Maria-sama ga Miteru:Volume1 Chapter1 3 - Revision history

Leviticus: Period

2023-07-03T16:39:58Z

Period

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	"Yumi-san, Yumi-san."		"Yumi-san, Yumi-san."

Leviticus: Form, format

2023-07-02T00:05:38Z

Form, format

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Andreas B: /* Monday of Uneasiness. Part 3. */

2023-01-17T16:48:19Z

Monday of Uneasiness. Part 3.

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	Tsutako-san turned back toward Yumi and asked, abruptly.		Tsutako-san turned back toward Yumi and asked, abruptly.

	"Y, … yes."		"Y-… yes."

	Because she's notorious.		Because she's notorious.
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	As Yumi had raised her voice far beyond what was generally accepted of a Lillian student, Tsutako-san covered her mouth.		As Yumi had raised her voice far beyond what was generally accepted of a Lillian student, Tsutako-san covered her mouth.

	"Th, this."		"Th- this."

	Ahh, and what it was.		Ahh, and what it was.
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	Just remembering the incident made her want to blush.		Just remembering the incident made her want to blush.

	"Sachiko-sama probably thought, what a slovenly student."		"Sachiko-sama probably thought 'what a slovenly student'".

	It wasn't supposed to be like that.		It wasn't supposed to be like that.
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	"Also, Yumi-san, I decided that it would be profitable to use you for negotiations."		"Also, Yumi-san, I decided that it would be profitable to use you for negotiations."

	"W, Why?"		"W-Why?"

	"Because you caught the attention of Sachiko-sama."		"Because you caught the attention of Sachiko-sama."
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	First-years that undertook a bold deed the likes of walking in front of Sachiko-sama with a bent tie, all for the sake of catching her attention for one moment. Tsutako-san spoke of this in a serenading tone, as if she were a leading actress, standing at the middle of the stage, basking in the spotlight.		First-years that undertook a bold deed the likes of walking in front of Sachiko-sama with a bent tie, all for the sake of catching her attention for one moment. Tsutako-san spoke of this in a serenading tone, as if she were a leading actress, standing at the middle of the stage, basking in the spotlight.

	"Especially Sachiko-sama~~, she~~'s considered one of the most compulsive about cleanliness in the school. She's famous for disdaining slovenly appearances, so there might have been more than one person who foolishly attempted such a stunt."		"Especially Sachiko-sama. She's considered one of the most compulsive about cleanliness in the school. She's famous for disdaining slovenly appearances, so there might have been more than one person who foolishly attempted such a stunt."
	To carry a proper soul, one must first tend to their person appearance-. For roughly 11 years since kindergarten, that had been a repeated mantra, and breaking that schooling in order to get the attention of their beloved senior simply awarded them one, icy glance from Sachiko-sama. And then complete disregard.		To carry a proper soul, one must first tend to their person appearance-. For roughly 11 years since kindergarten, that had been a repeated mantra, and breaking that schooling in order to get the attention of their beloved senior simply awarded them one, icy glance from Sachiko-sama. And then complete disregard.

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	"You don't understand, Yumi-san. Sachiko-sama is no demon. She's an angel. Archangel Michael."		"You don't understand, Yumi-san. Sachiko-sama is no demon. She's an angel. Archangel Michael."

	"A, Archangel Michael…?"		"A- Archangel Michael…?"

	What is she saying~~, does~~ she even understand what she's saying? Tsutako-san's eyes were focused on something far away.		What is she saying. Does she even understand what she's saying? Tsutako-san's eyes were focused on something far away.

	"She is, in reality, sublime and tolerant. However, everything that opposes her aesthetic sense is absolutely unforgivable. She is, after all, a born princess. She has her own peculiar sense of rules."		"She is, in reality, sublime and tolerant. However, everything that opposes her aesthetic sense is absolutely unforgivable. She is, after all, a born princess. She has her own peculiar sense of rules."

Yobbin: /* Monday of Uneasiness. Part 3. */

2010-10-12T01:14:35Z

Monday of Uneasiness. Part 3.

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	"Yumi-san,Yumi-san."		"Yumi-san, Yumi-san."

	Yumi was called upon after school, just as she had finished her cleaning duties and had walked out of the music room.		Yumi was called upon after school, just as she had finished her cleaning duties and had walked out of the music room.

JackBassV: /* Monday of Uneasiness. Part 3. */

2008-11-09T01:45:05Z

<noinclude>Monday of Uneasiness. </noinclude>Part 3.

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	As always, Sachiko-sama was lovely. And as a direct result of her presence, Yumi, standing to her side, looked like an angel.		As always, Sachiko-sama was lovely. And as a direct result of her presence, Yumi, standing to her side, looked like an angel.

	"The first one was taken with a long-range ~~shutter~~, the close-up. But this one, the one where your whole body is photographed, has more of a 'forbidden' mood to it, making it look better, don't you think?"		"The first one was taken with a long-range lense, the close-up. But this one, the one where your whole body is photographed, has more of a 'forbidden' mood to it, making it look better, don't you think?"

	By the way the title is "Training," Tsutako-san said, and Yumi could do naught but agree.		By the way the title is "Training," Tsutako-san said, and Yumi could do naught but agree.

162.83.255.253: /* Monday of Uneasiness. Part 3. */

2008-10-06T05:35:54Z

<noinclude>Monday of Uneasiness. </noinclude>Part 3.

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	For example, like a scene in a movie. A scene that would make you blush just remembering it, even after graduating. Even if it were just an instant. Like picking up and returning Sachiko-sama's handkerchief after it got blown away by wind, or something trivial like that.		For example, like a scene in a movie. A scene that would make you blush just remembering it, even after graduating. Even if it were just an instant. Like picking up and returning Sachiko-sama's handkerchief after it got blown away by wind, or something trivial like that.

	But, a bent tie. On top of that, she panicked so much she couldn't even greet or thank her. She'd fallen to the status an impolite underclassman.		But, a bent tie. On top of that, she panicked so much she couldn't even greet or thank her. She'd fallen to the status of an impolite underclassman.

	"A slovenly student, isn't that fine? After all, it let you get close to your lovely onee-sama."		"A slovenly student, isn't that fine? After all, it let you get close to your lovely onee-sama."
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	"Also, Yumi-san, I decided that it would be profitable to use you for negotiations."		"Also, Yumi-san, I decided that it would be profitable to use you for negotiations."

	"W, Why."		"W, Why?"

	"Because you caught the attention of Sachiko-sama."		"Because you caught the attention of Sachiko-sama."

Vaelis at 11:54, 3 August 2008

2008-08-03T11:54:52Z

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	"Yumi-san,Yumi-san."		"Yumi-san,Yumi-san."

Iatheia at 17:48, 20 July 2008

2008-07-20T17:48:56Z

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	==3.==		==Monday of Uneasiness. Part 3.==

	"Yumi-san,Yumi-san."		"Yumi-san,Yumi-san."

91.165.184.156: /* 3. */

2008-06-21T09:32:28Z

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	In the end, Tsutako's killer blow of "You don't want the photo?" had pushed Yumi into accepting the job of negotiating with Sachiko-sama.		In the end, Tsutako's killer blow of "You don't want the photo?" had pushed Yumi into accepting the job of negotiating with Sachiko-sama.

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Margaretman2: /* 3. */

2008-06-14T00:37:57Z

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	"Why… thank you."		"Why… thank you."

	"No, no. ~~Have no mind~~. Gokigenyou."		"No, no. Think nothing of it. Gokigenyou."

	"Gokigenyou."		"Gokigenyou."