OreShura: Volume 2 Chapter 6 - Revision history

Person72635 at 04:10, 30 May 2020

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	<span>paah!</span> Masuzu opened the notebook and held up to my face.		<span>paah!</span> Masuzu opened the notebook and held up to my face.

	She had ~~record~~ dense notes with meticulous handwriting.		She had recorded dense notes with meticulous handwriting.

Cautr: Cautr moved page Ore no Kanojo to Osananajimi ga Shuraba Sugiru:Volume 2 Chapter 6 to OreShura: Volume 2 Chapter 6: Got approval.

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Cautr moved page Ore no Kanojo to Osananajimi ga Shuraba Sugiru:Volume 2 Chapter 6 to OreShura: Volume 2 Chapter 6: Got approval.

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Cautr at 19:25, 15 November 2013

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	"Hard? ｢After school｣<span style="position:absolute; margin-top: -10px; font-size: 0.7em; margin-left: -65px;">Houkago</span> is just ｢AFTER SCHOOL<ref>Written in English.</ref>｣, right?"		"Hard? ｢After school｣<span style="position:absolute; margin-top: -10px; font-size: 0.7em; margin-left: -65px;">Houkago</span> is just ｢AFTER SCHOOL<ref>Written in English.</ref>｣, right?"

	"No, you missed the trick, Chiwa! It actually reads ｢after set on fire｣<span style="position:absolute; margin-top: -10px; font-size: 0.7em; margin-left: -70px;">Houkago</span>! So ｢AFTER BURNING<ref>Written in English. The reading "houkago" is the same, but the kanjis are different. 放課後 is "after school" and 放火後 is "after fire".</ref>｣ is the correct answer! " ~~<ref> . Needless to say, the second term is almost never used in common talk </ref>~~		"No, you missed the trick, Chiwa! It actually reads ｢after set on fire｣<span style="position:absolute; margin-top: -10px; font-size: 0.7em; margin-left: -70px;">Houkago</span>! So ｢AFTER BURNING<ref>Written in English. The reading "houkago" is the same, but the kanjis are different. 放課後 is "after school" and 放火後 is "after fire".</ref>｣ is the correct answer!"

	"[...] ...Fu~unm."		"[...] ...Fu~unm."

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	After understanding this point, I could only disregard the letter.		After understanding this point, I could only disregard the letter.

	If I didn’t have ~~react~~ at all and continued on with my usual life, the mysterious person would probably think they failed and gave up. Summer vacation was waiting right after final exams, so there wasn’t any reason to make a big deal out of this.		If I didn’t have reacted at all and continued on with my usual life, the mysterious person would probably think they failed and gave up. Summer vacation was waiting right after final exams, so there wasn’t any reason to make a big deal out of this.

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Okashira at 03:01, 17 June 2013

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	"Because I am very forgetful, I have to take notes."		"Because I am very forgetful, I have to take notes."

	<big>'''ゴゴゴゴ·······'''</big>		<big>'''ゴゴゴゴ·······'''</big><ref>This is the "sound effect" for a menacing atmosphere, it's using extremely frequently in Jojo</ref>

	I didn’t know where these JOJOJOJO-like sound effects were coming from.<ref>I love this. Basically the bit with the black notebook and the memo of bad deeds, is a reference to the fight between Jotaro Kujo (Star Platinium) & Steely Dan (Lovers), Dan took an hostage and forced Jotaro to go through a bunch of humiliating requests, at one point we learn that Jotaro was <i>writing down everything</i>, which is from where this scene takes inspiration, even the dialog is the same; specially in the part where the jig is up and the bad guy begs for forgiveness. In fact, in the manga Eita is drawn like Steely Dan for a few panels. In Jojo, this happens at the start of volume 18</ref>		I didn’t know where these JOJOJOJO-like sound effects were coming from.<ref>I love this. Basically the bit with the black notebook and the memo of bad deeds, is a reference to the fight between Jotaro Kujo (Star Platinium) & Steely Dan (Lovers), Dan took an hostage and forced Jotaro to go through a bunch of humiliating requests, at one point we learn that Jotaro was <i>writing down everything</i>, which is from where this scene takes inspiration, even the dialog is the same; specially in the part where the jig is up and the bad guy begs for forgiveness. In fact, in the manga Eita is drawn like Steely Dan for a few panels. In Jojo, this happens at the start of volume 18</ref>

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	"W-wait! Give me a moment, Akishino!"		"W-wait! Give me a moment, Akishino!"

