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RedGlassesGirl at 21:12, 10 January 2017

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	As his horse moved forward by my side, Günter spoke.		As his horse moved forward by my side, Günter spoke.

	"Welcome home, Your Majesty. This is your, and our country. The eternal kingdom in which the wise and courageous mazoku live in prosperity after defeating the ~~soushu~~ with their power. Ah! We should never forget the entire world originated from the mazoku. Long live the great Shinou and his people..."		"Welcome home, Your Majesty. This is your, and our country. The eternal kingdom in which the wise and courageous mazoku live in prosperity after defeating the soushus with their power. Ah! We should never forget the entire world originated from the mazoku. Long live the great Shinou and his people..."

	Is this the national anthem?		Is this the national anthem?

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	Günter was very proud as he explained about him. His respect and affection from the bottom of his heart is transmitted to me, when I don't know him either.		Günter was very proud as he explained about him. His respect and affection from the bottom of his heart is transmitted to me, when I don't know him either.

	"The Great ~~Mage~~ has black hair and eyes, and he's the only person in this world who is of equal status to Shinou. If he wasn't there, we Mazoku would have been torn apart by the Creator, and we wouldn't have this land or this country but would have lived as wanderers. Before that, this world may have been destroyed"		"The Great Sage has black hair and eyes, and he's the only person in this world who is of equal status to Shinou. If he wasn't there, we Mazoku would have been torn apart by the Creator, and we wouldn't have this land or this country but would have lived as wanderers. Before that, this world may have been destroyed"

	"In a word, he's an amazing person?"		"In a word, he's an amazing person?"
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	Günter seemed like he was in a drunken trance, as he recited romantic things.		Günter seemed like he was in a drunken trance, as he recited romantic things.

	"Shinou is the darkness, and the Great ~~Mage~~ is the light. They yearn for each other, love each other, and are born bearing each other's colors in body. In short, darkness is light, and light is darkness!"		"Shinou is the darkness, and the Great Sage is the light. They yearn for each other, love each other, and are born bearing each other's colors in body. In short, darkness is light, and light is darkness!"

	"Shall I leave you alone, because it's getting long."		"Shall I leave you alone, because it's getting long."

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Chapter 3

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	There were countless lights from the shops lined up, and people bustling around busily and lively. An enormous gate opened up for us, and the guards on the other side stood at attention with serious expressions.		There were countless lights from the shops lined up, and people bustling around busily and lively. An enormous gate opened up for us, and the guards on the other side stood at attention with serious expressions.

	As his ~~horsed~~ moved forward by my side, Günter spoke.		As his horse moved forward by my side, Günter spoke.

	"Welcome home, Your Majesty. This is your, and our country. The eternal kingdom in which the wise and ~~corageous~~ mazoku live in prosperity after defeating the soushu with their power. Ah! We should never forget the entire world originated from the mazoku. Long live the great Shinou and his people..."		"Welcome home, Your Majesty. This is your, and our country. The eternal kingdom in which the wise and courageous mazoku live in prosperity after defeating the soushu with their power. Ah! We should never forget the entire world originated from the mazoku. Long live the great Shinou and his people..."

	Is this the national anthem?		Is this the national anthem?
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	Even I, the rider, don't understand what she didn't like or why she started running wildly. Certainly, I only wouldn't be safe if I was shaken off. I desperately clung to the horse running quickly down the straight course, while screaming with a "yay" and a shout that doesn't make it out, I was about to be the only person who reached the front of the castle strangely early.		Even I, the rider, don't understand what she didn't like or why she started running wildly. Certainly, I only wouldn't be safe if I was shaken off. I desperately clung to the horse running quickly down the straight course, while screaming with a "yay" and a shout that doesn't make it out, I was about to be the only person who reached the front of the castle strangely early.

	The soldiers who were lined up to salute me would never think that the black hurricane that passed in front of ~~the~~ was their new king. From behind I could hear some advice.		The soldiers who were lined up to salute me would never think that the black hurricane that passed in front of them was their new king. From behind I could hear some advice.

	"Your Majesty~, the reins, pull the reins-!"		"Your Majesty~, the reins, pull the reins-!"

	"Conrart! As I thought, that horse still didn't have enough training"		"Conrart! As I thought, that horse still didn't have enough training."

