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	There’s Sizemore, who looks obviously relieved, and Dacascos, whose overwhelming sense of relief has caused his tears and snot to flow freely. And then there’s Wolfram and I, holding my head and squatting on the ground, screaming ‘Aaaaaaaaaaaaah, it’s all over, he’s here’.		There’s Sizemore, who looks obviously relieved, and Dacascos, whose overwhelming sense of relief has caused his tears and snot to flow freely. And then there’s Wolfram and I, holding my head and squatting on the ground, screaming ‘Aaaaaaaaaaaaah, it’s all over, he’s here’.

	The education minister was probably busy with his documents, because there’s a pair of small thin-framed glasses sitting on his nose. If he doesn’t open his mouth to speak, his knowledgeable and feminine beauty, suits silver lens perfectly. Problem is, once he notices ~~Wolfram~~ and I, who ~~theoretically shouldn’t~~ be here, his long and ~~beautiful brow jumps~~ upwards abruptly. ~~We’re~~ surprised~~, though,~~ that his reaction ~~isn’t anywhere near as big as we’d anticipated~~.		The education minister was probably busy with his documents, because there’s a pair of small thin-framed glasses sitting on his nose. If he doesn’t open his mouth to speak, his knowledgeable and feminine beauty, suits silver lens perfectly. Problem is, once he notices Lord von Bielefeld and I, who shouldn't be here, his long, thin, and nicely shaped eyebrows jump upwards abruptly. Actually, I'm surprised that was the extent of his reaction.

	He purposely bends down, whispering in my ear,		He purposely bends down, whispering in my ear, “What is milord doing here?”

	~~“What is milord doing here?~~”		“Umm—Uhh, about that…. Those old people glasses… No, those spectacles look really good on you. You’re three times prettier than normal.”

	~~“Umm—Uhh, about that…. Those old people glasses… No, those spectacles look really good on you, you’re three times even prettier than normal.”~~		“Your… Normally if I got your praise, my heart would rise into the heavens, but today I won't be fooled by flattery. That goes for Wolfram, too.”

	“Your… Normally if I got your praise, my heart would rise into the heavens. ~~But today sucking up to me at the last minute won’t cut it~~, ~~you know, and Wolfram~~ too.”

	“I’m real sorry, Günter. I’m repenting, and I’ll explain to you properly later. But now isn’t the time to talk about that, we’re facing a rare crisis here.”		“I’m real sorry, Günter. I’m repenting, and I’ll explain to you properly later. But now isn’t the time to talk about that, we’re facing a rare crisis here.”

	I send my strong ‘help me, please’ waves to Günter through my gaze, trying to make my eyes look moist. It’s a trick I used on my family back in middle school when I wanted them to get me new ~~baseball shoes~~. Since I’ve grown so much since then, I don’t dare to expect much in the way of results.		I send my strong ‘help me, please’ waves to Günter through my gaze, trying to make my eyes look moist. It’s a trick I used on my family back in middle school when I wanted them to get me new cleats. Since I’ve grown so much since then, I don’t dare to expect much in the way of results.

	“Mmph!”		“Mmph!”
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	“T-the reason you two are here, I-I-I’ll get it out of you later!”		“T-the reason you two are here, I-I-I’ll get it out of you later!”

	Seems like it works. After all, to a ~~centenarian like Günter~~, sixteen-year-old me am like a grandson. No matter how ~~tall~~ they grow, a grandson is still a grandson, and ~~even if the kid’s~~ a ~~little spoiled and stubborn, he won’t mind~~. If I’d known this earlier, I could’ve just used the teary-eyed technique to convince him to take me along.		Seems like it works. After all, to Günter, who's lived a hundred and few dozen years, a sixteen-year-old like me is like a grandson. No matter how old they grow, a grandson is still a grandson, and their spoiled whims will still be listened to a bit. If I’d known this earlier, I could’ve just used the teary-eyed technique to convince him to take me along.

	Lord von Christ clears his throat deliberately, returning to his efficient official expression, and uses a commanding tone to scatter the gathered crowd. Although many people look unsatisfied, but since it’s the beautiful prime minister’s orders they have no choice but to obey. And so, one by one they go back to their respective stations, cabins, and drinking spots.		Lord von Christ clears his throat deliberately, returning to his efficient official expression, and uses a commanding tone to scatter the gathered crowd. Although many people look unsatisfied, but since it’s the beautiful prime minister’s orders they have no choice but to obey. And so, one by one they go back to their respective stations, cabins, and drinking spots.

	“All right, ~~whatever it is, please~~ say it, ~~Admiral~~.”		“All right, I shall hear what you have to say, Ad-mi-ral or whatever.”

