Owari no Chronicle:Volume6 Chapter 17 - Revision history

N-Ch at 02:00, 13 April 2026

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	“Eh?”		“Eh?”

	“Strange, isn’t it? With all the spinning factories, it was pouring smoke into the air as it made cloth during the war. But that must’ve made them look like military factories. In the early morning of August 2, 1945, ~~170~~ B-29s dropped ~~67,000~~ napalm bombs and killed more than ~~400~~ people. Over eighty percent of the city was burned away.”		“Strange, isn’t it? With all the spinning factories, it was pouring smoke into the air as it made cloth during the war. But that must’ve made them look like military factories. In the early morning of August 2, 1945, one hundred seventy B-29s dropped sixty-seven thousand napalm bombs and killed more than four hundred people. Over eighty percent of the city was burned away.”

	The old manager reached into his pocket and pulled out a cigarette.		The old manager reached into his pocket and pulled out a cigarette.
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	He lit a match despite the fuel and oil tanks around him.		He lit a match despite the fuel and oil tanks around him.

	“And that’s not all. On August 5 when the evacuation train was restarted after the bombing, it was hit by a Grumman air raid on the Takao tunnel. They sprayed machinegun fire on the crowded train and killed about ~~900~~.”		“And that’s not all. On August 5 when the evacuation train was restarted after the bombing, it was hit by a Grumman air raid on the Takao tunnel. They sprayed machinegun fire on the crowded train and killed about nine hundred.”

	As he spoke calmly, he breathed in the cigarette smoke and exhaled.		As he spoke calmly, he breathed in the cigarette smoke and exhaled.

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N-Ch at 05:51, 1 December 2025

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	Three mountain ranges existed to the west of Tokyo.		Three mountain ranges existed to the west of Tokyo.

	The Okutama mountain range was the farthest north, the Akigawa valley ~~travelled~~ south from the Okutama hills to Akigawa, and the Hachioji and Takao mountain range was south of the Akigawa valley.		The Okutama mountain range was the farthest north, the Akigawa valley traveled south from the Okutama hills to Akigawa, and the Hachioji and Takao mountain range was south of the Akigawa valley.

	A highway ~~travelled~~ east to west deep in the mountains of Hachioji. A major road ran through the southern part of Hachioji to allow passage to Kanagawa, so it was a convenient area for transportation despite being mountainous.		A highway traveled east to west deep in the mountains of Hachioji. A major road ran through the southern part of Hachioji to allow passage to Kanagawa, so it was a convenient area for transportation despite being mountainous.

	Long ago, Hachioji had been well known for its many spinning factories. Afterwards, other industries had prospered, but the remains of the obsolete factories still existed in the mountains.		Long ago, Hachioji had been well known for its many spinning factories. Afterwards, other industries had prospered, but the remains of the obsolete factories still existed in the mountains.

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	But the main attraction was the tea and the youkan. Shino sliced up the latter, but the young workers began reaching in before she was done and the old supervisor raised his voice.		But the main attraction was the tea and the youkan. Shino sliced up the latter, but the young workers began reaching in before she was done and the old supervisor raised his voice.

	“Don’t be greedy, you brats! And the bottom edge belongs to ~~Shiho~~-san. Don’t you dare touch it.”		“Don’t be greedy, you brats! And the bottom edge belongs to Shino-san. Don’t you dare touch it.”

	She smiled bitterly and used her daily experience to neatly divide it even for an odd number of people.		She smiled bitterly and used her daily experience to neatly divide it even for an odd number of people.
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Chapter 17: Afternoon Space: small grammar edit

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	Mikage had looked discouraged which bothered Shinjou, but she had seemed to calm down a bit once Izumo had given her a diary from the things collected beneath the destroyed house.		Mikage had looked discouraged which bothered Shinjou, but she had seemed to calm down a bit once Izumo had given her a diary from the things collected beneath the destroyed house.

	When Shinjou ~~imagine~~ the diary as being like her binder, she felt a sense of relief.		When Shinjou imagined the diary as being like her binder, she felt a sense of relief.

