OreShura: Volume 6 Chapter 0 - Revision history

Rxls at 19:35, 11 March 2019

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	==~~Chapter~~ 0: Relationship as fake lovers exposed is mayhem==		==#0: Relationship as fake lovers exposed is mayhem==

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Firephinx: /* Chapter 0: Relationship as fake lovers exposed is mayhem */

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	“What's wrong, Ei-kun? Is something on my face?		“What's wrong, Ei-kun? Is something on my face?

	Chiwa, who was locking the windows, ~~titled~~ her head and smiled.		Chiwa, who was locking the windows, tilted her head and smiled.

	“……oh, the chips you just ate stuck to your face.”		“……oh, the chips you just ate stuck to your face.”

Holdini: /* Chapter 0: Relationship as fake lovers exposed is mayhem */

2015-12-24T16:25:50Z

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	In the beginning I was anxious, but I got numb of it after a while. I always shut myself in my room, listening to music over my headphones to drown out their voices.		In the beginning I was anxious, but I got numb of it after a while. I always shut myself in my room, listening to music over my headphones to drown out their voices.

	However, during those lapses when one song stops, it was still possible to hear Dad’s excuses and Mom’s shouts. Their roles changed each day, and today it looked like it Mom was on the ~~offence~~. She was screaming something about Dad’s dishonesty and cheating.		However, during those lapses when one song stops, it was still possible to hear Dad’s excuses and Mom’s shouts. Their roles changed each day, and today it looked like it Mom was on the offense. She was screaming something about Dad’s dishonesty and cheating.

	It really was disheartening. My heart was already numb.		It really was disheartening. My heart was already numb.

	Mom ~~looked~~ really angry ~~at Dad’s lies~~, but to me, she wasn't very different. She said things like, “Mom and Dad will always be lovey-dovey! Ei-kun is the product of our love!” and so on when I was small. When I look at it now, wasn’t that a lie too?		Dad’s lies made Mom really angry, but to me, she wasn't very different. She said things like, “Mom and Dad will always be lovey-dovey! Ei-kun is the product of our love!”, and so on when I was small. When I look at it now, wasn’t that a lie too?

	If it's going to get exposed immediately, then don’t bother lying.		If it's going to get exposed immediately, then don’t bother lying.
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	From this ugly argument between the two, I should have learned this long ago.		From this ugly argument between the two, I should have learned this long ago.

	<i>I should’ve ~~understand~~ all this</i>.		<i>I should’ve understood all this</i>.

	—Easier said than done.		—Easier said than done.
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	Hime, still sitting on the floor, stared at us. Masuzu and I look back at her, unable to say anything.		Hime, still sitting on the floor, stared at us. Masuzu and I look back at her, unable to say anything.

	This lie that had been kept up for quite a ~~while—although~~ not perfectly, it managed to deceive Chiwa, Fuyuumi, and the rest of the student body into thinking that we are lovers. Unexpectedly, it was now exposed simply because Hime 'accidentally overheard' it.		This lie that had been kept up for quite a while, although not perfectly, managed to deceive Chiwa, Fuyuumi, and the rest of the student body into thinking that we are lovers. Unexpectedly, it was now exposed simply because Hime 'accidentally overheard' it.

	“Hey, president, what does it mean?”		“Hey, president, what does it mean?”
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	I think them raging was better than this. Hime questioning, Masuzu retorting, and other students and teachers running and turning this into a battlefield would have been better.		I think them raging was better than this. Hime questioning, Masuzu retorting, and other students and teachers running and turning this into a battlefield would have been better.

	But, the reality was,		But, the reality was:

	“Here, grab this.”		“Here, grab this.”
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	“Hey, calm down.”		“Hey, calm down.”

	“It’s outttttn! It's finally outtttttn! Aaaa, Akishino-san, who will she tell? Maybe she'll talk it over with her master Fuyuumi-san? Her relationship with Mana has recently been quite good right? Will she tell Harusaki-san too? Nooo, no, no, no, no, no, if Harusaki Chiwa learns this, then ~~this~~ everything will be over!”<ref>She switches to a childlike tone here. If you are wondering, Chiwa, Hime, Ai & Masuzu all have "childlike" tones and they are all different from each other</ref>		“It’s outttttn! It's finally outtttttn! Aaaa, Akishino-san, who will she tell? Maybe she'll talk it over with her master Fuyuumi-san? Her relationship with Mana has recently been quite good right? Will she tell Harusaki-san too? Nooo, no, no, no, no, no, if Harusaki Chiwa learns this, then everything will be over!”<ref>She switches to a childlike tone here. If you are wondering, Chiwa, Hime, Ai & Masuzu all have "childlike" tones and they are all different from each other</ref>


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	“Hmph! And what's with that?		“Hmph! And what's with that?

