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	"Gwendal?" cried Wolfram, but Lord von Voltaire, covered with wounds all over, did not hear him.		"Gwendal?" cried Wolfram, but Lord von Voltaire, covered with wounds all over, did not hear him.

	"What is ... the point... of that ...?!" Gwendal yelled at Yuri. "~~Haven't~~ you ~~done enough~~? ~~Do you want people to die~~? ~~Answer me!~~"		"What is ... the point... of that ...?!" Gwendal yelled at Yuri. "How many people must you kill to be satisfied? Huh?"

	"Who are you ...?"		"Who are you ...?"

RedGlassesGirl at 02:26, 18 August 2015

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 Togrikol, stricken by immeasurable horror, crawled away trying to escape.
-"A devil! A spawn of hell!"
+"A devil! A messenger from hell!"
-"You dare calling me a spawn of hell? Do you not recognize this noble face?"
+"A messenger from hell? Have you forgotten my face?"
 "So, how can we stop him ?"
 "Me? Don't ask me. Ahhhhhhh, it's because it's moving! The skin on its face is melting and falling off because it's moving, but since it's sand, it returns to the ground."
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 It has the ECO mark.
 Suddenly the crowd broke apart to make way for a military horse coming through, galloping and snorting violently. As it went past the legs of the clay giant, its rider jumped out of the saddle toward Yuri. Without hesitation, the man came up to him and grabbed his collar with his left hand.
 "Gwendal?" cried Wolfram, but Lord von Voltaire, covered with wounds all over, did not hear him.
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 Yuri then collapsed to the ground, unconsciously.
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 "You dare calling me a spawn of hell? Do you not recognize this noble face?"
-"Do not ask me," Wolfram said coldly.
+Volume 3 chapter 9
-Suddenly the crowd broke apart to make way for a military horse coming through, galloping and snorting violently. As it went past the legs of the clay giant, its rider jumped out of the saddle toward Yuri. Without hesitation, the man came up to him and grabbed his collar with his left hand.
+I didn't remember it was Trikol, so this may be the soushu, there's no other explanation about why would anyone know "his face".
 "Gwendal?" cried Wolfram, but Lord von Voltaire, covered with wounds all over, did not hear him.

RedGlassesGirl at 01:54, 5 April 2015

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	== '''Chapter 9''' ==		== '''Chapter 9''' ==
	Including those on the other side of the gate, the number of guards easily exceeded two hundred. In all likelihood, it was but a women's camp housing inmates who had violated the marriage laws.		Including those on the other side of the gate, the number of guards easily exceeded two hundred. In all likelihood, it was but a women's camp housing inmates who had violated the marriage laws.


	"But why would they need such a strong defense?" wondered Conrad.		"But why would they need such a strong defense?" wondered Conrad.


	Crouching and sliding down the slope, he returned to his taciturn younger brother. Wolfram was leaning against a plant, frowning, his arms folded on his chest.		Crouching and sliding down the slope, he returned to his taciturn younger brother. Wolfram was leaning against a plant, frowning, his arms folded on his chest.


	There were presumably a large amount of exorcists-stones in the area. These stones caused great pain to those who possessed strong magical power. Since Wolfram had earlier complained about headaches, Conrad himself was uncertain whether he could count on him in battle.		There were presumably a large amount of exorcists-stones in the area. These stones caused great pain to those who possessed strong magical power. Since Wolfram had earlier complained about headaches, Conrad himself was uncertain whether he could count on him in battle.


	"You should better decide now if you can bear it or not," he turned to Wolfram. "I will not be able to cover you in battle."		"You should better decide now if you can bear it or not," he turned to Wolfram. "I will not be able to cover you in battle."
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	"Good to know."		"Good to know."


	Conrad had sent six men to help Gwendal break out of prison. He only had as few as fifteen men left to deal with two hundred guards. There was only one tactic to handle such an overpowering force: they had to raid the camp and cause as big a chaos as possible.		Conrad had sent six men to help Gwendal break out of prison. He only had as few as fifteen men left to deal with two hundred guards. There was only one tactic to handle such an overpowering force: they had to raid the camp and cause as big a chaos as possible.


	"Wolf ..."		"Wolf ..."
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	"I thought you knew."		"I thought you knew."


