OreShura: Volume 5 Chapter 2 - Revision history

AJS90 at 08:52, 15 August 2014

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	Just when I disposed of my lunch at the cram school cafeteria—		Just when I disposed of my lunch at the cram school cafeteria—

	"Hey, Ta-kun, when you ~~are~~ going to break up with that girl?"		"Hey, Ta-kun, when are you going to break up with that girl?"

	Fuyuumi Ai asked this across from me while eating her bento, nearly causing me to drop my rice ball.		Fuyuumi Ai asked this across from me while eating her bento, nearly causing me to drop my rice ball.
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	As we meaninglessly exchanged repeated ｢Huh｣'s, Asoi Kaoru, who was sitting next to us, switched looking between the two of us.		As we meaninglessly exchanged repeated ｢Huh｣'s, Asoi Kaoru, who was sitting next to us, switched looking between the two of us.

	"What's Eita and Ai-chan talking about?"		"What are Eita and Ai-chan talking about?"

	''Don't leave me out of this''—Kaoru patted my shoulder. What was with this guy? He's so cute.		''Don't leave me out of this''—Kaoru patted my shoulder. What was with this guy? He's so cute.
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	Fuyuumi's back was very tight and straight. Was she nervous? Her expression was rather stiff.		Fuyuumi's back was very tight and straight. Was she nervous? Her expression was rather stiff.

	There were more than ten girls crammed in this room that was about the same size as the ｢Jien-Otsu｣ clubroom. I had heard the rumors before, but ~~the~~ really wasn't a single boy among the disciplinary committee. Since it literally was a matriarchy, it made a boy like me very uncomfortable.		There were more than ten girls crammed in this room that was about the same size as the ｢Jien-Otsu｣ clubroom. I had heard the rumors before, but there really wasn't a single boy among the disciplinary committee. Since it literally was a matriarchy, it made a boy like me very uncomfortable.

	"So, let's sit?"		"So, let's sit?"
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	However, her expression continued to be cold.		However, her expression continued to be cold.

	"Anyhow, I hope you understand my perspective. I dispatched a very important underclassman to an unknown club. It's very uneasy experience—"		"Anyhow, I hope you understand my perspective. I dispatched a very important underclassman to an unknown club. It's a very uneasy experience—"

	Her antenna hair wobbled from the wind that blew in from the window.		Her antenna hair wobbled from the wind that blew in from the window.
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	"I see."		"I see."

	From the disciplinary committee's perspective, we were the ~~one~~ who's dragged Fuyuumi in. Though to be honest, Fuyuumi jumped in herself and worsened the mayhem.		From the disciplinary committee's perspective, we were the ones who dragged Fuyuumi in. Though to be honest, Fuyuumi jumped in herself and worsened the mayhem.

	"Then, how can I prove it to you all that I won't put a hand on Fuyuumi?"		"Then, how can I prove it to you all that I won't put a hand on Fuyuumi?"
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	Senpai's face flushed red, but this time it was with a completely different feeling than earlier.		Senpai's face flushed red, but this time it was with a completely different feeling than earlier.

	"Is the reason why you wanted to monitor the Maiden's Club because of him? You're disciplinary committee member, but you've become captivated by a boy?"		"Is the reason why you wanted to monitor the Maiden's Club because of him? You're a disciplinary committee member, but you've become captivated by a boy?"

	Fuyuumi was like a soaked rabbit, and she trembled.<ref>Not sure what kind of idiom a soaked rabbit is, but that's what it says.</ref> Without any real comprehensibility, she tried to explain herself: ｢No, thats—｣｢That one...｣		Fuyuumi was like a soaked rabbit, and she trembled.<ref>Not sure what kind of idiom a soaked rabbit is, but that's what it says.</ref> Without any real comprehensibility, she tried to explain herself: ｢No, thats—｣｢That one...｣
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	"I said Ai-chan! Wait a moment!"		"I said Ai-chan! Wait a moment!"

