MaruMA:Volume03:Chapter 11 - Revision history

OtonashiDiva: change to convo bit

2017-04-29T03:51:43Z

change to convo bit

← Older revision		Revision as of 03:51, 29 April 2017
Line 88:		Line 88:
	"Who knows, maybe my stock took a nose-dive," I said. "It's because I absolutely had to get my own pigheaded way that Gwendal ended up with all those wounds."		"Who knows, maybe my stock took a nose-dive," I said. "It's because I absolutely had to get my own pigheaded way that Gwendal ended up with all those wounds."

	~~It had been important to~~ Conrad ~~to convince~~ me that Gwendal was ~~really~~ a ~~stand-up guy~~. So ~~it was only fair to bring~~ him ~~up to date. My~~ opinion of ~~the oldest brother had~~ changed. If I were to get along with ~~Gwendal~~ better in the future, then Conrad was surely the one who would be most pleased by it.		Conrad was the first person who told me that Gwendal was actually a good person. So, I should probably tell him that my opinion of him changed. If I were to get along with the oldest son better in the future, then Conrad was surely the one who would be most pleased by it.

	"~~It's always a good thing~~, ~~when you can~~ get ~~to know someone~~ better. ~~And our adventure was perfect for that. Now~~ I ~~know~~ that ~~even Gwendal~~ has his weaknesses and can become emotional. He can even laugh ~~-- even if it's not very often~~."		"He might punch me if he overhears this, but I feel like in the end things got better. You really do want to get along better with the person you're with. At the very least, I learned that Gwen also has his weaknesses like other people and can become emotional. He can even laugh every once in a while."

	~~Conrad sullenly muttered something to himself~~.		"... -hind, huh?"

	"~~What was that~~?" ~~I pressed.~~		"Eh?"

	He turned around to face me. "I ~~said, dammit, now you~~'~~re a step ahead of me~~." ~~Then he smiled again as always~~.		He deliberately turned his head around to face me and repeated himself. He had a smile on his face like always. "Damn it, seems like I've been left behind." <ref>This actually translates closer to 'seems like I've fallen behind' but it also sounds a bit unnatural to say in English so after staring at this sentence a while, I decided to just write this note.</ref>

	"Nonsense. You two are brothers, you've had much more time to get to know each other. You should try talking one night out under the stars, that ~~would definitely work~~."		"Nonsense. You two are brothers so you've had much more time to get to know each other. You should try talking one night out under the stars. You'll learn what kind of person your Onii-chan<ref>If you're talking about someone else's older brother, you would use '-san' instead of '-chan' (which can be rude depending on you're talking to). The fact that Yuuri uses onii-chan here gives this sentence a very playful tone in the original Japanese.</ref> is, I'm telling you."

	When Conrad looked back, his face darkened. In the distance he'd noticed clouds of sand rising up.		When Conrad looked back, his face darkened. In the distance he'd noticed clouds of sand rising up.

RedGlassesGirl at 17:02, 22 March 2017

2017-03-22T17:02:18Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 17:02, 22 March 2017
Line 30:		Line 30:
	When she found out that we hadn't been able to locate Hube, she'd cried very intensely again. But her mood improved quickly when we offered her the opportunity to live in her lover's homeland. Nicola was a refreshingly positive thinker, brimming with optimism. Her smile was getting brighter all the time, and you couldn't help laughing along with her.		When she found out that we hadn't been able to locate Hube, she'd cried very intensely again. But her mood improved quickly when we offered her the opportunity to live in her lover's homeland. Nicola was a refreshingly positive thinker, brimming with optimism. Her smile was getting brighter all the time, and you couldn't help laughing along with her.

	"Yuuri, which of the two ~~are~~ you ~~actually in love with~~? The older or the younger brother?" she asked.		"Yuuri, which of the two did you end up marrying? The older or the younger brother?" she asked.

	"~~In love~~...? Neither, of course!"		"End up marrying...? Neither, of course!"

	"You're not? But then why did you elope?"		"You're not? But then why did you elope?"
Line 196:		Line 196:
	Conrad tried to suppress his smile.		Conrad tried to suppress his smile.

	"~~Your Majesty, actually~~ I believe that what you've got there is a white lion."		"I believe that what you've got there is a white lion."

