Mushi:Vol2 Ch3 - Revision history

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	== Night 3: Boudoir ==		== '''Night 3: Boudoir''' ==
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Brynhilde at 04:37, 19 January 2014

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	She was tired and she didn’t know why. Would it be better off if she was angry? Or sad? She didn’t know the answer to that. Her mind was muddled, her was head dizzy, and she wanted to throw up.		She was tired and she didn’t know why. Would it be better off if she was angry? Or sad? She didn’t know the answer to that. Her mind was muddled, her was head dizzy, and she wanted to throw up.

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	Saibara Mina’s eyes smiled as she hugged herself.		Saibara Mina’s eyes smiled as she hugged herself.

	“Oh, hahaha, wait a second, ~~lovely~~ Long-Armed Demon. For now –” shifting her gaze to the Meat Doll, she spread her hands: “I have a question I must ask. Meat Doll, why did you disobey my command and refrain from killing Usagawa Rinne?”		“Oh, hahaha, wait a second, cute Long-Armed Demon. For now –” shifting her gaze to the Meat Doll, she spread her hands: “I have a question I must ask. Meat Doll, why did you disobey my command and refrain from killing Usagawa Rinne?”

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	“Nuuuu –”		“Nuuuu –”

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	She realized it was the window.		She realized it was the window.

	The window next to the sink, which she always found it hard to close.		The window next to the sink, which she always found hard to close.

	The window – with a crisp sound – creaked apart on its own.		The window – with a crisp sound – creaked apart on its own.
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	''She is my opponent, someone who wants to have my Apple and targeted me because of my Apple.		''She is my opponent, someone who wants to have my Apple and targeted me because of my Apple.

	''Like ~~‘Mushi’~~ and Snake, she would probably use all she can to take away my Apple.		''Like Mushi and Snake, she would probably use all she can to take away my Apple.

	''No.		''No.
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	''I want to keep living with Sakaki and Guriko.		''I want to keep living with Sakaki and Guriko.

	''I’ve already decided that a month ago on the day ~~that~~ Guriko returned to us.''		''I’ve already decided that a month ago on the day Guriko returned to us.''

	“You think you can run away?”		“You think you can run away?”
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	Rinne was running on the uneven road in front of the apartment block. Raising her head, she glared at Break.		Rinne was running on the uneven road in front of the apartment block. Raising her head, she glared at Break.

	“Break! Go hide! And call the police – no, contact ~~Sensei~~ first! He’d call the police!”		“Break! Go hide! And call the police – no, contact sensei first! He’d call the police!”

	“Ring-bell, what’s going on? Police?”		“Ring-bell, what’s going on? Police?”
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	Then – what was this –		Then – what was this –

	Neither Snake nor the ~~‘Mushi’~~ she faced a month ago possess any special abilities. They were not too different from humans.		Neither Snake nor the Mushi she faced a month ago possess any special abilities. They were not too different from humans.

	But she was different. Long-Armed Demon was different.		But she was different. Long-Armed Demon was different.
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	Right beside the continuous battle between Long-Armed Demon and the meat doll, without being noticed by anyone else, leaving no signs of her approach –		Right beside the continuous battle between Long-Armed Demon and the meat doll, without being noticed by anyone else, leaving no signs of her approach –

	“Why are you protecting Usagawa Rinne, ~~meat doll~~?”		“Why are you protecting Usagawa Rinne, Meat Doll?”

	Saibara Mina stood there.		Saibara Mina stood there.
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	Saibara Mina’s eyes smiled as she hugged herself.		Saibara Mina’s eyes smiled as she hugged herself.

	“Oh, hahaha, wait a second, lovely Long-Armed Demon. For now –” shifting her gaze to the ~~meat doll~~, she spread her hands: “I have a question I must ask. Meat ~~doll~~, why did you disobey my command and refrain from killing Usagawa Rinne?”		“Oh, hahaha, wait a second, lovely Long-Armed Demon. For now –” shifting her gaze to the Meat Doll, she spread her hands: “I have a question I must ask. Meat Doll, why did you disobey my command and refrain from killing Usagawa Rinne?”

	“Nuuuu –”		“Nuuuu –”
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	Rinne understood then.		Rinne understood then.

	Neither Mina nor the ~~meat doll~~ were heroes that came to save her.		Neither Mina nor the Meat Doll were heroes that came to save her.

	She understood. It was over.		She understood. It was over.
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	“You don’t need to apologize.”		“You don’t need to apologize.”

	Hino murmured. She gently caressed Guriko’s head. The messy wolf-like haircut was damp with the cold sweat, feeling ~~slight~~ hot under Hino’s hand.		Hino murmured. She gently caressed Guriko’s head. The messy wolf-like haircut was damp with the cold sweat, feeling slightly hot under Hino’s hand.

