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OtonashiDiva: /* Chapter 1 */ typos

2017-01-07T10:51:01Z

Chapter 1: typos

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	Lord Weller's silver-sprinkled eyes darkened for a moment.		Lord Weller's silver-sprinkled eyes darkened for a moment.

	".... Günter, I hear people moving around outside who are not from ~~around~~ this country. Let's be careful and go out the back way."		".... Günter, I hear people moving around outside who are not from this country. Let's be careful and go out the back way."

	"I'll ask the owner if we can disappear through the kitchens."		"I'll ask the owner if we can disappear through the kitchens."
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	"Yuuri, get down right now! Get down!"		"Yuuri, get down right now! Get down!"

	I managed to jump down in the nick of time, just before the animal galloped away. I thought was going to land on my back, but Conrad caught me deftly.		I managed to jump down in the nick of time, just before the animal galloped away. I thought I was going to land on my back, but Conrad caught me deftly.

	"To think they would have come this far... Do you see that light? Run towards it without stopping. Do not turn around. Here, take Greta's hand."		"To think they would have come this far... Do you see that light? Run towards it without stopping. Do not turn around. Here, take Greta's hand."
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	"Don't worry about it."		"Don't worry about it."

	The inner chamber was bright and warm so travelers could come in and rest at any time. Wooden benches stood in rows on the stone floor and several candles flickered in a candelabra. It wasn't very different than an orthodox Christian church, but instead of a wooden cross, there was shallow basin full of water and a giant painting.		The inner chamber was bright and warm so travelers could come in and rest at any time. Wooden benches stood in rows on the stone floor and several candles flickered in candelabra. It wasn't very different than an orthodox Christian church, but instead of a wooden cross, there was shallow basin full of water and a giant painting.

	A lavishly furnished chamber was depicted there but there was no one in it.		A lavishly furnished chamber was depicted there but there was no one in it.
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	"Then find water-...!"		"Then find water-...!"

	Before he had finished his sentence, the enemy closed in on both sides attacked with drawn swords. He parried one attack with his blade and blocked the next strike with the guard. Fearing an attack from behind, I reached behind me while keeping my gaze on the scene and laid my hand on the door to the left of the altar. It wouldn't open. No matter how much I turned the handle, it wouldn't open.		Before he had finished his sentence, the enemy closed in on both sides and attacked with drawn swords. He parried one attack with his blade and blocked the next strike with the guard. Fearing an attack from behind, I reached behind me while keeping my gaze on the scene and laid my hand on the door to the left of the altar. It wouldn't open. No matter how much I turned the handle, it wouldn't open.

	"Shit!"		"Shit!"
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	"Haven't I told you already? For you..." At that moment I knew that even though Conrad had a cold sweat on his brow, he raised his bloodless cheeks and mouth into a fearless smile. "...I would give my arm, heart, and life."		"Haven't I told you already? For you..." At that moment I knew that even though Conrad had a cold sweat on his brow, he raised his bloodless cheeks and mouth into a fearless smile. "...I would give my arm, heart, and life."

	That smile might not have been his usual friendly smile but that of a raging, demonic ~~swordswman~~.		That smile might not have been his usual friendly smile but that of a raging, demonic swordsman.

OtonashiDiva: /* Chapter 1 */

2017-01-07T09:06:05Z

Chapter 1

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	"And the three attractive ladies in the Sugarmelon Room said they accidentally saw you changing, and the four men in the Mandrake room have given you a full 100 point score!"		"And the three attractive ladies in the Sugarmelon Room said they accidentally saw you changing, and the four men in the Mandrake room have given you a full 100 point score!"

	"Hold on! Where is the part where I get my pick of girlfriends? No, from now on I'm turning away from matters of love and focusing solely on making a huge profit off of this awesome part-time job. What I'm reallllly ~~find stange~~ here is that an upstanding worker such as myself is earning the same amount as you standing around being all happy-go-lucky."		"Hold on! Where is the part where I get my pick of girlfriends? No, from now on I'm turning away from matters of love and focusing solely on making a huge profit off of this awesome part-time job. What I'm reallllly finding strange here is that an upstanding worker such as myself is earning the same amount as you standing around being all happy-go-lucky."

	"Oh come on, keep your cool. Eventually, some girls will fall in love with us SUPER HIGH SCHOOL STUDENTS."		"Oh come on, keep your cool. Eventually, some girls will fall in love with us SUPER HIGH SCHOOL STUDENTS."

OtonashiDiva: /* Chapter 1 */ Format and Typo Fixes

2017-01-06T04:11:36Z

Chapter 1: Format and Typo Fixes

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OtonashiDiva: /* Chapter 1 */ Format standards!

2017-01-06T03:43:13Z

Chapter 1: Format standards!

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	It was a strong blue, deeper than the sky.		It was a strong blue, deeper than the sky.

	The Lion's blue magic stone heated up under the UV-rays and its color washed out. The expectations of the one who'd given it to me and the sad fate of its previous owner disturbed me. He told me that it was supposed to be a talisman, but I don't think a ~~wimp~~ like me is worthy of it.		The Lion's blue magic stone heated up under the UV-rays and its color washed out. The expectations of the one who'd given it to me and the sad fate of its previous owner disturbed me. He told me that it was supposed to be a talisman, but I don't think a rookie like me is worthy of it.

	"... I mean, I'm wasting my time in a place like this..."		"... I mean, I'm wasting my time in a place like this..."

OtonashiDiva: This is copy-pasted with a cursory glance at terms. Probably has typos and such~

2016-12-10T05:48:27Z

This is copy-pasted with a cursory glance at terms. Probably has typos and such~

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