	"~~Oh! "Oh!~~ But ~~then where~~ is ~~its mane? Or maybe~~ it's a female? ~~Then I'll name~~ it ~~Leonie.~~"		"What? But it doesn't have a mane... Then is it a female? So instead of Leo-chan, it should be Leoko-chan?"

	By no stretch of the imagination did ~~Leonie~~ look like a white lion. But after all, it's the thought that counts.		By no stretch of the imagination did Leoko-chan look like a white lion. But after all, it's the thought that counts.
	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

RedGlassesGirl: Protected "MaruMA:Volume03:Chapter 11" ([Edit=Allow only autoconfirmed users] (indefinite) [Move=Allow only autoconfirmed users] (indefinite))

2016-08-02T19:13:08Z

Protected "MaruMA:Volume03:Chapter 11" ([Edit=Allow only autoconfirmed users] (indefinite) [Move=Allow only autoconfirmed users] (indefinite))

← Older revision	Revision as of 19:13, 2 August 2016
(No difference)

RedGlassesGirl at 01:54, 5 April 2015

2015-04-05T01:54:42Z

Mokata: Suveria to Suberera ( keeping consist)

2012-11-27T12:07:13Z

Suveria to Suberera ( keeping consist)

← Older revision		Revision as of 12:07, 27 November 2012
Line 185:		Line 185:
	"And so was I," I confirmed.		"And so was I," I confirmed.

	The downpour had caught the enemy troops by surprise. This gave us the necessary time to follow Ryan's lead to the hide-out built by the tamed sandbear. The rain beat down on ~~Suveria~~'s sand dunes as if the eternal sunshine had become but a dream. The rest of our trip was pretty pleasant and uneventful.		The downpour had caught the enemy troops by surprise. This gave us the necessary time to follow Ryan's lead to the hide-out built by the tamed sandbear. The rain beat down on Suberera's sand dunes as if the eternal sunshine had become but a dream. The rest of our trip was pretty pleasant and uneventful.

	When I finally arrived at the royal capital, we found Gunther completely frightened for some unknown reasons. Apparently a cruel demon had abused the poor fellow as a Guinea pig. Since we took the shortcut route to the Royal Palace instead of traveling through the Kavernikov area, that I did not get to know Lady Anissina, the terror of all men. Well, thank to my luck!		When I finally arrived at the royal capital, we found Gunther completely frightened for some unknown reasons. Apparently a cruel demon had abused the poor fellow as a Guinea pig. Since we took the shortcut route to the Royal Palace instead of traveling through the Kavernikov area, that I did not get to know Lady Anissina, the terror of all men. Well, thank to my luck!

Mokata: I forgot to make the early change

2012-11-27T11:50:02Z

I forgot to make the early change

← Older revision		Revision as of 11:50, 27 November 2012
Line 6:		Line 6:


	We wanted to set out before ~~Svererra~~'s army could mobilize against us. The troop heading back towards the sand dunes at the border was twice as big as it had been on the prior journey.		We wanted to set out before Suberera's army could mobilize against us. The troop heading back towards the sand dunes at the border was twice as big as it had been on the prior journey.

Mokata: Svererra to Suberera - (at very least I making the consisted throughtout the chapters. I have found four versions so far)

2012-11-27T11:47:25Z

Svererra to Suberera - (at very least I making the consisted throughtout the chapters. I have found four versions so far)

Zero2001 at 13:27, 25 January 2012

2012-01-25T13:27:11Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 13:27, 25 January 2012
Line 1:		Line 1:
			== '''Chapter 11''' ==
	I was reputedly accountable for the destruction of the exorcist-stone excavation sites, and for the avalanche that shook the mines shut. But given my average body size, how could I have demolished a stone mountain? With a bulldozer?		I was reputedly accountable for the destruction of the exorcist-stone excavation sites, and for the avalanche that shook the mines shut. But given my average body size, how could I have demolished a stone mountain? With a bulldozer?

	I had tried to wrestle this information out of both Conrad and Wolfram, but both of them just retreated into a deep silence. Probably, I had pulled off another totally embarrassing display of magic in front of everyone. My God, I hope it ~~didn’t~~ involve a striptease.		I had tried to wrestle this information out of both Conrad and Wolfram, but both of them just retreated into a deep silence. Probably, I had pulled off another totally embarrassing display of magic in front of everyone. My God, I hope it didn't involve a striptease.