	Gently, Hino bent down and whispered to Guriko: “It – wasn’t your fault.”		Gently, Hino bent down and whispered to Guriko: “It – wasn’t your fault.”
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	Hino sighed and looked at the clock hanging on the wall, which had hands all made up of spoons.		Hino sighed and looked at the clock hanging on the wall, which had hands all made up of spoons.

	She bought this because Guriko ~~had~~ looked at it with such a rare look of longing.		She bought this because Guriko looked at it with such a rare look of longing.

	Why did she love spoons so? Hino knew that Guriko would sometimes space out while staring at a spoon.		Why did she love spoons so? Hino knew that Guriko would sometimes space out while staring at a spoon.

Brynhilde at 01:24, 31 December 2013

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	She should be able to feel temperature, right?		She should be able to feel temperature, right?

	“Hey, ~~meat doll~~?”		“Hey, Meat Doll?”

	Rinne’s thoughts instantly froze with Mina’s utterly incomprehensible sentence.		Rinne’s thoughts instantly froze with Mina’s utterly incomprehensible sentence.

	What did she say? Meat ~~doll~~?		What did she say? Meat Doll?

	Rinne stared at Mina. She couldn’t tell whether the other woman noticed this or not with Mina still speaking softly into the phone.		Rinne stared at Mina. She couldn’t tell whether the other woman noticed this or not with Mina still speaking softly into the phone.

Brynhilde at 00:03, 31 December 2013

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Brynhilde at 03:00, 15 December 2013

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	A pause, as if thinking, but more like she was straining to recall something.		A pause, as if thinking, but more like she was straining to recall something.

	“Rinne. Ah! Ahhhhh! Usawaga Rinne! Right! I was about to say that your name sounds familiar! You are the girl who was in ~~Guryuu~~-san’s arms, right? Now I remember; you were in the file. Hmm? Since you’re Guryū-san’s lover, doesn’t that make you the future matriarch of the organization? Oh my, I was so rude. I’ll pass the phone immediately. Duuuuuuu –”		“Rinne. Ah! Ahhhhh! Usawaga Rinne! Right! I was about to say that your name sounds familiar! You are the girl who was in Guryū-san’s arms, right? Now I remember; you were in the file. Hmm? Since you’re Guryū-san’s lover, doesn’t that make you the future matriarch of the organization? Oh my, I was so rude. I’ll pass the phone immediately. Duuuuuuu –”

	With an odd onomatopoeia, Hino’s voice drifted further and further away.		With an odd onomatopoeia, Hino’s voice drifted further and further away.

Brynhilde at 12:43, 13 December 2013

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	The words spoken by the fake priest with feral eyes continued to echo within her mind.		The words spoken by the fake priest with feral eyes continued to echo within her mind.

	She realized that the monster ~~‘Gankyuu~~ Egoriko’ did indeed exist within her heart when she fought Long-Armed Demon today. She was truly happy when she fought Long-Armed Demon; she felt excellent when she dug out the other’s eyeballs. But Rinne… she was only standing behind Guriko, yet that was enough to ignite her desire to kill. Though it wasn’t the real Rinne, it looked exactly the same – and should therefore have been the same.		She realized that the monster ‘Gankyū Egoriko’ did indeed exist within her heart when she fought Long-Armed Demon today. She was truly happy when she fought Long-Armed Demon; she felt excellent when she dug out the other’s eyeballs. But Rinne… she was only standing behind Guriko, yet that was enough to ignite her desire to kill. Though it wasn’t the real Rinne, it looked exactly the same – and should therefore have been the same.

	She just happened to realize –		She just happened to realize –
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	Guriko gritted her teeth so hard that they creaked, and she rose up from the luxurious sofa. Standing in the large uptown apartment situated in the middle of the Kannonsakazaki CBD, she sighed softly in the dark living room with view of the night stars through its ceiling-height glass walls.		Guriko gritted her teeth so hard that they creaked, and she rose up from the luxurious sofa. Standing in the large uptown apartment situated in the middle of the Kannonsakazaki CBD, she sighed softly in the dark living room with view of the night stars through its ceiling-height glass walls.

