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	Sixteen-year-old Nagumo Ame was a student in Kannonsakazaki Private High School class 1-B. She was well-behaved, quiet, wasn't particularly afraid of strangers and often listened to others speak while giggling. She was about average in terms of studies and athletics and didn't have any particularly noteworthy traits. She was like the air that floated in and out of the classroom; people frequently overlooked her existence.		Sixteen-year-old <span id="Nagumo Ame">[[Mushi:Vol2_TLnotes#Nagumo Ame\|Nagumo Ame]]</span> was a student in Kannonsakazaki Private High School class 1-B. She was well-behaved, quiet, wasn't particularly afraid of strangers and often listened to others speak while giggling. She was about average in terms of studies and athletics and didn't have any particularly noteworthy traits. She was like the air that floated in and out of the classroom; people frequently overlooked her existence.

	What made her special was --		What made her special was --

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	Sixteen-year-old Nagumo Ame was a student in Kannonsakazaki Private High School class 1-B. She was well-behaved, quiet, wasn't particularly afraid of strangers and often listened to others speak while giggling. She was about average in terms of studies and athletics and didn't have any particularly noteworthy traits. She was like the air that floated in and out of the classroom; people frequently overlooked her existence.		Sixteen-year-old Nagumo Ame was a student in Kannonsakazaki Private High School class 1-B. She was well-behaved, quiet, wasn't particularly afraid of strangers and often listened to others speak while giggling. She was about average in terms of studies and athletics and didn't have any particularly noteworthy traits. She was like the air that floated in and out of the classroom; people frequently overlooked her existence.

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Brynhilde at 03:05, 15 December 2013

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	"Usagawa Rinne also disappeared, right? Whoa, doesn't that sound like they eloped? After all, it's ''that'' teacher, feels like he'd say '[[Mushi:Vol2_TLnotes#Questionable translations\|Finally]]'."		"Usagawa Rinne also disappeared, right? Whoa, doesn't that sound like they eloped? After all, it's ''that'' teacher, feels like he'd say '[[Mushi:Vol2_TLnotes#Questionable translations\|Finally]]'."

	"But ~~Gankyuu~~'s gone, too."		"But Gankyū's gone, too."

	"Oh, ~~Gankyuu~~, have any of you ever talked to her? I'm way too scared, I just don't dare get close to her."		"Oh, Gankyū, have any of you ever talked to her? I'm way too scared, I just don't dare get close to her."

	"Ah. Yeah, that happens. But she's actually mostly normal despite being a bit strange."		"Ah. Yeah, that happens. But she's actually mostly normal despite being a bit strange."
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	Ahaha, a fit of laughter.		Ahaha, a fit of laughter.

	It had been about three days since Sakaki ~~Guryuu~~, Usagawa Rinne, and ~~Gankyuu~~ Eguriko suddenly disappeared. For the ever-diligent Rinne to miss school with no reason, and furthermore for Sakaki and Guriko to also be skipping was truly too strange, so the teachers also felt perplexed. But, the school's teachers were all like Sakaki's servants, so the chaos probably resulted from the master's disappearance.		It had been about three days since Sakaki Guryū, Usagawa Rinne, and Gankyū Eguriko suddenly disappeared. For the ever-diligent Rinne to miss school with no reason, and furthermore for Sakaki and Guriko to also be skipping was truly too strange, so the teachers also felt perplexed. But, the school's teachers were all like Sakaki's servants, so the chaos probably resulted from the master's disappearance.

	"Hehe."		"Hehe."
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	She talked to herself, and looked around her. The Sakaki Organization's men and the police weren't exactly idiots; they should have investigated this place, though normal people wouldn't be able to see any strange beings. They would only be able to hear them. It was an extremely feeble, seemingly imaginary sound.		She talked to herself, and looked around her. The Sakaki Organization's men and the police weren't exactly idiots; they should have investigated this place, though normal people wouldn't be able to see any strange beings. They would only be able to hear them. It was an extremely feeble, seemingly imaginary sound.

	After the incident, Nagumo Ame checked whether Sakaki ~~Guryuu~~, Usagawa Rinne, and ~~Gankyuu~~ Eguriko were alive or dead.		After the incident, Nagumo Ame checked whether Sakaki Guryū, Usagawa Rinne, and Gankyū Eguriko were alive or dead.

	The three of them had brought some random belongings and were living in Usagawa Rinne's apartment.		The three of them had brought some random belongings and were living in Usagawa Rinne's apartment.
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	Smiling, Ame placed her hand on her face.		Smiling, Ame placed her hand on her face.

