Maria-sama ga Miteru:Volume26 Chapter1 4 - Revision history

Leviticus: Polishing

2016-08-24T06:32:37Z

Polishing

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	"No, it's not like that."		"No, it's not like that."

	Mami-san was reeling from the unexpected attack. That pair's relationship ~~was~~ more like a boss and employee than s&oelig;urs. Mami-san probably didn't know how to cope with this situation, since she couldn't usually spoil or indulge her petite s&oelig;ur. ~~<!-- Note 1 -->~~		Mami-san was reeling from the unexpected attack. That pair had a relationship more like a boss-and-employee's, rather than s&oelig;urs. Mami-san probably didn't know how to cope with this situation, since she couldn't usually spoil or indulge her petite s&oelig;ur.

	(First of all, "~~Thank~~ you.")		(First of all, "thank you.")

	Yumi~~-san~~ moved around behind Mami-san and whispered in her ear.		Yumi moved around behind Mami-san and whispered in her ear.

	"First of all, thank you."		"First of all, thank you."

	"It's frivolous to say, '~~First~~ of all'."		"It's frivolous to say 'first of all'."

	(I'm so happy.)		(I'm so happy.)
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	Hidemi-san turned her back, like she was sulking.		Hidemi-san turned her back, like she was sulking.

	"My ~~onee~~-sama's the newspaper's ogre-in-chief; I wasn't really expecting much."		"My Onee-sama's the newspaper's ogre-in-chief; I wasn't really expecting much."

	(An ogre, huh.)		(An ogre, huh.)
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	With Mami-san's declaration, everyone took their seats and adopted serious expressions.		With Mami-san's declaration, everyone took their seats and adopted serious expressions.

	"First of all, let's review everyone's movements against this timetable."		"First of all, let's review everyone's movements against this timetable, and then —"

	Everyone was united in wanting this event to be a success.		Everyone was united in wanting this event to be a success.

Leviticus: Form, Punctuation

2016-07-19T22:53:33Z

Form, Punctuation

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	"You're late."		"You're late."

	When they got to the room on the second-floor of the Rose Mansion, they were met with a scowl.		When they got to the room on the second floor of the Rose Mansion, they were met with a scowl.

	"Honestly."		"Honestly."
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	"We'll see. She said she wanted to come once her exam was over, but who knows? She's put an entry in the second-chance draw, so even if she comes she can't participate in the treasure hunt."		"We'll see. She said she wanted to come once her exam was over, but who knows? She's put an entry in the second-chance draw, so even if she comes she can't participate in the treasure hunt."

	So that was it. Yoshino-san was more upset by Rei-sama's absence than she was about chocolates. Last year, the Yellow Rose ~~soeurs~~ – cousins and next-door neighbors – had exchanged chocolates after they got home from school.		So that was it. Yoshino-san was more upset by Rei-sama's absence than she was about chocolates. Last year, the Yellow Rose s&oelig;urs – cousins and next-door neighbors – had exchanged chocolates after they got home from school.

	"Relax, Yoshino-san. Everyone made it in time for the 8 o'clock meeting."		"Relax, Yoshino-san. Everyone made it in time for the 8 o'clock meeting."
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	Mami-san, the president of the newspaper club and editor-in-chief of the Lillian Kawaraban, tried to pacify Yoshino-san. The eight members of the newspaper club had already arrived.		Mami-san, the president of the newspaper club and editor-in-chief of the Lillian Kawaraban, tried to pacify Yoshino-san. The eight members of the newspaper club had already arrived.

	"I don't want to hear that from someone standing there with her ~~soeur~~."		"I don't want to hear that from someone standing there with her s&oelig;ur."

	Mami-san's ~~petit soeur~~, Hidemi-san, was a member of the newspaper club so naturally she was also present.		Mami-san's petite s&oelig;ur, Hidemi-san, was a member of the newspaper club, so naturally she was also present.

	"Oh? But we're not exchanging chocolates."		"Oh? But we're not exchanging chocolates."
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	"You're not?"		"You're not?"

	Yoshino-san asked~~. Arbitrarily~~ deciding that all ~~soeurs~~ were required to exchange presents on Valentine's Day.		Yoshino-san asked, arbitrarily deciding that all s&oelig;urs were required to exchange presents on Valentine's Day.