	We wanted to set out before Svererra's army could mobilize against us. The troop heading back towards the sand dunes at the border was twice as big as it had been on the prior journey.		We wanted to set out before Svererra's army could mobilize against us. The troop heading back towards the sand dunes at the border was twice as big as it had been on the prior journey.

Zero2001: moved MaruMA:Volume 3:Chapter 11 to MaruMA:Volume03:Chapter 11: Making similar to vol 1 page names

2012-01-25T13:19:15Z

moved MaruMA:Volume 3:Chapter 11 to MaruMA:Volume03:Chapter 11: Making similar to vol 1 page names

← Older revision	Revision as of 13:19, 25 January 2012
(No difference)

LRenne at 19:40, 23 January 2012

2012-01-23T19:40:45Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 19:40, 23 January 2012
Line 203:		Line 203:
	By no stretch of the imagination did Leonie look like a white lion. But after all, it's the thought that counts.		By no stretch of the imagination did Leonie look like a white lion. But after all, it's the thought that counts.
	<noinclude>		<noinclude>

			''(This translation was originally posted [http://lrenne.livejournal.com/tag/novel%203 here]. Please do not repost elsewhere.)''
	{\| border="1" cellpadding="5" cellspacing="0" style="margin: 1em 1em 1em 0; background: #f9f9f9; border: 1px #aaaaaa solid; padding: 0.2em; border-collapse: collapse;"		{\| border="1" cellpadding="5" cellspacing="0" style="margin: 1em 1em 1em 0; background: #f9f9f9; border: 1px #aaaaaa solid; padding: 0.2em; border-collapse: collapse;"
	\|-		\|-

← Older revision		Revision as of 01:54, 5 April 2015
Line 1:		Line 1:
	== '''Chapter 11''' ==		== '''Chapter 11''' ==
	I was reputedly accountable for the destruction of the exorcist-stone excavation sites, and for the avalanche that shook the mines shut. But given my average body size, how could I have demolished a stone mountain? With a bulldozer?		I was reputedly accountable for the destruction of the exorcist-stone excavation sites, and for the avalanche that shook the mines shut. But given my average body size, how could I have demolished a stone mountain? With a bulldozer?


	I had tried to wrestle this information out of both Conrad and Wolfram, but both of them just retreated into a deep silence. Probably, I had pulled off another totally embarrassing display of magic in front of everyone. My God, I hope it didn't involve a striptease.		I had tried to wrestle this information out of both Conrad and Wolfram, but both of them just retreated into a deep silence. Probably, I had pulled off another totally embarrassing display of magic in front of everyone. My God, I hope it didn't involve a striptease.


	We wanted to set out before Suberera's army could mobilize against us. The troop heading back towards the sand dunes at the border was twice as big as it had been on the prior journey.		We wanted to set out before Suberera's army could mobilize against us. The troop heading back towards the sand dunes at the border was twice as big as it had been on the prior journey.


	Some of the women had decided to risk an escape attempt with us; they wanted to start new lives. Most of our soldiers marched on foot, since it was decided that the horses should be assigned to the women. The king himself traveled comfortably, naturally, which did not please me at all.		Some of the women had decided to risk an escape attempt with us; they wanted to start new lives. Most of our soldiers marched on foot, since it was decided that the horses should be assigned to the women. The king himself traveled comfortably, naturally, which did not please me at all.


	"I have a guilty conscience, riding in this silly carriage," I said to Conrad.		"I have a guilty conscience, riding in this silly carriage," I said to Conrad.


	"That's not a carriage; it's a sleigh, Your Majesty. A horse-drawn sleigh."		"That's not a carriage; it's a sleigh, Your Majesty. A horse-drawn sleigh."


	Fine, whatever, then Nicola, Wolfram, and I were sitting in a horse-drawn sleigh, which didn't make it any better at all. It felt like a luxury trip on the Orient Express. At first, they'd also thundered at Gwendal to ride in the sleigh, but since he, unlike me, knew how to assert himself, he was now riding upright in his saddle. And that too with two broken ribs.		Fine, whatever, then Nicola, Wolfram, and I were sitting in a horse-drawn sleigh, which didn't make it any better at all. It felt like a luxury trip on the Orient Express. At first, they'd also thundered at Gwendal to ride in the sleigh, but since he, unlike me, knew how to assert himself, he was now riding upright in his saddle. And that too with two broken ribs.


