Maria Sama Ga Miteru:Volume12 Chapter2 - Revision history

Enn are at 13:24, 4 April 2018

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	--That was Yumi's brain already beginning to melt just like soft-serve ice cream.		--That was Yumi's brain already beginning to melt just like soft-serve ice cream.

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Leviticus: Consistency

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Consistency

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	==In the Dream of Seeing Cabbage Butterflies==		==In the Dream of Seeing Cabbage Butterflies==
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	Almost like sulking in bed, Yumi closed her eyes, but upon entrusting her body to the car's vibration, drowsiness really did come.		Almost like sulking in bed, Yumi closed her eyes, but upon entrusting her body to the car's vibration, drowsiness really did come.

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2014-04-10T00:30:04Z

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	Being appreciated for her work, Mom was so pleased that she started to share her profound knowledge on cherry tomatoes' calyx. Just as Mom reached without reserve the topic of when is the best timing to wrap seaweed on onigiri, Dad entered the dining room with sleepy eyes, scratching his head.		Being appreciated for her work, Mom was so pleased that she started to share her profound knowledge on cherry tomatoes' calyx. Just as Mom reached without reserve the topic of when is the best timing to wrap seaweed on onigiri, Dad entered the dining room with sleepy eyes, scratching his head.

	"Oh, ~~it's hiking~~?"		"Oh, an outing?"

	From the plate of leftover side-dishes, Dad picked a tomato and put it into his mouth.		From the plate of leftover side-dishes, Dad picked a tomato and put it into his mouth.
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	"Mornin'"		"Mornin'"

	Wearing pajamas crumbled during sleeping, Yuuki looked like an exact copy of Dad. Even their sleeping habits were astonishingly similar. What's it about those two?		Wearing pajamas crumbled during sleeping, Yuuki looked like an exact copy of Dad. Even their sleeping habits were astonishingly similar. ''What's it about those two?''

	"Yumi-chan is a girl, that's why."		"Yumi-chan is a girl, that's why."
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	"The last sentence is not needed!"		"The last sentence is not needed!"

	Sure it is a compliment to be praised her clothes look good on her, but Yuuki's compliment didn't sound at all pleasing. Yumi rolled her fist into a ball, and threw it straight towards the head of her brother, who was returning with a newspaper in one hand.		Sure it is a compliment to be praised that her clothes look good on her, but Yuuki's compliment didn't sound at all pleasing. Yumi rolled her fist into a ball, and threw it straight towards the head of her brother, who was returning with a newspaper in one hand.

	"But hey, you didn't wear a one-piece normally, did you?"		"But hey, you didn't wear a one-piece normally, did you?"
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	Light, soft and gentle.		Light, soft and gentle.

	A cabbage butterfly commonly seen on a cabbage field represented Yumi much better than a glorious birdwing butterfly<ref>アゲハ, scientific name "Ornithoptera"</ref>.		A cabbage butterfly commonly seen on a cabbage field represented Yumi much better than a glorious birdwing butterfly.<ref>アゲハ, scientific name "Ornithoptera"</ref>

	However, Yumi just could not give her thanks to the bragging Yuuki. It was too shameful to give Yuuki the impression that her feelings took a U-turn due to just one comment.		However, Yumi just could not give her thanks to the bragging Yuuki. It was too shameful to give Yuuki the impression that her feelings took a U-turn due to just one comment.
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	Yumi lifted her travelling bag. It was a rectangular cane basket Mom used when she was young.		Yumi lifted her travelling bag. It was a rectangular cane basket Mom used when she was young.

	"~~handkerchief~~, tissue, purse... you have them with you?"		"Handkerchief, tissue, purse... you have them with you?"

	"Yeah, yeah. Don't worry. See?"		"Yeah, yeah. Don't worry. See?"

	Yumi thrust out her hip and showed Mom a small shoulder bag that shaped like a pochette. ~~Every~~ small things ~~was~~ inside the bag.		Yumi thrust out her hip and showed Mom a small shoulder bag that shaped like a pochette. All the small things were inside the bag.