	The Shimaron patrolman’s mood has obviously been soured, but even he should have noticed the newcomer’s high status. In short terms he explains his suspicion that we’re hiding refugees, and most likely in that cabin, as well as incidents such as how Dacascos refused to budge from the door.		The Shimaron patrolman’s mood has obviously been soured, but even he should have noticed the newcomer’s high status. In short terms he explains his suspicion that we’re hiding refugees, and most likely in that cabin, as well as incidents such as how Dacascos refused to budge from the door.
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	“S-so you’re saying this room is for that kind of thing… Wait, w-wait a second!”		“S-so you’re saying this room is for that kind of thing… Wait, w-wait a second!”

	The Shou Shimaron soldiers’ expressions of panic are hilarious, and the middle-aged man who seems to have the highest position scratches the beard on his chin as he says,		The Shou Shimaron soldiers’ expressions of panic are hilarious, and the middle-aged man who seems to have the highest position scratches the beard on his chin as he says, “B-but even if this is a room for adult relationships, the location isn’t too logical, is it? There’s a humid sea breeze blowing, the floorboards are covered with seagull droppings, and the walls are so thin than any bedroom conversation can be heard clearly. It’s hard to imagine that you would establish a love nest in a place as bad as this!”

	“B-but even if this is a room for adult relationships, the location isn’t too logical, is it? There’s a humid sea breeze blowing, the floorboards are covered with seagull droppings, and the walls are so thin than any bedroom conversation can be heard clearly. It’s hard to imagine that you would ~~hide~~ a ~~mistress~~ in a place as bad as this!”

	At the ~~word ‘mistress’~~, the patrolman with the textbook beard’s neck turns red with embarrassment. Looks like he’s an innocent old uncle, completely unlike what his appearance suggests.		At the phrase ‘love nest’, the patrolman with the textbook beard’s neck turns red with embarrassment. Looks like he’s an innocent old uncle, completely unlike what his appearance suggests.

	However, Lord von Christ Günter replies firmly,		However, Lord von Christ Günter replies firmly,
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	“This is the kind of place seamen and buff musclemen wander around, covered in sweat, dust and muscles, there shouldn’t be any romantic atmosphere… Ah. D-d-d-d-d-don’t tell me? Your Excellency’s partner is?”		“This is the kind of place seamen and buff musclemen wander around, covered in sweat, dust and muscles, there shouldn’t be any romantic atmosphere… Ah. D-d-d-d-d-don’t tell me? Your Excellency’s partner is?”

	Lord von Christ Günter replies agitatedly,		Lord von Christ Günter replies agitatedly, “I said it before! I just happen to have that sort of preference… Eh?”

	“I said it before! I just happen to have that sort of preference… Eh?”

	Interestingly, the Shimaron man’s face turns from red to blue, then finally to a bleached white. But the only one wavering now seems to be the middle-aged patrolman with the highest position. The other younger subordinates are desperately trying to hold in their laughter.		Interestingly, the Shimaron man’s face turns from red to blue, then finally to a bleached white. But the only one wavering now seems to be the middle-aged patrolman with the highest position. The other younger subordinates are desperately trying to hold in their laughter.
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	The Shou Shimaron patrolmen start imagining what kind of character would be in that room, then they turn around and slip back to their own ship in a hurry.		The Shou Shimaron patrolmen start imagining what kind of character would be in that room, then they turn around and slip back to their own ship in a hurry.

	Bet you their hearts are filled with headlines like ‘The Shocking Truth! Mazoku Official’s ~~Fancy Sexual~~ Preference’, only they can’t discuss the gossip on the spot. Once they get back to their ship, though, they’ll definitely chatter excitedly about it nonstop, telling it to everyone who would listen. Maybe for this reason alone, the group of ponytails leaves the ship even faster than they boarded, without once turning back.		Bet you their hearts are filled with headlines like ‘The Shocking Truth! Mazoku Official’s Gender Preference’, only they can’t discuss the gossip on the spot. Once they get back to their ship, though, they’ll definitely chatter excitedly about it nonstop, telling it to everyone who would listen. Maybe for this reason alone, the group of ponytails leaves the ship even faster than they boarded, without once turning back.

	“Eh, wait? Please wait a second, have you misunderstood something?”		“Eh, wait? Please wait a second, have you misunderstood something?”

	I show my gratitude to the impressive Prime Minister, and pat his shoulder lightly.		I show my gratitude to the impressive Prime Minister and pat his shoulder lightly.

