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	“Thinking we would accept any job if enough money is offered... It’s like he thinks we’re jacks of all trades. But it is true that the Rathalos are being hunted in a large scale; even the infants are being kidnapped. We’ve caught about ten of those hunters in our area alone.”		“Thinking we would accept any job if enough money is offered... It’s like he thinks we’re jacks of all trades. But it is true that the Rathalos are being hunted in a large scale; even the infants are being kidnapped. We’ve caught about ten of those hunters in our area alone.”

	“We got five over here.”		“We've got five over here.”

	A weak, shivering voice came from another corner.		A weak, shivering voice came from another corner.
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	“Wait, no... Was it eight?”		“Wait, no... Was it eight?”

	“...Nine, ~~guild master~~.”		“...Nine offenders, Guild Master.”

	A young man voiced his part, with the old man in front of him nodding in response.		A young man voiced his part, with the old man in front of him nodding in response.

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	“With this, they will-”		“With this, they will-”


	“Preparations are complete!”		“Preparations are complete!”

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	He was then given a pat on the shoulder from Fradio as a signal to get inside. Walking in, he had no words to describe how grand the decorations were.		He was then given a pat on the shoulder from Fradio as a signal to get inside. Walking in, he had no words to describe how grand the decorations were.

	Even though he ~~has~~ never seen one, he thought he walked into the royalty’s bedroom.		Even though he had never seen one, he thought he walked into the royalty’s bedroom.

	“Zeeg, do you know how much it costs to rent a ‘Queen’ room like this one?”		“Zeeg, do you know how much it costs to rent a ‘Queen’ room like this one?”
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	Gannon, in a butler suit, stood next to her, brewing tea and collecting the empty plates.		Gannon, in a butler suit, stood next to her, brewing tea and collecting the empty plates.

	Zeeg ~~has~~ only seen this kind of clothes when the village chief wore it during important ceremonies.		Zeeg had only seen this kind of clothes when the village chief wore it during important ceremonies.

	The two of them look accustomed to this lifestyle. There wasn’t any sign that it was just a show.		The two of them look accustomed to this lifestyle. There wasn’t any sign that it was just a show.
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	“Were you surprised?”		“Were you surprised?”

	Zeeg heard Fradio’s question, but didn’t have the energy to answer. Right now, he feels like he ~~has~~ been tricked the whole time.		Zeeg heard Fradio’s question, but didn’t have the energy to answer. Right now, he feels like he had been tricked the whole time.

	“At first, I was surprised as well. They’re like different people when they were out hunting, you see. But of course, the hunting occupation can’t exactly be picked up by the nobles as a hobby, and the young lady’s skill is undeniable. You have seen her in action, so that should be obvious. At any rate, they are a strange pair indeed.”		“At first, I was surprised as well. They’re like different people when they were out hunting, you see. But of course, the hunting occupation can’t exactly be picked up by the nobles as a hobby, and the young lady’s skill is undeniable. You have seen her in action, so that should be obvious. At any rate, they are a strange pair indeed.”
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	Zeeg raised his hand to touch his forehead, which has swelled up quite a bit.		Zeeg raised his hand to touch his forehead, which has swelled up quite a bit.

	Not feeling any headaches, the conclusion was it’s just a flesh wound. When he became a hunter, he ~~has~~ studied which kind of injuries and symptoms are fatal, and the proper procedures to promptly treat of them.		Not feeling any headaches, the conclusion was it’s just a flesh wound. When he became a hunter, he had studied which kind of injuries and symptoms are fatal, and the proper procedures to promptly treat them.

	(“It’s good that I’m hard-headed...”)		(“It’s good that I’m hard-headed...”)
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	Gannon muttered, and the man raised an eyebrow.		Gannon muttered, and the man raised an eyebrow.

