Ousama Game:Volume 1 Command 1 - Revision history

MystiKnight: Cleaning it up in prep for the rest of the editing.

2013-12-11T12:53:55Z

Cleaning it up in prep for the rest of the editing.

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	A phone rings.		A phone rings.

	"Who the heck is calling me so late at night~~...~~"		"Who the heck is calling me so late at night?"

	Nobuaki rolled on the bed to the side of his phone. He picked it up. A message popped up on the phone.		Nobuaki rolled on the bed to the side of his phone. He picked it up. A message popped up on the phone.
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	The next day, Nobuaki opened the familiar door of a classroom and greeted his classmates.		The next day, Nobuaki opened the familiar door of his classroom and greeted his classmates.

	"Good morning!"		"Good morning!"
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	With that said, Minako turned away and left Hirofumi. Hirofumi walked to Hideki's side with a face filled with tears.		With that said, Minako turned away and left Hirofumi. Hirofumi walked to Hideki's side with a face filled with tears.

	"Why ~~must~~ I kiss ~~with~~ her?"		"Why did I have to kiss her?"

	"Because this is the King's command. He said that you have to kiss Minako. We can't help it!"		"Because this is the King's command. He said that you have to kiss Minako. We can't help it!"
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	"They really kissed in front of everyone!" Nobuaki said.		"They really kissed in front of everyone!" Nobuaki said.

	"Yeah...Once Hideki starts the fire, there's no stopping him," Naoya said, nodding.		"Yeah. Once Hideki starts the fire, there's no stopping him," Naoya said, nodding.

	"So what will we do if we receive another message tomorrow? You may be the next one!"		"So what will we do if we receive another message tomorrow? You may be the next one!"
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	"How can that even happen! You dummy!"		"How can that even happen! You dummy!"

	"You dare play around with me!" At that, Naoya started chasing Nobuaki around.		"You dare play around with me?" At that, Naoya started chasing Nobuaki around.

	"Everyone return to your seats!"		"Everyone return to your seats!"
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	*END]		*END]

	After that, ~~what~~ happened~~: attending~~ class, eating lunch, attending class again, and playing around with schoolmates after school was not much different from a normal school day.		After that, the usual things happened. Attending class, eating lunch, attending class again, and playing around with schoolmates after school was not much different from a normal school day.

	When everyone got back home, they had already forgotten the King's Game they played that morning.		When everyone got back home, they had already forgotten the King's Game they played that morning.

GoldenFyre: /* Command 1 [Monday, 19 October 00:00] */

2013-09-15T21:27:07Z

Command 1 [Monday, 19 October 00:00]

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	*[10/19 Monday 00:00		*[10/19 Monday 00:00
	*From: The King		*'''From''': The King
	*Subject: The King's Game		*'''Subject''': The King's Game
	*Body: This is the King's Game in which everyone in your class must participate. The King's command is absolute and must be done within 24 hours. ※ You can not withdraw from the game.		*'''Body''': This is the King's Game in which everyone in your class must participate. The King's command is absolute and must be done within 24 hours. ※ You can not withdraw from the game.
	*＊Command 1: Student Number 4 Inoue Hirofumi(m) and Student Number 19 Nakao Minako(f)—the two of you will kiss		*＊Command 1: Student Number 4 Inoue Hirofumi(M) and Student Number 19 Nakao Minako(F)—the two of you will kiss
	*END]		*END]

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	*[10/19 Monday 08:25		*[10/19 Monday 08:25
	*From: The King		*'''From''': The King
	*Subject: The King's Game		*'''Subject''': The King's Game
	*Body: Obedience Confirmed		*'''Body''': Obedience Confirmed
	*END]		*END]

MystiKnight: Small edits, little tense fixes.

2012-12-23T03:46:31Z

Small edits, little tense fixes.

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	He muted his phone, threw it on top of the pile of clothes on the floor, and returned to his sleep.		He muted his phone, threw it on top of the pile of clothes on the floor, and returned to his sleep.


	The next day, Nobuaki opened the familiar door of a classroom and greeted his classmates.		The next day, Nobuaki opened the familiar door of a classroom and greeted his classmates.
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	"Mmm? Oh yeah~ ~ My sleep yesterday was interrupted by that stupid joke."		"Mmm? Oh yeah~ ~ My sleep yesterday was interrupted by that stupid joke."

	"Oh so that means everyone ~~has~~ received that message! Everyone thinks that it's really fun ~~and is now~~ following his command."		"Oh, so that means everyone received that message! Everyone thinks that it's really fun, so we're following his command."

	"Fun? Are they really going to follow his command?"		"Fun? Are they really going to follow his command?"
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	"The King's commands...?"		"The King's commands...?"

	"are absolute!"		"-are absolute!"