	Günter's words were brief, while he pursued me after kicking his horse's stomach.		Günter's words were brief, while he pursued me after kicking his horse's stomach.
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	I took a light pink liquid from a nearby bottle. It has a good aroma. Maybe this was shampoo. I roughly pour the splashing hot water from the bucket. There is no conditioner! Rather than manly, I'd say I'm acting like a <span id="C3N9">sports guy.[[MaruMA:Vol01:Translator's_Notes#C3N9\|[9]]]</span>		I took a light pink liquid from a nearby bottle. It has a good aroma. Maybe this was shampoo. I roughly pour the splashing hot water from the bucket. There is no conditioner! Rather than manly, I'd say I'm acting like a <span id="C3N9">sports guy.[[MaruMA:Vol01:Translator's_Notes#C3N9\|[9]]]</span>

	I firmly washed my body, because I was satisfied with the bath I took on the second day, I wondered at the time if I should take a long bath again. "Huh."		I firmly washed my body, because I was satisfied with the bath I took on the second day, I wondered at the time if I should take a long bath again.

			"Huh."

	From the opposite side of the place I entered, the shape of a woman only wearing a bath towel appeared. Not a girl, a woman. It can't be that this is, a mixed bath?! Wait, Günter definitely said that this was a private bath. Or is the said girl supposed to service me? There's not going to be that kind of service. No, because it's just been common people until now I didn't know, but perhaps she was a queen or minister or parliamentarian. But wait, wait-! Of all places in this huge pool she's in the second lane, where even if your body isn't stretched out in a line---!		From the opposite side of the place I entered, the shape of a woman only wearing a bath towel appeared. Not a girl, a woman. It can't be that this is, a mixed bath?! Wait, Günter definitely said that this was a private bath. Or is the said girl supposed to service me? There's not going to be that kind of service. No, because it's just been common people until now I didn't know, but perhaps she was a queen or minister or parliamentarian. But wait, wait-! Of all places in this huge pool she's in the second lane, where even if your body isn't stretched out in a line---!
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	"...so she showed up."		"...so she showed up."

	"I thought this was some kind of service so I was just about to make a small request... Well, first of all, because I'm not a that great of a man, I ran away."		"I thought this was some kind of service so I was just about to make a small request... Well, first of all, because I'm not that great of a man, I ran away."

	"I'm glad, I appreciate Your Majesty's sense of reason."		"I'm glad, I appreciate Your Majesty's sense of reason."

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	As for the super beautiful shape of the fourth person, even I might be able to match his physique physically. It can't be helped because characteristics like the length of the legs is a racial feature, like height and shoulder width and body weight. Since when did I become someone who only worries about body build. Maybe, because of that day when the second pitcher said, "You, since you're a small target, it'll be hard to throw a ball into you".		As for the super beautiful shape of the fourth person, even I might be able to match his physique physically. It can't be helped because characteristics like the length of the legs is a racial feature, like height and shoulder width and body weight. Since when did I become someone who only worries about body build. Maybe, because of that day when the second pitcher said, "You, since you're a small target, it'll be hard to throw a ball into you".

	Even if our bodies are evenly matched, when I just glanced up, I've already been defeated. How can ~~they~~ be this beautiful! Because of them, his face emits an aura. Although it's likely to seem that way because of his dazzling blond hair. His looks and voice are like an older Vienna chorus boy. His white skin seems transparent, and his irises are an emerald green that make me think of the bottom of a lake, and furthermore he doesn't have a split chin. He an angel, definitely an angry angel. However, being in this place, he's also probably a beautiful Mazoku.		Even if our bodies are evenly matched, when I just glanced up, I've already been defeated. How can he be this beautiful! Because of them, his face emits an aura. Although it's likely to seem that way because of his dazzling blond hair. His looks and voice are like an older Vienna chorus boy. His white skin seems transparent, and his irises are an emerald green that make me think of the bottom of a lake, and furthermore he doesn't have a split chin. He an angel, definitely an angry angel. However, being in this place, he's also probably a beautiful Mazoku.

	"Gwendal... No, big brother, is that guy planning on ushering in this human of unknown lineage as our king?!"		"Gwendal... No, big brother, is that guy planning on ushering in this human of unknown lineage as our king?!"

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	When he says "that guy", the super handsome boy, like in shoujo comics, glares sharply at Conrad. I heard the name Gwendal awhile ago, together with something like Wolfgang or Wolfram if I'm not mistaken. If the man with the Love Theme from the Godfather is Gwendal, then the older Vienna chorus boy is probably Wolfram?		When he says "that guy", the super handsome boy, like in shoujo comics, glares sharply at Conrad. I heard the name Gwendal awhile ago, together with something like Wolfgang or Wolfram if I'm not mistaken. If the man with the Love Theme from the Godfather is Gwendal, then the older Vienna chorus boy is probably Wolfram?

