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	“cough It’s decided! cough No objections!”		“cough It’s decided! cough No objections!”

	Irritated, Wolfram makes a threat that would have made the usual Shibuya Yuuri write his initials on the tennis court with his tears</ref>This is a lyric from the ending song of Ace wo Nerae.</ref>.		Irritated, Wolfram makes a threat that would have made the usual Shibuya Yuuri write his initials on the tennis court with his tears<ref>This is a lyric from the ending song of Ace wo Nerae.</ref>.

	“If you don’t revert back to normal right now, I’ll use the prince’s kiss to wake you up!”		“If you don’t revert back to normal right now, I’ll use the prince’s kiss to wake you up!”
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	The sound of air deflating is emitted from my nose and ears, and my raised eyebrows successfully return to their original position. And so the manly young lord turns back into the average baseball boy.		The sound of air deflating is emitted from my nose and ears, and my raised eyebrows successfully return to their original position. And so the manly young lord turns back into the average baseball boy.

	“Hey, wait. You ~~were~~ that against ~~it?~~ I’m a little hurt.”		“Hey, wait. You disliked it that much?<ref>The way this is worded in Japanese is ambiguous. It can mean that they <i>have</i> kissed before and Wolf is hurt because he thinks Yuuri didn't like it, but it can also just mean that he's hurt because Yuuri was against the idea in general.</ref> I’m a little hurt.”

	“What are you talking about, Wolfram? Of course His Majesty would ~~be against~~ a kiss from you!”		“What are you talking about, Wolfram? Of course His Majesty would dislike a kiss from you!”

	Günter throws down the fire-extinguishing cylinder, snatching Yuuri from the former prince’s clutches.		Günter throws down the fire-extinguishing cylinder, snatching Yuuri from the former prince’s clutches.

OtonashiDiva at 04:10, 25 February 2017

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	“This isn’t water, it’s oil! Oil’s flowing in!”		“This isn’t water, it’s oil! Oil’s flowing in!”

	I stare at the top part of the slant and see a man kicking down barrel after wooden barrel. It was the young soldier who had told me about the ~~cannon~~ and the catapult at the jetty and now he’s raising his fist high, excitedly singing goodness knows what.		I stare at the top part of the slant and see a man kicking down barrel after wooden barrel. It was the young soldier who had told me about the gun port and the catapult at the jetty and now he’s raising his fist high, excitedly singing goodness knows what.

	“…Why?”		“…Why?”

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OtonashiDiva at 12:00, 23 February 2017

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OtonashiDiva at 04:26, 23 February 2017

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	Leaving the dock along a pier must be as tricky as an airplane taking off. Getting complimented as soon as the mission's completed must make the experts really happy. I see, so this is how he captures his subordinates' hearts. When I'm with Saralegui, I'm only impressed.		Leaving the dock along a pier must be as tricky as an airplane taking off. Getting complimented as soon as the mission's completed must make the experts really happy. I see, so this is how he captures his subordinates' hearts. When I'm with Saralegui, I'm only impressed.

	Lord von Bielefeld ~~brushes against~~ him as he ~~leaves~~, ~~frowning~~. He ~~probably doesn’t think a trip for such an important reason isn’t worth being~~ so happy ~~about~~.		Lord von Bielefeld, who passed him as he left, frowns and follows Saralegui with his gaze. He looks like he wants to ask why he's so happy at the start of serious voyage.

	“Günter asked me to give this to you~~, it~~ might not fit too well.”		“Günter asked me to give this jacket to you. It might not fit too well, though.”

	Wolfram is also still wearing a kitchen apprentice’s clothes, ~~and~~ there’s a thick ~~white~~ jacket hanging on his arm. Be it the sleeves, the hems, or the decorations, everything is supersized.		Wolfram is also still wearing a kitchen apprentice’s clothes, but there’s a thick OFF-WHITE jacket hanging on his arm. Be it the sleeves, the hems, or the decorations, everything is supersized.