	I didn't know if it was because of my shouts or because she's simply ran herself tired, but Fuyuumi finally stopped her steps ~~her~~ the flowerbed.		I didn't know if it was because of my shouts or because she's simply ran herself tired, but Fuyuumi finally stopped her steps at the flowerbed.

	We didn't talk for a while as we wiped our sweat and waited for our breaths to adjust.		We didn't talk for a while as we wiped our sweat and waited for our breaths to adjust.
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	I lightly patted Fuyuumi's arched back,		I lightly patted Fuyuumi's arched back,

	"Today, Senpai's head was also overflowing with blood, so so after a while bring it up with her again, okay?"		"Today, Senpai's head was also overflowing with blood, so after a while bring it up with her again, okay?"

	"I can't face them ever again."		"I can't face them ever again."
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	"All the effort I've spent developing the image of a disciplinary committee member went up in smoke today. I'm completely powerless. No one will listen to me anymore. Even if I step up and remind people, they won't follow the school rules, and the school will grow completely out of control. Everyone's going to butt heads and shout ｢Yahaa!｣ as they go to school!" <ref>The reference is to the manga, Fist of the North Star.</ref>		"All the effort I've spent developing the image of a disciplinary committee member went up in smoke today. I'm completely powerless. No one will listen to me anymore. Even if I step up and remind people, they won't follow the school rules, and the school will grow completely out of control. Everyone's going to butt heads and shout ｢Yahaa!｣ as they go to school!" <ref>The reference is to the manga, Fist of the North Star.</ref>

	That's way too pessimistic. I looks like her wound really was deep.		That's way too pessimistic. It looks like her wound really was deep.

	"Don't be that dejected. It's not like you."		"Don't be that dejected. It's not like you."
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	Even when I look at sweethearts who have a great relationship, I think, ｢They must be lying to each other behind their backs｣.		Even when I look at sweethearts who have a great relationship, I think, ｢They must be lying to each other behind their backs｣.

	I am twisted person who can only think like that.		I am a twisted person who can only think like that.

	"—Well, that being said."		"—Well, that being said."
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	Senpai was equally at a loss for words.		Senpai was equally at a loss for words.

	That being said, behind Senpai there were another ten or so disciplinary committee members. All of them had covered their mouths with their hands were blushing as they stared at us.		That being said, behind Senpai there were another ten or so disciplinary committee members. All of them had covered their mouths with their hands and were blushing as they stared at us.

	Fuyuumi trembled with fear and asked,		Fuyuumi trembled with fear and asked,
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	Ishige-senpai very attentively added the sound effect herself, and fainted.		Ishige-senpai very attentively added the sound effect herself, and fainted.

	The hair antenna wilted just like its master. The little thing ~~was~~ was stretching around earlier, so maybe it was some kind of unknown parasite.		The hair antenna wilted just like its master. The little thing was stretching around earlier, so maybe it was some kind of unknown parasite.

	"P-Please pull yourself together President!"		"P-Please pull yourself together President!"
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	"It's no good, she's suffered acute love poisoning!"		"It's no good, she's suffered acute love poisoning!"

	The committee members repeatedly tried to shake their senpai's body, and even ~~when~~ as far as to call it some strange disease.		The committee members repeatedly tried to shake their senpai's body, and even went as far as to call it some strange disease.

	Fuyuumi on the other hand—		Fuyuumi on the other hand—
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	"Understood, President!"		"Understood, President!"

	Faced with identical cry of the committee members, I interrupted, flustered.		Faced with an identical cry of the committee members, I interrupted, flustered.

	"W-Wait a moment! Why do you support it? It's fine if you just implicitly accept it!"		"W-Wait a moment! Why do you support it? It's fine if you just implicitly accept it!"