	"Are you sure you haven't missed anything when arranging your baggage for the last time? If you find anything missing, call us. We will send it you by home delivery."		"Are you sure you haven't missed anything when arranging your baggage for the last time? If you find anything missing, call us. We will send it you by home delivery."
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	"Relax, relax. It is a just summerhouse, right?"		"Relax, relax. It is a just summerhouse, right?"

	''Do I look so tense?'' Yumi followed Yuuki ~~and poked~~ her cheek, and realized that her face muscles ~~was~~ growing tense from some time ago.		''Do I look so tense?'' Yumi followed Yuuki by poking her cheek, and realized that her face muscles were growing tense from some time ago.

	"It is not like you are going to a battlefield. So just sit back and relax during this short vacation treat."		"It is not like you are going to a battlefield. So just sit back and relax during this short vacation treat."
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	No young lady in Sachiko-sama's age could be found there, but after two minutes of waiting, a lady approached from a corner of the North Exit.		No young lady in Sachiko-sama's age could be found there, but after two minutes of waiting, a lady approached from a corner of the North Exit.

	The lady had a cream white summer sweater inside her matching cardigan, and slim jeans that ~~flow~~ along her long legs. Walking in brisk steps, the lady found Yumi and waved her hands lightly.		The lady had a cream white summer sweater inside her matching cardigan, and slim jeans that flowed along her long legs. Walking in brisk steps, the lady found Yumi and waved her hands lightly.

	It was so different from her usual image that Yumi did not pay attention in the first place. However.		It was so different from her usual image that Yumi did not pay attention in the first place. However.
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	Like always, the confused Yumi started to drill holes on the street under construction. Hey, in Yumi's expanding imagination, when the daughter of the Ogasawara family pays a visit to the summerhouse, she would definitely be wearing a one-piece or a flaring skirt. Yumi chose the one-piece in order to suit her Onee-sama. So why the jeans? Onee-sama's appearance now was actually closer to Yumi's usual style.		Like always, the confused Yumi started to drill holes on the street under construction. Hey, in Yumi's expanding imagination, when the daughter of the Ogasawara family pays a visit to the summerhouse, she would definitely be wearing a one-piece or a flaring skirt. Yumi chose the one-piece in order to suit her Onee-sama. So why the jeans? Onee-sama's appearance now was actually closer to Yumi's usual style.

	So the "''doh''" in Yumi's string of "''Doh-doh-doh...''" is for "''doushite?'' (Why?)"		Therefore the "''doh''" in Yumi's string of "''Doh-doh-doh...''" was for "''doushite?'' (Why?)"

	"Good morning."		"Good morning."

	Sachiko-sama ~~put~~ her hand ~~around~~ Yumi's chest as usual, but realized that Yumi was not wearing a tie. There was not even a lapel to Yumi's pristine collar, so instead Sachiko touched Yumi's collar and smiled.		Sachiko-sama reached out her hand to the vicinity of Yumi's chest as usual, but realized that Yumi was not wearing a tie. There was not even a lapel to Yumi's pristine collar, so instead Sachiko touched Yumi's collar and smiled.

	"Good morning."		"Good morning."
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	"Onee-sama, those jeans suits you very well too."		"Onee-sama, those jeans suits you very well too."

	The jeans, though causal-looking, ~~are~~ one of those expensive kinds. They looked very similar to ~~those~~ appeared in a vintage fashion show Yumi had watched on television before. ~~Those~~ jeans on television ~~was~~ eye-popping expensive; so expensive that one could buy a huge fridge with the money.		The jeans, though causal-looking, were one of those expensive kinds. They looked very similar to ones that appeared in a vintage fashion show Yumi had watched on television before. The pair of jeans on the television were eye-popping expensive; so expensive that one could buy a huge fridge with the money.

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	Let's go, Onee-sama said. The ticket gate was here.		Let's go, Onee-sama said. The ticket gate was here.

