'll be back in a week. This is exaggerated, like a farewell party for a salaryman being relocated to a rural office~~. The waitress bowed her head as she entered and exited the private party room as if she did not know the reason for the party, right up to its end~~.		Even though I'll be back in a week. This is exaggerated, like a farewell party for a salaryman being relocated to a rural office.

	(Isn't it obvious? The youngest is in the seat of honor and the grown-ups are offering words of farewell.)		The waitress bowed her head as she entered and exited the private party room as if she did not know the reason for the party, right up to its end. Isn't it obvious? The youngest is in the seat of honor and the grown-ups are offering words of farewell.

	She smiled a bit at the sound of the sliding door being opened.		She smiled a bit at the sound of the sliding door being opened.
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	"Yeah."		"Yeah."

	In elementary school, I had to come home in the middle of a trip. In middle school, my mother followed along and watched from the shadows so that my classmates would not see her. But this time, no special treatment. I have graduated from my usual spot at the teacher's side. I look forward to taking this trip the same as all my friends.		In elementary school, I had to come home in the middle of a trip. In middle school, my mother followed along and watched from the shadows so that my classmates would not see her. But this time, no special treatment. I have graduated from my usual spot at the teacher's side. I look forward to taking this trip — the same as all my friends.

	"Let's take the train since we're young," Yoshino suggested, tugging on Rei-chan's shirt. Three people from the Hasekura family, three people from the Shimazu family. A total of six people cannot all fit into a single taxi.		"Let's take the train since we're young," Yoshino suggested, tugging on Rei-chan's shirt. Three people from the Hasekura family, three people from the Shimazu family. A total of six people cannot all fit into a single taxi.

	"Yeah. Let's do as you say."		"Yeah. Let's do as you say," Rei-chan said in agreement, and went back through the sliding door.

	Rei-chan went back through the sliding door.

	Yoshino looked at her wristwatch and said, "If we leave now, we should easily make it back in time for a 10 p.m. TV drama."		Yoshino looked at her wristwatch and said, "If we leave now, we should easily make it back in time for a 10 p.m. TV drama."
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	Rei-chan returned and made the OK sign with her fingers.		Rei-chan returned and made the OK sign with her fingers.

	Let's go. Yoshino could only gaze at Rei-chan's back as she turned and walked towards the main street~~. She~~ ran to catch up.		Let's go. Yoshino could only gaze at Rei-chan's back as she turned and walked towards the main street, then ran to catch up.

	They held hands ~~automatically~~.		They held hands instinctively.

	She was so happy, walking side-by-side. She realized that there was no substitute for this.		She was so happy, walking side-by-side. She realized that there was no substitute for this.

	"Really."		"Really . . ." Yoshino muttered a bit, before closing her mouth.

	Yoshino muttered a bit, before closing her mouth.

	"Mm, what?"		"Mm, what?"
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	"Nothing. Let's go home."		"Nothing. Let's go home."

	The reason I asked to return by train isn't because "we're young." It's because I wanted some time alone with you.		The reason I asked to return by train isn't because "we're young." It's because I wanted some time alone with you. But I'll never tell you.
	But I'll never tell you.

	Because Rei-chan would be delighted at the appearance of such defenselessness.		Because Rei-chan would be delighted at the appearance of such defenselessness.

Leviticus: Punctuation, Flow, Structure

2017-11-27T02:46:44Z

Punctuation, Flow, Structure

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	===<noinclude>Everyone's Farewell Presents </noinclude>Part 2===		===<noinclude>Everyone's Farewell Presents </noinclude>Part 2===

	It has become an established routine that whenever there is an event, the Hasekura and Shimazu families get together and go out for dinner.		It has become an established routine that whenever there is an event, the Hasekura and Shimazu families would get together and go out for dinner.

	New Years, Setsubun, Hina-~~matsuri、Ohigen~~, Obon, Christmas. Really, any excuse they could come up with for a lively get-together. Shinto, Buddhist, Christian: they'd mix and match, didn't matter. If situations prevented celebrating on that particular day, a few days before or after was close enough. It was a chance to get together with close relatives. It would be rude to dampen everyone's spirits.		New Years, Setsubun, Hina-matsuri, Ohigen, Obon, Christmas. Really, any excuse they could come up with for a lively get-together. Shinto, Buddhist, Christian; they'd mix and match, it didn't matter. If situations prevented celebrating on that particular day, a few days before or after was close enough. It was a chance to get together with close relatives. It would be rude to dampen everyone's spirits.

	(Well, I know they're doing this because I had such a weak body before.)		(Well, I know they're doing this because I had such a weak body before.)

