Ousama Game:Volume 1 Command 5 - Revision history

GoldenFyre: /* Command 5 [Friday, 23 October 08:15] */

2013-09-15T22:09:10Z

Command 5 [Friday, 23 October 08:15]

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	Shouta held up his fist and slammed it into Daisuke, smashing his face into the wall and causing his nose to spurt out blood. Shouta wanted to punch him once again, but was stopped by Nobuaki.		Shouta held up his fist and slammed it into Daisuke, smashing his face into the wall and causing his nose to spurt out blood. Shouta wanted to punch him once again, but was stopped by Nobuaki.

	"Stop! Stop fighting! Even if it was Daisuke's fault, you've gone too far!"		"Stop it! Stop fighting! Even if it was Daisuke's fault, you've gone too far!"

	Nobuaki got hold of Shouta and forced him to let go of Daisuke.		Nobuaki got hold of Shouta and forced him to let go of Daisuke.
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	*[10/23 Friday 8:21		*[10/23 Friday 8:21
	*From: The King		*'''From''': The King
	*Subject: The King's Game		*'''Subject''': The King's Game
	*Body: This is the King's Game in which everyone in your class is participating. The King's command is absolute and must be done within 24 hours. ※ You can not withdraw from the game.		*'''Body''': This is the King's Game in which everyone in your class is participating. The King's command is absolute and must be done within 24 hours. ※ You can not withdraw from the game.
	*＊Command 5: Student Number 17 Tasaki Daisuke — Tasaki Daisuke will have to hang himself.		*＊Command 5: Student Number 17 Tasaki Daisuke — Tasaki Daisuke will have to hang himself.
	*END]		*END]
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	"Yeah! The most important thing now is to think of a way to solve Daisuke's problem."		"Yeah! The most important thing now is to think of a way to solve Daisuke's problem."

	Chiemi and Naoya hurried to Nobuaki to stop him, trying to ~~relax~~ him.		Chiemi and Naoya hurried to Nobuaki to stop him, trying to help him calm down.

	"Chiemi, tell the teacher when he arrives that I'll be coming back to the classroom a bit late. I'm off to find Daisuke."		"Chiemi, tell the teacher when he arrives that I'll be coming back to the classroom a bit late. I'm off to find Daisuke."
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	"I want to stay here for a bit longer."		"I want to stay here for a bit longer."

	"Then I'll stay as well! We'll ~~get~~ back later and get scolded by the teacher together."		"Then I'll stay as well! We'll go back later and get scolded by the teacher together."

	Nobuaki stretched his hand towards Daisuke; and at this moment,		Nobuaki stretched his hand towards Daisuke; and at this moment,
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	At the classroom's door, Nobuaki knew already the lesson has started. He nervously opened the door.		At the classroom's door, Nobuaki knew already the lesson has started. He nervously opened the door.

	"Hey! You two! Where did you go? ~~Class had started~~ a long time ago."		"Hey! You two! Where did you go? Classstarted a long time ago."

	Nobuaki apologized and headed into the classroom.		Nobuaki apologized and headed into the classroom.
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	*[10/23 Friday 09:23		*[10/23 Friday 09:23
	*From: Honda Chiemi		*'''From''': Honda Chiemi
	*Subject: Thank you for your hard work <!-- お疲れ様-->		*'''Subject''': Thank you for your hard work <!-- お疲れ様-->
	*~~Body~~: It's great that you brought Daisuke back, even though you got scolded. Oh and by the way, do you really have hemorrhoids?		*'''Bod'''y: It's great that you brought Daisuke back, even though you got scolded. Oh and by the way, do you really have hemorrhoids?
	*END]		*END]

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	"Sorry. I'm late!"		"Sorry. I'm late!"

	"Don't worry! We have someone else to help us<!-- is this fine for English? I know this is a move in Pokemon-->."<!-- It's alright, although there are better ways to write what you meant. MK-->		"Don't worry! We have someone else who'll help us<!-- is this fine for English? I know this is a move in Pokemon-->."<!-- It's alright, although there are better ways to write what you meant. MK-->

	Naoya , who was hiding behind Nobuaki, poked his head out. <!--What? I thought Naoya was a shy loli for a sec-->		Naoya , who was hiding behind Nobuaki, poked his head out. <!--What? I thought Naoya was a shy loli for a sec-->
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	*[10/23 Fridy 23:55		*[10/23 Fridy 23:55
	*From: The King		*'''From''': The King
	*Subject: The King's Game		*'''Subject''': The King's Game
	*Body: 5 Minutes Left		*'''Body''': 5 Minutes Left
	*End]		*End]