	"No, I want you to call me ｢Hime｣ like you did in the past." <ref>She writes here "Hime" in katakana, Hime can have many connotations for her (like, Hime means "princess", fitting her burning prin princess" deal or a short version of her name "Himeka")</ref>		"No, I want you to call me ｢Hime｣ like you did in the past." <ref>She writes here "Hime" in katakana, Hime can have many connotations for her (like, Hime means "princess", fitting her "burning prin princess" deal or a short version of her name "Himeka")</ref>

	"W-W-Well, Hime, how do you know the thing about ｢Holy Dragon Knight of Dawn｣?!"		"W-W-Well, Hime, how do you know the thing about ｢Holy Dragon Knight of Dawn｣?!"

Okashira at 02:57, 17 June 2013

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	There’s even a ｢♥｣ letter?		There’s even a ｢♥｣ letter?

	"I am called Akishino Himeka in this world, but my real name is ｢HIMEKA • Sei • HEAVENSRAIN｣<ref>Sei is written with 静 or the kanji of "~~quite~~"</ref>. And ---"		"I am called Akishino Himeka in this world, but my real name is ｢HIMEKA • Sei • HEAVENSRAIN｣<ref>Sei is written with 静 or the kanji of "quiet"</ref>. And ---"

	The girl who called herself Himeka mustered a noise through her nose, and very proudly said:		The girl who called herself Himeka mustered a noise through her nose, and very proudly said:

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	If it wasn’t Chiwa, then I had to give up. I had no clue about the ｢bind ourselves together again｣, so of course I had not ｢come to a conclusion｣ about this matter.		If it wasn’t Chiwa, then I had to give up. I had no clue about the ｢bind ourselves together again｣, so of course I had not ｢come to a conclusion｣ about this matter.

	"Maybe it really ~~was~~ just a prank after all?......"		"Maybe it was really just a prank after all?......"

	I had no choice but go back and reconsider the possibility I had initially rejected.		I had no choice but to go back and reconsider the possibility I had initially rejected.

	Because the writing was so mystifyingly complicated, I had assumed it must have been a real love letter. But if I thought about it carefully, it still could have been a trap to make me think Chiwa wrote it. They probably wanted to make fun of me and stage an embarrassing dilemma between Masuzu and Chiwa. If that were the case, it made sense. My recent actions probably pleased them a lot.		Because the writing was so mystifyingly complicated, I had assumed it must have been a real love letter. But if I thought about it more carefully, it still could have been a trap to make me think that Chiwa wrote it. They probably wanted to make fun of me and stage an embarrassing dilemma between Masuzu and Chiwa. If that were the case, it made sense. My recent actions probably pleased them a lot.

	After understanding this point, I could only disregard the letter.		After understanding this point, I could only disregard the letter.

	If I didn’t have ~~any reaction~~ and ~~went~~ on with my usual life, the mysterious person would probably think they failed and ~~give~~ up. Summer vacation was waiting right after final exams, so there wasn’t any reason to make a big deal out of this.		If I didn’t have react at all and continued on with my usual life, the mysterious person would probably think they failed and gave up. Summer vacation was waiting right after final exams, so there wasn’t any reason to make a big deal out of this.


	Thus, final exams started, and I concentrated all of my energy on the tests. Even Jien-otsu activities were suspended~~, and it~~'s been long since I immersed myself in a daily life of only studying. Thanks to this, I had a very good feeling about exams, and I could probably keep my rank as number one in the class. But just when I started feeling relieved ---		Thus, final exams started, and I concentrated all of my energy on the tests. Even Jien-otsu activities were suspended. It's been a long time since I immersed myself in a daily life of only studying. Thanks to this, I had a very good feeling about exams, and I could probably keep my rank as number one in the class. But just when I started feeling relieved ---

	Monday morning, the week ~~just~~ after exams ended.		Monday morning, the week after exams ended.