	Masuzu covered her face slightly with her left hand, raised her right shoulder, and spoke with a determined pose,		Masuzu covered her face slightly with her left hand, raised her right shoulder, and spoke with a determined pose.

	“I—am someone who would do anything to be your girlfriend!”		“I—am someone who would do anything to be your girlfriend!”
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	Masuzu said this after the school bell rang—but could we attend the school festival in this condition?		Masuzu said this after the school bell rang—but could we attend the school festival in this condition?

	On the surface, Jien-otsu was the same as it was during the first semester and the summer holidays, but the amount of landmines had increased. Hime discovering our lie was the largest one, and when that explodes, it'll start a chain reaction with the remaining hidden mines, completely ~~burning~~ down my high school life.		On the surface, Jien-otsu was the same as it was during the first semester and the summer holidays, but the amount of landmines had increased. Hime discovering our lie was the largest one, and when that explodes, it'll start a chain reaction with the remaining hidden mines. That will completely burn down my high school life.

	I had no choice but to be more wary than usual and continue my relationship with Masuzu carefully. As I hated love from the bottom of my heart, I had to continue to fake my relationship with this similarly anti-love woman.		I had no choice but to be more wary than usual and continue my relationship with Masuzu carefully. As I hated love from the bottom of my heart, I had to continue to fake my relationship with this similarly anti-love woman.

	But—I also found myself thinking, would Hime expose this to everybody and trigger all the landmines altogether? Since I didn’t have the courage to expose myself, if I could get Hime to do this, it would be a load off my chest.		But—I also found myself thinking, "would Hime expose this to everybody and trigger all the landmines altogether?" Since I didn’t have the courage to expose myself, if I could get Hime to do this, it would be a load off my chest.

	This way, I wouldn't need to lie to anyone anymore.		This way, I wouldn't need to lie to anyone anymore.

Timo at 09:15, 23 November 2014

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	:''1.A boyfriend used to ~~lie to~~ others, a fake lover.		:''1.A boyfriend used to deceive others, a fake lover.

	:''2.A human puppet for the sole sake of performing monyomonyo on.		:''2.A human puppet for the sole sake of performing monyomonyo on.
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	The more tricks we play, the more ~~stupid little~~ things will foil our plans.		The more tricks we play, the more petty things will foil our plans.

	—Eita, Regret of the Soul		—Eita, Regret of the Soul
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	It was a year before this one, during the spring of my third year of middle school.		It was a year before this one, during the spring of my third year of middle school.

	''“You ~~were always lying to~~ me, ~~weren’t~~ you?”''		''“You have been deceiving me from the start, haven’t you?”''

	''“There was that incident, and now there's this one. ~~Every single thing was~~ a lie!”''		''“There was that incident, and now there's this one. Everything is just a lie!”''

	The relationship between my parents who had a tensed bond since the year-end was worsening. Although there was an unspoken rule that they would control themselves when I was awake, it seemed like the arguments quickly picked up ~~during~~ the night.		The relationship between my parents who had a tensed bond since the year-end was worsening. Although there was an unspoken rule that they would control themselves when I was awake, it seemed like the arguments quickly picked up through the night.

	In the beginning I ~~had been~~ anxious, but I got numb of it after a while. I always shut myself in my room, listening to music over my headphones to drown out their voices.		In the beginning I was anxious, but I got numb of it after a while. I always shut myself in my room, listening to music over my headphones to drown out their voices.

	However, during those lapses when one song stops, it was still possible to hear Dad’s excuses and Mom’s shouts. Their roles changed each day, and today it looked like it was ~~Mom’s turn to attack~~. She was ~~shouting~~ about Dad’s dishonesty and cheating.		However, during those lapses when one song stops, it was still possible to hear Dad’s excuses and Mom’s shouts. Their roles changed each day, and today it looked like it Mom was on the offence. She was screaming something about Dad’s dishonesty and cheating.