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	*[10/23 Friday 23:58		*[10/23 Friday 23:58
	*From: The King		*'''From''': The King
	*Subject: The King's Game		*'''Subject''': The King's Game
	*Body: 60 Seconds Left		*'''Body''': 60 Seconds Left
	*END]		*END]

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	*[10/23 Friday 23:59		*[10/23 Friday 23:59
	*From: The King		*'''From''': The King
	*Subject: The King's Game		*'''Subject''': The King's Game
	*Body: Because the King's command was not carried out, the following person would be hung by the neck as a punishment: Student Number 17 Tasaki Daisuke		*'''Body''': Because the King's command was not carried out, the following person would be hung by the neck as a punishment: Student Number 17 Tasaki Daisuke
	*END]		*END]

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	Looking up to the bed, Nobuaki found Daisuke was not on it. He turned on the lamp and looked around.		Looking up to the bed, Nobuaki found Daisuke was not on it. He turned on the lamp and looked around.

	What he saw was Daisuke hung dead on the other side of the room.		What he saw was Daisuke hung dead on the other side of the room.<!--What's up with this? They just all fell asleep, it's not like the others hung themselves exactly at 12. Plot hole-->

	His face showed an expression of extreme pain. His neck had numerous scratching scars and his arms were long impotent and dangling loosely beside his body.		His face showed an expression of extreme pain. His neck had numerous scratching scars and his arms were long impotent and dangling loosely beside his body.

Cyvro at 18:47, 21 February 2013

2013-02-21T18:47:39Z

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	Nobuaki and Naoya laughed powerlessly. They were afraid if they didn't make up some jokes to change the atmosphere, they would collapse in madness and terror.		Nobuaki and Naoya laughed powerlessly. They were afraid if they didn't make up some jokes to change the atmosphere, they would collapse in madness and terror.

	Although they were laughing, tears flowed from their eyes. There's nothing sadder than to see a friend ~~dying~~ in front of you.		Although they were laughing, tears flowed from their eyes. There's nothing sadder than to see a friend dead in front of you.

	When the police came to inquire the events of the incident, Nobuaki simply replied,		When the police came to inquire the events of the incident, Nobuaki simply replied,
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	"When I woke up this morning, I found out that he was already dead."		"When I woke up this morning, I found out that he was already dead."

	After all, if he had said, "He was hung ~~dead~~ because of the punishment of the King's Game," the police would not have believed him.		After all, if he had said, "He was hung because of the punishment of the King's Game," the police would not have believed him.

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Cyvro at 00:37, 20 January 2013

2013-01-20T00:37:19Z

MystiKnight: The things you only pick up after your original edit..

2013-01-10T02:42:43Z

The things you only pick up after your original edit..

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	Misaki collapsed onto the floor and sobbed; but nothing could calm Shouta's rage.		Misaki collapsed onto the floor and sobbed; but nothing could calm Shouta's rage.

	"By the way, Daisuke ~~is still at~~ fault! Even if Misaki asks you, you ~~can still reject~~ her!"		"By the way, it's still Daisuke's fault! Even if Misaki asks you, you could have rejected her!"

	Shouta held up his fist and slammed it into Daisuke, smashing his face into the wall and causing his nose to spurt out blood. Shouta wanted to punch him once again, but was stopped by Nobuaki.		Shouta held up his fist and slammed it into Daisuke, smashing his face into the wall and causing his nose to spurt out blood. Shouta wanted to punch him once again, but was stopped by Nobuaki.
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	For an instant the classroom seemed to have frozen.		For an instant the classroom seemed to have frozen.

	"So I'll give me command now. Daisuke will have to hang himself like Hideki and Satomi!"		"So I'll give my command now. Daisuke will have to hang himself like Hideki and Satomi!"

	Shouta shouted arrogantly. Nobaki hurried to stop him.		Shouta shouted arrogantly. Nobaki hurried to stop him.

MystiKnight: Ta-da! My first edit after formally joining the editing team. After looking at other LNs and their formatting, I think I may redo my edits on chapters 1-3.

2013-01-10T02:39:41Z

Ta-da! My first edit after formally joining the editing team. After looking at other LNs and their formatting, I think I may redo my edits on chapters 1-3.