	Half of the students in the class replied in unison. Embarrassed, Hirofumi approached Hideki and poked him.		Half of the students in the class replied in unison. Embarrassed, Hirofumi approached Hideki and poked him.
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	While on the other side, Minako crossed her arms in front of her chest and tapped the floor with her left foot, waiting impatiently.		While on the other side, Minako crossed her arms in front of her chest and tapped the floor with her left foot, waiting impatiently.

	"Oi! ~~...~~ Why are you making a girl like me wait? You're such a wimp."		"Oi! Why are you making a girl like me wait? You're such a wimp."

	"W-What are you saying! I'm no wimp! What's so great about kissing? Fine, let's kiss."		"W-What are you saying! I'm no wimp! What's so great about kissing? Fine, let's kiss."
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	"You suck!"		"You suck!"

	With that said, Minako turned away and left Hirofumi. Hirofumi walked to ~~Hidek~~'s side with a face filled with tears.		With that said, Minako turned away and left Hirofumi. Hirofumi walked to Hideki's side with a face filled with tears.

	"Why must I kiss with her?"		"Why must I kiss with her?"
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	Hideki stood up and left the table. He glimpsed at Hirofumi and returned to his seat.		Hideki stood up and left the table. He glimpsed at Hirofumi and returned to his seat.

	"They really kissed in front of everyone!"		"They really kissed in front of everyone!" Nobuaki said.

	~~Nobuaki said.~~		"Yeah...Once Hideki starts the fire, there's no stopping him," Naoya said, nodding.

	"Yeah...Once Hideki starts the fire, there's no stopping of him."

	Naoya said, nodding.

	"So what will we do if we receive another message tomorrow? You may be the next one!"		"So what will we do if we receive another message tomorrow? You may be the next one!"
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	"Maybe you can kiss with Hiroko, the one you secretly love?"		"Maybe you can kiss with Hiroko, the one you secretly love?"

	"That would be great!"		"That would be great!" Flushed, Naoya said blissfully.

	Flushed, Naoya said blissfully.

	"How can that even happen! You dummy!"		"How can that even happen! You dummy!"

	"You dare play around with me!"		"You dare play around with me!" At that, Naoya started chasing Nobuaki around.

	Naoya ~~chased~~ Nobuaki around.

	"Everyone return to your seats!"		"Everyone return to your seats!"
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	After that, what happened: attending class, eating lunch, attending class again, and playing around with schoolmates after school was not much different from a normal school day.		After that, what happened: attending class, eating lunch, attending class again, and playing around with schoolmates after school was not much different from a normal school day.

	When everyone ~~has~~ got back home, they had already forgotten the King's Game they played that morning.		When everyone got back home, they had already forgotten the King's Game they played that morning.

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Cyvro at 16:20, 22 November 2012

2012-11-22T16:20:24Z

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	Half asleep, Nobuaki rubbed his eyes ~~while~~ he read the message.		Half asleep, Nobuaki rubbed his eyes as he read the message.

	"What the heck is this? Is this a prank? How stupid."		"What the heck is this? Is this a prank? How stupid."

Cyvro at 04:18, 22 November 2012

2012-11-22T04:18:13Z

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	==Command 1 [Monday, 19 October 00:00]==		==Command 1 [Monday, 19 October 00:00]==

	A phone ~~rang~~.		A phone rings.

	"Who the heck is calling me late at night..."		"Who the heck is calling me so late at night..."

	Nobuaki rolled on the ~~quilt~~ to the side of his phone. He picked it up. A message popped up on the phone.		Nobuaki rolled on the bed to the side of his phone. He picked it up. A message popped up on the phone.

	*[10/19 Monday 00:00		*[10/19 Monday 00:00
	*From: The King		*From: The King
	*Subject: The King's Game		*Subject: The King's Game
	*Body: This is the King's Game in which everyone in your class ~~is participating~~. The King's command is absolute and must be done within 24 hours. ※ You can not withdraw from the game.		*Body: This is the King's Game in which everyone in your class must participate. The King's command is absolute and must be done within 24 hours. ※ You can not withdraw from the game.
	*＊Command 1: Student Number 4 Inoue Hirofumi and Student Number 19 Nakao ~~Minako—the~~ two of you will kiss		*＊Command 1: Student Number 4 Inoue Hirofumi(m) and Student Number 19 Nakao Minako(f)—the two of you will kiss
	*END]		*END]

	Half asleep, Nobuaki rubbed his eyes while he read the message.		Half asleep, Nobuaki rubbed his eyes while he read the message.

	"What the heck is this? Is this a ~~malicious message~~? How stupid."		"What the heck is this? Is this a prank? How stupid."

	He muted his phone, threw it on top of the pile of clothes on the floor, and returned to his sleep.		He muted his phone, threw it on top of the pile of clothes on the floor, and returned to his sleep.
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	"Good morning!"		"Good morning!"