OhHaiThar: /* #2: Ai, Discipline and Love is Difficult to Manage */

2014-06-28T11:10:54Z

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2014-03-06T09:35:15Z

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Cloudii: /* #2: Ai, Discipline and Love is Difficult to Manage */

2014-03-03T03:36:12Z

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Cloudii at 02:59, 3 March 2014

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	Even when I look at sweethearts who have a great relationship, I think, ｢They must be lying to each other behind their backs｣.		Even when I look at sweethearts who have a great relationship, I think, ｢They must be lying to each other behind their backs｣.

	I a twisted person who can only think like that.		I am twisted person who can only think like that.

	"—Well, that being said."		"—Well, that being said."

Cloudii at 22:27, 2 March 2014

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	It was lunch break at summer cram school.		It was lunch break at summer cram school.
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	After Kaoru finished his strawberry milk, he used his handkerchief to wipe his mouth.		After Kaoru finished his strawberry milk, he used his handkerchief to wipe his mouth.

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	"If that thing is so important to you, wouldn't it be better if you didn't carry it around with you?"		"If that thing is so important to you, wouldn't it be better if you didn't carry it around with you?"
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	How did the entire school become involved in my mayhem?		How did the entire school become involved in my mayhem?

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Cloudii: complete~~

2014-03-02T22:24:29Z

complete~~

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	Although she possessed the air and merits of a rich girl, she had this one droopy strand of hair that stuck up (in other words, an ｢antenna｣), so it actually looked kind of funny. Like this, you could say instead of a ｢President｣, she's become a ｢Preside~｣. <ref>The Chinese TL references note says that the last syllable of "President" (ぃぃんちょぅ) was left out so it reads (ぃぃんょ). I have no clue what this is supposed to allude to, though. xD</ref>		Although she possessed the air and merits of a rich girl, she had this one droopy strand of hair that stuck up (in other words, an ｢antenna｣), so it actually looked kind of funny. Like this, you could say instead of a ｢President｣, she's become a ｢Preside~｣. <ref>The Chinese TL references note says that the last syllable of "President" (ぃぃんちょぅ) was left out so it reads (ぃぃんょ). I have no clue what this is supposed to allude to, though. xD</ref>

	This was the third-year president of the Hanenoyama High School disciplinary committee: Ishige Mari-~~senapi~~.		This was the third-year president of the Hanenoyama High School disciplinary committee: Ishige Mari-senpai.

	"Thank you for taking a trip out here. It must have been a hassle for Fuyuumi-san."		"Thank you for taking a trip out here. It must have been a hassle for Fuyuumi-san."

	"Please don't worry about us, Ishige-senpai!"		"Please don't worry about us, Ishige-senpai!"
	<!--Editors, try to make this as formal as possible. More literally, this is: "It's not big deal, Ishige-~~senapi~~!"-->		<!--Editors, try to make this as formal as possible. More literally, this is: "It's not big deal, Ishige-senpai!"-->

	Fuyuumi's back was very tight and straight. Was she nervous? Her expression was rather stiff.		Fuyuumi's back was very tight and straight. Was she nervous? Her expression was rather stiff.
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	Fuyuumi anxiously wrinkled her brow.		Fuyuumi anxiously wrinkled her brow.

	"Um, Ishige-~~senapi~~, you don't have to go to this extent, right?"		"Um, Ishige-senpai, you don't have to go to this extent, right?"

	"No! Fuyuumi-san! If we retreat now, it'll harm the disciplinary committee's reputation. I will definitely rout him for you to see!"		"No! Fuyuumi-san! If we retreat now, it'll harm the disciplinary committee's reputation. I will definitely rout him for you to see!"
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	Then, she lifted her head, and stared straight at Fuyuumi.		Then, she lifted her head, and stared straight at Fuyuumi.

	"Fuyuumi Ai-san, when you said, ｢Love does not have to have a reason｣, ~~where~~ you serious?"		"Fuyuumi Ai-san, when you said, ｢Love does not have to have a reason｣, were you serious?"

	Fuyuumi nodded.		Fuyuumi nodded.