	Stepping out of the restaurant ahead of everyone, Yoshino looked up at the night sky~~.。 She~~ took a deep breath~~: the~~ stars were so beautiful.		Stepping out of the restaurant ahead of everyone, Yoshino looked up at the night sky and took a deep breath. The stars were so beautiful.

	In the past, I could not go far or play sports, so ~~I could not take~~ this trip. ~~So for~~ special days, all we could do is go to a nearby place and eat delicious food. But thanks the surgery, this child now has a healthy body. The time had come to gradually reevaluate this rut we were stuck in. Also, father's belly is starting to resemble that of a tanuki.		In the past, I could not go far or play sports, so taking this trip was unimaginable. For special days, all we could do was go to a nearby place and eat delicious food. But thanks to the surgery, this child now has a healthy body. The time had come to gradually reevaluate this rut we were stuck in. Also, father's belly is starting to resemble that of a raccoon. <!--Original TL was "tanuki", or raccoon dog. -LV -->

	(First. All this for a school trip? Why the big send-off party?)		(First . . . All this for a school trip? Why the big send-off party?)

	Even though I'll be back in a week. This is exaggerated like a farewell party for a salaryman being relocated to a rural office. The waitress bowed her head as she entered and exited the private party room as if she did not know the reason for the party right up to its end.		Even though I'll be back in a week. This is exaggerated, like a farewell party for a salaryman being relocated to a rural office. The waitress bowed her head as she entered and exited the private party room as if she did not know the reason for the party, right up to its end.

	(Isn't it obvious? The youngest is in the seat of honor and the grown-ups are offering words of farewell.)		(Isn't it obvious? The youngest is in the seat of honor and the grown-ups are offering words of farewell.)
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	She smiled a bit at the sound of the sliding door being opened.		She smiled a bit at the sound of the sliding door being opened.

	"Yoshino."		"Yoshino," Rei-chan called while approaching.

	Rei-chan ~~approached~~ while ~~calling her name~~.

	My cousin, next-door neighbor, and onee-sama. I love you more than anything in the world, but, sometimes you can be the most annoying thing in the world. A tender, pitiful, precious, person.		My cousin, next-door neighbor, and onee-sama. I love you more than anything in the world, but, sometimes you can be the most annoying thing in the world. A tender, pitiful, precious, person.
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	"What about the grown-ups?"		"What about the grown-ups?"

	"Mother and auntie are at the register paying the bill. Father is looking after uncle. Taking a train would be too hard, so they're calling a taxi.		"Mother and auntie are at the register paying the bill. Father is looking after uncle. Taking a train would be too hard, so they're calling a taxi."

	"Is he smashed?"		"Is he smashed?"

	"He's smashed. He's just so happy~~. Yoshino has~~ become strong enough to go on the school trip." And with that, he unintentionally drank too much.		"He's smashed. He's just so happy that you've become strong enough to go on the school trip."

			And with that, he unintentionally drank too much.

	[[Image:MM v17 p015.jpg\|thumb]]		[[Image:MM v17 p015.jpg\|thumb]]
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	"Yeah."		"Yeah."

	In elementary school, I had to come home in the middle of ~~the~~ trip. In middle school, my mother followed along and watched from the shadows so that my classmates would not see her. But this time, no special treatment. I have graduated from my usual spot at the teacher's side. I look forward to taking this trip the same as all my friends.		In elementary school, I had to come home in the middle of a trip. In middle school, my mother followed along and watched from the shadows so that my classmates would not see her. But this time, no special treatment. I have graduated from my usual spot at the teacher's side. I look forward to taking this trip the same as all my friends.

	~~"Let's us young people take the train."~~

	Yoshino ~~said while~~ tugging on Rei-chan's shirt. Three people from the Hasekura family, three people from the Shimazu family. A total of six people cannot all fit into a single taxi.		"Let's take the train since we're young," Yoshino suggested, tugging on Rei-chan's shirt. Three people from the Hasekura family, three people from the Shimazu family. A total of six people cannot all fit into a single taxi.

	"Yeah. Let's do as you say."		"Yeah. Let's do as you say."
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	Rei-chan went back through the sliding door.		Rei-chan went back through the sliding door.

	Yoshino looked at her wristwatch and said, "If we leave now, we should easily make it back in time for a 10 pm TV drama". Rei-chan returned and made the OK sign with her fingers.		Yoshino looked at her wristwatch and said, "If we leave now, we should easily make it back in time for a 10 p.m. TV drama."

			Rei-chan returned and made the OK sign with her fingers.