	His classmates was standing up and ~~buzzing~~ in the classroom. ~~Out of curiosity~~, Nobuaki ~~ran~~ to them to find out what happened.		His classmates was standing up and talking in the classroom. Curious, Nobuaki went to them to find out what had happened.

	"Hey! What are you doing? ~~Is there anything~~ fun?"		"Hey! What are you doing? Did something fun happen?"

	Naoya, standing beside him, ~~then~~ asked him,		Naoya, standing beside him, asked him,

	"What? Didn't you get the King's Game message?"		"What? Didn't you get the King's Game message?"

	"Mmm? Oh yeah~ ~ My sleep yesterday ~~were~~ interrupted by that ~~malicious message~~."		"Mmm? Oh yeah~ ~ My sleep yesterday was interrupted by that stupid joke."

	"Oh so that means everyone ~~had~~ received that message! Everyone thinks that it's ~~real~~ fun and is now following his command."		"Oh so that means everyone has received that message! Everyone thinks that it's really fun and is now following his command."

	"Fun? Are they really going to follow his command?"		"Fun? Are they really going to follow his command?"
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	"are absolute!"		"are absolute!"

	Half of the students in the class replied ~~unanimously~~. Embarrassed, Hirofumi approached Hideki and poked him.		Half of the students in the class replied in unison. Embarrassed, Hirofumi approached Hideki and poked him.

	"Hideki, do you want to try it yourself? It's embarrassing!"		"Hideki, do you want to try it yourself? It's embarrassing!"

	~~Yet,~~ on the other side, Minako crossed her arms in front of her chest and tapped the floor with her left foot, waiting impatiently.		While on the other side, Minako crossed her arms in front of her chest and tapped the floor with her left foot, waiting impatiently.

	"Oi! ... Why are you making a girl like me to wait? You're such a wimp."		"Oi! ... Why are you making a girl like me wait? You're such a wimp."

	"W-What are you saying! I'm no wimp! What's so great about kissing? Fine, let's kiss."		"W-What are you saying! I'm no wimp! What's so great about kissing? Fine, let's kiss."

	Hirofumi seemed to have gone for broke. After listening to his response, a smile emerged from Hideki and ~~Hideki~~ raised three fingers with his right hand.		Hirofumi seemed to have gone for broke. After listening to his response, a smile emerged from Hideki and he raised three fingers with his right hand.

	"Okay, Hirofumi! Let me count for you!"		"Okay, Hirofumi! Let me count for you!"
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	"All right!"		"All right!"

	Hirofumi pressed his hands on Minako's shoulder and moved his face to her. ~~They then~~ kissed in front of everyone.		Hirofumi pressed his hands on Minako's shoulder and moved his face to her. Then, they kissed in front of everyone.

	"Ohoh!"		"Ohoh!"
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	"You're good, Hirofumi!"		"You're good, Hirofumi!"

	Minako, ~~still crossing~~ her arms on her chest, approached Hirofumi and slapped him at his surprise.		Minako, with her arms still crossed over her chest, approached Hirofumi and slapped him at his surprise.

	"Ouch!"		"Ouch!"

	Hirofumi covered his ~~slapped~~ cheeks with his hand.		Hirofumi covered his cheeks with his hand.

	"You suck!"		"You suck!"

	~~That being~~ said, Minako turned away and left Hirofumi. Hirofumi walked to Hidek's side with a face ~~that was about to cry~~.		With that said, Minako turned away and left Hirofumi. Hirofumi walked to Hidek's side with a face filled with tears.

	"Why must I kiss with her?"		"Why must I kiss with her?"

	"Because this is the King's command. ~~The command states~~ that you have to kiss ~~with~~ Minako. We can't help it!"		"Because this is the King's command. He said that you have to kiss Minako. We can't help it!"

	"But this is really..."		"But this is really..."
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	"Quit the jokes—I'm not that unlucky."		"Quit the jokes—I'm not that unlucky."

	"Maybe you can kiss with Hiroko ~~that~~ you~~'re~~ secretly ~~loving~~?"		"Maybe you can kiss with Hiroko, the one you secretly love?"

	"That ~~will~~ be great!"		"That would be great!"

	Flushed, Naoya said blissfully.		Flushed, Naoya said blissfully.
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	"You dare play around with me!"		"You dare play around with me!"

	Naoya chased Nobuaki ~~back~~.		Naoya chased Nobuaki around.

	"Everyone return to your seats!"		"Everyone return to your seats!"

Pudding321 at 13:30, 14 September 2012

2012-09-14T13:30:17Z

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	Nobuaki rolled on the quilt to the side of his phone. He picked it up. A message popped up on the phone.		Nobuaki rolled on the quilt to the side of his phone. He picked it up. A message popped up on the phone.

