Maria-sama Ga Miteru:Volume17 Chapter 1 3 - Revision history

Leviticus: Form, format, TL improvements

2018-11-27T05:32:59Z

Form, format, TL improvements

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	"It's fine. We have all sorts of folks visiting us, so we're going to be awake for some time."		"It's fine. We have all sorts of folks visiting us, so we're going to be awake for some time."

	''"But, Shimako-san ~~–~~"''		''"But, Shimako-san . . ."''

	"Yes?"		"Yes?"
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	''"You're not 'early to bed, early to rise'?"''		''"You're not 'early to bed, early to rise'?"''

	During school, Noriko called Shimako "~~Onee~~-sama," but anywhere else she used "Shimako-san." Initially, after they first became s&oelig;urs, she was a bit shaky switching between the two names. She'd hesitate and it ~~did~~ not go smoothly, but she's settled into it now. She knew that Yoshino-san called Rei-sama "Rei-chan" in private, so the switch was possible. Even among third parties, she could easily move between "Shimako-sama" and "Shimako-san" as appropriate.		During school, Noriko called Shimako "onee-sama," but anywhere else she used "Shimako-san." Initially, after they first became s&oelig;urs, she was a bit shaky switching between the two names. She'd hesitate and it would not go smoothly, but she's settled into it now. She knew that Yoshino-san called Rei-sama "Rei-chan" in private, so the switch was possible. Even among third parties, she could easily move between "Shimako-sama" and "Shimako-san" as appropriate.

	"I already checked over tomorrow's ~~baggage~~ one last time."		"I already checked over tomorrow's luggage one last time."

	She started preparing little by little a week ago, so she was mostly done already. Although, I wonder if she's the kind of person who keeps a list of her belongings in her guidebook so that she can check it again to make sure nothing is left behind.		She started preparing little by little a week ago, so she was mostly done already. Although, I wonder if she's the kind of person who keeps a list of her belongings in her guidebook so that she can check it again to make sure nothing would be left behind.

	''"I see. Because of where you're going, you can't go back to pick up anything."''		''"I see. Because of where you're going, you can't go back to pick up anything."''
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	"I see."		"I see."

	''"I forgot to say something at school; I'd gotten a little flustered, so, sure enough, I ended up calling. Shimako-san . . ."''		''"I forgot to say something at school. I'd gotten a little flustered, so, sure enough, I ended up calling. Shimako-san . . ."''

	"What is it?"		"What is it?"

	''"Have a good trip. Take care. ~~And~~, because it's you, Shimako-san, I ~~won~~'~~t worry~~ about ~~things like~~ you ~~getting out of hand~~."''		''"Have a good trip. Take care. Well, because it's you, Shimako-san, I'm not worried about you behaving rashly or anything."''

	"Yes."		"Yes."

	''"I'll be here waiting. Waiting for you to come back."''		''"I'll be here, waiting. Waiting for you to come back."''

	"Noriko."		"Noriko."

	She ~~had~~ a ~~way of speaking~~ that ~~was just like flying~~. ~~Here, in this place,~~ she had ~~a person~~ waiting for her return~~, Shimako thought~~. ~~This isn't~~ a birdcage ~~that locks you up~~, ~~it is a cherished nest. Without noticing~~, Lillian Academy ~~for Women~~ had become a place to return to.		She'd always thought of it as a place that she wanted to be free to fly from at any point. But now she had someone there waiting for her to return. It was a precious nest; not a birdcage keeping her trapped.

			At some point, unnoticed, Lillian Girls' Academy had become a place she felt compelled to return to.

	"Thank you."		"Thank you."
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	Shimako savored the meaning of that word.		Shimako savored the meaning of that word.

	A ~~place~~ that precious chicks could depend on.		A nest that precious chicks could depend on.

Leviticus: Grammar, flow, form

2017-12-20T08:02:10Z

Grammar, flow, form

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	===<noinclude>Everyone's Farewell Presents </noinclude>Part 3===		===<noinclude>Everyone's Farewell Presents </noinclude>Part 3===

	It was after 10 pm when Noriko phoned.		It was after 10 p.m. when Noriko phoned.

	"~~Gomennasai.~~ Sorry for calling at such a late hour.」		''"Sorry for calling at such a late hour."''

	"~~Daijoubu.~~ It's fine. We have all sorts of folks visiting us, so we're ~~night owls~~."		"It's fine. We have all sorts of folks visiting us, so we're going to be awake for some time."

	"But, Shimako-san."		''"But, Shimako-san –"''

	"Yes?"		"Yes?"

	"You're not 'early to bed, early to rise'?"		''"You're not 'early to bed, early to rise'?"''

	During school, Noriko called Shimako "Onee-sama"~~. But outside of that,~~ she ~~called her~~ "Shimako-san"~~. At first~~, after they first became ~~soeurs~~, she was a bit shaky switching between the two names. She'd hesitate and it did not go smoothly~~. But~~ she's settled into it now. She knew that Yoshino-san called Rei-sama "Rei-chan" in private, so the switch was possible. Even among third parties, she ~~can~~ easily ~~switch~~ between "Shimako-sama" and "Shimako-san" as appropriate.		During school, Noriko called Shimako "Onee-sama," but anywhere else she used "Shimako-san." Initially, after they first became s&oelig;urs, she was a bit shaky switching between the two names. She'd hesitate and it did not go smoothly, but she's settled into it now. She knew that Yoshino-san called Rei-sama "Rei-chan" in private, so the switch was possible. Even among third parties, she could easily move between "Shimako-sama" and "Shimako-san" as appropriate.