	"You don't know? Sterilization Disinfection, you've become weak. I'd heard that you used up all your power in that [[Mushi:Vol2_TLnotes#Questionable translations\|incident]], but you can't even recognize me? What, if you're down to this level there wasn't a need to be cautious and run off to antagonize ~~Gankyuu~~ Eguriko. Whatever, I only just realized that." Her hand moved down, and her eyes, nose, mouth, and eyebrows all disappeared. Sterilization Disinfection stiffened. Ame who did not have a mouth laughed joyfully, "Heehee. Right, it's me, not anyone else, it's me."		"You don't know? Sterilization Disinfection, you've become weak. I'd heard that you used up all your power in that [[Mushi:Vol2_TLnotes#Questionable translations\|incident]], but you can't even recognize me? What, if you're down to this level there wasn't a need to be cautious and run off to antagonize Gankyū Eguriko. Whatever, I only just realized that." Her hand moved down, and her eyes, nose, mouth, and eyebrows all disappeared. Sterilization Disinfection stiffened. Ame who did not have a mouth laughed joyfully, "Heehee. Right, it's me, not anyone else, it's me."

	"Ultimate Shield -- You traitor..."		"Ultimate Shield -- You traitor..."
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	The voice held killing intent, and that gun was definitely loaded.		The voice held killing intent, and that gun was definitely loaded.

	Standing behind her was Sakaki ~~Guryuu~~, no problem -- Guriko coldly smiled.		Standing behind her was Sakaki Guryū, no problem -- Guriko coldly smiled.

	"Shoot if you want, kill if you want. Sakaki, that's actually what I want."		"Shoot if you want, kill if you want. Sakaki, that's actually what I want."

Cakemanofdoom: Felt like I had a better understanding of one confusing passage after reading later chapters. Then I realized it was still confusing, but I changed a few things here and there.

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Felt like I had a better understanding of one confusing passage after reading later chapters. Then I realized it was still confusing, but I changed a few things here and there.

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	Ahaha, a fit of laughter.		Ahaha, a fit of laughter.

	~~Since~~ Sakaki Guryuu, Usagawa Rinne, and Gankyuu Eguriko suddenly disappeared~~, it had been about three days~~. For the ever-diligent Rinne to miss school with no reason, and furthermore for Sakaki and Guriko to also be skipping was truly too strange, so the teachers also felt perplexed. But, the school's teachers were all like Sakaki's servants, so the chaos probably resulted from the master's disappearance.		It had been about three days since Sakaki Guryuu, Usagawa Rinne, and Gankyuu Eguriko suddenly disappeared. For the ever-diligent Rinne to miss school with no reason, and furthermore for Sakaki and Guriko to also be skipping was truly too strange, so the teachers also felt perplexed. But, the school's teachers were all like Sakaki's servants, so the chaos probably resulted from the master's disappearance.

	"Hehe."		"Hehe."
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	"But they disappeared at the same time as Sakaki-sensei? Maybe Sakaki-sensei went to the hospital too, and then some kidnapper took him away. Aren't there weird rumors?"		"But they disappeared at the same time as Sakaki-sensei? Maybe Sakaki-sensei went to the hospital too, and then some kidnapper took him away. Aren't there weird rumors?"

	"What do you mean, some kind of ridiculous kidnapper, really, you..." "Miku, you're really stupid, I like."		"What do you mean, some kind of ridiculous kidnapper, really, you..." "Miku, you're really stupid, I like it."

	"Thanks, wait... do you want to be smacked?"		"Thanks, wait... do you want to be smacked?"
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	So there's no need to worry. Rinne's words were right, though she didn't have anything to base it on, Guriko felt she didn't have to worry.		So there's no need to worry. Rinne's words were right, though she didn't have anything to base it on, Guriko felt she didn't have to worry.

	The night was about to end, and they needed to wake from this nightmare. Because after experiencing the blackest, darkest, desperation, people should be able to ~~have~~ hope for a happier future..		The night was about to end, and they needed to wake from this nightmare. Because after experiencing the blackest, darkest, desperation, people should be able to hope for a happier future..

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	After the incident, Nagumo Ame checked whether Sakaki Guryuu, Usagawa Rinne, and Gankyuu Eguriko were alive or dead.		After the incident, Nagumo Ame checked whether Sakaki Guryuu, Usagawa Rinne, and Gankyuu Eguriko were alive or dead.

	The three of them ~~took~~ some random belongings and were living in Usagawa Rinne's apartment.		The three of them had brought some random belongings and were living in Usagawa Rinne's apartment.

	Then -- in this hospital that became a graveyard, the thing that remained and cried in anguish was --		Then -- in this hospital that became a graveyard, the thing that remained and cried in anguish was --

	Ame ~~used~~ her vision, that unlike a normal person's could detect monsters not part of this world~~, to check~~.		Ame checked with her vision that unlike a normal person's could detect monsters not part of this world.

	Blood, ~~a large amount of blood~~.		Blood, splattered everywhere.

	It was spilled over the hospital's outer wall, and flowed through the ground leaving crimson traces.		It was spilled over the hospital's outer wall, and it flowed through the ground leaving crimson traces.