	''Yono had always been the outsider. I was adopted, and I had no place in the family. A thousand years ago, I managed to keep living under the name of ~~Gankyuu~~ Eguriko, and happened to accidentally find my place in the world thanks to Rinne and Sakaki. Then I just depended on them –''		''Yono had always been the outsider. I was adopted, and I had no place in the family. A thousand years ago, I managed to keep living under the name of Gankyū Eguriko, and happened to accidentally find my place in the world thanks to Rinne and Sakaki. Then I just depended on them –''

	Countless eyeballs were crawling in the world within Guriko’s mind.		Countless eyeballs were crawling in the world within Guriko’s mind.
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	''I don’t have that right. I’ve killed many people, I’ve eliminated many many people. They were someone’s parents, someone’s children.		''I don’t have that right. I’ve killed many people, I’ve eliminated many many people. They were someone’s parents, someone’s children.

	''A month ago, some people gently accepted this monster – me. They were Usagawa Rinne and Sakaki ~~Guryuu~~. But I – I – I am obviously a monster, a monster who doesn’t deserve happiness.		''A month ago, some people gently accepted this monster – me. They were Usagawa Rinne and Sakaki Guryū. But I – I – I am obviously a monster, a monster who doesn’t deserve happiness.

	''Compared to the Guriko living such an ordinary life, the Guriko who fought fellow monsters in a bloodbath like today’s is much closer to my true self. I am a demon, just like the Long-Armed Demon who had killed ten people.''		''Compared to the Guriko living such an ordinary life, the Guriko who fought fellow monsters in a bloodbath like today’s is much closer to my true self. I am a demon, just like the Long-Armed Demon who had killed ten people.''
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	Noah’s Ark is a rather famous myth that came from the Bible. Put up your hand if you know about it. Oh, that’s a surprisingly large amount of people. It’s probably not because the Japanese all started to believe in Christianity, but because we knew of it from games or manga. Right. Look closely, girls, the boys with their hands up right now are the fabled otaku who’re into games and anime. Oi, you over there, don’t put your hand down! There’s nothing wrong with being an otaku! I like those things too!		Noah’s Ark is a rather famous myth that came from the Bible. Put up your hand if you know about it. Oh, that’s a surprisingly large amount of people. It’s probably not because the Japanese all started to believe in Christianity, but because we knew of it from games or manga. Right. Look closely, girls, the boys with their hands up right now are the fabled otaku who’re into games and anime. Oi, you over there, don’t put your hand down! There’s nothing wrong with being an otaku! I like those things too!

	The Age of Gods was an age when even the plants spoke and the existence magic was commonplace. During that time, humans – the ~~descendents~~ of Adam and Eve – fell into unsalvageable corruption. They stopped trusting others, indulged in wanton pleasure, and were content with just satisfying the desires of the flesh – and they even slaughtered each other. They had silently – but undoubtedly – fallen.		The Age of Gods was an age when even the plants spoke and the existence magic was commonplace. During that time, humans – the descendants of Adam and Eve – fell into unsalvageable corruption. They stopped trusting others, indulged in wanton pleasure, and were content with just satisfying the desires of the flesh – and they even slaughtered each other. They had silently – but undoubtedly – fallen.

	Beholding such a scene, God was enraged, and called upon a great flood to eliminate all of humanity. That is the myth of Noah’s Flood. Oh? What’s wrong, Your Majesty? You look like you want to say something. I see. Do you desire so much for me to publically declare my love? Alright, I’ll take a deep breath in and say it out loud. Usarin~~-kakka~~, I – love – you!		Beholding such a scene, God was enraged, and called upon a great flood to eliminate all of humanity. That is the myth of Noah’s Flood. Oh? What’s wrong, Your Majesty? You look like you want to say something. I see. Do you desire so much for me to publically declare my love? Alright, I’ll take a deep breath in and say it out loud. Milady Usarin, I – love – you!

	“Kya~, Sensei, please don’t do this! Why is Sensei so excited today? What happened in the story afterwards?”		“Kya~, Sensei, please don’t do this! Why is Sensei so excited today? What happened in the story afterwards?”
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	She didn’t see Guriko this morning. She didn’t think that person would skip school. However, the girl with the wolf-like haircut didn’t show up even as the final bell rang. Though she acted like a derelict, Guriko never skipped school. A strong sense of unrest had been stirring within Rinne ever since the weird detective spoke to them in that café last night.		She didn’t see Guriko this morning. She didn’t think that person would skip school. However, the girl with the wolf-like haircut didn’t show up even as the final bell rang. Though she acted like a derelict, Guriko never skipped school. A strong sense of unrest had been stirring within Rinne ever since the weird detective spoke to them in that café last night.

	With a single ‘wait here’, ~~Gankyuu~~ Egoriko had disappeared.		With a single ‘wait here’, Gankyū Egoriko had disappeared.

	Rinne waited till midnight for Guriko, but she never returned.		Rinne waited till midnight for Guriko, but she never returned.
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	A pause, as if thinking, but more like she was straining to recall something.		A pause, as if thinking, but more like she was straining to recall something.