	…''Everyone has something like that, don’t they?		…''Everyone has something like that, don’t they?

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	…''Ahh, why am I lecturing this idiot?		…''Ahh, why am I lecturing this idiot?

	She frowned and looked Apollo in the ~~eyes~~.		She frowned and looked Apollo in the eye.

	He looked back with a serious expression.		He looked back with a serious expression.

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	…''Ahh, why am I lecturing this idiot?		…''Ahh, why am I lecturing this idiot?

	She frowned and looked Apollo in the ~~eye~~.		She frowned and looked Apollo in the eyes.

	He looked back with a serious expression.		He looked back with a serious expression.

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	“Don’t be stupid. I was born during the war. It’d take a lot for me to complain about the food. Also…”		“Don’t be stupid. I was born during the war. It’d take a lot for me to complain about the food. Also…”

	He looked to the east. The city of Takao was visible through the trees and the city of Hachioji was wrapped in a bit of heat ~~have~~ even further along.		He looked to the east. The city of Takao was visible through the trees and the city of Hachioji was wrapped in a bit of heat haze even further along.

	“She’s the adoptive daughter of the people who took me and this factory in after it looked like there was no hope left. If she served me poison, I’d eat it.”		“She’s the adoptive daughter of the people who took me and this factory in after it looked like there was no hope left. If she served me poison, I’d eat it.”

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	The tape in an old cassette player was playing a radio recording from the previous night.		The tape in an old cassette player was playing a radio recording from the previous night.

	The DJ giving his recollection of the Showa era provided background noise as the elderly work ~~supervisor~~ gave his own commentary to the younger workers.		The DJ giving his recollection of the Showa era provided background noise as the elderly work manager gave his own commentary to the younger workers.

	The girl jogged toward the factory’s large main entrance that stood open, but she turned toward the building’s shade before entering.		The girl jogged toward the factory’s large main entrance that stood open, but she turned toward the building’s shade before entering.
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	“I made some snacks.”		“I made some snacks.”

	The workers raised their hands in joy, but the elderly ~~supervisor~~ stood up.		The workers raised their hands in joy, but the elderly manager stood up.

	“Shino-san, hot tea is best when it’s hot. Do you have any? These guys need it most. I can’t have them getting too exhausted.”		“Shino-san, hot tea is best when it’s hot. Do you have any? These guys need it most. I can’t have them getting too exhausted.”
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	“Yes. I had a feeling you would say that.”		“Yes. I had a feeling you would say that.”

	The younger workers gave groans of protest, but the old ~~supervisor~~ quieted them down with a glare.		The younger workers gave groans of protest, but the old manager quieted them down with a glare.

	Shino smiled at all of them.		Shino smiled at all of them.
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	She set down some honey-preserved lemons and bottles of frozen sports drinks. The candy was homemade. She also had peanut butter sandwiches that were a tad small but would feel like plenty to someone with an empty stomach.		She set down some honey-preserved lemons and bottles of frozen sports drinks. The candy was homemade. She also had peanut butter sandwiches that were a tad small but would feel like plenty to someone with an empty stomach.

	But the main attraction was the tea and the youkan. Shino sliced up the latter, but the young workers began reaching in before she was done and the old ~~supervisor~~ raised his voice.		But the main attraction was the tea and the youkan. Shino sliced up the latter, but the young workers began reaching in before she was done and the old manager raised his voice.

	“Don’t be greedy, you brats! And the bottom edge belongs to Shino-san. Don’t you dare touch it.”		“Don’t be greedy, you brats! And the bottom edge belongs to Shino-san. Don’t you dare touch it.”
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	The chain hanging from her neck spilled from her collar and to her chest. A blue stone was attached to the chain and it was currently giving off a blue light.		The chain hanging from her neck spilled from her collar and to her chest. A blue stone was attached to the chain and it was currently giving off a blue light.