	It really was disheartening. My heart was already ~~cold~~.		It really was disheartening. My heart was already numb.

	Mom looked really angry at Dad’s lies, but to me, she wasn't very different. She said things like,“Mom and Dad will always be lovey-dovey! Ei-kun is the product of our love!” and so on when I was small. When I look at it now, wasn’t that ~~all~~ a lie?		Mom looked really angry at Dad’s lies, but to me, she wasn't very different. She said things like, “Mom and Dad will always be lovey-dovey! Ei-kun is the product of our love!” and so on when I was small. When I look at it now, wasn’t that a lie too?

	If it's going to get exposed immediately, then don’t bother lying.		If it's going to get exposed immediately, then don’t bother lying.
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	From this ugly argument between the two, I should have learned this long ago.		From this ugly argument between the two, I should have learned this long ago.

	<i>I ~~was supposed to have learned~~</i>.		<i>I should’ve understand all this</i>.

	—Easier said than done.		—Easier said than done.

	At the start of the second semester of my first year of high school, I ~~was~~ faced ~~with~~ a serious situation.		At the start of the second semester of my first year of high school, I faced a serious situation.


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	After school, the corridor outside the auditorium had turned into a mayhem.		After school, the corridor outside the auditorium had turned into mayhem.

	“A fake boyfriend, what does it mean?”		“A fake boyfriend, what does it mean?”
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	Hime, still sitting on the floor, stared at us. Masuzu and I look back at her, unable to say anything.		Hime, still sitting on the floor, stared at us. Masuzu and I look back at her, unable to say anything.

	This lie that had been ~~skillfully maintained~~ for quite a while—although not perfectly, it ~~had deceived~~ Chiwa, Fuyuumi, and the rest of the student body that we ~~were~~ lovers. Unexpectedly, it was now exposed simply because Hime 'accidentally overheard' it.		This lie that had been kept up for quite a while—although not perfectly, it managed to deceive Chiwa, Fuyuumi, and the rest of the student body into thinking that we are lovers. Unexpectedly, it was now exposed simply because Hime 'accidentally overheard' it.

	“Hey, president, what does it mean?”		“Hey, president, what does it mean?”
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	I look at Masuzu instinctively.		I look at Masuzu instinctively.

	~~Looked~~ like she simply ~~planed~~ to cover this up again.		Looks like she simply planned to cover this up again.

	“Then what was this ‘fake boyfriend’ thing you were talking about?”		“Then what was this ‘fake boyfriend’ thing you were talking about?”
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	What were they doing? This tense atmosphere.		What were they doing? This tense atmosphere.

	I think raging was better than this. Hime questioning, Masuzu retorting, and other students and teachers running and turning this into a battlefield would have been better.		I think them raging was better than this. Hime questioning, Masuzu retorting, and other students and teachers running and turning this into a battlefield would have been better.

	But, the reality was,		But, the reality was,
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	“Hey, calm down.”		“Hey, calm down.”

	“It’s outttttn! It's finally outtttttn! Aaaa, Akishino-san, who will she tell? Maybe she'll talk it over with her master Fuyuumi-san? Her relationship with Mana has recently been quite good right? Will she tell Harusaki-san too? Nooo, no, no, no, no, no, if Harusaki Chiwa learns this, then this everything will be over!”<ref>She switches to a ~~child like~~ tone here. If you are wondering, Chiwa, Hime, Ai & Masuzu all have "~~child like~~" tones and they are all different from each other</ref>		“It’s outttttn! It's finally outtttttn! Aaaa, Akishino-san, who will she tell? Maybe she'll talk it over with her master Fuyuumi-san? Her relationship with Mana has recently been quite good right? Will she tell Harusaki-san too? Nooo, no, no, no, no, no, if Harusaki Chiwa learns this, then this everything will be over!”<ref>She switches to a childlike tone here. If you are wondering, Chiwa, Hime, Ai & Masuzu all have "childlike" tones and they are all different from each other</ref>


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	“Ca · lm · do · wn!”		“Ca • lm • do • wn!”