	[10/19 Monday 00:00		*[10/19 Monday 00:00
	*From: The King		*From: The King
	*Subject: The King's Game		*Subject: The King's Game
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	And then Nobuaki's cell phone received a message.		And then Nobuaki's cell phone received a message.

	[10/19 Monday 08:25		*[10/19 Monday 08:25
	*From: The King		*From: The King
	*Subject: The King's Game		*Subject: The King's Game

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2012-09-11T17:16:26Z

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==Command 1 [Monday, 19 October 00:00]==

A phone rang.

"Who the heck is calling me late at night..."

Nobuaki rolled on the quilt to the side of his phone. He picked it up. A message popped up on the phone.

[10/19 Monday 00:00
*From: The King
*Subject: The King's Game
*Body: This is the King's Game in which everyone in your class is participating. The King's command is absolute and must be done within 24 hours. ※ You can not withdraw from the game.
*＊Command 1: Student Number 4 Inoue Hirofumi and Student Number 19 Nakao Minako—the two of you will kiss
*END]

Half asleep, Nobuaki rubbed his eyes while he read the message.

"What the heck is this? Is this a malicious message? How stupid."

He muted his phone, threw it on top of the pile of clothes on the floor, and returned to his sleep.

The next day, Nobuaki opened the familiar door of a classroom and greeted his classmates.

"Good morning!"

His classmates was standing up and buzzing in the classroom. Out of curiosity, Nobuaki ran to them to find out what happened.

"Hey! What are you doing? Is there anything fun?"

Naoya, standing beside him, then asked him,

"What? Didn't you get the King's Game message?"

"Mmm? Oh yeah~ ~ My sleep yesterday were interrupted by that malicious message."

"Oh so that means everyone had received that message! Everyone thinks that it's real fun and is now following his command."

"Fun? Are they really going to follow his command?"

Sitting on a desk beside Naoya, Hideki wavered his legs in the air.

"Look! Hirofumi and Minako sure look embarrassed! Gosh, it's only a kiss. Oh, is it their first kiss?"

Mami widened her arms to incite them.

"Kiss! Kiss!"

Hideki shaped his hands into a loudspeaker and shouted.

"The King's commands...?"

"are absolute!"

Half of the students in the class replied unanimously. Embarrassed, Hirofumi approached Hideki and poked him.

"Hideki, do you want to try it yourself? It's embarrassing!"

Yet, on the other side, Minako crossed her arms in front of her chest and tapped the floor with her left foot, waiting impatiently.

"Oi! ... Why are you making a girl like me to wait? You're such a wimp."

"W-What are you saying! I'm no wimp! What's so great about kissing? Fine, let's kiss."

Hirofumi seemed to have gone for broke. After listening to his response, a smile emerged from Hideki and Hideki raised three fingers with his right hand.

"Okay, Hirofumi! Let me count for you!"

"3...2...1...Go!"

"All right!"

Hirofumi pressed his hands on Minako's shoulder and moved his face to her. They then kissed in front of everyone.

"Ohoh!"

"Yooo—! Yooo—!"

"Oh~Yeah! Bravo!"

Witnessing their kiss, everyone applauded.

"You're good, Hirofumi!"

Minako, still crossing her arms on her chest, approached Hirofumi and slapped him at his surprise.

"Ouch!"

Hirofumi covered his slapped cheeks with his hand.

"You suck!"

That being said, Minako turned away and left Hirofumi. Hirofumi walked to Hidek's side with a face that was about to cry.

"Why must I kiss with her?"

"Because this is the King's command. The command states that you have to kiss with Minako. We can't help it!"

"But this is really..."

"Ahah~ Fun, I say! Will we get another King's message tomorrow?!"

Hideki stood up and left the table. He glimpsed at Hirofumi and returned to his seat.

"They really kissed in front of everyone!"

Nobuaki said.

"Yeah...Once Hideki starts the fire, there's no stopping of him."

Naoya said, nodding.

"So what will we do if we receive another message tomorrow? You may be the next one!"

"Quit the jokes—I'm not that unlucky."

"Maybe you can kiss with Hiroko that you're secretly loving?"

"That will be great!"

Flushed, Naoya said blissfully.

"How can that even happen! You dummy!"

"You dare play around with me!"

Naoya chased Nobuaki back.

"Everyone return to your seats!"

As the teacher entered the classroom, the students quickly returned to their seats.

And then Nobuaki's cell phone received a message.

[10/19 Monday 08:25
*From: The King
*Subject: The King's Game
*Body: Obedience Confirmed
*END]

After that, what happened: attending class, eating lunch, attending class again, and playing around with schoolmates after school was not much different from a normal school day.

When everyone has got back home, they had already forgotten the King's Game they played that morning.

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