	However, Sachiko-sama walked further and further to the north. Continuing walking, she would ~~get~~ out of the north exit. In order to ride on the train, however, they had to pass the gate and wait at the platform for the train.		However, Sachiko-sama walked further and further to the north. Continuing walking in that direction, she would go out of the north exit. In order to ride on the train, however, they had to pass the gate and wait at the platform for the train.

	Yumi decided to chase Sachiko-sama for the time being. Then she realized.		Yumi decided to chase Sachiko-sama for the time being. Then she realized.
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	No way, Yumi thought, but Sachiko-sama had already walked down the stairs. Yumi also caught sight of a black car, waiting slightly away from the north exit roundabout.		No way, Yumi thought, but Sachiko-sama had already walked down the stairs. Yumi also caught sight of a black car, waiting slightly away from the north exit roundabout.

	Without mistake, that car was the Ogasawara's home car. Though it is a home car, the driver was not anyone in the Ogasawara family, but a ~~driver~~.		Without mistake, that car was the Ogasawara's home car. Though it is a home car, the driver was not anyone in the Ogasawara family, but a chauffeur.

	"Why are you so surprised? Haven't I said that we are going by car?"		"Why are you so surprised? Haven't I said that we are going by car?"
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	"No, I heard nothing of that."		"No, I heard nothing of that."

	Yumi had just ~~learnt~~ of it.		Yumi had just learned of it.

	However, Sachiko-sama looked very confident, and Yumi started to become unsettled.		However, Sachiko-sama looked very confident, and Yumi started to become unsettled.
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	"But"		"But"

	Yumi ~~didn~~'t heard of it, that was the truth. Yumi could never say "I have heard it," just to save Onee-sama's face.		Yumi hadn't heard of it, that was the truth. Yumi could never say "I have heard it," just to save Onee-sama's face.

	"I have said so."		"I have said so."
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	"That is so silly."		"That is so silly."

	Unbelievable. The two ~~was~~ stuck in such a clumsy misunderstanding.		Unbelievable. The two were stuck in such a clumsy misunderstanding.

	"B-but, that would not equal 'going by car,' would it?"		"B-but, that would not equal 'going by car,' would it?"

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2014-04-09T15:45:03Z

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Rydenius: stylistic/grammar

2014-04-09T13:47:07Z

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	"Oh, that's right."		"Oh, that's right."

	~~Oh,~~ Dad~~. He~~ clapped his hands once, reached out in the key case for his keys, and thrust his hand out.		''Whoa.'' Dad clapped his hands once, reached out in the key case for his keys, and thrust his hand out.

	Oh, Dad looks like he is going to jump into the car any minute. Before that, Dad, do something to your pajama, your five o'clock shadow, your bedhead and the gum around your eyes! Yumi pushed Dad on his back and first led him to the bathroom.		''Whoa, Whoa. Dad looks like he is going to jump into the car any minute. Before that, Dad, do something to your pajama, your five o'clock shadow, your bedhead and the gum around your eyes!'' Yumi pushed Dad on his back and first led him to the bathroom.

	Just at that time.		Just at that time.

	"Dad, you are just too good to Yumi. If it was for me, you will definitely just say 'Get your butt ~~off~~ and go!'"		"Dad, you are just too good to Yumi. If it was for me, you will definitely just say 'Get off your butt and go!'"

	Probably ~~awaken~~ by the noise on the first floor, Yuki got down from the second floor without anyone noticing, and was standing at the corridor outside the bathroom.		Probably awoken by the noise on the first floor, Yuki got down from the second floor without anyone noticing, and was standing at the corridor outside the bathroom.

	"Mornin'"		"Mornin'"

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2014-04-09T13:33:00Z

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	"What lovely colors!"		"What lovely colors!"

	Though the side dishes inside the container were leaning a bit to one side, Sachiko-sama squinted her eyes enraptured. With her having gazed at it for what seemed quite a while, Yumi was wondering if she would leave it as it was and close the lid with satisfaction, but Sachiko-sama gently plucked an asparagus and cheese bacon roll by it's ~~tooth pick~~, and bit into it.		Though the side dishes inside the container were leaning a bit to one side, Sachiko-sama squinted her eyes enraptured. With her having gazed at it for what seemed quite a while, Yumi was wondering if she would leave it as it was and close the lid with satisfaction, but Sachiko-sama gently plucked an asparagus and cheese bacon roll by it's toothpick, and bit into it.