	After I went to school with Chiwa and opened my shoe ~~cupboard…~~.		After I went to school with Chiwa and opened my shoe cupboard...

	<pre>		<pre>
	--- I cannot bear it. I want to see you.		--- I cannot bear it. I want to see you.

	--- Today after school, I will wait for you at the roof.		--- Today after school, I will wait for you on the roof.
	</pre>		</pre>

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	I took out my cellphone to check the time, and it was just about four o’clock in the afternoon. Because the letter only said, ｢after school｣, I didn’t know when the other person would come. Earlier I had checked all around the roof, but there was no sign of anyone hiding. There is only one entrance to roof, so if I just watched there, they would probably come from there.		I took out my cellphone to check the time, and it was just about four o’clock in the afternoon. Because the letter only said, ｢after school｣, I didn’t know when the other person would come. Earlier I had checked all around the roof, but there was no sign of anyone hiding. There is only one entrance to roof, so if I just watched there, they would probably come from there.

	After ~~for~~ about five minutes, the wind started blowing stronger again ---		After about five minutes, the wind started blowing stronger again ---

	The rusted iron door slowly opened.		The rusted iron door slowly opened.
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	She was wearing our school uniform, although I did not know why she was wearing the winter uniform.		She was wearing our school uniform, although I did not know why she was wearing the winter uniform.

	While I was ~~confused about~~ how to react, the girl quickly walked up to me. I thought she was going to say something to me, but she just quietly held out a portable game console from her chest.		While I was unsure of how to react, the girl quickly walked up to me. I thought she was going to say something to me, but she just quietly held out a portable game console from her chest.

	Then the background music to the role-playing game practically everyone knew started playing on the roof.		Then the background music to the role-playing game practically everyone knew started playing on the roof.
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	The crown of her head was a kind of ｢doll-like｣ hair that was very rare nowadays. With her moist shining black hair, just considering her dark hair could increase her cuteness level by 500%. But if you looked at this girl under the sunlight, she looked absolutely delicate and adorable, especially her big watery eyes that could impress anyone. The wind blowing her long eyelashes made her appearance quite beautiful.		The crown of her head was a kind of ｢doll-like｣ hair that was very rare nowadays. With her moist shining black hair, just considering her dark hair could increase her cuteness level by 500%. But if you looked at this girl under the sunlight, she looked absolutely delicate and adorable, especially her big watery eyes that could impress anyone. The wind blowing her long eyelashes made her appearance quite beautiful.

	If only she ~~did not~~ lack a smile, she could probably be on par with Masuzu as a popular, glamorous maiden. However her expression was ~~completely~~ a "poker face", and I felt as if her eyes were out of focus, or filled with some kind of foolish atmosphere…. ~~was~~ she sleepy? It was exactly that ｢drowsy｣ feeling.		If only she didn't lack a smile, she could probably be on par with Masuzu as a popular, glamorous maiden. However her expression was a complete "poker face", and I felt as if her eyes were out of focus, or filled with some kind of foolish atmosphere…. Was she sleepy? It was exactly that ｢drowsy｣ feeling.

	At this ~~time~~, the girl handed me the game.		At this moment, the girl handed me the game.

	"Huh? W-what?"		"Huh? W-what?"
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	We both remained silent for over five minutes.		We both remained silent for over five minutes.

	There ~~wasn’t anyone~~ else on the roof.		There was no one else on the roof.

	"............"		"............"
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	"Ei-kun, what’s the meaning of this?"		"Ei-kun, what’s the meaning of this?"

	"N-N-n-no Chiwa! ~~Is this~~ is a trap! Yes, a trap!"		"N-N-n-no Chiwa! This is a trap! Yes, a trap!"

	"You went out with this girl before? Without telling me? While you where being nice to me, behind my back, hiding it from me, you two......? I-I really can’t believe iiiittttttttttttt!"		"You went out with this girl before? Without telling me? While you where being nice to me, behind my back, hiding it from me, you two......? I-I really can’t believe iiiittttttttttttt!"
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	Then I heard the sound of the door opening ---		Then I heard the sound of the door opening ---

	"<i>Ara Ara</i>, indeed 'a flower in each hand', Eita-kun." <ref>A flower in each hand is a saying which ~~represent~~ a girl in each arm, this has been used plenty of time in this series</ref>		"<i>Ara Ara</i>, indeed 'a flower in each hand', Eita-kun." <ref>A flower in each hand is a saying which represents a girl in each arm, this has been used plenty of time in this series</ref>

	With wind blowing in her silver hair, Natsukawa Masuzu appeared.		With wind blowing in her silver hair, Natsukawa Masuzu appeared.
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	"<i>Ara</i>. Oh, really?"		"<i>Ara</i>. Oh, really?"

