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	==Chapter 1: Irukinuf’s Songstress==		==Chapter 1: Irukinuf’s Songstress==

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	In response to Alice’s question, that was more like a threat, Dorothy made a peace sign in agreement.		In response to Alice’s question, that was more like a threat, Dorothy made a peace sign in agreement.

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	==Translator's Notes and References==		==Translator's Notes and References==
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	Alice resigned herself, fully theatrical, and looked outside the window. A girl in a light brown cape and a white skirt was walking by<ref>The text says "ケープ" but it's closer to a "caped overcoat"</ref>. Those were the same clothes Alice was wearing. That was conventionally called a school uniform.		Alice resigned herself, fully theatrical, and looked outside the window. A girl in a light brown cape and a white skirt was walking by<ref>The text says "ケープ" but it's closer to a "caped overcoat"</ref>. Those were the same clothes Alice was wearing. That was conventionally called a school uniform.

	Though wearing a short uniform skirt was popular these days, when it came to girls’ skirt length, the one which attracted the most attention after all was this one they wore, that could already be called “micromini”. The students and connoisseurs made fun of the “St. Label’s Academy” name, parodying and calling it “Navels Academy”.<ref>*This should be a pun with “ラベ丈” (Rabe Length, pronounced “Rabetake” instead of “Label’s Gakuen”)... which I can’t figure out what means :p Should work pretty nicely like this, though</ref>		Though wearing a short uniform skirt was popular these days, when it came to girls’ skirt length, the one which attracted the most attention after all was this one they wore, that could already be called “micromini”. The students and connoisseurs made fun of the “St. Label’s Academy” name, parodying and calling it “Navels Academy”.<ref>This should be a pun with “ラベ丈” (Rabe Length, pronounced “Rabetake” instead of “Label’s Gakuen”)... which I can’t figure out what means :p Should work pretty nicely like this, though</ref>

	Though they couldn’t clearly tell when it had happened, this was considered normal by now, and it had a very high male support. According to one theory, the Headmaster had shortened the skirt length to make the students behave properly, by using their own shame. Certainly, in order to prevent anyone else from seeing their underwear with that skirt length, they had to walk carefully so that their skirt wouldn’t wave, and they had to close their thighs properly when they sat down on a chair. Forcibly being obedient meant they couldn’t help but to mind their manners too.		Though they couldn’t clearly tell when it had happened, this was considered normal by now, and it had a very high male support. According to one theory, the Headmaster had shortened the skirt length to make the students behave properly, by using their own shame. Certainly, in order to prevent anyone else from seeing their underwear with that skirt length, they had to walk carefully so that their skirt wouldn’t wave, and they had to close their thighs properly when they sat down on a chair. Forcibly being obedient meant they couldn’t help but to mind their manners too.
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	“Eeh~, but, with Allie and her habit of peeing...”		“Eeh~, but, with Allie and her habit of peeing...”

	“Don’t bring up mistakes from over a decade ago! So, how about it, will you join me or not!?”<ref>*This should refer to the bomb incident previously noted... and “decade” should be an exaggeration from Alice, or their ages really don’t fit here</ref>		“Don’t bring up mistakes from over a decade ago! So, how about it, will you join me or not!?”<ref>This should refer to the bomb incident previously noted... and “decade” should be an exaggeration from Alice, or their ages really don’t fit here</ref>

	In response to Alice’s question, that was more like a threat, Dorothy made a peace sign in agreement.		In response to Alice’s question, that was more like a threat, Dorothy made a peace sign in agreement.

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	“Why, I wonder when I got so dumb.”		“Why, I wonder when I got so dumb.”

	~~'''(!~~<!—I think she’s criticizing herself for acting as Dorothy’s decoy, could someone please check it for me?「どうして、こういう頭の悪いことになっちゃうのかしらね」-->~~)'''~~		<!--I think she’s criticizing herself for acting as Dorothy’s decoy, could someone please check it for me?「どうして、こういう頭の悪いことになっちゃうのかしらね」-->

	Alice gave a sigh. Nevertheless, getting the treasure without pulling the trigger once was quite stylish.		Alice gave a sigh. Nevertheless, getting the treasure without pulling the trigger once was quite stylish.

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	“That’s fine, because it’s a symbol of the extraordinary! And I’m not ashamed even if my underwear is showing, either!”		“That’s fine, because it’s a symbol of the extraordinary! And I’m not ashamed even if my underwear is showing, either!”

