OreShura: Volume 1 Chapter 8 - Revision history

Cautr: Cautr moved page Ore no Kanojo to Osananajimi ga Shuraba Sugiru:Volume 1 Chapter 8 to OreShura: Volume 1 Chapter 8: Got approval.

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Cautr moved page Ore no Kanojo to Osananajimi ga Shuraba Sugiru:Volume 1 Chapter 8 to OreShura: Volume 1 Chapter 8: Got approval.

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Cautr at 21:58, 19 November 2013

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	"Stupid, stupid idiot, Ei-kun is an idiot...!"		"Stupid, stupid idiot, Ei-kun is an idiot...!"

	Like a night that ~~suddenly became~~ popular, she ~~continued to be angry at~~ me.		Like the night when she decided that she wanted to become popular, she called me a bunch of bad names.

	Her voice was like a howling animal, and presently seemed overcome by puppy-like weakness.		Her voice was like a howling animal, and presently seemed overcome by puppy-like weakness.

Cautr at 20:17, 17 November 2013

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	''Did I do anything to hurt Chiwa?''		''Did I do anything to hurt Chiwa?''

	''Indeed, ever since the establishment of the ~~jien otsu~~, everything I did was for myself. I won’t deny that.''		''Indeed, ever since the establishment of the Jien-Otsu, everything I did was for myself. I won’t deny that.''

	''But it was also for the sake of Chiwa.''		''But it was also for the sake of Chiwa.''

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OmgNoPls: Changed word choices, grammar fixes, spelling fixes, some sentence structure edits

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	Sunday passed, and soon it was ~~Monday~~ after school:		Sunday passed, and soon it was after school on Monday:

	After two days of not ~~coming~~ to the clubroom, I saw huge vivid words written on the whiteboard.		After two days of not going to the clubroom, I saw huge vivid words written on the whiteboard.

	"The time has come!"		"The time has come!"
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	"Huh?"		"Huh?"

	"Since the last two incidents, the Sakagami-senpai’s love points must have risen a lot. According to my calculations, he should have entered "completely-smitten" level."		"Since the last two incidents, the Sakagami-senpai’s love points must have risen a lot. According to my calculations, he should have entered the "completely-smitten" level."

	Masuzu’s bogus explanations...		Masuzu’s bogus explanations...

	"No matter what you say, it’s too ~~fast~~, right? Last time, everyone said it was just a funny skit."		"No matter what you say, it’s too soon, right? Last time, everyone said it was just a funny skit."

	"Eeeh! Really?"		"Eeeh! Really?"
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	I hastily stopped and listened to Masuzu:		I hastily stopped and listened to Masuzu:

	"Even if the skit was really popular, it’s not necessarily linked to emotional love. Moreover, he’s a very popular senpai, and is always surrounded by many girls? I don’t think he will be immediately ~~hooked~~."		"Even if the skit was really popular, it’s not necessarily linked to emotional love. Moreover, he’s a very popular senpai, and is always surrounded by many girls. I don’t think he will be immediately enticed."

	Since it is a confession, it is necessary prepare oneself to succeed.		Since it is a confession, it is necessary prepare oneself to succeed.

	If she is rejected, it will ~~all return~~ to square one, and it would have been just a long detour.		If she is rejected, we will be back to square one, and there would have been just a long detour.

	"What you say seems reasonable."		"What you say seems reasonable."
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	"Eita-kun, what’s your estimated success rate?"		"Eita-kun, what’s your estimated success rate?"

	"At most one or two percent."		"At most, one or two percent."

	"We’ll want at least five percent before we can hope to succeed. We’ll have to work harder, and think of a campaign strategy --"		"We’ll want at least five percent before we can hope to succeed. We’ll have to work harder, and think of a campaign strategy --"
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	Indeed, Chiwa was very nervous and uneasy when she was on the roof.		Indeed, Chiwa was very nervous and uneasy when she was on the roof.

	"That’s not a problem! I do not have stress disorder."		"That’s not a problem! I do not have a stress disorder."

	"Then why were you like that?"		"Then why were you like that?"
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	Chiwa nodded only slightly.		Chiwa nodded only slightly.

	After wasting a full two hours, the three of us ~~preserved~~ with polishing the contents of the letter until the last period before school ended.		After wasting a full two hours, the three of us persevered with polishing the contents of the letter until the last period before school ended.

	<pre>		<pre>
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	"But if you ask him to ignore it if he has no interest, or give up and forget about it, I feel like you give the impression you have no faith."		"But if you ask him to ignore it if he has no interest, or give up and forget about it, I feel like you give the impression you have no faith."

	"This is to so that when he leaves, he won’t get the impression he’s entangled in a mess. It’s easier to make it seem like you have the intent of “wanting to become a friend.”"		"This is to show that when he leaves, he won’t get the impression he’s entangled in a mess. It’s easier to make it seem like you have the intent of “wanting to become a friend.”"

