Mushi:Vol3 Ch1 - Revision history

Brynhilde at 11:31, 20 November 2014

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	"Nn -" The monster walked over, and heard a voice. It was like a young boy's, but listening carefully, it could tell that the speaker was actually female. In a guilt-free voice, "Ah, man. This thing's so - what's the word, novel? <span id="Konnyaku">[[Mushi:Vol3_TLnotes#Konnyaku\|Konnyaku]] jelly? Is it konnyaku or jelly? Mmm, what a novelty... I need to try eating every once in a while."		"Nn -" The monster walked over, and heard a voice. It was like a young boy's, but listening carefully, it could tell that the speaker was actually female. In a guilt-free voice, "Ah, man. This thing's so - what's the word, novel? <span id="Konnyaku">[[Mushi:Vol3_TLnotes#Konnyaku\|Konnyaku]] jelly? Is it konnyaku or jelly? Mmm, what a novelty... I need to try eating every once in a while."

			[[Image:Mtm3_chap2.jpg\|125px\|thumb\|Guriko]]

	She seemed to be eating, what with the clanking of cups and plates and that contemplating voice.		She seemed to be eating, what with the clanking of cups and plates and that contemplating voice.

Brynhilde at 03:14, 20 November 2014

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	== '''Night 1: Black Dragon Black Snake Black Rat ==		== '''Night 1: Black Dragon Black Snake Black Rat''' ==

	(Omitted) -- Earlier, we discussed how many of the myths and tales in this world share similarities, and the universal ideas underlying them all. Here, I want to emphasize again that the similarities and common ideas between those myths come from the fact that the basic human psyche (the subconscious, or you could say the original ego) is the same for everyone.		(Omitted) -- Earlier, we discussed how many of the myths and tales in this world share similarities, and the universal ideas underlying them all. Here, I want to emphasize again that the similarities and common ideas between those myths come from the fact that the basic human psyche (the subconscious, or you could say the original ego) is the same for everyone.

AlfheimWanderer at 17:13, 16 November 2014

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AlfheimWanderer at 17:12, 16 November 2014

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AlfheimWanderer: /* Night 1: Black Dragon Black Snake Black Rat */

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Night 1: Black Dragon Black Snake Black Rat

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CBuHoKoT: Mina->Mitsuki

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Mina->Mitsuki

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	"Ahaha, I lost."		"Ahaha, I lost."

	Saibara ~~Mina~~, who had become a devastated mess thanks to that fall, laughed open-heartedly.		Saibara Mitsuki, who had become a devastated mess thanks to that fall, laughed open-heartedly.

	"Hee." She got up as if nothing happened. Her flesh was absolutely squashed, she bled profusely, a number of her bones stuck out of her skin and her face was also deformed.		"Hee." She got up as if nothing happened. Her flesh was absolutely squashed, she bled profusely, a number of her bones stuck out of her skin and her face was also deformed.

CBuHoKoT at 05:53, 22 September 2014

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	It seemed the body would react out of its own will to her slightest frustration, cry, or injury, making him suffer too. And there was her ability to manipulate wind. Even "Mitaka" did not understand the basis of that ability.		It seemed the body would react out of its own will to her slightest frustration, cry, or injury, making him suffer too. And there was her ability to manipulate wind. Even "Mitaka" did not understand the basis of that ability.

	As for the other one, how should he put it, it was a girl who ~~seemed~~ seemed to transcend this mortal world -		As for the other one, how should he put it, it was a girl who seemed to transcend this mortal world -

	"It hurts." She lifted her right arm and made a pose.		"It hurts." She lifted her right arm and made a pose.

Brynhilde at 07:58, 6 September 2014

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	6. <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title\|Ultimate Shield\|The Weakest}}</span>/Devil. False prophet. (Neither a lesson nor a judgement. God's attack on humanity.)		6. <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title\|Ultimate Shield\|The Weakest}}</span>/Devil. False prophet. (Neither a lesson nor a judgement. God's attack on humanity.)

	7. God ~~Insect~~ Emperor/Mark of the beast. Armageddon. (The final battle, end of the world.)		7. God Mushi Emperor/Mark of the beast. Armageddon. (The final battle, end of the world.)


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	"Ahh. You do not need to be so worried about me. I am a timid coward who cries a lot, and that is why I am called <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title\|Melodia Noise\|Tear Song}}</span>."		"Ahh. You do not need to be so worried about me. I am a timid coward who cries a lot, and that is why I am called <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title\|Melodia Noise\|Tear Song}}</span>."

	In that string of unexplained terms, Guriko recognized a few words. That is - a few months back, Sterilization Disinfection had said those words. God ~~Insect~~ Emperor, Unpleasant Counter-current, Single Room, <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title\|Ultimate Shield\|The Weakest}}</span>, <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title\|Poison\|Catastrophe}}</span>, <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title\|Melodia Noise\|Tear Song}}</span>.		In that string of unexplained terms, Guriko recognized a few words. That is - a few months back, Sterilization Disinfection had said those words. God Mushi Emperor, Unpleasant Counter-current, Single Room, <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title\|Ultimate Shield\|The Weakest}}</span>, <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title\|Poison\|Catastrophe}}</span>, <span style="text-decoration: underline">{{H:title\|Melodia Noise\|Tear Song}}</span>.

	"Are you the same as Sterilization Disinfection?" Guriko thought of that fearsome woman, and held onto her shoulder to which no arm was attached.		"Are you the same as Sterilization Disinfection?" Guriko thought of that fearsome woman, and held onto her shoulder to which no arm was attached.

Brynhilde at 03:50, 27 May 2014

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	She thought of those important people who were not by her side, and whom she may never see again.		She thought of those important people who were not by her side, and whom she may never see again.

	Tear out the heart, or take it after dealing a severe wound – those some of the few methods to take Apples. Yet Guriko could not imagine herself doing such things to humans she did not know.		Tear out the heart, or take it after dealing a severe wound – those are some of the few methods to take Apples. Yet Guriko could not imagine herself doing such things to humans she did not know.

	But…		But…
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	“I’ve already decided to become a monster.”		“I’ve already decided to become a monster.”

	Guriko~~, alone,~~ quietly murmured.		Alone, Guriko quietly murmured.

Brynhilde at 07:49, 5 February 2014

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	"And then? Did you find what you were looking for, Yono?"		"And then? Did you find what you were looking for, Yono?"

	Far away from Kannonsakazaki, it was the road she had long ago walked with the companions who had given her their Apples and then disappeared - Kudan and Kirigirisu. Guriko thought that if she traced her journey with those two, who had known so much more than herself, something would come out of it. But she didn't find anything noteworthy. In the end, she came to the place where she died, where a gloomy man awaited her.		Far away from Kannonsakazaki, it was the road she had long ago walked with the companions who had given her their Apples and then disappeared - <span id="Kudan and Kirigirisu">[[Mushi:Vol3_TLnotes#Kudan and Kirigirisu\|Kudan and Kirigirisu]]</span>. Guriko thought that if she traced her journey with those two, who had known so much more than herself, something would come out of it. But she didn't find anything noteworthy. In the end, she came to the place where she died, where a gloomy man awaited her.

	"Zekiguchi Nashinori."		"Zekiguchi Nashinori."