	“That’s a troubling light, Shino-san,” said the old ~~supervisor~~. “But he likes you, so don’t be cruel.”		“That’s a troubling light, Shino-san,” said the old manager. “But he likes you, so don’t be cruel.”

	Shino smiled with the ends of her eyebrows lowered.		Shino smiled with the ends of her eyebrows lowered.
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	“Um… When that happens, please scold me. I’ll feel better that way.”		“Um… When that happens, please scold me. I’ll feel better that way.”

	“But…uh… We couldn’t possibly… Oh, ~~supervisor~~! You eat the food too, so you can do it!”		“But…uh… We couldn’t possibly… Oh, manager! You eat the food too, so you can do it!”

	“Don’t be stupid. I was born during the war. It’d take a lot for me to complain about the food. Also…”		“Don’t be stupid. I was born during the war. It’d take a lot for me to complain about the food. Also…”
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	“She’s the adoptive daughter of the people who took me and this factory in after it looked like there was no hope left. If she served me poison, I’d eat it.”		“She’s the adoptive daughter of the people who took me and this factory in after it looked like there was no hope left. If she served me poison, I’d eat it.”

	~~“Supervisor~~! You say that, but you always make sure you’re first in line after Shino-san for the youkan!”		“Manager! You say that, but you always make sure you’re first in line after Shino-san for the youkan!”

	“Pay attention, you fools. My diabetes test came back positive. I’m risking my life here.”		“Pay attention, you fools. My diabetes test came back positive. I’m risking my life here.”

	“U-um, ~~supervisor~~? That’s actually really serious.”		“U-um, manager? That’s actually really serious.”

	Shino began wondering if she could make a low-sugar youkan.		Shino began wondering if she could make a low-sugar youkan.

	While he continued looking toward Hachioji, a smile appeared on the corner of the ~~supervisor’s~~ mouth.		While he continued looking toward Hachioji, a smile appeared on the corner of the manager’s mouth.

	“Well, however it happened, this is funny. This factory is almost entirely filled with people from other worlds and I’m the only one from this world. My family thinks I just like messing around with old junk,” he said. “Anyway, Shino-san, did you know that Hachioji, this city west of Tokyo, was bombed during World War Two?”		“Well, however it happened, this is funny. This factory is almost entirely filled with people from other worlds and I’m the only one from this world. My family thinks I just like messing around with old junk,” he said. “Anyway, Shino-san, did you know that Hachioji, this city west of Tokyo, was bombed during World War Two?”
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	“Strange, isn’t it? With all the spinning factories, it was pouring smoke into the air as it made cloth during the war. But that must’ve made them look like military factories. In the early morning of August 2, 1945, 170 B-29s dropped 67,000 napalm bombs and killed more than 400 people. Over eighty percent of the city was burned away.”		“Strange, isn’t it? With all the spinning factories, it was pouring smoke into the air as it made cloth during the war. But that must’ve made them look like military factories. In the early morning of August 2, 1945, 170 B-29s dropped 67,000 napalm bombs and killed more than 400 people. Over eighty percent of the city was burned away.”

	The old ~~supervisor~~ reached into his pocket and pulled out a cigarette.		The old manager reached into his pocket and pulled out a cigarette.

	He lit a match despite the fuel and oil tanks around him.		He lit a match despite the fuel and oil tanks around him.
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	“I’d like you to show me around Hachioji sometime.”		“I’d like you to show me around Hachioji sometime.”

	“These youngsters could introduce you to some better places. Unless you want people to think you’re looking after your grandfather or something.” The ~~supervisor~~ pointed toward the back of the building. “More importantly, Mikoku is over there. She’s training with Tatsumi before heading to Kurashiki tonight. Such nonsense.”		“These youngsters could introduce you to some better places. Unless you want people to think you’re looking after your grandfather or something.” The manager pointed toward the back of the building. “More importantly, Mikoku is over there. She’s training with Tatsumi before heading to Kurashiki tonight. Such nonsense.”

	“What about Alex?”		“What about Alex?”