	“Rinne. Ah! Ahhhhh! Usawaga Rinne! Right! I was about to say that your name sounds familiar! You are the girl who was in Guryuu-san’s arms, right? Now I remember; you were in the file. Hmm? Since you’re ~~Guryuu~~-san’s lover, doesn’t that make you the future matriarch of the organization? Oh my, I was so rude. I’ll pass the phone immediately. Duuuuuuu –”		“Rinne. Ah! Ahhhhh! Usawaga Rinne! Right! I was about to say that your name sounds familiar! You are the girl who was in Guryuu-san’s arms, right? Now I remember; you were in the file. Hmm? Since you’re Guryū-san’s lover, doesn’t that make you the future matriarch of the organization? Oh my, I was so rude. I’ll pass the phone immediately. Duuuuuuu –”

	With an odd onomatopoeia, Hino’s voice drifted further and further away.		With an odd onomatopoeia, Hino’s voice drifted further and further away.
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	“Mmm, thanks.”		“Mmm, thanks.”

	Then she started ~~dialling~~ out a number without further ado and waited for it to connect.		Then she started dialing out a number without further ado and waited for it to connect.

	Rinne felt awkward. Crossing her fingers, she looked at Mina. The other woman was dressed extremely scantily; didn’t she feel cold?		Rinne felt awkward. Crossing her fingers, she looked at Mina. The other woman was dressed extremely scantily; didn’t she feel cold?
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	She didn’t tell the person on the other end of the phone her name, either.		She didn’t tell the person on the other end of the phone her name, either.

	“Right – it’s time to get to work. I helped you to find someone. What? I’m at the shopping district now. Me? Hey, I told you my ~~speciality~~ is elimination, not murder. Got it? Besides, if that person happens to run away, it’s best to hide my true identity. Why don’t you think this through with that thick brain of yours? If you end up acting like an idiot, then I won’t hold up my end of the bargain either.”		“Right – it’s time to get to work. I helped you to find someone. What? I’m at the shopping district now. Me? Hey, I told you my specialty is elimination, not murder. Got it? Besides, if that person happens to run away, it’s best to hide my true identity. Why don’t you think this through with that thick brain of yours? If you end up acting like an idiot, then I won’t hold up my end of the bargain either.”

	Mina finished speaking, disconnected, and returned the phone to Rinne with a smile.		Mina finished speaking, disconnected, and returned the phone to Rinne with a smile.
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	Rinne understood then.		Rinne understood then.

	Neither Mina nor the meat doll were ~~herores~~ that came to save her.		Neither Mina nor the meat doll were heroes that came to save her.

	She understood. It was over.		She understood. It was over.
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	That sounded right. It felt so lonely. Hino would feel anxious whenever he left her side.		That sounded right. It felt so lonely. Hino would feel anxious whenever he left her side.

	She ~~wouldn’t~~ know what to do.		She wouldn't know what to do.

	Tears soon welled out of Guriko’s eyes as she mumbled while sobbing in her sleep.		Tears soon welled out of Guriko’s eyes as she mumbled while sobbing in her sleep.
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	“…”		“…”

	Hino’s fingers touched the skin on Guriko’s neck, but she ~~couldn’t~~ put any strength into her hands.		Hino’s fingers touched the skin on Guriko’s neck, but she couldn't put any strength into her hands.

	The blood beneath her fingers was endlessly pulsing along the arteries in Guriko’s neck.		The blood beneath her fingers was endlessly pulsing along the arteries in Guriko’s neck.
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	“Don’t cry, Guriko-chan.”		“Don’t cry, Guriko-chan.”

	With a sudden feeling of fatigue, Hino let go of her hands on Guriko’s neck as she ~~weptwith~~ Guriko. Almost unconsciously, she muttered the true thoughts in her mind: “Mom is here.”		With a sudden feeling of fatigue, Hino let go of her hands on Guriko’s neck as she wept with Guriko. Almost unconsciously, she muttered the true thoughts in her mind: “Mom is here.”

	Was it a coincidence? Guriko sighed with contentment, temporarily left his nightmares, and stared to breathe evenly.		Was it a coincidence? Guriko sighed with contentment, temporarily left his nightmares, and stared to breathe evenly.
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	“I – I –”		“I – I –”

	Hino ~~couldn’t~~ bear it any longer. Putting her hands to her face, she screamed with frustration.		Hino couldn't bear it any longer. Putting her hands to her face, she screamed with frustration.

	“I… can’t do it!”		“I… can’t do it!”

Cakemanofdoom at 22:58, 18 January 2012

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