	"H-How is it?"		"H-How is it?"
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	"Crisp or moist. My mom had been worrying about which way she would do the nori for the onigiri--"		"Crisp or moist. My mom had been worrying about which way she would do the nori for the onigiri--"

	Yumi held up the container packed with just the onigiri and said.		Yumi held up the container packed with just the onigiri and then said:

	"Ah, what's this… and so she made both types."		"Ah, what's this… and so she made both types."

	There were 2 each of black looking onigiri that had already been wrapped with seaweed and white onigiri that had been hand-formed, 4 in total. Forming a set with the white onigiri, nori had been placed into vinyl ziplock bags and included separately.<ref>nori sheets come dried out and stiff, but get soft as they absorb the moisture from the rice. So the pre-wrapped onigiri would have soft, moist nori, while the ones stored separately would stay crisp and crunchy.</ref>		There were two each of black looking onigiri that had already been wrapped with seaweed and white onigiri that had been hand-formed, four in total. Forming a set with the white onigiri, nori had been placed into vinyl ziplock bags and included separately.<ref>nori sheets come dried out and stiff, but get soft as they absorb the moisture from the rice. So the pre-wrapped onigiri would have soft, moist nori, while the ones stored separately would stay crisp and crunchy.</ref>

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	"Either is good. Speaking of which, lately it seems that even the convenience stores stock both types, don't they?"		"Either is good. Speaking of which, lately it seems that even the convenience stores stock both types, don't they?"

	Sachiko-sama got out a sheet of nori from the vinyl bag and took a white onigiri. ''I wonder if aunt Sayako-sama's is still continuing her convenience store runs.''		Sachiko-sama got out a sheet of nori from the vinyl bag and took a white onigiri. ''I wonder if aunt Sayako-sama is still continuing her convenience store runs.''

	Sachiko-sama finished her in-car breakfast, eating the onigiri, and one of each type of side dish. Yumi, who had become hungry from all the activity, also finished, eating one moist onigiri and suitable side dishes. Since it would be bad if only the two of them were eating, she invited the chauffeur-san as to partake as well, though, as one would expect, because both hands his hands were occupied, he had to decline.		Sachiko-sama finished her in-car breakfast, eating the onigiri, and one of each type of side dish. Yumi, who had become hungry from all the activity, also finished, eating one moist onigiri and suitable side dishes. Since it would be bad if only the two of them were eating, she invited the chauffeur-san as to partake as well, though, as one would expect, because both hands his hands were occupied, he had to decline.
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	(Eh!?)		(Eh!?)

	~~This~~... there are people who ~~sleeps~~ for the trip's going and returning, but, it was so early into their vacation, that one says, "Already?!" After all, hardly 20 minutes had passed since they departed from M station.		That's... there are people who sleep for the trip's going and returning, but it was so early into their vacation that one says, "Already?!" After all, hardly 20 minutes had passed since they departed from M station.

	Certainly, her feeling was that some of the enjoyment of going on a trip is the recreation on the bus until arriving at the destination. But in this way with just two of them, if one of them were to sleep, there was nothing to do.		Certainly, her feeling was that some of the enjoyment of going on a trip is the recreation on the bus until arriving at the destination. But in this way with just two of them, if one of them were to sleep, there was nothing to do.
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	''How was it that Mt. Fuji appears here?'' Looking behind her, there Mt. Fuji was, unmistakably, towering in front of her eyes like depicted in paintings. A halo shone from Mt. Fuji, and taking a batting-pose on top was a Buddha-sama done with Jesus-sama's face. Worshiping this with a bewildered expression was Shimako-san, and, as Yumi drew near to her side, Shimako pulled out a fortune slip and presented it to her. When she opened the folded paper, there was written on it ~~like~~ a single word:		''How was it that Mt. Fuji appears here?'' Looking behind her, there Mt. Fuji was, unmistakably, towering in front of her eyes like depicted in paintings. A halo shone from Mt. Fuji, and taking a batting-pose on top was a Buddha-sama done with Jesus-sama's face. Worshiping this with a bewildered expression was Shimako-san, and, as Yumi drew near to her side, Shimako pulled out a fortune slip and presented it to her. When she opened the folded paper, there was written on it as a single word:

