OreShura: Volume 6 Chapter 1 - Revision history

Rxls at 19:35, 11 March 2019

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	<!--Translated by Timo from simplified Chinese version translated by 任雷劈 on www.wenku8.cn-->		<!--Translated by Timo from simplified Chinese version translated by 任雷劈 on www.wenku8.cn-->
	==~~Chapter~~ 1: The runaway<ref>The title can imply that the "runaway" can be run rampant</ref> Ex-Girlfriend leads to Mayhem==		==#1: The runaway<ref>The title can imply that the "runaway" can be run rampant</ref> Ex-Girlfriend leads to Mayhem==

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Holdini: /* Chapter 1: The runawayThe title can imply that the "runaway" can be run rampant Ex-Girlfriend leads to Mayhem */

2015-12-28T06:50:06Z

Chapter 1: The runawayThe title can imply that the "runaway" can be run rampant Ex-Girlfriend leads to Mayhem

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	* No romance! Love is very dangerous!		* No romance! Love is very dangerous!

	* But don't let others believe I'm gay.		* But, don't let others believe I'm gay.


	After I finished reciting, I thought of something.		After I finished reciting, I thought of something:

	The only one I managed to uphold was the third one……		The only one I managed to uphold was the third one……
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	“What?”		“What?”

	“The maidens from Jien-otsu get along ~~the best~~, and we can unite together!”		“The maidens from Jien-otsu get along really well, and we can unite together!”

	For some reason Chiwa's chest puffed with pride.		For some reason Chiwa's chest puffed with pride.
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	“Don’t you guys always fight when you’re together? Especially you and Masuzu."		“Don’t you guys always fight when you’re together? Especially you and Masuzu."

	“That’s why I said it’ll be different from today on! We’ll get along ~~the best——okay~~?”		“That’s why I said it’ll be different from today on! We’ll get along really well——okay?”

	Chiwa's smile looked a bit unnatural.		Chiwa's smile looked a bit unnatural.
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	Oh—shit.		Oh—shit.

	These eyes, were eyes that ~~show~~ when you’re really hurt.		These eyes, were eyes that are shown when you’re really hurt.

	“I apologize, I said too much. I'm at fault.”		“I apologize, I said too much. I'm at fault.”

	Chiwa shook her head.		Chiwa shook her head.

	“I don’t mind it at all, but you have to take better care of yourself. If you ruin your own body, you can’t perform in studies or club activities. Even if you have to ~~sleep~~ late, at least eat well, okay?”		“I don’t mind it at all, but you have to take better care of yourself. If you ruin your own body, you can’t perform in studies or club activities. Even if you have to stay up late, at least eat well, okay?”

	Umm——I let Chiwa worry about my diet.		Umm——I let Chiwa worry about my diet.
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	“Ah, it’s about time we leave.”		“Ah, it’s about time we leave.”

	Chiwa stood up and started cleaning the table. I looked at the time…… Uooh, this is bad, I wanted to go to school earlier to study for the test, but I ended up at leaving at the regular time.		Chiwa stood up and started cleaning the table. I looked at the time…… Uooh, this is bad. I wanted to go to school earlier to study for the test, but I ended up at leaving at the regular time.

	I left home with Chiwa. When we met the students who were also rushing to school at the school gate, I saw a familiar back.		I left home with Chiwa. When we met the students who were also rushing to school at the school gate, I saw a familiar back.
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	“Hey, you, wait up!”		“Hey, you, wait up!”

	Ponytail-senpai ~~wanted~~ to grab Hime’s left shoulder.		Ponytail-senpai went to grab Hime’s left shoulder.

	Hime instantly evaded, open her arms, stood on one leg and struck a pose—		Hime instantly evaded, open her arms, stood on one leg and struck a pose—
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	“Don’t be stupid! You'll affect your future like this!”		“Don’t be stupid! You'll affect your future like this!”

	“This mode’s power is ‘lightning.’ It can release a power equivalent to twelve times the power of a thunder in this world in a single strike!”		“This mode’s power is ‘lightning.’ It can release a power equivalent to twelve times the power of a thunder in this world with a single strike!”

	“Then you can work in the electrical company, can’t you?”		“Then you can work in the electrical company, can’t you?”
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	“No. A human won't be able to handle this sword.”		“No. A human won't be able to handle this sword.”

