Monster Hunter:Volume2 Chapter1 - Revision history

Barnnn at 14:41, 28 May 2018

2018-05-28T14:41:22Z

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	Vivi was looking at the gathering hall’s entrance.		Vivi was looking at the gathering hall’s entrance.

	Just when Zeeg thought there was noting strange- a man entered the gathering hall in a panic and collapsed on the floor. There were no injuries, but sand is all over his body, and his face is completely dry. He ~~seems~~ to be a merchant.		Just when Zeeg thought there was noting strange- a man entered the gathering hall in a panic and collapsed on the floor. There were no injuries, but sand was all over his body, and his face was completely dry. He seemed to be a merchant.

	“Someone, get him water.”		“Someone, get him water.”
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	The Village Chief said that, and a hunter, who was sitting next to the merchant, gave their drink to the man.		The Village Chief said that, and a hunter, who was sitting next to the merchant, gave their drink to the man.

	The man drank it with extreme thirst, the looked around the gathering hall panickingly. His line of sight stopped at the Village Chief, and then shouted with his dry voice.		The man drank it with extreme thirst, the looked around the gathering hall panickingly. His line of sight stopped at the Village Chief, and then he shouted with his dry voice.

	“Chief! We- We got hit! It’s that thing at the desert- The one with one horn!”		“Chief! We- We got hit! It’s that thing at the desert- The one with one horn!”

Barnnn at 14:36, 28 May 2018

2018-05-28T14:36:44Z

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Barnnn at 00:55, 9 May 2018

2018-05-09T00:55:34Z

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	“Hey-”		“Hey-”

	While the boy was reaching out to Elmeria’s shoulder to stop her from eating and have her explain the situation ~~clearly…~~		While the boy was reaching out to Elmeria’s shoulder to stop her from eating and have her explain the situation clearly...

	~~“……What~~ do you think you are doing to the young mistress?”		“......What do you think you are doing to the young mistress?”

	A deep voice sounded from the other side of the table, causing Zeeg to stop his hand. The tone of that statement showed a great deal of irritation. Could it be that he thought the boy was intending to hit the girl?		A deep voice sounded from the other side of the table, causing Zeeg to stop his hand. The tone of that statement showed a great deal of irritation. Could it be that he thought the boy was intending to hit the girl?
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	“Vivi would have been a lot more popular if she were a little more polite.”		“Vivi would have been a lot more popular if she were a little more polite.”

	The old man laughed as he whispered ~~that~~ to Zeeg.		The old man laughed as he whispered to Zeeg.

	“That won’t be necessary.”		“That won’t be necessary.”

	The maid lady- ~~who seems to be~~ named Vivi- seemed to have heard it even ~~with that~~ distance, and so the Village Chief let out another laugh.		The maid lady- apparently named Vivi- seemed to have heard it even in the distance, and so the Village Chief let out another laugh.

	“You’ve got sharp ears.”		“You’ve got sharp ears.”
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	While Zeeg was watching those hunters mind their own businesses, Vivi approached and rudely placed beer mugs and a plate of food on the table.		While Zeeg was watching those hunters mind their own businesses, Vivi approached and rudely placed beer mugs and a plate of food on the table.

	Black beer, which filled the mugs to the brim, spilled onto the table. Vivi seemed to have noticed but ~~didn’t~~ seem to care, as she immediately headed back to the counter.		Black beer, which filled the mugs to the brim, spilled onto the table. Vivi seemed to have noticed but did not seem to care, as she immediately headed back to the counter.

	Words of complaint welled up in Zeeg’s throat, but the boy ultimately gulped them down.		Words of complaint welled up in Zeeg’s throat, but the boy ultimately gulped them down.

Barnnn at 03:16, 1 February 2018

2018-02-01T03:16:20Z

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	The Village Chief spoke up, and just like that the maid’s skirt fluttered as she turned around towards the counter, then passed the order over to the kitchen.		The Village Chief spoke up, and just like that the maid’s skirt fluttered as she turned around towards the counter, then passed the order over to the kitchen.

	“Vivi would have been a lot more popular if she were to a little more polite.”		“Vivi would have been a lot more popular if she were a little more polite.”

	The old man laughed as he whispered that to Zeeg.		The old man laughed as he whispered that to Zeeg.

Sir Trollface at 15:15, 21 September 2017

2017-09-21T15:15:43Z

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	The village has changed way too little.		The village has changed way too little.

	Every villager is sure to remember shamelessly arrogant attitude.		Every villager is sure to remember his shamelessly arrogant attitude.

	Carried away by his victory against the Yian Kut-Ku to the point that he held a celebration, at that time Zeeg believed that he has already become a full-fledged adult. With those memories popping up, he was so embarrassed that he wanted to roll on the floor and scream.		Carried away by his victory against the Yian Kut-Ku to the point that he held a celebration, at that time Zeeg believed that he has already become a full-fledged adult. With those memories popping up, he was so embarrassed that he wanted to roll on the floor and scream.

Barnnn: Added missing text

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 (“Did I make a clumsy mistake or something...?”)
-Gravios, the lead-colored Gravios Tasset and Gravios Greaves. They are quite good at absorbing impact from movement and attacks.
+Zeeg stared at Elmeria's face, who is holding a knife in one hand and eating rice with her spoon in another, and thought back to the latest hunt.
 Gannon is a lance user, and his primary role is to act as decoy.

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2017-06-25T15:27:41Z

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