	I gripped Masuzu’s shoulder and glared at her face like we were butting foreheads.		I gripped Masuzu’s shoulder and glared at her face like we were butting foreheads.
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	“Hey, Hime, listen to me, just now what Masuzu said is—“		“Hey, Hime, listen to me, just now what Masuzu said is—“

	“It's not like that!”<ref>She denies it with a ~~child like~~ tone</ref>		“It's not like that!”<ref>She denies it with a childlike tone</ref>

	She was so loud it startled me.		She was so loud it startled me.
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	Masuzu said this after the school bell rang—but could we attend the school festival in this condition?		Masuzu said this after the school bell rang—but could we attend the school festival in this condition?

	On the surface, Jien-otsu was the same as it was during the first semester and the summer holidays, but the amount of landmines had increased. Hime discovering our lie was the largest ~~mine~~, and when that explodes, it'll start a chain reaction with the remaining hidden mines, completely burning down my high school life.		On the surface, Jien-otsu was the same as it was during the first semester and the summer holidays, but the amount of landmines had increased. Hime discovering our lie was the largest one, and when that explodes, it'll start a chain reaction with the remaining hidden mines, completely burning down my high school life.

	I had no choice but to be more wary than usual and continue my relationship with Masuzu carefully. As I hated love from the bottom of my heart, I had to continue to fake my relationship with this similarly anti-love woman.		I had no choice but to be more wary than usual and continue my relationship with Masuzu carefully. As I hated love from the bottom of my heart, I had to continue to fake my relationship with this similarly anti-love woman.

AJS90 at 06:27, 16 August 2014

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	This was not unreasonable. After all, at least Masuzu never looked down on Hime’s chuunibyou behavior by questioning “Isn’t this just your imagination?”		This was not unreasonable. After all, at least Masuzu never looked down on Hime’s chuunibyou behavior by questioning “Isn’t this just your imagination?”

	But, was it really okay to compare Hime’s chuunibyou and our fake relationship like they were same thing?		But, was it really okay to compare Hime’s chuunibyou and our fake relationship like they were the same thing?

	I didn't think so, and Hime probably felt similarly.		I didn't think so, and Hime probably felt similarly.
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	Hime walked in the opposite direction from the club room. There was a toilet over there, so she had probably intended to use the toilet when she walked out of the club room and unintentionally overheard us.		Hime walked in the opposite direction from the club room. There was a toilet over there, so she had probably intended to use the toilet when she walked out of the club room and unintentionally overheard us.

	After Masuzu confirmed that Hime disappeared at the corner———— She suddenly ~~throw~~ herself onto me in a hug.		After Masuzu confirmed that Hime disappeared at the corner———— She suddenly threw herself onto me in a hug.

OhHaiThar: /* Chapter 0: Relationship as fake lovers exposed is mayhem */

2014-07-05T04:56:21Z

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	It really was disheartening. My heart was already cold.		It really was disheartening. My heart was already cold.

	Mom looked really angry at Dad’s lies, but to me, she wasn't very different. She said things like “Mom and Dad will always be lovey-dovey!~~” “Ei~~-kun is the product of our love!” and so on when I was small~~, when~~ I look at it now, wasn’t that all a lie?		Mom looked really angry at Dad’s lies, but to me, she wasn't very different. She said things like,“Mom and Dad will always be lovey-dovey! Ei-kun is the product of our love!” and so on when I was small. When I look at it now, wasn’t that all a lie?

	If it's going to get exposed immediately, then don’t bother lying.		If it's going to get exposed immediately, then don’t bother lying.
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	If you're going to start lying, at least go through with it till the very end.		If you're going to start lying, at least go through with it till the very end.

	And if you ever get exposed, just ~~say~~ earnestly say, “I'm sorry”.		And if you ever get exposed, just earnestly say, “I'm sorry”.

	From this ugly argument between the two, I should have learned this long ago.		From this ugly argument between the two, I should have learned this long ago.
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	After school, the corridor outside the auditorium had turned into a mayhem.		After school, the corridor outside the auditorium had turned into a mayhem.

	“A ~~Fake~~ boyfriend, what does it mean?”		“A fake boyfriend, what does it mean?”

	Hime, still sitting on the floor, stared at us. Masuzu and I look back at her, unable to say anything.		Hime, still sitting on the floor, stared at us. Masuzu and I look back at her, unable to say anything.

	This lie that had been skillfully maintained for quite a while—although not perfectly, it had deceived Chiwa, Fuyuumi and the rest of the student body that we were lovers. Unexpectedly, it was now exposed simply because Hime ~~“accidentally overheard”~~ it.		This lie that had been skillfully maintained for quite a while—although not perfectly, it had deceived Chiwa, Fuyuumi, and the rest of the student body that we were lovers. Unexpectedly, it was now exposed simply because Hime 'accidentally overheard' it.