	"The newspaper club's focusing all our energy on today's main event. We don't have any spare time for something frivolous like that. Right?"		"The newspaper club's focusing all our energy on today's main event. We don't have any spare time for something frivolous like that. Right?"

	Mami-san shifted her gaze to her ~~petit soeur~~, looking for confirmation. But, no matter how long she waited, there was no response of, "Yes," or, "Of course," forthcoming from Hidemi-san.		Mami-san shifted her gaze to her petite s&oelig;ur, looking for confirmation. But, no matter how long she waited, there was no response of "Yes," or "Of course," forthcoming from Hidemi-san.

	"Um … Hidemi-san, did ~~you …~~ "		"Um … Hidemi-san, did you…?"

	Noriko-chan timidly inquired. Then Hidemi-san angrily thrust a cute paper bag at Mami-san. It was undoubtedly a thrust, not just an offer.		Noriko-chan timidly inquired. Then Hidemi-san angrily thrust a cute paper bag at Mami-san. It was undoubtedly a thrust, not just an offer.

	"~~Hidem –~~ "		"Hidem–"

	"So sorry for spending my energy on something as frivolous as this when we don't have any spare time."		"So sorry for spending my energy on something as frivolous as this when we don't have any spare time."
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	"No, it's not like that."		"No, it's not like that."

	Mami-san was reeling from the unexpected attack. That pair's relationship was more like a boss and employee than ~~soeurs~~. Mami-san probably didn't know how to cope with this situation, since she couldn't usually spoil or indulge her ~~petit soeur~~.		Mami-san was reeling from the unexpected attack. That pair's relationship was more like a boss and employee than s&oelig;urs. Mami-san probably didn't know how to cope with this situation, since she couldn't usually spoil or indulge her petite s&oelig;ur. <!-- Note 1 -->

	(First of all, "Thank-you.")		(First of all, "Thank you.")

	Yumi-san moved around behind Mami-san and whispered in her ear.		Yumi-san moved around behind Mami-san and whispered in her ear.

	"First of all, thank-you."		"First of all, thank you."

	"It's frivolous to say, "First of all.""		"It's frivolous to say, 'First of all'."

	(I'm so happy.)		(I'm so happy.)
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	Hidemi-san turned her back, like she was sulking.		Hidemi-san turned her back, like she was sulking.

	"My onee-sama's the newspaper's ogre-in-chief, I wasn't really expecting much."		"My onee-sama's the newspaper's ogre-in-chief; I wasn't really expecting much."

	(An ogre, huh.)		(An ogre, huh.)
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	"I'm the Lillian Kawaraban's ogre. I'm not about to loosen up and have fun even on Valentine's Day."		"I'm the Lillian Kawaraban's ogre. I'm not about to loosen up and have fun even on Valentine's Day."

	"Don't say that Mami-san."		"Don't say that, Mami-san."

	It was like she was verbally trampling all over the gift her ~~petit soeur~~ had gone to great efforts to give her.		It was like she was verbally trampling all over the gift her petite s&oelig;ur had gone to great efforts to give her.

	"My mind is completely filled with today's event. Hidemi wouldn't be my ~~petit soeur~~ if she didn't understand something like that."		"My mind is completely filled with today's event. Hidemi wouldn't be my petite s&oelig;ur if she didn't understand something like that."

	After saying this, Mami-san turned to her ~~petit soeur~~.		After saying this, Mami-san turned to her petite s&oelig;ur.

	"So? What's this?"		"So? What's this?"
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	Hidemi-san responded cheerfully.		Hidemi-san responded cheerfully.

	Wait, wait. Was that okay? Somehow it had all been resolved peacefully. It wasn't just Yumi – Yoshino-san, Shimako-san, Noriko-chan, and all the other newspaper club members were equally bewildered.		Wait, wait. Was that okay? Somehow it had all been resolved peacefully. It wasn't just Yumi – Yoshino-san, Shimako-san, Noriko-chan, and all the other newspaper club members were equally bewildered.

	~~Soeurship~~ was an unfathomable thing. Ten pairs would have ten different ways of doing things, same for one hundred, and none of them would have the same sort of relationship as another.		S&oelig;urship was an unfathomable thing. Ten pairs would have ten different ways of doing things, same for one hundred, and none of them would have the same sort of relationship as another.

	But it was probably those differences that made it so interesting.		But it was probably those differences that made it so interesting.
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	With Mami-san's declaration, everyone took their seats and adopted serious expressions.		With Mami-san's declaration, everyone took their seats and adopted serious expressions.