	Despite the tense situation, a wry smile slipped upon Conrad's face. The figure in front of him, with folded arms and frown lines on his forehead, suddenly reminded him of his older brother.		Despite the tense situation, a wry smile slipped upon Conrad's face. The figure in front of him, with folded arms and frown lines on his forehead, suddenly reminded him of his older brother.


	"Are you still torturing yourself with that matter?" Asked Conrad.		"Are you still torturing yourself with that matter?" Asked Conrad.


	"I don't know what you're talking about."		"I don't know what you're talking about."


	"Don't pretend, now. You know what I mean. The matter regarding His Majesty and Gwen."		"Don't pretend, now. You know what I mean. The matter regarding His Majesty and Gwen."

	"That's not what I'm thinking about at all!"		"That's not what I'm thinking about at all!"


	"Actually you don't need to worry. You know they don't get along well. If you do not trust His Majesty a little more, one day he will really have enough of you."		"Actually you don't need to worry. You know they don't get along well. If you do not trust His Majesty a little more, one day he will really have enough of you."


	"But I'm not worried!"		"But I'm not worried!"


	"That's fine then."		"That's fine then."
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	"Yes, that's him."		"Yes, that's him."



	To sneak secretly into the camp, Conrad and Wolfram robbed uniforms from a couple of wandering soldiers. The rest was a breeze: no one stood in their way, they were able to infiltrate undetected.		To sneak secretly into the camp, Conrad and Wolfram robbed uniforms from a couple of wandering soldiers. The rest was a breeze: no one stood in their way, they were able to infiltrate undetected.
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	"These women had unselfishly sacrificed themselves in the name of love! They boldly devoted themselves to their lovers! But instead of admiration, they earned violence! The authority punished them in heartless and inhuman way!"		"These women had unselfishly sacrificed themselves in the name of love! They boldly devoted themselves to their lovers! But instead of admiration, they earned violence! The authority punished them in heartless and inhuman way!"

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	Yuri spoke as if he was on the stage. He acted like an actor from one of his favorite old-time historical series.		Yuri spoke as if he was on the stage. He acted like an actor from one of his favorite old-time historical series.

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	"Who are you ...?"		"Who are you ...?"



	"Listen, Yuuri! You must stop this right now. Return the monster to dust!"		"Listen, Yuuri! You must stop this right now. Return the monster to dust!"


	Gwendal shook Yuuri back and forth violently, bringing some senses back to him.		Gwendal shook Yuuri back and forth violently, bringing some senses back to him.


	"You selflessly put yourself in danger to stop me! What a daring courage! Given your brave heart, for now... I'll retreat."		"You selflessly put yourself in danger to stop me! What a daring courage! Given your brave heart, for now... I'll retreat."


	Yuri then collapsed to the ground, unconsciously.		Yuri then collapsed to the ground, unconsciously.
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	''(This translation was originally posted [http://lrenne.livejournal.com/tag/novel%203 here]. Please do not repost elsewhere.)''		''(This translation was originally posted [http://lrenne.livejournal.com/tag/novel%203 here]. Please do not repost elsewhere.)''


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Mokata at 10:44, 27 November 2012

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	== '''Chapter 9''' ==		== '''Chapter 9''' ==
	Including those on the other side of the gate, the number of guards easily exceeded two hundred. In all likelihood, it was but a women's camp housing inmates who had violated the marriage laws.		Including those on the other side of the gate, the number of guards easily exceeded two hundred. In all likelihood, it was but a women's camp housing inmates who had violated the marriage laws.


	"But why would they need such a strong defense?" wondered Conrad.		"But why would they need such a strong defense?" wondered Conrad.


	Crouching and sliding down the slope, he returned to his taciturn younger brother. Wolfram was leaning against a plant, frowning, his arms folded on his chest.		Crouching and sliding down the slope, he returned to his taciturn younger brother. Wolfram was leaning against a plant, frowning, his arms folded on his chest.


	There were presumably a large amount of exorcists-stones in the area. These stones caused great pain to those who possessed strong magical power. Since Wolfram had earlier complained about headaches, Conrad himself was uncertain whether he could count on him in battle.		There were presumably a large amount of exorcists-stones in the area. These stones caused great pain to those who possessed strong magical power. Since Wolfram had earlier complained about headaches, Conrad himself was uncertain whether he could count on him in battle.