	"I already checked over tomorrow's baggage one ~~more~~ time."		"I already checked over tomorrow's baggage one last time."

	She started preparing little by little a week ago, so she was mostly done already. Although, I wonder if she's the kind of person who keeps a list of her belongings in her guidebook so that she can check it again to make sure nothing is left behind.		She started preparing little by little a week ago, so she was mostly done already. Although, I wonder if she's the kind of person who keeps a list of her belongings in her guidebook so that she can check it again to make sure nothing is left behind.

	"I see. Because of where you're going, you can't go back to pick up anything."		''"I see. Because of where you're going, you can't go back to pick up anything."''

	"~~The~~ sell things there, but would it be easy to shop?"		"They sell things there, but would it be easy to shop?"

	But it would be a problem to forget something you needed like a uniform or a passport. Because you wear your uniform, it would be impossible to forget it. As long as you carry your passport, you can borrow from friends or procure items locally without interrupting the trip. Whether that's comfortable or not.		But it would be a problem to forget something you needed like a uniform or a passport. Because you wear your uniform, it would be impossible to forget it. As long as you carry your passport, you can borrow from friends or procure items locally without interrupting the trip. Whether that's comfortable or not.

	"Me too."		''"Me too . . ."'' Noriko started. ''"I'm also the type to worry about forgetting things."''

	Noriko ~~said~~.

	"I'm also the type to worry about forgetting things."

	"I see."		"I see."

	"~~As you say.~~ I forgot to say something at school, I'd gotten a little flustered, so, sure enough, I ended up calling. Shimako-san."		''"I forgot to say something at school; I'd gotten a little flustered, so, sure enough, I ended up calling. Shimako-san . . ."''

	"What is it?"		"What is it?"

	"~~Itterashai.~~ Have a good trip. Take care. And, because it's you, Shimako-san, I won't worry about things like ~~such as~~ getting out of hand."		''"Have a good trip. Take care. And, because it's you, Shimako-san, I won't worry about things like you getting out of hand."''

	"Yes."		"Yes."

	"I'll be here waiting. Waiting for you to come back."		''"I'll be here waiting. Waiting for you to come back."''

	"Noriko."		"Noriko."

	She had a way of speaking that was just like flying. ~~She thought~~, ~~here~~ in this place she had a person waiting for her return.		She had a way of speaking that was just like flying. Here, in this place, she had a person waiting for her return, Shimako thought. This isn't a birdcage that locks you up, it is a cherished nest. Without noticing, Lillian Academy for Women had become a place to return to.

	This isn't a birdcage that locks you up, it is a cherished nest.

	Without noticing, Lillian Academy for Women had become a place to return to.

	"Thank you."		"Thank you."

Ziggr: /* Everyone's Farewell Presents */ "Part 3" header

2017-09-26T02:10:56Z

Everyone's Farewell Presents: "Part 3" header

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	===<noinclude>Everyone's Farewell Presents</noinclude>===		===<noinclude>Everyone's Farewell Presents </noinclude>Part 3===

	It was after 10 pm when Noriko phoned.		It was after 10 pm when Noriko phoned.

Ziggr: new translation

2017-09-26T02:04:55Z

new translation

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===<noinclude>Everyone's Farewell Presents</noinclude>===

It was after 10 pm when Noriko phoned.

"Gomennasai. Sorry for calling at such a late hour.」

"Daijoubu. It's fine. We have all sorts of folks visiting us, so we're night owls."

"But, Shimako-san."

"Yes?"

"You're not 'early to bed, early to rise'?"

During school, Noriko called Shimako "Onee-sama". But outside of that, she called her "Shimako-san". At first, after they first became soeurs, she was a bit shaky switching between the two names. She'd hesitate and it did not go smoothly. But she's settled into it now. She knew that Yoshino-san called Rei-sama "Rei-chan" in private, so the switch was possible. Even among third parties, she can easily switch between "Shimako-sama" and "Shimako-san" as appropriate.

"I already checked over tomorrow's baggage one more time."

She started preparing little by little a week ago, so she was mostly done already. Although, I wonder if she's the kind of person who keeps a list of her belongings in her guidebook so that she can check it again to make sure nothing is left behind.

"I see. Because of where you're going, you can't go back to pick up anything."

"The sell things there, but would it be easy to shop?"

But it would be a problem to forget something you needed like a uniform or a passport. Because you wear your uniform, it would be impossible to forget it. As long as you carry your passport, you can borrow from friends or procure items locally without interrupting the trip. Whether that's comfortable or not.

"Me too."

Noriko said.

"I'm also the type to worry about forgetting things."

"I see."

"As you say. I forgot to say something at school, I'd gotten a little flustered, so, sure enough, I ended up calling. Shimako-san."

"What is it?"

"Itterashai. Have a good trip. Take care. And, because it's you, Shimako-san, I won't worry about things like such as getting out of hand."

"Yes."

"I'll be here waiting. Waiting for you to come back."

"Noriko."

She had a way of speaking that was just like flying. She thought, here in this place she had a person waiting for her return.

This isn't a birdcage that locks you up, it is a cherished nest.

Without noticing, Lillian Academy for Women had become a place to return to.

"Thank you."

Shimako savored the meaning of that word.

A place that precious chicks could depend on.