	As if that weren't enough, I had to lay down across two seats, my head softly cushioned on the thigh of Lord Bielefeld!		As if that weren't enough, I had to lay down across two seats, my head softly cushioned on the thigh of Lord Bielefeld!


	"Does my pillow have to be a man's lap, of all things?!" I wailed.		"Does my pillow have to be a man's lap, of all things?!" I wailed.


	"Every time you do some huge magic, you sleep for two to three days," declared Wolfram, unmoved. "This time you only slept two hours. And after such a formidable performance, too. Please be so kind as to stay right where you are. You need your rest."		"Every time you do some huge magic, you sleep for two to three days," declared Wolfram, unmoved. "This time you only slept two hours. And after such a formidable performance, too. Please be so kind as to stay right where you are. You need your rest."


	"All right, all right! But why the heck does it have to be with you as my pillow?!"		"All right, all right! But why the heck does it have to be with you as my pillow?!"


	"Doesn't it make you happy?"		"Doesn't it make you happy?"


	"Do I look like I'm happy?!"		"Do I look like I'm happy?!"


	"Oh, you two are truly one heart and one soul," sighed Nicola with shining eyes.		"Oh, you two are truly one heart and one soul," sighed Nicola with shining eyes.


	When she found out that we hadn't been able to locate Hube, she'd cried very intensely again. But her mood improved quickly when we offered her the opportunity to live in her lover's homeland. Nicola was a refreshingly positive thinker, brimming with optimism. Her smile was getting brighter all the time, and you couldn't help laughing along with her.		When she found out that we hadn't been able to locate Hube, she'd cried very intensely again. But her mood improved quickly when we offered her the opportunity to live in her lover's homeland. Nicola was a refreshingly positive thinker, brimming with optimism. Her smile was getting brighter all the time, and you couldn't help laughing along with her.


	"Yuuri, which of the two are you actually in love with? The older or the younger brother?" she asked.		"Yuuri, which of the two are you actually in love with? The older or the younger brother?" she asked.


	"In love...? Neither, of course!"		"In love...? Neither, of course!"


	"You're not? But then why did you elope?"		"You're not? But then why did you elope?"
Line 172:		Line 155:

	The yellow sand was turning gray. The sun that had scorched my neck disappeared. When I looked up, the sky was covered by black clouds. The first drops splashed on my face. Shortly afterward, the rain already became a downpour. Thunder roared and lightning crisscrossed the sky. That was a true-storm!		The yellow sand was turning gray. The sun that had scorched my neck disappeared. When I looked up, the sky was covered by black clouds. The first drops splashed on my face. Shortly afterward, the rain already became a downpour. Thunder roared and lightning crisscrossed the sky. That was a true-storm!




Line 223:		Line 204:

	''(This translation was originally posted [http://lrenne.livejournal.com/tag/novel%203 here]. Please do not repost elsewhere.)''		''(This translation was originally posted [http://lrenne.livejournal.com/tag/novel%203 here]. Please do not repost elsewhere.)''


	{\| border="1" cellpadding="5" cellspacing="0" style="margin: 1em 1em 1em 0; background: #f9f9f9; border: 1px #aaaaaa solid; padding: 0.2em; border-collapse: collapse;"		{\| border="1" cellpadding="5" cellspacing="0" style="margin: 1em 1em 1em 0; background: #f9f9f9; border: 1px #aaaaaa solid; padding: 0.2em; border-collapse: collapse;"
	\|-		\|-

← Older revision		Revision as of 11:47, 27 November 2012
Line 1:		Line 1:
	== '''Chapter 11''' ==		== '''Chapter 11''' ==
	I was reputedly accountable for the destruction of the exorcist-stone excavation sites, and for the avalanche that shook the mines shut. But given my average body size, how could I have demolished a stone mountain? With a bulldozer?		I was reputedly accountable for the destruction of the exorcist-stone excavation sites, and for the avalanche that shook the mines shut. But given my average body size, how could I have demolished a stone mountain? With a bulldozer?