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Cyvro at 04:13, 3 January 2013

2013-01-03T04:13:24Z

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	"Thanks."		"Thanks."

	Daisuke finally smiled ~~in joy~~.		Daisuke finally smiled.

	"This is great! Let us hurry back to the classroom."		"This is great! Let's hurry back to the classroom."

	At the classroom's door, Nobuaki knew already the lesson has started. He nervously opened the door.		At the classroom's door, Nobuaki knew already the lesson has started. He nervously opened the door.

	"Hey! You ~~too~~! Where ~~have~~ you ~~gone!~~ Class ~~has~~ started ~~for~~ a ~~very~~ long time."		"Hey! You two! Where did you go? Class had started a long time ago."

	Nobuaki ~~nodded in apology while heading out~~ the classroom. ~~<!-- I don't have a clue how he can do these two actions together at the same time..-->~~		Nobuaki apologized and headed into the classroom.

	"Sorry...I seem to have a bit of constipation today, so I sat in the washroom for very long..."		"Sorry...I seem to have a bit of constipation today, so I sat in the washroom for a very long time..."

	"What rubbish! How ~~would~~ anyone stay in the washroom for so long! Watch out for hemorrhoids. Now get back to your seat!"		"What rubbish! How could anyone stay in the washroom for so long! Watch out for hemorrhoids. Now get back to your seat!"

	"I'm really sorry..."		"I'm really sorry..."
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	Daisuke whispered to Nobuaki,		Daisuke whispered to Nobuaki,

	"We're scolded ~~indeed~~. I'm sorry. This is all my fault."		"We're scolded. I'm sorry. This is all my fault."

	"It's nothing really. This isn't the first time I~~'m getting~~ scolded so I'm quite used to this."		"It's nothing really. This isn't the first time I got scolded, I'm quite used to this."

	After he went back to his seat, his phone suddenly ~~received a message~~.		After he went back to his seat, his phone suddenly rang.

	*[10/23 Friday 09:23		*[10/23 Friday 09:23

Cyvro at 04:08, 3 January 2013

2013-01-03T04:08:41Z

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	"Daisuke! Daisuke! Where are you?"		"Daisuke! Daisuke! Where are you?"

	Nobuaki looked everywhere in the school, the playground, and even ~~the backyard of~~ the school building. At last, he found Daisuke sitting on a large rock beside a pond.		Nobuaki looked everywhere in the school, the playground, and even behind the school building. At last, he found Daisuke sitting on a large rock beside a pond.

	Nobuaki ~~tip-toed and~~ approached him quietly ~~and slowly~~. He then gently touched ~~him~~. Shocked, Daisuke ~~shrugged~~ and slowly turned ~~his~~ face to Nobuaki.		Nobuaki approached him quietly. He then gently touched his shoulder. Shocked, Daisuke stiffened and slowly turned to face Nobuaki.

	"You scared the ~~shit~~ out of me, Nobuaki! Why did you come for me?"		"You scared the hell out of me, Nobuaki! Why did you come for me?"

	"Why did I come for you? ~~Certainly because~~ I'm worried about you."		"Why did I come for you? Because I'm worried about you."

	"Hey, what should I do now? Can you tell me?"		"Hey, what should I do now? Can you tell me?"
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	"Just take it as a coincidence."		"Just take it as a coincidence."

	Daisuke picked up the pebbles on the ~~floor~~ and threw them into the pond.		Daisuke picked up the pebbles on the ground and threw them into the pond.

	"~~The one who is commanded isn~~'t ~~you~~, so it sounds much more easier for you..."		"You don't have to hang yourself, so it sounds much more easier for you..."

	"...Sorry."		"...Sorry."
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	"What do you mean?"		"What do you mean?"

	"What I mean is that I will stay with you tonight so you ~~won~~'t ~~be hung to death~~!"		"What I mean is that I will stay with you tonight so you don't hang yourself!"

	"Right! Even if I wanted to hang myself ~~to death suddenly~~, you'll stop me from doing so! Are you really going to stay with me ~~this night~~?"		"Right! Even if I suddenly wanted to hang myself, you'll stop me from doing so! Are you really going to stay with me tonight?"

	"Yeah, ~~hand this~~ to me!"		"Yeah, leave it to me!"

	Nobuaki slapped on his ~~left~~ chest and said confidently.		Nobuaki slapped his chest <!--no clue what to say--> and said confidently.