	“Oh~~! I don’t need this anymore~~. Just now Saralegui lent me his cloak. Besides our heights aren’t that different, the size should be a better fit than Günter’s clothes… Wanna see?”		“Oh, that's alright. Just now Saralegui lent me his cloak. Besides our heights aren’t that different so the size should be a better fit than Günter’s clothes… Wanna see?”

	Wolfram ~~scrutinizes~~ the cloak ~~inside~~ out, even bringing it to his nose, like a little rabbit sniffing at the fabric.		Wolfram spreads the cloak out and scrutinizes it closely, even bringing it to his nose like a little rabbit sniffing at the fabric.

	~~“Mm--~~”		“Hmm.”

	“Wolf… What are you sniffing for! Saralegui did take a bath~~, you know!~~”		“Wolf… What are you sniffing it for? Saralegui did take a bath.”

	~~“Give~~ this one ~~to me~~.”		“I'll use this one.”

	“Eh, why? He purposely lent this to me!”		“Eh, why? He purposely lent this to me, you know?”

	I look the third son from top to bottom. He has a smooth ~~face~~ that ~~has~~ never gotten tan, and eyes ~~as green as~~ the bottom of a lake. Compared to me, ~~whose~~ constantly outdoors practicing, his skin is so white it looks like it can’t bear direct sunlight.		I look the third son from top to bottom. He has smooth cheeks that have never gotten tan and EMERALD GREEN eyes that remind me of the bottom of a lake. Compared to me, who's constantly outdoors practicing, his skin is so white it looks like it can’t bear direct sunlight.

	~~“…On~~ second thought, it might be better if you wear it. Alright, mm, you take it, I ~~planned on getting~~ more ~~sun anyway~~.”		“… On second thought, it might be better if you wear it. Alright, yeah, you take it. I don't mind if I get more tanned.” <ref>Cultural note: Getting tan is considered unattractive in Japan and Wolf's skin as Yuuri has just described it is the ultimate ideal. So, it sounds like Yuuri is just trying to protect Wolf's pretty face here more so than worrying about Wolf getting sunburned (which I'm sure he's also worried about).</ref>

	Because ~~he’s~~ so fair, I ask him to ~~put on his hat,~~ and ~~even help him to cover~~ up ~~all~~ his ~~golden~~ hair. Now he looks just like a light blue weather doll, and I can’t help but laugh with a ‘pfffft’.		Because he's so fair, I ask him to wear the hood too and I pull it up until his blonde hair is hidden. Now he looks just like a light blue weather doll, and I can’t help but laugh with a ‘pfffft’.

	~~“How is it~~? What are you laughing at, Yuuri?”		“What? What are you laughing at, Yuuri?”

	“Because you’re super ~~cute…~~ No, I mean, it feels like the weather will ~~get better~~. If we hang you ~~up like a lucky item~~, the entire journey ~~should~~ be sunny!”		“Because you’re super cute-… No, I mean, it feels like the weather will be on our side. If we hang you from the mast, the entire journey might be sunny.”

	“You want to use me as a live sacrifice~~, and~~ pray for a safe voyage?”		“You want to use me as a live sacrifice to pray for a safe voyage?!”

	“Not a live sacrifice, weather dolls aren’t live sacrifices!”		“Not a live sacrifice, weather dolls aren’t live sacrifices!”

	Then I turn my back on a displeased-looking Wolfram, and run off to tour the number one battleship in Shou Shimaron. Logically speaking, the equipment and firepower of the main ship are top secret military information, but there’s no one on surveillance duty here at all, Saralegui really is a generous king.		Then I turn my back on a displeased-looking Wolfram and run off to tour the number one battleship in Shou Shimaron. Logically speaking, the equipment and firepower of the main ship are top secret military information, but there’s no one on surveillance duty here at all, Saralegui really is a generous king.