	I had tried to wrestle this information out of both Conrad and Wolfram, but both of them just retreated into a deep silence. Probably, I had pulled off another totally embarrassing display of magic in front of everyone. My God, I hope it didn't involve a striptease.		I had tried to wrestle this information out of both Conrad and Wolfram, but both of them just retreated into a deep silence. Probably, I had pulled off another totally embarrassing display of magic in front of everyone. My God, I hope it didn't involve a striptease.


	We wanted to set out before Svererra's army could mobilize against us. The troop heading back towards the sand dunes at the border was twice as big as it had been on the prior journey.		We wanted to set out before Svererra's army could mobilize against us. The troop heading back towards the sand dunes at the border was twice as big as it had been on the prior journey.


	Some of the women had decided to risk an escape attempt with us; they wanted to start new lives. Most of our soldiers marched on foot, since it was decided that the horses should be assigned to the women. The king himself traveled comfortably, naturally, which did not please me at all.		Some of the women had decided to risk an escape attempt with us; they wanted to start new lives. Most of our soldiers marched on foot, since it was decided that the horses should be assigned to the women. The king himself traveled comfortably, naturally, which did not please me at all.


	"I have a guilty conscience, riding in this silly carriage," I said to Conrad.		"I have a guilty conscience, riding in this silly carriage," I said to Conrad.


	"That's not a carriage; it's a sleigh, Your Majesty. A horse-drawn sleigh."		"That's not a carriage; it's a sleigh, Your Majesty. A horse-drawn sleigh."


	Fine, whatever, then Nicola, Wolfram, and I were sitting in a horse-drawn sleigh, which didn't make it any better at all. It felt like a luxury trip on the Orient Express. At first, they'd also thundered at Gwendal to ride in the sleigh, but since he, unlike me, knew how to assert himself, he was now riding upright in his saddle. And that too with two broken ribs.		Fine, whatever, then Nicola, Wolfram, and I were sitting in a horse-drawn sleigh, which didn't make it any better at all. It felt like a luxury trip on the Orient Express. At first, they'd also thundered at Gwendal to ride in the sleigh, but since he, unlike me, knew how to assert himself, he was now riding upright in his saddle. And that too with two broken ribs.


	As if that weren't enough, I had to lay down across two seats, my head softly cushioned on the thigh of Lord Bielefeld!		As if that weren't enough, I had to lay down across two seats, my head softly cushioned on the thigh of Lord Bielefeld!


	"Does my pillow have to be a man's lap, of all things?!" I wailed.		"Does my pillow have to be a man's lap, of all things?!" I wailed.


	"Every time you do some huge magic, you sleep for two to three days," declared Wolfram, unmoved. "This time you only slept two hours. And after such a formidable performance, too. Please be so kind as to stay right where you are. You need your rest."		"Every time you do some huge magic, you sleep for two to three days," declared Wolfram, unmoved. "This time you only slept two hours. And after such a formidable performance, too. Please be so kind as to stay right where you are. You need your rest."


	"All right, all right! But why the heck does it have to be with you as my pillow?!"		"All right, all right! But why the heck does it have to be with you as my pillow?!"


	"Doesn't it make you happy?"		"Doesn't it make you happy?"


	"Do I look like I'm happy?!"		"Do I look like I'm happy?!"


	"Oh, you two are truly one heart and one soul," sighed Nicola with shining eyes.		"Oh, you two are truly one heart and one soul," sighed Nicola with shining eyes.


	When she found out that we hadn't been able to locate Hube, she'd cried very intensely again. But her mood improved quickly when we offered her the opportunity to live in her lover's homeland. Nicola was a refreshingly positive thinker, brimming with optimism. Her smile was getting brighter all the time, and you couldn't help laughing along with her.		When she found out that we hadn't been able to locate Hube, she'd cried very intensely again. But her mood improved quickly when we offered her the opportunity to live in her lover's homeland. Nicola was a refreshingly positive thinker, brimming with optimism. Her smile was getting brighter all the time, and you couldn't help laughing along with her.


	"Yuuri, which of the two are you actually in love with? The older or the younger brother?" she asked.		"Yuuri, which of the two are you actually in love with? The older or the younger brother?" she asked.


	"In love...? Neither, of course!"		"In love...? Neither, of course!"


	"You're not? But then why did you elope?"		"You're not? But then why did you elope?"