	"Thanks."		"Thanks."

Cyvro at 01:55, 3 January 2013

2013-01-03T01:55:55Z

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	==Command 5 [Friday, 23 October 08:15]==		==Command 5 [Friday, 23 October 08:15]==

	At one corner of the classroom, Shouta and Daisuke were having ~~a terrible quarrel~~.		In one corner of the classroom, Shouta and Daisuke were having an argument.

	"You must have ~~did~~ it with Misaki yesterday~~, am I right?~~"		"You must have done it with Misaki yesterday!"

	"There's no way I couldn't..."		"There's no way! I couldn't..."

	"No way? ~~Stop looking~~ down on ~~people~~! How dare you sleep<!--actual meaning: make love--> with my ~~woman~~!"		"No way? Din't look down on me! How dare you sleep<!--actual meaning: make love--> with my girl?!"

	Shouta picked him up and ~~pressed~~ him on the wall ~~forcibly~~.		Shouta picked him up and held him against the wall.

	"Misaki, come over here!"		"Misaki, come over here!"

	Misaki was covering her face with her hands, trying to hide the rolling ~~tears on~~ her ~~eyes~~.		Misaki was covering her face with her hands, trying to hide the tears rolling down her cheeks.

	"I'm ~~very~~ sorry! I was terrified and scared..."		"I'm sorry! I was terrified and scared..."

	"So? Didn't I told you not to believe in the King's Game?! According to Daisuke, it was you Misaki, who sent a message to him and called him out, ~~isn~~'t it?"		"So? Didn't I told you not to believe in the King's Game?! According to Daisuke, it was you, Misaki, who sent a message to him and called him out, wasn't it?"

	"I...was scared."		"I...was scared."

	"How dare you ~~look down on me too~~! ~~I have to break up with you~~!"		"How dare you! We're over!"

	"Please don't...please understand me."		"Please don't... please understand."

	Misaki ~~sadly sat on~~ the floor and ~~blurted~~; yet, it was futile ~~in ceasing~~ Shouta's anger.		Misaki collapsed onto the floor and sobbed; yet, it was futile to placate Shouta's anger.

	"By the way, ~~this was all because of~~ Daisuke! Even if Misaki ~~finds~~ you, you can still reject her!"		"By the way, Daisuke is still at fault! Even if Misaki asks you, you can still reject her!"

	Shouta ~~vibrantly shook~~ his fist and slammed it at Daisuke, ~~turning~~ his face ~~to a side~~ and causing his nose to spurt out blood. Shouta wanted to punch him once again, but was stopped by Nobuaki ~~instantly~~.		Shouta held up his fist and slammed it into Daisuke, smashing his face into the wall and causing his nose to spurt out blood. Shouta wanted to punch him once again, but was stopped by Nobuaki.

	"Stop! Stop fighting! Even if it was Daisuke's fault, you've gone too far!"		"Stop! Stop fighting! Even if it was Daisuke's fault, you've gone too far!"

	Nobuaki got hold of Shouta and forced him to ~~leave~~ Daisuke. After a while, Shouta ~~suddenly~~ said to the other students in the class, stretching his arms wide,		Nobuaki got hold of Shouta and forced him to let go of Daisuke. After a while, Shouta said to the other students in the class, stretching his arms out wide,

	"The King will let me command this time, right? ~~Is that~~ what the message ~~wrote?~~"		"The King will let me give the command this time, right? That's what the message said!"

	"What do you want to do?"		"What do you want to do?"
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	For an instant the classroom seemed to have frozen.		For an instant the classroom seemed to have frozen.

	"So I'll command now. Daisuke will have to hang himself ~~to death~~ like Hideki and Satomi!"		"So I'll give me command now. Daisuke will have to hang himself like Hideki and Satomi!"

	Shouta shouted arrogantly. Nobaki hurried to stop him.		Shouta shouted arrogantly. Nobaki hurried to stop him.
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	"Why did you have to say this?! According to your command, Daisuke will have to die whether he follows the command or not!"		"Why did you have to say this?! According to your command, Daisuke will have to die whether he follows the command or not!"

	"Didn't I said before don't believe it? Daisuke and Misaki will understand now that they shouldn't have believed in this shitty game, won't they?"		"Didn't I said before that I don't believe it? Daisuke and Misaki will understand now that they shouldn't have believed in this shitty game, won't they?"