	In the middle of it all, was a woman who lay down and ~~made pained groans~~.		In the middle of it all, was a woman who lay down and groaned in pain.

	"Sterilization Disinfection."		"Sterilization Disinfection."
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	Hearing the voice, the woman abruptly looked over.		Hearing the voice, the woman abruptly looked over.

	Her skin and pure white hair were dirtied with mud and blood, and possibly having trouble breathing, ~~even~~ her mask ~~was off~~. ~~Blood~~ spilling from her chest, and sweating constantly~~, this woman~~ was called Sterilization Disinfection.		Her skin and pure white hair were dirtied with mud and blood, and, possibly having trouble breathing, she did not wear her mask. This woman who had blood spilling from her chest, and was sweating constantly was called Sterilization Disinfection.

	She looked at Ame as if asking, "You can see me?" Ame laughingly said, "[[Mushi:Vol2_TLnotes#Questionable translations\|So]] the largest fragment of the heart has been pierced. The sensory organ is damaged, and the soul is collapsing -- In fact, you already can't use power on the level of the seven great fragments. Hehe, but... before that you still took away Usagawa Rinne's soul, but it was because at that point the heart -- the sensory organ was already filled, so had no choice but to construct a new sensory organ somewhere else, and also because you hid a fragment and restored a life -- That's right, isn't it? But the emergency vessel had a serious reaction, right?"		She looked at Ame as if asking, "You can see me?" Ame laughingly said, "[[Mushi:Vol2_TLnotes#Questionable translations\|So]] the largest fragment of the heart has been pierced. The sensory organ is damaged, and the soul is collapsing -- In fact, you already can't use power on the level of the seven great fragments. Hehe, but... before that you still took away Usagawa Rinne's soul, but it was because at that point the heart -- the sensory organ was already filled, so you had no choice but to construct a new sensory organ somewhere else, and also because you hid a fragment and restored a life -- That's right, isn't it? But the emergency vessel had a serious reaction, right?"

	Ame talked without pause, and then sneered. Mina gritted her teeth while seeming confused, looking at the smile ~~face~~ that seemed to be saying, "Your abilities are only at this level?"		Ame talked without pause, and then sneered. Mina gritted her teeth while seeming confused, looking at the smile that seemed to be saying, "Your abilities are only at this level?"

	She probably wanted to hide here for a while, and wait for her body to restore to a level suitable for the sensory organ. However --		She probably wanted to hide here for a while, and wait for her body to restore to a level suitable for the sensory organ. However --
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	Took the form of giant sickles.		Took the form of giant sickles.

	"You also regret it, right? Because if you die here, you won't be able to ~~the~~ see my wonderful new world."		"You also regret it, right? Because if you die here, you won't be able to see my wonderful new world."

	"Stop ~~thinking you're~~ God, you blemish!"		"Stop pretending to be God, you blemish!"

	That word --		That word --
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	Saibara Mina's head flew.		Saibara Mina's head flew.



	Because Sakaki refused to trust the moving company, and instead chose to inconspicuously move into Rinne's home, Guriko helped out until it was dark.		Because Sakaki refused to trust the moving company, and instead chose to inconspicuously move into Rinne's home, Guriko helped out until it was dark.
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	That was the choice the man with wolf-like eyes had forcefully pointed out to her before her fight with Sterilization Disinfection. To live as a human, or to live as a monster? She who chose to live as a human, received nothing but painful defeat.		That was the choice the man with wolf-like eyes had forcefully pointed out to her before her fight with Sterilization Disinfection. To live as a human, or to live as a monster? She who chose to live as a human, received nothing but painful defeat.

	That's enough.		That was enough.

	That's enough, Guriko thought.		That was enough, Guriko thought.

	"Sakaki's protecting Rinne's body, so I'm not needed here."		"Sakaki's protecting Rinne's body, so I'm not needed here."
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	''Even if this body is broken to pieces."		''Even if this body is broken to pieces."

	Throwing off her reluctance to leave, Guriko turned her back to the building with her head lowered. The right arm that was completely annihilated by Sterilization Disinfection could not be returned even with an Apple's power. For all her numerous years -- those ~~were maddengly~~ long years -- she had lived using both her arms, and with only one left she could not balance herself well.		Throwing off her reluctance to leave, Guriko turned her back to the building with her head lowered. The right arm that was completely annihilated by Sterilization Disinfection could not be returned even with an Apple's power. For all her numerous years -- those maddeningly long years -- she had lived using both her arms, and with only one left she could not balance herself well.

	Rinne and Sakaki were the same. Now, without Rinne, if she stayed here she didn't think she could live properly.		Rinne and Sakaki were the same. Now, without Rinne, if she stayed here she didn't think she could live properly.

	She might as well be alone, without causing problems for others she should just live in the darkness.		She might as well be alone; without causing problems for others she should just live in the darkness.

	"Are you trying to become a monster again?"		"Are you trying to become a monster again?"