Maria Sama Ga Miteru:Volume12 Chapter1 - Revision history

Enn are at 13:27, 4 April 2018

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	==~~Chapter 1~~==		==Plans for the Summer Vacation==



	===Part 1===		===Part 1===

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Chapter 1

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	From Monday in the last week of July, she would be departing to spend one week with her onee-sama at the highland summer house.		From Monday in the last week of July, she would be departing to spend one week with her onee-sama at the highland summer house.

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Leviticus: Consistency

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Consistency

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	===1===		===Part 1===

	Dropping her glance onto her clipped stack of copies, Rosa Cinensis Ogasawara Sachiko-sama coolly said.		Dropping her glance onto her clipped stack of copies, Rosa Cinensis Ogasawara Sachiko-sama coolly said.
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	===2===		===Part 2===

	The family shared the same surprise.		The family shared the same surprise.
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	===3===		===Part 3===


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	===4===		===Part 4===

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	"The Ogasawara's summerhouse. No matter how, I want to receive an invitation. If impossible, it would be good even to just sneak a glimpse of the red rose sisters' vacation."		"The Ogasawara's summerhouse. No matter how, I want to receive an invitation. If impossible, it would be good even to just sneak a glimpse of the red rose sisters' vacation."

	Bangs parted to one side<ref>七三分け(7-3 parting) -- this is an expression used ~~to mean that~~ the hair is parted to one side, and is what the author uses to refer to Mami during this passage.</ref> with a hairpin, the short-haired girl who had stopped, shut the memo pad which was open and muttered.		Bangs parted to one side<ref>七三分け(7-3 parting) -- this is an expression used for describing a hair-style with the hair parted to one side, and is what the author uses to refer to Mami during this passage.</ref> with a hairpin, the short-haired girl who had stopped, shut the memo pad which was open and muttered.

	"But, since it's private property, right?"		"But, since it's private property, right?"

Rydenius: edited a section that was still bugging me (slight meaning clarification too)

2015-05-02T02:55:47Z

edited a section that was still bugging me (slight meaning clarification too)

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	"But. Having snuck a view of that situation's two-people-in-their-own-world feeling, it's a bit difficult to ask, right?"		"But. Having snuck a view of that situation's two-people-in-their-own-world feeling, it's a bit difficult to ask, right?"

	"It'~~s a nuisance type thing~~, ~~isn~~'t it?"		"We'd be intruding, wouldn't we?"<ref> The word used here is お邪魔虫. Which roughly translates to "intruding bug", or put more simply: a pest. </ref>

	"~~It is a nuisance~~."		"Yep, intruding."

	The two, being Fukuzawa Yumi's classmates, know just how fond she is of her onee-sama. For that alone, and beyond that -- what a thing ~~that~~ friendship ~~couldn't~~ hinder their cutting in on such modest happiness, no matter how good the photos and stories to be had.		The two, being Fukuzawa Yumi's classmates, know just how fond she is of her onee-sama. For that alone, and beyond that -- what a thing it would be if friendship was not able to hinder their cutting in on such modest happiness, no matter how good the photos and stories to be had.

	"To that point, you know, about the sisters' vacations, it's not about getting shown, rather I want to see."		"To that point, you know, about the sisters' vacations, it's not about getting shown, rather I want to see."
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	From Monday in the last week of July, she would be departing to spend one week with her onee-sama at the highland summer house.		From Monday in the last week of July, she would be departing to spend one week with her onee-sama at the highland summer house.


	===Translator's Notes===		===Translator's Notes===

Rydenius: changed the translation for a paragraph that was bothering me, bunch of minor edits, and moved in-line notes to translator's notes

2014-01-02T18:26:22Z

changed the translation for a paragraph that was bothering me, bunch of minor edits, and moved in-line notes to translator's notes

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Rydenius: Added picture insert to part 4

2013-11-27T20:33:56Z

Added picture insert to part 4

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	"I heard that."		"I heard that."
	After the red rose sisters returned side by side, basking in the warm sisterhood between them, two shadows appeared from within the dense bushes.		After the red rose sisters returned side by side, basking in the warm sisterhood between them, two shadows appeared from within the dense bushes.
			[[File:MM v12 003.jpg\|thumb\|right\|Mami and Tsutako spy on the red rose sisters]]

	"The Ogasawara's summerhouse. No matter how, I want to receive an invitation. If impossible, it would be good even to just sneak a glimpse of the red rose sisters' vacation."		"The Ogasawara's summerhouse. No matter how, I want to receive an invitation. If impossible, it would be good even to just sneak a glimpse of the red rose sisters' vacation."

Rydenius: Added missing section for part 4 + some minor grammar edits (forgot to log in the first time)

2013-11-27T19:47:29Z

Added missing section for part 4 + some minor grammar edits (forgot to log in the first time)

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Rydenius: Undo revision 305545 by 71.191.130.106 (talk)

2013-11-27T19:45:44Z

Undo revision 305545 by 71.191.130.106 (talk)

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71.191.130.106 at 19:40, 27 November 2013

2013-11-27T19:40:07Z

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