	--''Many difficulties lie ahead.''<ref> 前途多難 </ref>		--''Many difficulties lie ahead.''<ref> 前途多難 </ref>
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	Certainly it was the matter of holding hands, but more than that, that they were going to the going to the restroom together…		Certainly it was the matter of holding hands, but more than that, that they were going to the going to the restroom together…

	''She's happy to be going to the restroom?'' It's scandalous, but although it might be strange, since happy things are happy, there's nothing to do about it.		''She's happy to be going to the restroom?'' It's scandalous, but although it might be strange, since happy things are happy, there's nothing to be done about it.

	After all, with an onee-sama of a different school year, though it was common-sense, that was the reason why there couldn't be things like having lessons in the same classroom, and so at school during break-time there wasn't even a way to ask, "Let's go to the restroom together." Thus, this was a experience to be treasured.		After all, with an onee-sama of a different school year, though it was common-sense, that was the reason why there couldn't be things like having lessons in the same classroom, and so at school during break-time there wasn't even a way to ask, "Let's go to the restroom together." Thus, this was a experience to be treasured.
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	Sachiko-sama's hand, which was cold at first from the air-conditioning, was warmed by the outside air and Yumi's hand, gradually becoming noticeably sweaty.		Sachiko-sama's hand, which was cold at first from the air-conditioning, was warmed by the outside air and Yumi's hand, gradually becoming noticeably sweaty.

	The woman's toilets were moderately crowded. Since it was summer vacation, there were grandmothers, mothers, elder sisters, and little girls all lined up. There was even the presence of a baby on a baby-bed happily working it's legs, after having it's diaper changed.		The woman's toilets were moderately crowded. Since it was summer vacation, there were grandmothers, mothers, elder sisters, and little girls all lined up. There was even the presence of a baby on a baby-bed happily working it's legs, after having it's diaper changed.

	"When done, wash your hands and wait here."		"When done, wash your hands and wait here."
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	"Oh look, next is Yumi's turn! The innermost one became empty!"		"Oh look, next is Yumi's turn! The innermost one became empty!"

	While never like a bossy garbage sorter<ref> The term used here (仕切り屋) is a person whose occupation is collecting and sorting garbage by use and type, but is used here to mean a bossy person giving out orders "like a garbage sorter". So I've kept a bit of both meanings to try to keep the original flavor.</ref>, ~~the~~ onee-sama who was briskly giving out instructions was reliable. Somehow returning Yumi back to when she was little, it had become a feeling similar to when she did outings with her mom.		While never like a bossy garbage sorter<ref> The term used here (仕切り屋) is a person whose occupation is collecting and sorting garbage by use and type, but is used here to mean a bossy person giving out orders "like a garbage sorter". So I've kept a bit of both meanings to try to keep the original flavor.</ref>, an onee-sama who was briskly giving out instructions was reliable. Somehow returning Yumi back to when she was little, it had become a feeling similar to when she did outings with her mom.

	By the time Yumi finished using the restroom and was washing her hands with the cold water, she'd finally come to be refreshed.		By the time Yumi finished using the restroom and was washing her hands with the cold water, she'd finally come to be refreshed.

	"How about we go and buy something like juice?"		"How about we go and buy something like juice?"
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	Sachiko, who was standing at the neighboring wash basin, addressed the Yumi in the mirror.		Sachiko, who was standing at the neighboring wash basin, addressed the Yumi in the mirror.

	"As thanks for the ~~bento~~, I'll buy the drinks."		"As thanks for the lunchbox, I'll buy the drinks."

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	At times like these, it would've been fine to have straightforwardly given thanks for the meal. Onee-sama had come to want to do big-sister-like things from time to time.		At times like these, it would've been fine to have straightforwardly given thanks for the meal. Onee-sama had come to want to do big-sister-like things from time to time.