	They both started pulling at the stick, and the purple cloth covering it loosened. The thing inside that came out was a fishing pole. I didn't know what it could do against the Wyverns, but looked like It could catch a lot of eels.		They both started pulling at the stick, and the purple cloth covering it loosened. The thing inside that came out was a fishing pole. I didn't know what it could do against the Wyverns, but looked like it could catch a lot of eels.

	Because the cloth came off, Hime and Fuyyumi who were pulling at it fell almost simultaneously. Fuyuumi, who was pulling harder, knocked her head on the electrical pole, and made a loud sound; it sounded kind of painful.		Because the cloth came off, Hime and Fuyyumi who were pulling at it fell almost simultaneously. Fuyuumi, who was pulling harder, knocked her head on the electrical pole, and made a loud sound; it sounded kind of painful.
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	Hime managed to escape because she was weaker, and stood up before Fuyuumi who was clutching on her head in pain. She looked at Fuyuumi apologetically————but she immediately looked down, picked up her fishing pole and cloth, and walked towards the school gate.		Hime managed to escape because she was weaker, and stood up before Fuyuumi who was clutching on her head in pain. She looked at Fuyuumi apologetically————but she immediately looked down, picked up her fishing pole and cloth, and walked towards the school gate.

	~~“Hi~~, Hime-chan! Wait! Listen to what I'm saying!”		“Hey, Hime-chan! Wait! Listen to what I'm saying!”

	Fuyuumi finally stood up with some effort, but her voice didn't reach Hime.		Fuyuumi finally stood up with some effort, but her voice didn't reach Hime.

AJS90 at 08:07, 16 August 2014

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	Aaah, Is there is someone who could come to hug me right now?		Aaah, is there someone who could come to hug me right now?

	If there were someone who's close to me, mo-nyo.		If there were someone who's close to me, mo-nyo.
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	“……sounds like a fierce fight……”		“……sounds like a fierce fight……”

	“Back then, they fought over 'Half of the money we used to ~~bought~~ this house is from my family!', 'I knew we could get it at such a cheap price only because I asked a contractor!' and the likes, so ruining the house is really ironic.”		“Back then, they fought over 'Half of the money we used to buy this house is from my family!', 'I knew we could get it at such a cheap price only because I asked a contractor!' and the likes, so ruining the house is really ironic.”

	Just thinking about it was bad enough.		Just thinking about it was bad enough.

	I really hated allowing such people dominate my life.		I really hated allowing such people to dominate my life.

	I must absolutely become someone who runs his own life. I will not let the same situation happen where I dance to the tune of those love-struck types.		I must absolutely become someone who runs his own life. I will not let the same situation happen where I dance to the tune of those love-struck types.

OhHaiThar: /* Chapter 1: The runawayThe title can imply that the "runaway" can be run rampant Ex-Girlfriend leads to Mayhem */

2014-07-09T08:40:36Z

Chapter 1: The runawayThe title can imply that the "runaway" can be run rampant Ex-Girlfriend leads to Mayhem

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	“Just what did you guys talk about?”		“Just what did you guys talk about?”

	“Nothing much——you know, the usual girl talk——fashion accessories, ~~gossips~~ about relationships going on in school——I think Ei-kun would find that kind of stuff boring——?”		“Nothing much——you know, the usual girl talk——fashion accessories, gossip about relationships going on in school——I think Ei-kun would find that kind of stuff boring——?”

	“Hmm…….”		“Hmm…….”
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	They both started pulling at the stick, and the purple cloth covering it loosened. The thing inside that came out was a fishing pole. I didn't know what it could do against the Wyverns, but looked like It could catch a lot of eels.		They both started pulling at the stick, and the purple cloth covering it loosened. The thing inside that came out was a fishing pole. I didn't know what it could do against the Wyverns, but looked like It could catch a lot of eels.

	Because the cloth came off, Hime and Fuyyumi who were pulling at it fell almost simultaneously. Fuyuumi, who was pulling harder, knocked her head on the electrical pole, and made a loud sound. it sounded kind of painful.		Because the cloth came off, Hime and Fuyyumi who were pulling at it fell almost simultaneously. Fuyuumi, who was pulling harder, knocked her head on the electrical pole, and made a loud sound; it sounded kind of painful.