	"She said was his ex-girlfriend! Did you know about this, Natsukawa?"		"She said she was his ex-girlfriend! Did you know about this, Natsukawa?"

	"No, this is my first time hearing it. This is very interesting."		"No, this is my first time hearing it. This is very interesting."
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	Eita-kun rejected my request for a kiss.		Eita-kun rejected my request for a kiss.

	Eita-kun kept staring me with vulgar eyes as I ~~done~~ my swimsuit.		Eita-kun kept staring me with vulgar eyes as I wore my swimsuit.

	Eita-kun had an ex-girlfriend. (NEW!)		Eita-kun had an ex-girlfriend. (NEW!)
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	<big>'''ゴゴゴゴ·······'''</big><ref>This is the "sound effect" for a menacing atmosphere, it's using extremely frequently in Jojo</ref>		<big>'''ゴゴゴゴ·······'''</big><ref>This is the "sound effect" for a menacing atmosphere, it's using extremely frequently in Jojo</ref>

	I didn’t know where these JOJOJOJO-like sound effects were coming from.<ref>I love this. Basically the bit with the black notebook and the memo of bad deeds, is a reference to the fight between Jotaro Kujo (Star Platinium) & Steely Dan (Lovers), Dan took an hostage and forced Jotaro to go through a bunch of humiliating requests, at one point we learn that Jotaro was <i>writing down everything</i>, which is from where this scene ~~takes~~ inspiration, even the dialog is the same; ~~specially~~ in the part where the jig is up and the bad guy begs for forgiveness. In fact, in the manga Eita is drawn like Steely Dan for a few panels. In Jojo, this happens at the start of volume 18</ref>		I didn’t know where these JOJOJOJO-like sound effects were coming from.<ref>I love this. Basically the bit with the black notebook and the memo of bad deeds, is a reference to the fight between Jotaro Kujo (Star Platinium) & Steely Dan (Lovers), Dan took an hostage and forced Jotaro to go through a bunch of humiliating requests, at one point we learn that Jotaro was <i>writing down everything</i>, which is from where this scene gets its inspiration, even the dialog is the same; especially in the part where the jig is up and the bad guy begs for forgiveness. In fact, in the manga Eita is drawn like Steely Dan for a few panels. In Jojo, this happens at the start of volume 18</ref>

	"Well, Ei-kun! Just give an honest confession!"		"Well, Ei-kun! Just give an honest confession!"
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	Masuzu suddenly began to fight with Chiwa, and the situation already appeared like a civil war.		Masuzu suddenly began to fight with Chiwa, and the situation already appeared like a civil war.

	With her rear end on the ground, Hime looked terrified as she ~~regarded~~ the two girls. This girl always had a deadpan expression, and this the first time ~~sings of~~ some kind of expression appeared. But that was understandable, since these two were quite terrifying.		With her rear end on the ground, Hime looked terrified as she stared at the two girls. This girl always had a deadpan expression, and this is the first time some kind of expression appeared. But that was understandable, since these two were quite terrifying.

	As a result, that pair of big watery eyes slowly began to produce tears ---		As a result, that pair of big watery eyes slowly began to produce tears ---
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	"Huph --- huph ---" Hime's shoulder moved up and down with her breath, and she glared at the two girls. It took an entire a minute before she regained her calm visage.		"Huph --- huph ---" Hime's shoulder moved up and down with her breath, and she glared at the two girls. It took an entire a minute before she regained her calm visage.

	After she returned ~~fully~~ to her original poker face, Hime asserted seriously:		After she fully returned to her original poker face, Hime asserted seriously;

	"What just happened… just act like you didn’t see anything"		"What just happened… just act like you didn’t see anything"