	"More ~~that~~ that, I want to eat ice cream."		"More than that, I want to eat ice cream."

	Yumi placed the handkerchief she used to wipe her hands dry into her bag and turned forty-five degrees to her right, facing her real non-mirror reflected onee-sama.		Yumi placed the handkerchief she used to wipe her hands dry into her bag and turned forty-five degrees to her right, facing her real non-mirror reflected onee-sama.
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	But, since she didn't break away from her, even while saying it like that, and that they continued to walk that way, said whether it was okay.		But, since she didn't break away from her, even while saying it like that, and that they continued to walk that way, said whether it was okay.

	The black car really stood out, and they could immediately pick it out from amidst the multitude of cars and such. The chauffeur-san, who had taken a ~~beak~~ at the same time as them, had already returned, and swung his hands to make the car's location apparent to the pair.		The black car really stood out, and they could immediately pick it out from amidst the multitude of cars and such. The chauffeur-san, who had taken a break at the same time as them, had already returned, and swung his hands to make the car's location apparent to the pair.

	Sachiko-sama pulled Yumi's hand and quickened the pace a bit. The planned 15 minute break, had gone 5 minutes over.		Sachiko-sama pulled Yumi's hand and quickened the pace a bit. The planned 15 minute break, had gone 5 minutes over.
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	''(Delicious!)''		''(Delicious!)''

	--That, was Yumi's brain already beginning to melt just like soft-serve ice cream.		--That was Yumi's brain already beginning to melt just like soft-serve ice cream.

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2014-04-09T12:42:51Z

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	"What lovely colors!"		"What lovely colors!"

	Though the side dishes inside the container were leaning a bit to one side, Sachiko-sama squinted her eyes enraptured. With her having gazed at it for what seemed quite a while, Yumi was wondering if she would leave it as it was and close the with satisfaction, but Sachiko-sama gently plucked an asparagus and cheese bacon roll by it's tooth pick, and bit into it.		Though the side dishes inside the container were leaning a bit to one side, Sachiko-sama squinted her eyes enraptured. With her having gazed at it for what seemed quite a while, Yumi was wondering if she would leave it as it was and close the lid with satisfaction, but Sachiko-sama gently plucked an asparagus and cheese bacon roll by it's tooth pick, and bit into it.

	"H-How is it?"		"H-How is it?"

Rydenius: Added translation for part 5

2014-04-09T10:11:16Z

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2014-02-04T18:03:31Z

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	"Mi'ladies, would it be alright?"		"Mi'ladies, would it be alright?"

	The ~~chauffer~~ said as he came out from the car. It seems that he was mindful of the situation and had refrained from greeting them until after their talk had concluded. Perhaps he couldn't come out earlier because the two of them were lightly quarreling at the time they were walking toward the car. Though now he probably surmised that the issue had been resolved since laughter had broken out.		The chauffeur said as he came out from the car. It seems that he was mindful of the situation and had refrained from greeting them until after their talk had concluded. Perhaps he couldn't come out earlier because the two of them were lightly quarreling at the time they were walking toward the car. Though now he probably surmised that the issue had been resolved since laughter had broken out.

	"Good morning. ~~Fukazawa~~ Yumi-sama, allow me to look after your luggage."		"Good morning. Fukuzawa Yumi-sama, allow me to look after your luggage."

	"Ah."		"Ah."
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	"...okay."		"...okay."

	Nodding assent, Yumi gave her luggage to the ~~chauffer~~. While thinking of what to do about the travel allowance that she had received from her mother, suddenly there was something she realized.		Nodding assent, Yumi gave her luggage to the chauffeur. While thinking of what to do about the travel allowance that she had received from her mother, suddenly there was something she realized.

	Her parasol wasn't there.		Her parasol wasn't there.
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	Yumi's dream to walk the summer resort under the white parasol with onee-sama had evaporated like dew.		Yumi's dream to walk the summer resort under the white parasol with onee-sama had evaporated like dew.



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