	Hime ~~manage~~ to escape because she was weaker, and stood up before Fuyuumi who was clutching on her head in pain. She looked at Fuyuumi apologetically————but she immediately looked down, picked up her fishing pole and cloth, and walked towards the school gate.		Hime managed to escape because she was weaker, and stood up before Fuyuumi who was clutching on her head in pain. She looked at Fuyuumi apologetically————but she immediately looked down, picked up her fishing pole and cloth, and walked towards the school gate.

	“Hi, Hime-chan! Wait! Listen to what I'm saying!”		“Hi, Hime-chan! Wait! Listen to what I'm saying!”
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	Chiwa tilted her head, looking disturbed.		Chiwa tilted her head, looking disturbed.

	In the crowd looking at the drama, I saw Masuzu. She was looking at Hime's back with a troubled look.		In the crowd, looking at the drama, I saw Masuzu. She was looking at Hime's back with a troubled look.

	It looked like things were going in an unexpected direction.		It looked like things were going in an unexpected direction.

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	As I was eating breakfast with Chiwa, I asked her what I had on my mind the entire day yesterday,		As I was eating breakfast with Chiwa, I asked her what I had on my mind the entire day yesterday,

	“Did you guys ~~met~~ up when I wasn't there?”		“Did you guys meet up when I wasn't there?”

	Chiwa's hand, which was approaching towards the sandwiches, stopped immediately.		Chiwa's hand, which was approaching towards the sandwiches, stopped immediately.

175.141.34.254: Anonymous small(?) edit. Fixed apostrophes, punctuation marks and changed some sentence structures to make them sound better.

2014-05-26T07:08:21Z

Anonymous small(?) edit. Fixed apostrophes, punctuation marks and changed some sentence structures to make them sound better.

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Cloudii at 04:14, 18 April 2014

2014-04-18T04:14:16Z

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	“Why today, out of all days? Has the chuunibyou worsened?”		“Why today, out of all days? Has the chuunibyou worsened?”

	Also, Hime’s embarrassing moves usually only appeared in front of us. I heard she was quiet and did not stand out in Class 2, certainly not the kind of people to make such decorated performance.		Also, Hime’s embarrassing moves usually only appeared in front of us. I heard she was quiet and did not stand out in Class 2, and she certainly was not the kind of people to make such decorated performance.

	What happened to her today then?		What happened to her today then?

Cloudii: tense and grammar edittinggggg

2014-04-18T04:12:39Z

tense and grammar edittinggggg

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QusaTalma: Added missing open double quote.

2014-04-04T04:02:21Z

Added missing open double quote.

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	“Well, I also want to ask that.”<ref>this Keita</ref>		“Well, I also want to ask that.”<ref>this Keita</ref>

	~~Why~~ today, out of all days, the chuunibyou worsen?”		“Why today, out of all days, the chuunibyou worsen?”

	Also, Hime’s embarrassing moves, usually only appear in front of us. I heard she was quiet and does not stand out in Class 2, and she isn’t the kind of people to make such decorated performance.		Also, Hime’s embarrassing moves, usually only appear in front of us. I heard she was quiet and does not stand out in Class 2, and she isn’t the kind of people to make such decorated performance.

QusaTalma: "Chiwa's mom" should be possessive in this case, changed to "Chiwa's mom's"

2014-04-04T00:08:59Z

"Chiwa's mom" should be possessive in this case, changed to "Chiwa's mom's"

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	“I’ll wait for you, come down faster.”		“I’ll wait for you, come down faster.”

	After I changed into my uniform, a good smell came from the living room. Warm milk and Chiwa’s ~~mom~~ handmade sandwich was on the table, looking delicious. From when I was small, I've liked Chiwa’s ~~mom~~ egg sandwich, the sourness and crunchiness of the onions is irresistible.		After I changed into my uniform, a good smell came from the living room. Warm milk and Chiwa’s mom’s handmade sandwich was on the table, looking delicious. From when I was small, I've liked Chiwa’s mom’s egg sandwich, the sourness and crunchiness of the onions is irresistible.

	As I was eating breakfast with Chiwa, I asked her the thing that was on my mind the entire day yesterday,		As I was eating breakfast with Chiwa, I asked her the thing that was on my mind the entire day yesterday,