	“Don’t be so upset, Günter. Liking musclemen isn’t a thing to be ashamed of.”		“Don’t be so upset, Günter. Liking musclemen isn’t a thing to be ashamed of.”
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	“Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh--?”		“Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh--?”

	I suddenly feel like I’m seeing Lady Cheri under a faraway sky, yelling,		I suddenly feel like I’m seeing Lady Cheri under a faraway sky, yelling, “I—super—love—musclemen--”… Let’s not tell Gisela.

	“I—super—love—musclemen--”… ~~It’s probably better if~~ Gisela ~~never found out about this~~.

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	“I know.”		“I know.”

	His calmness surprises me. Did he always sound like this? No, ~~I should say~~ the way ~~he’s talking now sounds more~~ like ~~his oldest~~ brother.		His calmness surprises me. Did his voice always sound like this? No, rather than his voice, the way he speaks has started to become like the eldest brother.

	~~“I noticed… that I’m~~ always ~~losing control in front of~~ you.”		"I feel like... I'm always showing you my bad side."

	~~“Really~~? But ~~you’re feeling upset for the injustice~~ those children ~~have met~~. ~~That’s~~ worth respecting.”		"Really? But you took those children into consideration<ref>This note is just to avoid confusion. Wolfram is referring to Zeta and Zuusha and the fact that Yuuri left the room. He's not saying that Yuuri was mad about Jason and Freddy</ref>. That's worth respecting."

	“Don’t compliment me. It’s only right.”		“Don’t compliment me. It’s only right.”

	Before I regain my normal ability to think, I hope the sea and the night sky can comfort me. At least let me relax my fingers, holding on to		Before I regain my normal ability to think, I hope the sea and the night sky can comfort me. At least let me relax my fingers, holding on to the railing with an unnatural strength. The Shimaron ship is still nearby. And there are still small rowboats going back and forth from there to ‘Friends on the Sea’, on the ocean right under the large ships’ decks.
	the railing with an unnatural strength. The Shimaron ship is still nearby. And there are still small rowboats going back and forth from there to ‘Friends on the Sea’, on the ocean right under the large ships’ decks.

	“I remember saying so before.”		“I remember saying so before.”

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	The beautiful Prime Minister, the super bishie Education Minister, the pretty man whose killer move is the Nosebleed Bomb--- Lord von Christ Günter.		The beautiful Prime Minister, the super bishie Education Minister, the pretty man whose killer move is the Nosebleed Bomb--- Lord von Christ Günter.

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	Lord von Christ uses an annoyed yet still beautiful low voice to ask,		Lord von Christ uses an annoyed yet still beautiful low voice to ask,

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	“Eh, no, no, I’m not Jason, Jason and Freddy are shinzokus, like you. They’re not here, technically they should already be back in your home country.”		“Eh, no, no, I’m not Jason, Jason and Freddy are shinzokus, like you. They’re not here, technically they should already be back in your home country.”

	~~“Susamanakasi~~!”		“Suusamarakashi!”

	…I can’t understand what they’re saying at all, but I use similar sounds to say that it is ~~‘Susamanakasi’~~<ref>I think they’re trying to say Seisakoku</ref>. The siblings look (temporarily) relieved, excitedly discussing something. Then the boy grabs my hand and puts it to his cold chest, saying simply,		…I can’t understand what they’re saying at all, but I use similar sounds to say that it is ‘Suusamarakashi’<ref>I think they’re trying to say Seisakoku</ref>. The siblings look (temporarily) relieved, excitedly discussing something. Then the boy grabs my hand and puts it to his cold chest, saying simply,

	~~“Zeda~~.”		“Zeta.”

	And he immediately moves my hand to the girl next to him, sticking it to her chest forcefully.		And he immediately moves my hand to the girl next to him, sticking it to her chest forcefully.

	~~“Zisha~~.”		“Zuusha.”

	Standing behind me, Dakaskos mumbles,		Standing behind me, Dakaskos mumbles,
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	Names? I look at the two children before me, and find that they’re smiling sheepishly.		Names? I look at the two children before me, and find that they’re smiling sheepishly.

	“Names? That’s right, Dakaskos! Of course, those must be their names! So you’re ~~Zeda~~, and that girl is ~~Zisha~~? So the older sister is ~~Zisha~~, and the younger brother is ~~Zeda~~? That’s great, ~~Zeda~~, even though you’ve only told us your names, I’m really happy! I’m Yuuri, this pretty boy here is Wolfram, and the shiny baldy is Dakaskos. REPEAT AFTER ME.”		“Names? That’s right, Dakaskos! Of course, those must be their names! So you’re Zeta, and that girl is Zuusha? So the older sister is Zuusha, and the younger brother is Zeta? That’s great, Zeta, even though you’ve only told us your names, I’m really happy! I’m Yuuri, this pretty boy here is Wolfram, and the shiny baldy is Dakaskos. REPEAT AFTER ME.”