	"First of all, let's review everyone's movements against this timetable – "		"First of all, let's review everyone's movements against this timetable."

	Everyone was united in wanting this event to be a success.		Everyone was united in wanting this event to be a success.

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"You're late."

When they got to the room on the second-floor of the Rose Mansion, they were met with a scowl.

"Honestly."

Yoshino-san continued.

"The White and Red Rose families were all so busy this morning exchanging chocolates. But, sadly, the head of the Yellow Rose household is absent today with an entrance exam."

Yumi had a vague memory of this being the sort of line a wife would say when her husband was transferred to a distant city, leaving his family behind.

"Rei-sama's not coming?"

"We'll see. She said she wanted to come once her exam was over, but who knows? She's put an entry in the second-chance draw, so even if she comes she can't participate in the treasure hunt."

So that was it. Yoshino-san was more upset by Rei-sama's absence than she was about chocolates. Last year, the Yellow Rose soeurs – cousins and next-door neighbors – had exchanged chocolates after they got home from school.

"Relax, Yoshino-san. Everyone made it in time for the 8 o'clock meeting."

Mami-san, the president of the newspaper club and editor-in-chief of the Lillian Kawaraban, tried to pacify Yoshino-san. The eight members of the newspaper club had already arrived.

"I don't want to hear that from someone standing there with her soeur."

Mami-san's petit soeur, Hidemi-san, was a member of the newspaper club so naturally she was also present.

"Oh? But we're not exchanging chocolates."

Mami-san responded immediately.

"You're not?"

Yoshino-san asked. Arbitrarily deciding that all soeurs were required to exchange presents on Valentine's Day.

"The newspaper club's focusing all our energy on today's main event. We don't have any spare time for something frivolous like that. Right?"

Mami-san shifted her gaze to her petit soeur, looking for confirmation. But, no matter how long she waited, there was no response of, "Yes," or, "Of course," forthcoming from Hidemi-san.

"Um … Hidemi-san, did you … "

Noriko-chan timidly inquired. Then Hidemi-san angrily thrust a cute paper bag at Mami-san. It was undoubtedly a thrust, not just an offer.

"Hidem – "

"So sorry for spending my energy on something as frivolous as this when we don't have any spare time."

"No, it's not like that."

Mami-san was reeling from the unexpected attack. That pair's relationship was more like a boss and employee than soeurs. Mami-san probably didn't know how to cope with this situation, since she couldn't usually spoil or indulge her petit soeur.

(First of all, "Thank-you.")

Yumi-san moved around behind Mami-san and whispered in her ear.

"First of all, thank-you."

"It's frivolous to say, "First of all.""

(I'm so happy.)

Shimako-san joined in too.

"I-I'm so happy."

She was just saying what she was told. Mami-san was acting like a ventriloquist's dummy.

"That's enough."

Hidemi-san turned her back, like she was sulking.

"My onee-sama's the newspaper's ogre-in-chief, I wasn't really expecting much."

(An ogre, huh.)

Everyone considered this for a moment, but then:

"Exactly."

The previously deflated Mami-san straightened up and answered heartily.

"I'm the Lillian Kawaraban's ogre. I'm not about to loosen up and have fun even on Valentine's Day."

"Don't say that Mami-san."

It was like she was verbally trampling all over the gift her petit soeur had gone to great efforts to give her.

"My mind is completely filled with today's event. Hidemi wouldn't be my petit soeur if she didn't understand something like that."

After saying this, Mami-san turned to her petit soeur.

"So? What's this?"

"Ch-chocolate cookies."

"I see. Then I'll eat them after the event, since I usually crave sweet things when I'm tired."

"Okay."

Hidemi-san responded cheerfully.

Wait, wait. Was that okay? Somehow it had all been resolved peacefully. It wasn't just Yumi – Yoshino-san, Shimako-san, Noriko-chan, and all the other newspaper club members were equally bewildered.

Soeurship was an unfathomable thing. Ten pairs would have ten different ways of doing things, same for one hundred, and none of them would have the same sort of relationship as another.

But it was probably those differences that made it so interesting.

"Well then, let's start our final briefing."

With Mami-san's declaration, everyone took their seats and adopted serious expressions.

"First of all, let's review everyone's movements against this timetable – "

Everyone was united in wanting this event to be a success.