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	"I can't put my confidence in such a filthy human! Judging from appearances he doesn't seem intelligent or dignified, and a man that would be lying around in the road in that area..."		"I can't put my confidence in such a filthy human! Judging from appearances he doesn't seem intelligent or dignified, and a man that would be lying around in the road in that area..."
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	''(Translated by Emeryl, originally posted on [http://www.sakuracities.com/yaoigames/kkmnovel1.php Onadoru Euphoria]. Re-posted with permission.)''		''(Translated by Emeryl, originally posted on [http://www.sakuracities.com/yaoigames/kkmnovel1.php Onadoru Euphoria]. Re-posted with permission.)''

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	"It reminds me of when I went to see the Barnes Collection at Ueno."		"It reminds me of when I went to see the Barnes Collection at Ueno."

	"They're lined up on this side in order of the newest. This is the ~~24rth~~ Maoh, His Majesty Von Radford Bertrand. He was called the 'Lion King' by the people and revered."		"They're lined up on this side in order of the newest. This is the 24th Maoh, His Majesty Von Radford Bertrand. He was called the 'Lion King' by the people and revered."

	"The Lion King? I think there's a similar nickname somewhere in the world..."		"The Lion King? I think there's a similar nickname somewhere in the world..."

	"This is His Majesty the twenty-third, ~~Jeannot~~ von Karbelnikoff, called ~~a strict ruler~~. And then His Majesty the twenty-second, Arsenio ~~von Roberski~~, ~~famous as a powerful military man~~. His Majesty the twenty-first, ~~Dwayne~~ von Gyllenhaal, the ~~belligerent king~~, and before him ~~that~~ is His Majesty Davison ~~Henstridge~~ the ~~slaughterer~~, and ~~Basilio~~ von Rochefort the ~~brutal king~~..."		"This is His Majesty the twenty-third, von Karbelnikoff Jeannot, called the Strict King. And then His Majesty the twenty-second, Roberski Arsenio, the Great War King. His Majesty the twenty-first, von Gyllenhaal Dwayne, the Belligerent King, and before him is His Majesty Henstridge Davison the Slaughterer King, and von Rochefort Basilio the Brutal King..."

	"What's with these names gradually becoming more terrible? Isn't there someone more peaceful, like the oil magnate king or the newspaper king or a brand king?"		"What's with these names gradually becoming more terrible? Isn't there someone more peaceful, like the oil magnate king or the newspaper king or a brand king?"
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	"Well... because we don't have oil or newspapers or brands."		"Well... because we don't have oil or newspapers or brands."

	"The fifteenth Maoh, Her Majesty Grisela Trantinian Yaft, the ~~head~~-cutter ~~queen~~. Her Majesty ~~Brittany~~ von Wincott, the ~~bloodshed queen~~..."		"The fifteenth Maoh, Her Majesty Grisela Trantinian Yaft, the Head-cutter Queen. Her Majesty von Wincott Brittany, the Bloodshed Queen..."

	I've seen the national traits of the Mazoku. Some are sitting on a chair with their hands on a dog's head, and other are leaning against a sword that's been thrust into the ground. On a horse next to a pole with the severed head of his defeated enemies, this is definitely a painting of a Maoh. There were about three woman, and a king that could only be called a boy by his size.		I've seen the national traits of the Mazoku. Some are sitting on a chair with their hands on a dog's head, and other are leaning against a sword that's been thrust into the ground. On a horse next to a pole with the severed head of his defeated enemies, this is definitely a painting of a Maoh. There were about three woman, and a king that could only be called a boy by his size.
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	"They look like they're from an RPG of ancient times. Ah, of course, this is a world of swords and magic after all. Your modern military uniforms make that more than clear. Oh, this person-"		"They look like they're from an RPG of ancient times. Ah, of course, this is a world of swords and magic after all. Your modern military uniforms make that more than clear. Oh, this person-"

	"He is the seventh Maoh, His Majesty ~~Forgeas~~ von Voltaire."		"He is the seventh Maoh, His Majesty von Voltaire Forgeas."

	"He looks just like the guy with the Love Theme from the Godfather from a little bit ago!"		"He looks just like the guy with the Love Theme from the Godfather from a little bit ago!"