	“PETER?”		“PETER?”
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	“Huh, since we can already introduce ourselves, it seems that sign language can still work as communications. I guess they know that Jason is a name.”		“Huh, since we can already introduce ourselves, it seems that sign language can still work as communications. I guess they know that Jason is a name.”

	This time ~~Zeda~~ starts echoing me. He’s holding his (possibly) older sister, ~~Zisha’s~~ hand, both of them looking proud and pleased. Since their voices are filled with such liveliness, I can’t help but repeat after them.		This time Zeta starts echoing me. He’s holding his (possibly) older sister, Zuusha’s hand, both of them looking proud and pleased. Since their voices are filled with such liveliness, I can’t help but repeat after them.

	“Jason.”		“Jason.”
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	It’s just like a party on Friday the 13th, except that last name has nothing to do with any of it.		It’s just like a party on Friday the 13th, except that last name has nothing to do with any of it.

	But the foreign children who went through so much trouble just to tell me their names suddenly turn serious, the siblings start whispering to each other. Perhaps after coming to some conclusion, the two of them nod their heads firmly. ~~Zisha~~ reaches into the clothes they discarded aside, pulling out a piece of pale white paper folded into a tiny square, and hands it to me.		But the foreign children who went through so much trouble just to tell me their names suddenly turn serious, the siblings start whispering to each other. Perhaps after coming to some conclusion, the two of them nod their heads firmly. Zuusha reaches into the clothes they discarded aside, pulling out a piece of pale white paper folded into a tiny square, and hands it to me.

	“Is this for me?”		“Is this for me?”
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	“Hmm? What? What are you saying? That Jason and Freddy wrote this?”		“Hmm? What? What are you saying? That Jason and Freddy wrote this?”

	I desperately try to ~~cam~~ my shaking fingers, struggling with the wet paper folded four times. It took a while to for me to get it open without tearing it, but the words are already blurred by the seawater. This piece of paper might have been torn from a larger sheet, because it’s not a complete rectangle.		I desperately try to calm my shaking fingers, struggling with the wet paper folded four times. It took a while to for me to get it open without tearing it, but the words are already blurred by the seawater. This piece of paper might have been torn from a larger sheet, because it’s not a complete rectangle.

	“Looks like another unreadable letter.”		“Looks like another unreadable letter.”
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	“I—can’t--! No matter what you say, I can’t. There aren’t any children in the cabin! Anyway—if my wife finds out about this, she’ll skin me alive--!”		“I—can’t--! No matter what you say, I can’t. There aren’t any children in the cabin! Anyway—if my wife finds out about this, she’ll skin me alive--!”

	At least Captain Sizemore has accepted what he said. I put the words ‘good going, using your wife as a shield!’ aside for later, and decide to intervene as the person responsible. I won’t hand those children over to you. ~~Zeda~~ and ~~Zisha~~ specifically looked to the mazoku, to me, for help. After living sixteen years, a simple lie should be easy as pie.		At least Captain Sizemore has accepted what he said. I put the words ‘good going, using your wife as a shield!’ aside for later, and decide to intervene as the person responsible. I won’t hand those children over to you. Zeta and Zuusha specifically looked to the mazoku, to me, for help. After living sixteen years, a simple lie should be easy as pie.

	“Wait a moment, you people, stop acting like the boss on someone else’s ship! We didn’t rescue any kids!”		“Wait a moment, you people, stop acting like the boss on someone else’s ship! We didn’t rescue any kids!”

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	“I—super—love—musclemen--”… It’s probably better if Gisela never found out about this.		“I—super—love—musclemen--”… It’s probably better if Gisela never found out about this.


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	Seeing as I didn’t even look at the letter before bombarding the children with questions, a hassled Wolfram snatches away the paper. He’s careful not to damage it, though, and then he carefully spreads it over a chair as a replacement for a table.		Seeing as I didn’t even look at the letter before bombarding the children with questions, a hassled Wolfram snatches away the paper. He’s careful not to damage it, though, and then he carefully spreads it over a chair as a replacement for a table.
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	“Seems like those twins really did grow up in Shimaron, because this is written in the common language. Judging from these words, though, they probably never received a proper education.”		“Seems like those twins really did grow up in Shimaron, because this is written in the common language. Judging from these words, though, they probably never received a proper education.”

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