	Shouta ~~slapped~~ on ~~Nobuaki's~~ back and left. Nobaki stared at his back as he left.		Shouta patted Nobuaki on his shoulder <!--actually the word is back but I changed it to shoulder to avoid confusion and help flow in the next sentence--> and left. Nobaki stared at his back as he left.

	At ~~this~~ moment, different ~~ringing tones sounded out~~. The students in the classroom immediately took their phones out to check ~~out~~ their ~~message~~. Nobuaki, surprised, also took out his phone to see what the message was.		At that moment, many different ringtones rang throughout the classroom. The students in the classroom immediately took their phones out to check their messages. Nobuaki, surprised, also took out his phone to see what the message was.

	*[10/23 Friay 8:21		*[10/23 Friay 8:21
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	"~~Tell me what~~ I ~~should~~ do now!"		"What should I do now?"

	Daisuke shouted ~~as if he had gone crazy~~ and ran ~~out~~ of the classroom. Seeing his situation, Shouta scoffed,		Daisuke shouted crazily and ran around of the classroom. Seeing his situation, Shouta scoffed,

	"Serves you right!"		"Serves you right!"
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	"You...!"		"You...!"

	Nobuaki clenched his ~~fist~~ and rushed to Shouta.		Nobuaki clenched his fists and rushed to Shouta.

	"Stop! This will make matters worse, won't it?"		"Stop! This will make matters worse, won't it?"

	"Yeah! The most important thing now is to think of a way to solve Daisuke's ~~crisis~~."		"Yeah! The most important thing now is to think of a way to solve Daisuke's predicament."

	Chiemi and Naoya hurried to Nobuaki to stop him, ~~making~~ him ~~loosening his fist~~.		Chiemi and Naoya hurried to Nobuaki to stop him, trying to relax him.

	"Chiemi, tell the teacher when he arrives that I'll be coming in the classroom a bit late. I'~~ll be~~ off to find Daisuke."		"Chiemi, tell the teacher when he arrives that I'll be coming back to the classroom a bit late. I'm off to find Daisuke."

	That being said, Nobuaki quickly ran off into the corridor to look for any signs of Daisuke. To his disappointment, Daisuke was neither in the corridor, washroom, stairs, nor the cafeteria. After that, he had a look at the shoes cupboard and found out that Daisuke's shoes were gone.		That being said, Nobuaki quickly ran off into the corridor to look for any signs of Daisuke. To his disappointment, Daisuke was neither in the corridor, washroom, stairs, nor the cafeteria. After that, he had a look at the shoes cupboard and found out that Daisuke's shoes were gone.

Silesia: /* Command 5 [Friday, 23 October 08:15] */

2012-12-23T09:55:48Z

Command 5 [Friday, 23 October 08:15]

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	"By the way, this was all because of Daisuke! Even if Misaki finds you, you can still reject her!"		"By the way, this was all because of Daisuke! Even if Misaki finds you, you can still reject her!"

	Shouta vibrantly shook his ~~fast~~ and slammed it at Daisuke, turning his face to a side and causing his nose to spurt out blood. Shouta wanted to punch him once again, but was stopped by Nobuaki instantly.		Shouta vibrantly shook his fist and slammed it at Daisuke, turning his face to a side and causing his nose to spurt out blood. Shouta wanted to punch him once again, but was stopped by Nobuaki instantly.

	"Stop! Stop fighting! Even if it was Daisuke's ~~wrong~~, you've gone too far!"		"Stop! Stop fighting! Even if it was Daisuke's fault, you've gone too far!"

	Nobuaki got hold of Shouta and forced him to leave Daisuke. After a while, Shouta suddenly said to the other students in the class, stretching his arms wide,		Nobuaki got hold of Shouta and forced him to leave Daisuke. After a while, Shouta suddenly said to the other students in the class, stretching his arms wide,
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	"Even if that happened to Hideki and Shitomi?"		"Even if that happened to Hideki and Shitomi?"

	"Just take it as a ~~conincidence~~."		"Just take it as a coincidence."

	Daisuke picked up the pebbles on the floor and threw them into the pond.		Daisuke picked up the pebbles on the floor and threw them into the pond.
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	"Forget the formalities and come in now."		"Forget the formalities and come in now."

	~~Blushed~~, Daisuke pushed Nobuaki and Naoya's backs with his hand and pushed them into his room.		Blushing, Daisuke pushed Nobuaki and Naoya's backs with his hand and pushed them into his room.