	"You should better decide now if you can bear it or not," he turned to Wolfram. "I will not be able to cover you in battle."		"You should better decide now if you can bear it or not," he turned to Wolfram. "I will not be able to cover you in battle."
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	"Good to know."		"Good to know."


	Conrad had sent six men to help Gwendal break out of prison. He only had as few as fifteen men left to deal with two hundred guards. There was only one tactic to handle such an overpowering force: they had to raid the camp and cause as big a chaos as possible.		Conrad had sent six men to help Gwendal break out of prison. He only had as few as fifteen men left to deal with two hundred guards. There was only one tactic to handle such an overpowering force: they had to raid the camp and cause as big a chaos as possible.


	"Wolf ..."		"Wolf ..."
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	"I thought you knew."		"I thought you knew."


	Despite the tense situation, a wry smile slipped upon Conrad's face. The figure in front of him, with folded arms and frown lines on his forehead, suddenly reminded him of his older brother.		Despite the tense situation, a wry smile slipped upon Conrad's face. The figure in front of him, with folded arms and frown lines on his forehead, suddenly reminded him of his older brother.


	"Are you still torturing yourself with that matter?" Asked Conrad.		"Are you still torturing yourself with that matter?" Asked Conrad.


	"I don't know what you're talking about."		"I don't know what you're talking about."


	"Don't pretend, now. You know what I mean. The matter regarding His Majesty and Gwen."		"Don't pretend, now. You know what I mean. The matter regarding His Majesty and Gwen."

	"That's not what I'm thinking about at all!"		"That's not what I'm thinking about at all!"


	"Actually you don't need to worry. You know they don't get along well. If you do not trust His Majesty a little more, one day he will really have enough of you."		"Actually you don't need to worry. You know they don't get along well. If you do not trust His Majesty a little more, one day he will really have enough of you."


	"But I'm not worried!"		"But I'm not worried!"


	"That's fine then."		"That's fine then."
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	"Who are you ...?"		"Who are you ...?"



	"Listen, Yuuri! You must stop this right now. Return the monster to dust!"		"Listen, Yuuri! You must stop this right now. Return the monster to dust!"


	Gwendal shook Yuuri back and forth violently, bringing some senses back to him.		Gwendal shook Yuuri back and forth violently, bringing some senses back to him.


	"You selflessly put yourself in danger to stop me! What a daring courage! Given your brave heart, for now... I'll retreat."		"You selflessly put yourself in danger to stop me! What a daring courage! Given your brave heart, for now... I'll retreat."


	Yuri then collapsed to the ground, unconsciously.		Yuri then collapsed to the ground, unconsciously.

Zero2001 at 13:26, 25 January 2012

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Zero2001: moved MaruMA:Volume 3:Chapter 9 to MaruMA:Volume03:Chapter 9: Making similar to vol 1 page names

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LRenne at 19:40, 23 January 2012

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	Yuri then collapsed to the ground, unconsciously.		Yuri then collapsed to the ground, unconsciously.
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			== '''Chapter 9''' ==
	Including those on the other side of the gate, the number of guards easily exceeded two hundred. In all likelihood, it was but a women's camp housing inmates who had violated the marriage laws.		Including those on the other side of the gate, the number of guards easily exceeded two hundred. In all likelihood, it was but a women's camp housing inmates who had violated the marriage laws.

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	"That's not what I'm thinking about at all!"		"That's not what I'm thinking about at all!"

	"Actually you ~~don’t~~ need to worry. You know they don't get along well. If you do not trust His Majesty a little more, one day he will really have enough of you."		"Actually you don't need to worry. You know they don't get along well. If you do not trust His Majesty a little more, one day he will really have enough of you."

	"But I'm not worried!"		"But I'm not worried!"

	"~~That’s~~ fine then."		"That's fine then."

	"Why do you understand him so well?" Wolfram asked quietly.		"Why do you understand him so well?" Wolfram asked quietly.
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	"Nicola has given us information."		"Nicola has given us information."

	Without that piece of information, they might have never figured out the whereabouts of Yuri and Gwendal. Even if they could eventually, it would have taken much more time. After she had done them a big favor, they ~~couldn’t~~ refuse her request to be taken to the Great Demon Empire.		Without that piece of information, they might have never figured out the whereabouts of Yuri and Gwendal. Even if they could eventually, it would have taken much more time. After she had done them a big favor, they couldn't refuse her request to be taken to the Great Demon Empire.