	~~“Wasei—There~~ are even cannons, ~~but why isn’t~~ there any ~~gunpowder…”~~		“Amazing~. There are even gun ports. There isn't any gunpowder here so I wonder why…” <ref>Gun ports are openings in the side of a ship from where mounted cannons can fire from. Also, Yuuri's wording is a little ambiguous, so I just wanted to point out that he's saying there is no gunpowder in this world at all(and thus, no cannons), and not that he can't see any on the ship.</ref>

	A young passing crewman ~~even~~ tells me ~~helpfully,~~ that ~~there’s~~ a small scale catapult on board. Though they were our enemies twenty years ago, ~~but~~ in truth they are a bunch of friendly people.		A young passing crewman amicably tells me that there's a small scale catapult on board. Though they were our enemies until twenty years ago, in truth they are a bunch of friendly people.

	The crew of ~~‘The~~ Golden Salmon’ consists entirely ~~out~~ of Shou Shimaron soldiers. ~~They’re~~ wearing that familiar yellow and blue ~~striped~~ uniform~~. And~~ they sport ~~that~~ even more familiar cropped ponytail. ~~Everyone’s working hard and happily~~.		The crew of ‘the Golden Salmon’ consists entirely of Shou Shimaron soldiers. They're wearing that familiar yellow and light blue uniform, they sport the even more familiar cropped ponytail. Everyone is busily going about their work.

	Just as everyone’s busily making preparations, Sunny<ref>The actual term for weather doll is ‘sunny doll’ in the Chinese raws xD It fits seeing as Wolf is such a bright and sunny person~</ref> ~~Wolfram~~ walks over confidently. “Aren’t you cold? Either ~~you~~ get into the cabins or put on ~~an extra layer, otherwise~~ Günter will ~~definitely~~ pull you inside ~~all nervous-like!~~”		Just as everyone’s busily making preparations, Sunny<ref>The actual term for weather doll is ‘sunny doll’ in the Chinese raws xD It fits seeing as Wolf is such a bright and sunny person~ Addendum from the JP version: The Japanese term for weather doll is similar (sunny monk), but Wolf's name written in Japanese rhymes with monk so Yuuri has essentially turned him into a walking pun.</ref> Wolf walks over confidently. “Aren’t you cold? Either get into the cabins or put on a jacket or else Günter will come over in a panic and pull you inside.”

	“How is Günter? After losing to Conrad… Um—Is he very down?”		“How is Günter? After losing to Conrad… Um—Is he very down?”

	“Nah, he’s in a very good mood, in fact. Seems like ~~it’s because~~ you ~~rushed up to protect~~ him~~, and that makes him considerably happy~~.		“Nah, he’s in a very good mood, in fact. Seems like he was really happy that you protected him."

	“What, he sure recovers quickly!”		“What, he sure recovers quickly.”

	Wolfram rubs his frozen fingers ~~hard,~~ to get some temporary warmth. Maybe it’s because we’re by the water, so it’s fairly cold even though it’s not winter climate.		Wolfram rubs his frozen fingers together to get some temporary warmth. Maybe it’s because we’re by the water, but it’s fairly cold even though it’s not winter climate.

	“He excitedly said that he’d come over as soon as he got his hands on the voyage map… Yuuri, I think it’s still better if we go in, right?”		“He excitedly said that he’d come over as soon as he got his hands on the voyage map… Yuuri, I think it’s still better if we go in, right?”

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RedGlassesGirl at 15:34, 12 January 2017

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	The sound of air deflating is emitted from my nose and ears, and my raised eyebrows successfully return to their original position. And so the authoritative pomp young general turns back into the average baseball boy.		The sound of air deflating is emitted from my nose and ears, and my raised eyebrows successfully return to their original position. And so the authoritative pomp young general turns back into the average baseball boy.

	“Hey, wait. So you ~~hate~~ kissing me so much? If so, I’ll feel a little hurt.”		“Hey, wait. So you hated kissing me that much? If so, I’ll feel a little hurt.”