	“Ah, yes... The great knight who was a former hunter! The criminal who ~~has~~ been shown kindness, but returned the favor by kidnapping the oldest daughter of his master! I am so glad that I met you here! You, who has a bounty of 500,000 Zenny on his head, being captured so easily! This is thanks to the heaven’s blessings, no doubt. By the way...”		“Ah, yes... The great knight who was a former hunter! The criminal who had been shown kindness, but returned the favor by kidnapping the oldest daughter of his master! I am so glad that I met you here! You, who has a bounty of 500,000 Zenny on his head, being captured so easily! This is thanks to the heaven’s blessings, no doubt. By the way...”

	The man narrowed his eyes and moved his face closer.		The man narrowed his eyes and moved his face closer.
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	“It was totally like you to do such a thing, but seriously? A bounty of 500,000 Zenny? Good grief... Then? What happened to the young mistress?”		“It was totally like you to do such a thing, but seriously? A bounty of 500,000 Zenny? Good grief... Then? What happened to the young mistress?”

	“She ~~has~~ passed away.”		“She had passed away.”

	Elmeria stared into Gannon’s small eyes, and the large man took her sights head-on.		Elmeria stared into Gannon’s small eyes, and the large man took her sights head-on.
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	(“This is bad. Very bad.”)		(“This is bad. Very bad.”)

	The plan ~~has~~ already been put in motion, so it is impossible to change the schedule.		The plan had already been put in motion, so it is impossible to change the schedule.

	The higher-ups have stated repeatedly that if they miss this chance, they would have to wait many years for another.		The higher-ups have stated repeatedly that if they miss this chance, they would have to wait many years for another.
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	“Hmm... For a royal daughter to come to a place like this is admirable indeed. However, if you’re here to protest against the Hunter’s Guild, I’m afraid you’re too late. All of the hunters have already been rounded up. They will never hunt monsters again.”		“Hmm... For a royal daughter to come to a place like this is admirable indeed. However, if you’re here to protest against the Hunter’s Guild, I’m afraid you’re too late. All of the hunters have already been rounded up. They will never hunt monsters again.”

	Narumi glanced at the gathering hall’s entrance, which ~~has~~ been sealed shut. She slowly shook her head before turning back to Brandar.		Narumi glanced at the gathering hall’s entrance, which had been sealed shut. She slowly shook her head before turning back to Brandar.

	“I have not come here for that reason. There are many other ways to discuss our philosophy with the hunters. Right now, stopping what you people are doing takes priority. Sir Brandar, we have investigated that the Royal Armory has been hiring wandering hunters to hunt the Rathalos on a large scale! In order to create this... Do you not know the consequences of your actions!?”		“I have not come here for that reason. There are many other ways to discuss our philosophy with the hunters. Right now, stopping what you people are doing takes priority. Sir Brandar, we have investigated that the Royal Armory has been hiring wandering hunters to hunt the Rathalos on a large scale! In order to create this... Do you not know the consequences of your actions!?”
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	Her people are all gathered outside of the city.		Her people are all gathered outside of the city.

	The transporter bridge- the only way of reaching the city, ~~has~~ been taken control by the Thirteenth Order, under the Royal Armory’s command. The girl had to use her authority to make the knights let her in.		The transporter bridge- the only way of reaching the city, had been taken control by the Thirteenth Order, under the Royal Armory’s command. The girl had to use her authority to make the knights let her in.

	Met with this situation, she came to a realization that she was truly powerless, and that heritage will only take her so far. After all, it was effectively just something she borrowed from her father.		Met with this situation, she came to a realization that she was truly powerless, and that heritage will only take her so far. After all, it was effectively just something she borrowed from her father.
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	“I do.”		“I do.”

	Narumi nodded. The objective in question is the very reason why she ~~has~~ come to this place.		Narumi nodded. The objective in question is the very reason why she have come to this place.

	“With this, they will-”		“With this, they will-”

Monster Hunter:Volume1 Chapter4 - Revision history

Barnnn at 20:56, 22 August 2018

Barnnn: Several edits, revised some translation

Barnnn: /* Chapter 4 - Knight */

Barnnn: Fixed paragraphs' structures to be closer to the raws

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Barnnn: Added V1 Chaper 4