	A ~~soldier’s~~ horse snorted peacefully and wagged his tail to chase insects away.		A soldier's horse snorted peacefully and wagged his tail to chase insects away.

	"Still! She is Gegenhuber's mistress! Had it not been for him, you would have long since become Lord of Wincott's Manor!"		"Still! She is Gegenhuber's mistress! Had it not been for him, you would have long since become Lord of Wincott's Manor!"
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	"I just want to fulfill the wishes of His Majesty," he said.		"I just want to fulfill the wishes of His Majesty," he said.

	The setting sun became redder, the shadows longer. If they ~~hadn’t~~ needed the protection of darkness, Conrad would have liked to start the raid immediately.		The setting sun became redder, the shadows longer. If they hadn't needed the protection of darkness, Conrad would have liked to start the raid immediately.

	"Let's discuss our tactics again. I know it's dangerous to move forward in groups of three, but we don't have any other choice... What happened over there?"		"Let's discuss our tactics again. I know it's dangerous to move forward in groups of three, but we don't have any other choice... What happened over there?"
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	His Majesty was standing in front of the graves, legs slightly apart, chest thrust out. He looked weary, but he had not suffered from any major injuries.		His Majesty was standing in front of the graves, legs slightly apart, chest thrust out. He looked weary, but he had not suffered from any major injuries.

	Conrad let out a sigh of relief. Wolfram looked as if he would have liked to run toward Yuuri and pull him into his arms. But to rashly interfere with Yuuri in this condition could bring more harm than good. Conrad ~~couldn’t~~ help thinking that he looked as majestic as his title.		Conrad let out a sigh of relief. Wolfram looked as if he would have liked to run toward Yuuri and pull him into his arms. But to rashly interfere with Yuuri in this condition could bring more harm than good. Conrad couldn't help thinking that he looked as majestic as his title.

	He had seen a similar sparkle in Yuri's eyes before.		He had seen a similar sparkle in Yuri's eyes before.
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	"Those must be his contact lenses."		"Those must be his contact lenses."

	Without the colored contacts, both Yuri's eyes were jet black. Now that he had entered his ~~Maou’s~~ mode, there was nothing they could do but sit down and watch his performance.		Without the colored contacts, both Yuri's eyes were jet black. Now that he had entered his Maou's mode, there was nothing they could do but sit down and watch his performance.

	The terrified women were all paralyzed. The soldiers and the guards tried to find the best way to attack, but Yuri's defense seemed quite solid.		The terrified women were all paralyzed. The soldiers and the guards tried to find the best way to attack, but Yuri's defense seemed quite solid.
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	"Oh, His Majesty seems to have expanded his repertoire," Conrad muttered calmly.		"Oh, His Majesty seems to have expanded his repertoire," Conrad muttered calmly.

	Master Tricolor was standing behind Yuuri, eyes wide open in disbelief. He was so surprised by the transformation of his son's ~~‘horse’~~ that he even forgot to stroke his red beard.		Master Tricolor was standing behind Yuuri, eyes wide open in disbelief. He was so surprised by the transformation of his son's 'horse' that he even forgot to stroke his red beard.

	"Violence, oppression, and misery prevail in this facility. Deprived of human dignity, the women had to bear even the utmost injustice: Their babies being buried alive! What a cruel tyranny! Even the devils from hell would be appalled at these actions!"		"Violence, oppression, and misery prevail in this facility. Deprived of human dignity, the women had to bear even the utmost injustice: Their babies being buried alive! What a cruel tyranny! Even the devils from hell would be appalled at these actions!"
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	"Gwendal?" cried Wolfram, but Lord von Voltaire, covered with wounds all over, did not hear him.		"Gwendal?" cried Wolfram, but Lord von Voltaire, covered with wounds all over, did not hear him.

	"What is ... the point... of that ...?!" Gwendal yelled at Yuri. "~~Haven’t~~ you done enough? Do you want people to die? Answer me!"		"What is ... the point... of that ...?!" Gwendal yelled at Yuri. "Haven't you done enough? Do you want people to die? Answer me!"

	"Who are you ...?"		"Who are you ...?"