	After eating a grand dinner Daisuke's mother cooked, Nobuaki, Naoya, and Daisuke tried not to think of anything about the King's Game. Daisuke took out a video game set and a stack of gaming softwares. The three of them played enthusiastically, but Daisuke will seldom show an expression of sorrow.		After eating a grand dinner Daisuke's mother cooked, Nobuaki, Naoya, and Daisuke tried not to think of anything about the King's Game. Daisuke took out a video game set and a stack of gaming softwares. The three of them played enthusiastically, but Daisuke will seldom show an expression of sorrow.

Pudding321 at 10:51, 6 October 2012

2012-10-06T10:51:14Z

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	*Subject: The King's Game		*Subject: The King's Game
	*Body: This is the King's Game in which everyone in your class is participating. The King's command is absolute and must be done within 24 hours. ※ You can not withdraw from the game.		*Body: This is the King's Game in which everyone in your class is participating. The King's command is absolute and must be done within 24 hours. ※ You can not withdraw from the game.
	*＊Command 5: Student Number 17 Tasaki Daisuke — Tasaki Daisuke will have hang himself to death.		*＊Command 5: Student Number 17 Tasaki Daisuke — Tasaki Daisuke will have to hang himself to death.
	*END]		*END]

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	After school, Nobuaki waited ~~for about five minutes~~ for Daisuke at the school gate ~~where they had agreed beforehand~~.		After school, as they had agreed beforehand, Nobuaki waited for Daisuke at the school gate.

	"Sorry. I'm late!"		"Sorry. I'm late!"

	"Don't worry! ~~You~~ have ~~another person~~ to help ~~you~~<!-- is this fine for English? I know this is a move in Pokemon-->."<!-- It's alright, although there are better ways to write what you meant. MK-->		"Don't worry! We have someone else to help us<!-- is this fine for English? I know this is a move in Pokemon-->."<!-- It's alright, although there are better ways to write what you meant. MK-->

	Naoya ~~showed his head to Daisuke~~, who was hiding behind Nobuaki. <!--What? I thought Naoya was a shy loli for a sec-->		Naoya , who was hiding behind Nobuaki, poked his head out. <!--What? I thought Naoya was a shy loli for a sec-->

	"I think you'll be more ~~relieved~~ if more people are around, so I volunteered! Is it all right?"		"I think you'll feel more relaxed if more people are around, so I volunteered! Is it all right?"

	Daisuke showed an expression of extreme happiness.		Daisuke showed an expression of extreme happiness.
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	"What!? A little!? This is ten times bigger than my house!"		"What!? A little!? This is ten times bigger than my house!"

	"Okay, now come in."		"Okay okay, now come in."

	When they had walked through the meticulously paved ~~pavement~~ and ~~come in~~ front of the gate, Daisuke's mother had already come out to greet them.		When they had walked through the meticulously paved driveway and came to the front of the gate, Daisuke's mother had already come out to greet them.

	"You're back. Eh? Are they your friends?"		"You're back. Eh? Are they your friends?"
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	"You're mum is very beautiful—at least 28 times more beautiful than mine."		"You're mum is very beautiful—at least 28 times more beautiful than mine."

	"Living in a mansion, having such a beautiful mum... it's so envious!"		"Living in a mansion, having such a beautiful mum... I'm so envious!"

	Nobuaki and Naoya then greeted his mum politely.		Nobuaki and Naoya then greeted his mum politely.
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	"Forget the formalities and come in now."		"Forget the formalities and come in now."

	Blushing, Daisuke pushed Nobuaki and Naoya~~'s backs with his hand and pushed them~~ into his room.		Blushing, Daisuke pushed Nobuaki and Naoya into his room.


	After eating a grand dinner Daisuke's mother cooked, Nobuaki, Naoya, and Daisuke tried not to think ~~of anything~~ about the King's Game.		After eating a grand dinner that Daisuke's mother had cooked, Nobuaki, Naoya, and Daisuke tried not to think about the King's Game.

	Daisuke took out a video game ~~set~~ and a stack of games. The three of them played enthusiastically, ~~but~~ Daisuke never showed ~~an expression~~ of ~~sorrow~~.		Daisuke took out a video game console and a stack of games. The three of them played enthusiastically, and Daisuke never showed any hint of sadness.