	Let's go. Yoshino could only gaze at Rei-chan's back as she turned and walked towards the main street. She ran to catch up.		Let's go. Yoshino could only gaze at Rei-chan's back as she turned and walked towards the main street. She ran to catch up.
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	They held hands automatically.		They held hands automatically.

	She was so happy, walking side-by-side. She realized that there's no substitute for this.		She was so happy, walking side-by-side. She realized that there was no substitute for this.

	"Really."		"Really."
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	Because we won't see each other for a week.		Because we won't see each other for a week.

	It would just be too awful if Rei-chan looked up into the blue sky and remembered the face of "Sulking Yoshino".		It would just be too awful if Rei-chan looked up into the blue sky and remembered the face of "Sulking Yoshino."

Ziggr: /* Everyone's Farewell Presents */ "Part 2" header

2017-09-26T02:10:25Z

Everyone's Farewell Presents: "Part 2" header

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	===<noinclude>Everyone's Farewell Presents</noinclude>===		===<noinclude>Everyone's Farewell Presents </noinclude>Part 2===

	It has become an established routine that whenever there is an event, the Hasekura and Shimazu families get together and go out for dinner.		It has become an established routine that whenever there is an event, the Hasekura and Shimazu families get together and go out for dinner.

Ziggr: new translation

2017-09-26T02:03:55Z

new translation

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===<noinclude>Everyone's Farewell Presents</noinclude>===

It has become an established routine that whenever there is an event, the Hasekura and Shimazu families get together and go out for dinner.

New Years, Setsubun, Hina-matsuri、Ohigen, Obon, Christmas. Really, any excuse they could come up with for a lively get-together. Shinto, Buddhist, Christian: they'd mix and match, didn't matter. If situations prevented celebrating on that particular day, a few days before or after was close enough. It was a chance to get together with close relatives. It would be rude to dampen everyone's spirits.

(Well, I know they're doing this because I had such a weak body before.)

Stepping out of the restaurant ahead of everyone, Yoshino looked up at the night sky.。 She took a deep breath: the stars were so beautiful.

In the past, I could not go far or play sports, so I could not take this trip. So for special days, all we could do is go to a nearby place and eat delicious food. But thanks the surgery, this child now has a healthy body. The time had come to gradually reevaluate this rut we were stuck in. Also, father's belly is starting to resemble that of a tanuki.

(First. All this for a school trip? Why the big send-off party?)

Even though I'll be back in a week. This is exaggerated like a farewell party for a salaryman being relocated to a rural office. The waitress bowed her head as she entered and exited the private party room as if she did not know the reason for the party right up to its end.

(Isn't it obvious? The youngest is in the seat of honor and the grown-ups are offering words of farewell.)

She smiled a bit at the sound of the sliding door being opened.

"Yoshino."

Rei-chan approached while calling her name.

My cousin, next-door neighbor, and onee-sama. I love you more than anything in the world, but, sometimes you can be the most annoying thing in the world. A tender, pitiful, precious, person.

"What about the grown-ups?"

"Mother and auntie are at the register paying the bill. Father is looking after uncle. Taking a train would be too hard, so they're calling a taxi.

"Is he smashed?"

"He's smashed. He's just so happy. Yoshino has become strong enough to go on the school trip." And with that, he unintentionally drank too much.

[[Image:MM v17 p015.jpg|thumb]]

"Yeah."

In elementary school, I had to come home in the middle of the trip. In middle school, my mother followed along and watched from the shadows so that my classmates would not see her. But this time, no special treatment. I have graduated from my usual spot at the teacher's side. I look forward to taking this trip the same as all my friends.

"Let's us young people take the train."

Yoshino said while tugging on Rei-chan's shirt. Three people from the Hasekura family, three people from the Shimazu family. A total of six people cannot all fit into a single taxi.

"Yeah. Let's do as you say."

Rei-chan went back through the sliding door.

Yoshino looked at her wristwatch and said, "If we leave now, we should easily make it back in time for a 10 pm TV drama". Rei-chan returned and made the OK sign with her fingers.

Let's go. Yoshino could only gaze at Rei-chan's back as she turned and walked towards the main street. She ran to catch up.

They held hands automatically.

She was so happy, walking side-by-side. She realized that there's no substitute for this.

"Really."

Yoshino muttered a bit, before closing her mouth.

"Mm, what?"

"Nothing. Let's go home."

The reason I asked to return by train isn't because "we're young." It's because I wanted some time alone with you.
But I'll never tell you.

Because Rei-chan would be delighted at the appearance of such defenselessness.

But right now, holding hands like this, I can give you a bit more "Gentle Yoshino."

Because we won't see each other for a week.

It would just be too awful if Rei-chan looked up into the blue sky and remembered the face of "Sulking Yoshino".