	“Hey, president, what does it mean?”		“Hey, president, what does it mean?”
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	''……which one is it…….''		''……which one is it…….''

	“This happened a few days after I started my relationship with Eita-kun. I felt the presence of a powerful ‘Dragon Aura’, and encountered an interface of the hyperdimensional thought entity who called himself ‘Pillar Man’<ref>柱の男 or Pillar Men aka "Man in the column" is a race of immortal beings which play an antagonistic role in the second part of Jojo</ref>. He came to warn me, ‘Kidou Eita is Burning Fighting Fighter, if you have a relationship with him, you will attract the enmity of the Wyverns and get into trouble’. But even then I could not give up on Eita-kun, and thus the man told ~~the~~ me this~~: '~~If that’s the case, you only need to chant ~~“fake boyfriend”~~ when Hermit Purple<ref> Old Joseph Joestar’s stand in JoJo’s Bizarre Adventure, it can read minds and use clairvoyance</ref> of the Wyverns uses illusionary power on ~~you’~~. And then—just a moment ago, we were under his illusionary power, you should understand this right?”		“This happened a few days after I started my relationship with Eita-kun. I felt the presence of a powerful ‘Dragon Aura’, and encountered an interface of the hyperdimensional thought entity who called himself ‘Pillar Man’<ref>柱の男 or Pillar Men aka "Man in the column" is a race of immortal beings which play an antagonistic role in the second part of Jojo</ref>. He came to warn me, ‘Kidou Eita is Burning Fighting Fighter, if you have a relationship with him, you will attract the enmity of the Wyverns and get into trouble’. But even then I could not give up on Eita-kun, and thus the man told me this, "If that’s the case, you only need to chant 'fake boyfriend' when Hermit Purple<ref> Old Joseph Joestar’s stand in JoJo’s Bizarre Adventure, it can read minds and use clairvoyance</ref> of the Wyverns uses illusionary power on you". And then—just a moment ago, we were under his illusionary power, you should understand this right?”

	''Ah, I remember.''		''Ah, I remember.''

	I remembered this was Hime's setting in the current world, kind of like ~~“Gaia”~~ theory.		I remembered this was Hime's setting in the current world, kind of like 'Gaia' theory.

	Although I almost forgot about this setting, Masuzu still remembered it quite clearly. She even managed to slip in some JoJo references.		Although I almost forgot about this setting, Masuzu still remembered it quite clearly. She even managed to slip in some JoJo references.
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	A smile which looked like a challenge, but also like an empty threat.		A smile which looked like a challenge, but also like an empty threat.

	“Nonsense~~, what~~ do you mean? Isn’t this what Akishino-san always says? You are the Burning Prin Princess, and the girlfriend of Burning Fighting Fighter Kidou-kun during his past life, right? Isn’t this the ‘truth’ you said over and over, right?”		“Nonsense? What do you mean? Isn’t this what Akishino-san always says? You are the Burning Prin Princess, and the girlfriend of Burning Fighting Fighter Kidou-kun during his past life, right? Isn’t this the ‘truth’ you said over and over, right?”

	Hime stared at Masuzu fiercely.		Hime stared at Masuzu fiercely.

	Her eyes showed fear……and, a very obvious ~~“anger”~~.		Her eyes showed fear……and, a very obvious 'anger'.

	Masuzu stared at her eyes calmly and said, “Then…… It's also true that I’m Eita-kun’s ‘girlfriend’. Let’s not talk about Harusaki-san and Fuyuumi-san, but you, the ‘ex-girlfriend’, should understand, right?”		Masuzu stared at her eyes calmly and said, “Then…… it's also true that I’m Eita-kun’s ‘girlfriend’. Let’s not talk about Harusaki-san and Fuyuumi-san, but you, the ‘ex-girlfriend’, should understand, right?”

	It would appear that Masuzu was offering a deal to Hime.		It would appear that Masuzu was offering a deal to Hime.
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	“That's exactly it, Himeka Sei Heavensrain.”		“That's exactly it, Himeka Sei Heavensrain.”

	Masuzu was helping Hime with her words…... though her expression looked to me ~~like~~ she was enduring pain.		Masuzu was helping Hime with her words…... though her expression looked to me as if she was enduring pain.

