Mushi:Vol4 Finale - Revision history

Brynhilde at 01:18, 20 December 2016

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	"... Meat Doll?"		"... Meat Doll?"
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Kemm at 17:49, 24 August 2015

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	Joker felt very pleased. It was so pleasing to push her opponents into a corner and taunt them with words, then behold the expressions of despair on their faces.		Joker felt very pleased. It was so pleasing to push her opponents into a corner and taunt them with words, then behold the expressions of despair on their faces.

	Joker, extremely excited, began to talk unnecessarily again: "These are the children of the previous {{Furigana\|Catastrophe\|Poison}], who inherited {{Furigana\|Catastrophe\|Poison}]'s sensory organ."		Joker, extremely excited, began to talk unnecessarily again: "These are the children of the previous {{Furigana\|Catastrophe\|Poison}}, who inherited {{Furigana\|Catastrophe\|Poison}}'s sensory organ."

	Breaksun Hanselmine had seventy-seven younger sisters and sixty-six younger brothers, but no older siblings at all. There were fifty-five women she called 'Mother', but she had only one father.		Breaksun Hanselmine had seventy-seven younger sisters and sixty-six younger brothers, but no older siblings at all. There were fifty-five women she called 'Mother', but she had only one father.

	"The {{Furigana\|Catastrophe\|Poison}] of the previous generation was a man. In order to increase the number of humans with enormous sensory organs, he copulated with women all over the world, and sired many children. They are all here - one-hundred-and-forty-three humans with huge sensory organs. I used God Mushi Emperor to gather the capacity of all these organs, and transplanted them into my body."		"The {{Furigana\|Catastrophe\|Poison}} of the previous generation was a man. In order to increase the number of humans with enormous sensory organs, he copulated with women all over the world, and sired many children. They are all here - one-hundred-and-forty-three humans with huge sensory organs. I used God Mushi Emperor to gather the capacity of all these organs, and transplanted them into my body."

	There were girls crying and screaming, boys with smiles on their faces, youths who muttered crazed words under their breath, and babies who rolled their eyes in a comatose state.		There were girls crying and screaming, boys with smiles on their faces, youths who muttered crazed words under their breath, and babies who rolled their eyes in a comatose state.
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	They were all Breaksun's siblings - they were humans born and bred with no other purpose but to be storage space for Apples.		They were all Breaksun's siblings - they were humans born and bred with no other purpose but to be storage space for Apples.

	"There are also people amongst these humans who can store an incredible amount of energy within them after receiving a Greater Fragment. The eldest daughter of the previous {{Furigana\|Catastrophe\|Poison}], Breaksun Hanselmine, was especially named 'Lovesong'. As {{Furigana\|Catastrophe\|Poison}] is capable of twisting cause and effect and hiding her presence, all the fragments we have ever gathered from all over the world throughout these centuries were all combined together and kept within her body."		"There are also people amongst these humans who can store an incredible amount of energy within them after receiving a Greater Fragment. The eldest daughter of the previous {{Furigana\|Catastrophe\|Poison}}, Breaksun Hanselmine, was especially named 'Lovesong'. As {{Furigana\|Catastrophe\|Poison}} is capable of twisting cause and effect and hiding her presence, all the fragments we have ever gathered from all over the world throughout these centuries were all combined together and kept within her body."

	"You - "		"You - "

Brynhilde at 03:14, 24 August 2015

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CBuHoKoT: Changed Mina->Mitsuki (looks like a typo)

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Changed Mina->Mitsuki (looks like a typo)

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	"What - what is this? No way. I don't want this!"		"What - what is this? No way. I don't want this!"

	~~Mina~~ shook her head and stretched her hands out in a panic as she screamed: "I can't see anything! I can't hear anything - I can't even feel anything with my skin. Ahhh. Where am I?"		Mitsuki shook her head and stretched her hands out in a panic as she screamed: "I can't see anything! I can't hear anything - I can't even feel anything with my skin. Ahhh. Where am I?"

	~~Mina~~ was shaking badly and sank into a state of panic.		Mitsuki was shaking badly and sank into a state of panic.

	"Where am I!? Where is anybody? Ahhhhhh!"		"Where am I!? Where is anybody? Ahhhhhh!"
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	''See - it was easy.''		''See - it was easy.''

	~~Mina~~'s body flew out of the window and landed with a bump. She rolled and bounced off the ground, then remained still in a puddle of blood.		Mitsuki's body flew out of the window and landed with a bump. She rolled and bounced off the ground, then remained still in a puddle of blood.

Brynhilde at 04:12, 10 August 2015

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Brynhilde at 07:37, 8 August 2015

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Brynhilde at 07:36, 8 August 2015

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	“I’m surprised. Ganko. You know about games too? I feel you are very behind the times. Even I didn’t know stuff like video games existed until Breako told me.”		“I’m surprised. Ganko. You know about games too? I feel you are very behind the times. Even I didn’t know stuff like video games existed until Breako told me.”

	“How rude. I’m very experienced with games. I’ve played the initial <span id="FC">[[Mushi:Vol4_TLnotes#FC and SFC\|FC~~]]</span>~~ and even the SFC that followed it.”		“How rude. I’m very experienced with games. I’ve played the initial <span id="FC ">[[Mushi:Vol4_TLnotes#FC and SFC\|FC and even the SFC that followed it]]</span>.”

	“… big sis, what’s a FC?”		“… big sis, what’s a FC?”

Brynhilde at 07:35, 8 August 2015

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	“I’m surprised. Ganko. You know about games too? I feel you are very behind the times. Even I didn’t know stuff like video games existed until Breako told me.”		“I’m surprised. Ganko. You know about games too? I feel you are very behind the times. Even I didn’t know stuff like video games existed until Breako told me.”

	“How rude. I’m very experienced with games. I’ve played the initial FC and even the SFC that followed it.”		“How rude. I’m very experienced with games. I’ve played the initial <span id="FC">[[Mushi:Vol4_TLnotes#FC and SFC\|FC]]</span> and even the SFC that followed it.”

	“… big sis, what’s a FC?”		“… big sis, what’s a FC?”

CBuHoKoT at 10:40, 23 June 2015

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	Although he spoke rudely, he behaved in a very kind way.		Although he spoke rudely, he behaved in a very kind way.

	She could tell even from before that this boy was not a bad person. If they asked him to help Rinne, then he would do the best within his ability. That was what Guriko thought as Kajiri looked far into the distance, fingering the crucifix hanging off his neck. “My abilities feel like those that can modify things. They are different from {{Furigana\|The Weakest\|Ultimate Shield}'s}, and isn’t limited to modification of the flesh. Hmm – how should I say this – it’s something like playing with concepts.”		She could tell even from before that this boy was not a bad person. If they asked him to help Rinne, then he would do the best within his ability. That was what Guriko thought as Kajiri looked far into the distance, fingering the crucifix hanging off his neck. “My abilities feel like those that can modify things. They are different from {{Furigana\|The Weakest\|Ultimate Shield}}'s, and isn’t limited to modification of the flesh. Hmm – how should I say this – it’s something like playing with concepts.”

	It seemed that even he couldn’t explain it properly himself. He tilted his head a little and started to demonstrate, his face full of seriousness.		It seemed that even he couldn’t explain it properly himself. He tilted his head a little and started to demonstrate, his face full of seriousness.

Brynhilde at 08:01, 23 June 2015

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