	Huh.....		Huh.....
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	"H-hey, Chiwa......?"		"H-hey, Chiwa......?"

	"Idiot! I hate Ei-kun! ~~Hate~~ you the most! "		"Idiot! I hate Ei-kun! I hate you the most! "

	"What do you mean?"		"What do you mean?"
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	"No, because we haven’t eaten vegetables recently, I added the green beans."		"No, because we haven’t eaten vegetables recently, I added the green beans."

	"But this has turned into other kind of food!"		"But this has turned into some other kind of food!"

	Absolutely right......		Absolutely right......
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	"Leave it to me!"		"Leave it to me!"

	We ~~drank~~ a toast to fruit juice.		We gave a toast with fruit juice.

	We ate a food something like hamburger, and fought with each other.		We ate food that was something like hamburger, and fought with each other.

	"Once I go to high school, I need to find something even more interesting than Kendo. It has to be more fascinating and interesting to people than the Shinai!"		"Once I go to high school, I need to find something even more interesting than Kendo. It has to be more fascinating and interesting to people than the Shinai!"

Cloudii: /* Chapter 8 - A Childhood Friend's Tears are Mayhem */

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Chapter 8 - A Childhood Friend's Tears are Mayhem

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	After wasting a full two hours, the three of us preserved with polishing the contents of the letter until the last period before school ended.		After wasting a full two hours, the three of us preserved with polishing the contents of the letter until the last period before school ended.

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	Hello Sakagami Takuya Senpai:		Hello Sakagami Takuya Senpai:

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	Should that be the case, I will give up, and forget about it.		Should that be the case, I will give up, and forget about it.
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	"Don’t you feel like it’s very cold like this?"		"Don’t you feel like it’s very cold like this?"

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	I quickly ran to open the window.		I quickly ran to open the window.

	I saw her the right hand on crutches while she scratched her head with the left. She laughed, "Haahahaha." and said:		I saw her the right hand on crutches while she scratched her head with the left. She laughed, "Haahahaha," and said:

	"I came unconsciously."		"I came unconsciously."

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	"Huh?"		"Huh?"

	"Since the last two incidents, the Sakagami-senpai’s love points must have risen a lot. According to my calculations, he should have entered "completely-smitten" level. "		"Since the last two incidents, the Sakagami-senpai’s love points must have risen a lot. According to my calculations, he should have entered "completely-smitten" level."

	Masuzu’s bogus explanations...		Masuzu’s bogus explanations...
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	Why does she become nervous when she practices on me? We even intentionally decided to let her practice on a friend.		Why does she become nervous when she practices on me? We even intentionally decided to let her practice on a friend.

	In short, don’t confess directly. Put a "love letter in the shoe cupboard," like the old-fashioned way."		In short, don’t confess directly. Put a "love letter in the shoe cupboard," like the old-fashioned way.

	"Mhmm, this is a reliable method."		"Mhmm, this is a reliable method."
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	If you don’t have a similar kind of feeling, please disregard this letter.		If you don’t have a similar kind of feeling, please disregard this letter.

	Should that be the case, I will give up, and ~~forgot~~ about it.		Should that be the case, I will give up, and forget about it.


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	The results were immediately announced.		The results were immediately announced.

	As specified in the letter, Sakagami-~~senapi~~ came to the roof at exactly 5 o’clock--		As specified in the letter, Sakagami-senpai came to the roof at exactly 5 o’clock--

	"Well."		"Well."
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	"Huh?"		"Huh?"

	~~Senapi~~ faced the stunned Chiwa and said, smiling:		Senpai faced the stunned Chiwa and said, smiling:

	"I always thought Harusaki was very cute."		"I always thought Harusaki was very cute."
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	"A-altogether, it was great! You reached your goal."		"A-altogether, it was great! You reached your goal."

	~~Thousand~~ nodded slightly and said:		Chiwa nodded slightly and said:

	"I caught the school’s famous most famous senpai, so you could say I’m finally popular."		"I caught the school’s famous most famous senpai, so you could say I’m finally popular."
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	Eh......		Eh......

	Why was the atmosphere so difficult liven up?		Why was the atmosphere so difficult to liven up?

	"--This really doesn’t bother you?"		"--This really doesn’t bother you?"
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	"Well I’m relaxed, I can finally concentrate on studying."		"Well I’m relaxed, I can finally concentrate on studying."

	~~Chia~~ put down the chopsticks, even though she hadn’t even eaten half of her food.		Chiwa put down the chopsticks, even though she hadn’t even eaten half of her food.

	She lowered her head, and said:		She lowered her head, and said:
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	"P-please, please don’t cry. Okay? Chiwa, don’t cry."		"P-please, please don’t cry. Okay? Chiwa, don’t cry."

	"Impossible! ~~Idoit~~! Aaaghh!"		"Impossible! Idiot! Aaaghh!"

	Chiwa threw down those words, cried out, and stood up.		Chiwa threw down those words, cried out, and stood up.