	Along with the special black protective suit Alice called her battle suit, she wore white underwear that had nanomicron units woven into it with the necessary functions for living body preservation. They absolutely ~~weren’t~~ just panties!		Along with the special black protective suit Alice called her battle suit, she wore white underwear that had nanomicron units woven into it with the necessary functions for living body preservation.

			<i>They absolutely aren't just panties!</i>

	As she argued with March Hare, she delicately adjusted her skirt’s waist.		As she argued with March Hare, she delicately adjusted her skirt’s waist.
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	In a corner of the Book Building, a rare handwritten plate had been hanged under the librarian booth’s signboard: “Literature Club.” That was the name of the club based on the Book Building, that had many club activities. Matching the scale of the Book Building’s collection of books, there were no less than two rooms with librarian booths on each floor, for a total of 20 rooms. Since the number of clubrooms was higher than the number of librarians, one of the available rooms had been set aside as the room for the literature club.		In a corner of the Book Building, a rare handwritten plate had been hanged under the librarian booth’s signboard: “Literature Club.” That was the name of the club based on the Book Building, that had many club activities. Matching the scale of the Book Building’s collection of books, there were no less than two rooms with librarian booths on each floor, for a total of 20 rooms. Since the number of clubrooms was higher than the number of librarians, one of the available rooms had been set aside as the room for the literature club.

	After school, at the librarian’s booth there were several men and women who belonged to the literature club.		After school, at the librarian’s booth there were several men and women who belonged to the literature club.

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	“At the time of World War II, it seems the Soviet Forces took it away. Without noticing the worth of the goods, apparently the Salzburg Cube is still lying inside the Museum of the Soviet Army.”<ref> The author keeps calling it “Red Army Museum”, but this seems to be an error in the original. Wikipedia says it’s better known as above: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Central_Armed_Forces_Museum, and the Japanese name for it apparently isn’t the one given so far, either</ref>		“At the time of World War II, it seems the Soviet Forces took it away. Without noticing the worth of the goods, apparently the Salzburg Cube is still lying inside the Museum of the Soviet Army.”<ref> The author keeps calling it “Red Army Museum”, but this seems to be an error in the original. Wikipedia says it’s better known as above: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Central_Armed_Forces_Museum, and the Japanese name for it apparently isn’t the one given so far, either</ref>

	“Museum of the Soviet Army ~?”		“Museum of the Soviet Army~?”

	The Museum of the Soviet Army was under military jurisdiction, rather than civilian. The security level should also be more severe, in a totally different class than ordinary museums.		The Museum of the Soviet Army was under military jurisdiction, rather than civilian. The security level should also be more severe, in a totally different class than ordinary museums.

	“Shall we do a treasure scramble game for the first time in a while? Tonight, that is.”		“Shall we do a treasure scramble game for the first time in a while? Tonight, that is.”

	“Tonight~? I wonder what I should do.”		“Tonight~? I wonder what I should do.”

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	“If you read our ideas beforehand, you’ll get less enjoyment when you read the story later.”		“If you read our ideas beforehand, you’ll get less enjoyment when you read the story later.”

	“The short story you ran on the last club journal was interesting. I want to see a continuation.”		“The short story you ran on the last club journal was interesting. I want to see a continuation.”

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	“What’s your affiliation? Mr. Ivan.”		“What’s your affiliation? Mr. Ivan.”

	“If you don’t get it just by looking, it’s useless to answer, you she-devil.”<ref>He calls her a “female youkai”, due to the Boost trick, that is</ref>		“If you don’t get it just by looking, it’s useless to answer, you she-devil.”<ref>He calls her a “female youkai”, due to the Boost trick, that is.</ref>

	“Oh, I thought superstition vanished in the era of socialism?”		“Oh, I thought superstition vanished in the era of socialism?”
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	What could move the fastest under these circumstances was Alice in her Boost state. Her reaction speed exceeded the Catcher Head’s muzzle velocity, and once overtaking it, she grabbed the rock mass before Lynn’s tentacle!		What could move the fastest under these circumstances was Alice in her Boost state. Her reaction speed exceeded the Catcher Head’s muzzle velocity, and once overtaking it, she grabbed the rock mass before Lynn’s tentacle!

	“Treasure secured -!! Eh, what?”		“Treasure secured-!! Eh, what?”

	The rock lump containing Salzburg’s Cube began to crumble and fall apart in her hands.		The rock lump containing Salzburg’s Cube began to crumble and fall apart in her hands.