	''……what is this.''		''……what is this.''
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	I think raging was better than this. Hime questioning, Masuzu retorting, and other students and teachers running and turning this into a battlefield would have been better.		I think raging was better than this. Hime questioning, Masuzu retorting, and other students and teachers running and turning this into a battlefield would have been better.

	But, the reality was:		But, the reality was,

	“Here, grab this.”		“Here, grab this.”
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	I gripped Masuzu’s shoulder and glared at her face like we were butting foreheads.		I gripped Masuzu’s shoulder and glared at her face like we were butting foreheads.

	“You saw how Hime acted right? It doesn't look like she ~~won’t~~ tell anybody soon, right? Hime's not someone who would just give other people’s secrets away".		<!-- TLC check please-->
			“You saw how Hime acted right? It doesn't look like she'll tell anybody soon, right? Hime's not someone who would just give other people’s secrets away".

	“……really?”		“……really?”
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	“Hmph! And what's with that?		“Hmph! And what's with that?

	Masuzu covered her face slightly with her left hand, raised her right shoulder, and spoke with a determined pose:		Masuzu covered her face slightly with her left hand, raised her right shoulder, and spoke with a determined pose,

	“I—am someone who would do anything to be your girlfriend!”		“I—am someone who would do anything to be your girlfriend!”
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	“Hime, for having lied to you for so long, I’m really sorry!”		“Hime, for having lied to you for so long, I’m really sorry!”

	On behalf of me and my ~~“girlfriend”~~ who couldn’t be honest, I bowed deeply in apology.		On behalf of me and my 'girlfriend' who couldn’t be honest, I bowed deeply in apology.

	Hime rubbed her eyes nervously.		Hime rubbed her eyes nervously.
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	Although I went back to the clubroom with Hime, there weren’t any more club activities today.		Although I went back to the clubroom with Hime, there weren’t any more club activities today.

	Originally we had wanted to discuss the performance for the school festival, but president Masuzu wasn’t paying attention, ergo the discussion about it couldn’t be held. In the middle Fuyuumi left for her hall monitor activities and Chiwa’s friend phoned her, so we ended without deciding on anything.		Originally we had wanted to discuss the performance for the school festival, but president Masuzu wasn’t paying attention, ergo the discussion about it couldn’t be held. In the middle, Fuyuumi left for her hall monitor activities and Chiwa’s friend phoned her, so we ended without deciding on anything.

201.214.179.200 at 00:37, 10 April 2014

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	(Source: SBCreative magazine “Dictionary of the Art of Bringing out ~~Yourself2~~)</div>		(Source: SBCreative magazine “Dictionary of the Art of Bringing out Yourself")</div>

QusaTalma: Capitalized the beginning of a sentence.

2014-04-04T04:12:55Z

Capitalized the beginning of a sentence.

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	This was not unreasonable. After all, at least Masuzu never looked down on Hime’s chuunibyou behavior by questioning ~~“isn’t~~ this just your imagination?”		This was not unreasonable. After all, at least Masuzu never looked down on Hime’s chuunibyou behavior by questioning “Isn’t this just your imagination?”

	But, was it really okay to compare Hime’s chuunibyou and our fake relationship like they were same thing?		But, was it really okay to compare Hime’s chuunibyou and our fake relationship like they were same thing?

QusaTalma: Small grammar fix.

2014-04-04T04:11:24Z

Small grammar fix.

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	''—I always pretended not to see through ~~you~~ lies.''		''—I always pretended not to see through your lies.''

	''—So, will you pretend not to see through mine as well?''		''—So, will you pretend not to see through mine as well?''

Cloudii at 04:58, 3 April 2014

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	“Tai Earsunoid! Baio! Maturikusu! Devaisu!”<ref>She switches the tone in this sentence. Tai = battle</ref>		“Tai Earsunoid! Baio! Maturikusu! Devaisu!”<ref>She switches the tone in this sentence. Tai = battle</ref>

	This is bad, she's getting angry. Also, the “Villager A” setting was gone.		This was bad, she's getting angry. Also, the “Villager A” setting was gone.

	Just like I feared ruining my fake relationship with Masuzu, it looked like Hime was also afraid of something.		Just like I feared ruining my fake relationship with Masuzu, it looked like Hime was also afraid of something.