Mayo Chiki!:Volume1 Chapter1 - Revision history

KuroiHikari: Protected "Mayo Chiki!:Volume1 Chapter1": Project Staff Request (‎[edit=sysop] (indefinite) ‎[move=sysop] (indefinite))

2013-11-17T01:53:53Z

Protected "Mayo Chiki!:Volume1 Chapter1": Project Staff Request (‎[edit=sysop] (indefinite) ‎[move=sysop] (indefinite))

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Hiro Hayase: Since its being used a noun, its capitalized

2013-10-03T23:28:34Z

Since its being used a noun, its capitalized

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	I felt a chill running through my body.		I felt a chill running through my body.

	To answer that highly motivated ~~butler~~-kun, I slowly took a step.		To answer that highly motivated Butler-kun, I slowly took a step.

	And—I slowly got my feet behind.		And—I slowly got my feet behind.

Rohan123: Changed "Rouran Gakuen" to "Rouran Shiritsu Gakuen" in one place to reflect "Rouran Private School".

2013-09-24T19:22:18Z

Changed "Rouran Gakuen" to "Rouran Shiritsu Gakuen" in one place to reflect "Rouran Private School".

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	Konoe Subaru.		Konoe Subaru.

	In all probability, there was nobody in Rouran Gakuen<ref>Rouran Private School</ref> who had never heard this name.		In all probability, there was nobody in Rouran Shiritsu Gakuen<ref>Rouran Private School</ref> who had never heard this name.

	[http://kenshi247.net/blog/2013/03/18/bunburyodo/ Bunburyodo]. Good looking. Clean clothes. A prodigy type of guy.		[http://kenshi247.net/blog/2013/03/18/bunburyodo/ Bunburyodo]. Good looking. Clean clothes. A prodigy type of guy.

Rohan123: Changed "Rouran School" to "Rouran Gakuen" according to terminology guidelines.

2013-09-24T19:19:26Z

Changed "Rouran School" to "Rouran Gakuen" according to terminology guidelines.

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	Konoe Subaru.		Konoe Subaru.

	In all probability, there was nobody in Rouran ~~private school~~ who had never heard this name.		In all probability, there was nobody in Rouran Gakuen<ref>Rouran Private School</ref> who had never heard this name.

	[http://kenshi247.net/blog/2013/03/18/bunburyodo/ Bunburyodo]. Good looking. Clean clothes. A prodigy type of guy.		[http://kenshi247.net/blog/2013/03/18/bunburyodo/ Bunburyodo]. Good looking. Clean clothes. A prodigy type of guy.
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	Furthermore, who was there was ‘that’ Subaru-sama.		Furthermore, who was there was ‘that’ Subaru-sama.

	It was said in the rumors that in this Rouran ~~School~~, there were some fan clubs for him, and at the very center of them, were some militants who said, anyone who raised a hand at Subaru-sama --it didn't matter who it was-- would be submerged into Tokyo Bay with the squids.		It was said in the rumors that in this Rouran Gakuen, there were some fan clubs for him, and at the very center of them, were some militants who said, anyone who raised a hand at Subaru-sama --it didn't matter who it was-- would be submerged into Tokyo Bay with the squids.

	If this scene was seen as one of those, it would be a death sentence for me immediately. It would be like in the medieval ages, when they burned witches.		If this scene was seen as one of those, it would be a death sentence for me immediately. It would be like in the medieval ages, when they burned witches.
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	A uniform with looks different from a normal student's uniform. Although normally it would be a violation of the rules, if you thought about this girl's position, you would let it slide.		A uniform with looks different from a normal student's uniform. Although normally it would be a violation of the rules, if you thought about this girl's position, you would let it slide.

	If in the middle of the girls in this Rouran ~~private school~~, the admired one was Konoe Subaru, then in the middle of the guys, this girl was the idol.		If in the middle of the girls in this Rouran Gakuen, the admired one was Konoe Subaru, then in the middle of the guys, this girl was the idol.

	Distinguished good looks and proportions, cool, beautiful and having graceful expressions. A clear head, bunburyodo and perfect scores.		Distinguished good looks and proportions, cool, beautiful and having graceful expressions. A clear head, bunburyodo and perfect scores.

Rohan123 at 09:48, 12 September 2013

2013-09-12T09:48:15Z

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	“I want you to not tell anyone that Subaru is a girl.”		“I want you to not tell anyone that Subaru is a girl.”

	~~she~~ even went so far to add on, "Even if you die".		She even went so far as to add on, "Even if you die."

	I know what you want to say. In other words, an exchange of conditions. In exchange for me protecting Konoe’s secret until the end, even if it meant my death, they will help me to heal my gynophobia.		I know what you want to say. In other words, an exchange of conditions. In exchange for me protecting Konoe’s secret until the end, even if it meant my death, they will help me to heal my gynophobia.

Nura rihan: Correct a mystake

2013-09-12T01:26:16Z

Correct a mystake

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	“I want you to not tell anyone that Subaru is a girl.”		“I want you to not tell anyone that Subaru is a girl.”

	Even if I die~~, why would such dangerous words be used as prefixes~~.		she even went so far to add on, "Even if you die".

	I know what you want to say. In other words, an exchange of conditions. In exchange for me protecting Konoe’s secret until the end, even if it meant my death, they will help me to heal my gynophobia.		I know what you want to say. In other words, an exchange of conditions. In exchange for me protecting Konoe’s secret until the end, even if it meant my death, they will help me to heal my gynophobia.

神 at 22:14, 11 September 2013

2013-09-11T22:14:50Z

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	Oka-machi Kin-jirou.		Oka-machi Kin-jirou.

	Okama<ref>'''Okama'''~~【オカマ】means~~ transvestite.</ref>, Chicken, Jirou.		Okama<ref>'''Okama''' [オカマ] means transvestite.</ref>, Chicken, Jirou.

	“Ne? That’s fun, right?”		“Ne? That’s fun, right?”
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	My ears couldn’t believe those words.		My ears couldn’t believe those words.

	“I think that your phobia is only a sense of fear imprinted into your body against girls. Then, as a reflex, your body reacts with a nose bleed. Like a Pavlovian dog<ref>Too lazy to resume, it is about [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ivan_Pavlov this guy's dogs]. He did his research on "conditioned reflexes" using those dogs.</ref>. But if we wipe this sense of fear, you won’t have nosebleeds anymore, right?”		“I think that your phobia is only a sense of fear imprinted into your body against girls. Then, as a reflex, your body reacts with a nose bleed. Like a Pavlovian dog<ref>Too lazy to resume, it is about [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ivan_Pavlov this guy's dogs]. He did his research on "conditioned reflexes" using those dogs.</ref>. But if we wipe out this sense of fear, you won’t have nosebleeds anymore, right?”

	“That is...”		“That is...”

神: /* The Secret of the Butler-kun */

2013-09-11T22:03:10Z

The Secret of the Butler-kun

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	“It’s okay if he doesn’t discover it. Then, will you make a deal with me?”		“It’s okay if he doesn’t discover it. Then, will you make a deal with me?”

	“Instead of making a deal, it’s more ~~suited to be~~ a complicity.”		“Instead of making a deal, it’s more like a complicity.”

	“Wonderful. I love it. With such a complicity—I think that I won’t be bored.”		“Wonderful. I love it. With such a complicity—I think that I won’t be bored.”

神: /* The secret of the Butler-kun */

2013-09-11T21:42:31Z

The secret of the Butler-kun

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	==The ~~secret~~ of the Butler-kun==		==The Secret of the Butler-kun==

神 at 21:35, 11 September 2013

2013-09-11T21:35:14Z

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