	"The last time when they didn't follow the orders we got a message five minutes before the deadline. We should receive the same message this time."		"The last time when they didn't follow the orders we got a message five minutes before the deadline. We should receive the same message this time."
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	The three of them stopped playing the video games and took out their phones utterly serious. They focused on the screen of their phone and waited for the time to come.		The three of them stopped playing the video games and took out their phones utterly serious. They focused on the screen of their phone and waited for the time to come.

	The ticking sounds of the second hand of the clock had became loud and clear. All in a sudden, their phones rang ~~unanimously~~.		The ticking sounds of the second hand of the clock had became loud and clear. All in a sudden, their phones rang simultaneously.

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	"W-What should I do? Nobuaki!"		"W-What should I do? Nobuaki!"

	"I ~~have~~ told you to calm down! We're here ~~with~~ you! Besides, didn't we put any ropes and things like that into other rooms and ~~hide~~ them away? You can't hang yourself without those."		"I told you to calm down! We're here for you! Besides, didn't we put any ropes and things like that into other rooms and locked them away? You can't hang yourself without those."

	After that, their phones rang again together.		After that, their phones rang again together.
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	"I'm saved! I'm really saved! Nobuaki, Naoya, thank you so much!"		"I'm saved! I'm really saved! Nobuaki, Naoya, thank you so much!"

	~~Probably because~~ of ~~his release of his emotions~~, tears dripped from Daisuke's eyes.		Because of this catharsis, tears dripped from Daisuke's eyes.

	"Hideki and Shitomi's death were just coincidences. The King's Game is actually fake and only a prank! That's ~~too~~ great, Daisuke!"		"Hideki and Shitomi's death were just coincidences. The King's Game is actually fake and only a prank! That's great, Daisuke!"

	Nobuaki said. After that, he lay on the floor. The three of them were released from the terror and were now bathed in joy.		Nobuaki said. After that, he lay on the floor. The three of them were released from the terror and were now bathed in joy.
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	"He's great! That's why we're so happy!"		"He's great! That's why we're so happy!"

	"Then that's great! Now I can ~~feel assured~~. But, have you seen the King's message yet? The next appointed one is Naoya!"		"Then that's great! Now I can relax. But, have you seen the King's message yet? The next appointed one is Naoya!"

	"Hoho, so is the next person Naoya?"		"Hoho, so is the next person Naoya?"
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	"Daisuke is safe and sound. This means that the King's game is only a prank, right? So there would be no problem with Naoya! Why scare yourself?"		"Daisuke is safe and sound. This means that the King's game is only a prank, right? So there would be no problem with Naoya! Why scare yourself?"

	"Ah, right! Then I can really ~~be assured~~. Don't play too late. I'm heading off to sleep."		"Ah, right! Then I can really relax. Don't play too late. I'm heading off to sleep."

	"~~Good~~ dreams! I love Chiemi the most! Chirp<!--sound-->!"		"Sweet dreams! I love Chiemi the most! Chirp<!--sound-->!"

	"You sure are gross!"		"You sure are gross!"
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	Nobuaki, though he slept late, was woken up by the alarm clock early the next morning at 07:08. He didn't know why, but his felt body very heavy. He looked to his side to find out that Naoya was holding to him from behind while he slept. <!-- this fails: heavy not because of his premonition...oh whatever-->		Nobuaki, though he slept late, was woken up by the alarm clock early the next morning at 07:08. He didn't know why, but his felt body very heavy. He looked to his side to find out that Naoya was holding to him from behind while he slept. <!-- this fails: heavy not because of his premonition...oh whatever-->

	"Why are you holding me so ~~tight~~? You're gross!" <!-- you too-->		"Why are you holding me so tightly? You're gross!" <!-- you too-->

	Nobuaki kicked Naoya off of himself.		Nobuaki kicked Naoya off of himself.
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	"You're sleeping posture sure is ugly. And you're hungry for anything<!--hungry for boys and girls alike-->. Wake up now, Naoya!"		"You're sleeping posture sure is ugly. And you're hungry for anything<!--hungry for boys and girls alike-->. Wake up now, Naoya!"

	Nobuaki vibrantly flicked at Naoya's lower-half body with his finger, causing him to cover his pants, showing an extremely painful expression.		Nobuaki vibrantly flicked at Naoya's lower-half of his body with his finger, causing him to cover his pants, showing an extremely painful expression.

	"You sounded like a duck just then. Are you awake now? Daisuke should also be awake by now."		"You sounded like a duck just then. Are you awake now? Daisuke should also be awake by now."