	“What are you talking about, Wolfram? Of course His Majesty doesn’t like kissing you!”		“What are you talking about, Wolfram? Of course His Majesty doesn’t like kissing you!”

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	“…On second thought, it might be better if you wear it. Alright, mm, you take it, I planned on getting more sun anyway.”		“…On second thought, it might be better if you wear it. Alright, mm, you take it, I planned on getting more sun anyway.”

	Because he’s so fair, I ask him to put on his hat, and even help him to cover up all his golden hair. Now he looks just like a light blue weather doll, and I can’t help but laugh with a ‘pfffft’.		Because he’s so fair, I ask him to put on his hat, and even help him to cover up all his golden hair. Now he looks just like a light blue weather doll, and I can’t help but laugh with a ‘pfffft’.

	“How is it? What are you laughing at, Yuuri?”		“How is it? What are you laughing at, Yuuri?”
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	“Aiya, I put the fire out.”		“Aiya, I put the fire out.”

	“Hmm… Yup… So to replace the outdated WATER BOYS, the FIRE BOYS protect the people of the world from fires… but whether it’s cuttlefish or octopus, you’re already so old, calling yourself a BOY would be too funny… So why don’t we make it that from today onwards it’ll be called the FIRE OLD BOYS…”		“Hmm… Yup… So to replace the outdated WATER BOYS<ref>Water Boys is a popular japanese moview of comedy.</ref>, the FIRE BOYS protect the people of the world from fires… but whether it’s cuttlefish or octopus, you’re already so old, calling yourself a BOY would be too funny… So why don’t we make it that from today onwards it’ll be called the FIRE OLD BOYS…”

	“Snap out of it, Yuuri! Turn back into your wimpy self now!”		“Snap out of it, Yuuri! Turn back into your wimpy self now!”
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	“If it’s for me then don’t wear those sexy G-strings, wear trunks!”		“If it’s for me then don’t wear those sexy G-strings, wear trunks!”

	“G-strings? <ref>The word for strings in Japanese is apparently ‘himo’ :3 ~~Günter~~ reads it as ‘homo’</ref> Trunks<ref>‘Trunks’ is a reference to Dragon Ball!! Finally, a reference that I get! XDD</ref>? Do both these proper nouns refer to men?”		“G-strings? <ref>The word for strings in Japanese is apparently ‘himo’ :3 Wolf reads it as ‘homo’</ref> Trunks<ref>‘Trunks’ is a reference to Dragon Ball!! Finally, a reference that I get! XDD</ref>? Do both these proper nouns refer to men?”

	Even though he was just in a life-and-death situation, but his ability to create bad jokes with his misunderstandings hasn’t been affected in the slightest.		Even though he was just in a life-and-death situation, but his ability to create bad jokes with his misunderstandings hasn’t been affected in the slightest.

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	Wolfram, whose breathing had returned to normal, punches down hard on super-Maou mode Yuuri’s head.		Wolfram, whose breathing had returned to normal, punches down hard on super-Maou mode Yuuri’s head.

	"How is this possible? Puu<ref>Puu is the short form of "purinsu" (prince) in japanese, it's disrespectful. Wolfram's nickname is Wagamama Puu (Spoiled Little Prince), but it seems he's not spoiled anymore an his nickname shortened.</ref> you, weren't you dead?"		"How is this possible? Puu<ref>Puu is the short form of "purinsu" (prince) in japanese, it's disrespectful. Wolfram's nickname is Wagamama Puu (Spoiled Little Prince), but it seems he's not spoiled anymore and his nickname shortened.</ref> you, weren't you dead?"

	“Don’t even try simply cursing me to death, I was just winded by the impact! We aren’t even married yet, how can I die!”		“Don’t even try simply cursing me to death, I was just winded by the impact! We aren’t even married yet, how can I die!”