Rakuin no Monshou:The Little Fugitive - Revision history

Renuac: /* The Little Fugitive */

2017-07-01T15:38:49Z

The Little Fugitive

← Older revision		Revision as of 15:38, 1 July 2017
Line 63:		Line 63:
	''Damn.''		''Damn.''

	Orba realised that this time, he had definitely messed up and been rude. Unbefitting of her lovely appearance and ~~small stature~~, once this princess had decided that the other person was an “enemy”, she would press them without any mercy. That would be the case even if her own life was being threatened with a sword or a gun.		Orba realised that this time, he had definitely messed up and been rude. Unbefitting of her lovely appearance and dainty frame, once this princess had decided that the other person was an “enemy”, she would press them without any mercy. That would be the case even if her own life was being threatened with a sword or a gun.

	Orba felt exactly as though he had been caught in an enemy trap.		Orba felt exactly as though he had been caught in an enemy trap.
Line 79:		Line 79:
	However,		However,

	''According to the chamberlain, Gil had a good relationship with his other step-sister Ineli Mephius but practically no one has ever seen him talk with Flora''.		''According to the chamberlain, Gil had a good relationship with his other step-sister, Ineli Mephius, but practically no one has ever seen him talk with Flora''.

	Orba had been taught beforehand about what kind of relationship Gil had with the people who were socially close to him. Basically, that was so that he could play his part without raising any doubts – without there being any suspicion that Gil had been replaced by a sword slave.		Orba had been taught beforehand about what kind of relationship Gil had with the people who were socially close to him. Basically, that was so that he could play his part without raising any doubts – without there being any suspicion that Gil had been replaced by a sword slave.
Line 108:		Line 108:
	The Mephian army had robbed Orba of his family and of everyone he knew from the village he had been born and raised in. One of his reasons for spending each day as the prince’s body-double was to get revenge on those with power.		The Mephian army had robbed Orba of his family and of everyone he knew from the village he had been born and raised in. One of his reasons for spending each day as the prince’s body-double was to get revenge on those with power.

	''A kitten has disappeared? So she wants me to do something because ~~she’s~~ not eating?''		''A kitten has disappeared? So she wants me to do something because the girl’s not eating?''

	Completely ridiculous. If she didn’t want to eat, then don’t serve her food. Her stomach would get empty soon enough and then she wouldn’t go on about where-oh-where her kitten was.		Completely ridiculous. If she didn’t want to eat, then don’t serve her food. Her stomach would get empty soon enough and then she wouldn’t go on about where-oh-where her kitten was.

Renuac: /* Part 1 */

2017-07-01T15:34:41Z

Part 1

← Older revision		Revision as of 15:34, 1 July 2017
Line 57:		Line 57:
	Thinking that at any rate it didn’t look like he was going to be scolded, Orba made a noncommittal response.		Thinking that at any rate it didn’t look like he was going to be scolded, Orba made a noncommittal response.

	"This is your little sister. What kind of ~~response~~ is "That so"?"		"This is your little sister. What kind of reaction is "That so"?"

	Vileena’s eyes immediately flared at the corners.		Vileena’s eyes immediately flared at the corners.

Renuac: /* Part 1 */

2017-07-01T15:33:07Z

Part 1

← Older revision		Revision as of 15:33, 1 July 2017
Line 47:		Line 47:
	They were rare animals in Solon. And Schypa cats even more so. He had heard that they were a breed that only lived in the eastern part of the continent and that they were popular pets.		They were rare animals in Solon. And Schypa cats even more so. He had heard that they were a breed that only lived in the eastern part of the continent and that they were popular pets.

	“But not long ago, when Lady Flora ~~took it~~ to play in the garden and ~~had taken~~ her eyes off it for a moment, it ran away.”		“But not long ago, when Lady Flora went to play with it in the garden and took her eyes off it for a moment, it ran away.”

	“Oh.”		“Oh.”

Renuac at 15:31, 1 July 2017

2017-07-01T15:31:54Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 15:31, 1 July 2017
Line 19:		Line 19:
	The one who had called out to Orba as “Gil Mephius” was a young girl by the name of Vileena Owell whose platinum hair was swaying as she ran up to him. Fourteen years old. Some months earlier she had come to Mephius from the neighbouring country Garbera. She was Crown Prince Gil’s fiancée.		The one who had called out to Orba as “Gil Mephius” was a young girl by the name of Vileena Owell whose platinum hair was swaying as she ran up to him. Fourteen years old. Some months earlier she had come to Mephius from the neighbouring country Garbera. She was Crown Prince Gil’s fiancée.

	Mephius and Garbera had been ~~at war~~ for ten years. A feeling of war-weariness having started to spread throughout both countries, it was ~~decided~~ that the two young people would be engaged as proof of the cessation of hostilities and of the alliance.		Mephius and Garbera had been in conflict for ten years. A feeling of war-weariness having started to spread throughout both countries, it was agreed that the two young people would be engaged as proof of the cessation of hostilities and of the alliance.

	And thus we arrive at today, after they had eaten breakfast together.		And thus we arrive at today, after they had eaten breakfast together.

Renuac: /* Part 2 */

2017-06-28T18:46:48Z

Part 2

← Older revision		Revision as of 18:46, 28 June 2017
Line 478:		Line 478:
	They talked idly. Not having to worry about his identity being known made Orba more talkative but it wasn’t only because of the pleasure of exchanging words. The girl felt strangely out of place.		They talked idly. Not having to worry about his identity being known made Orba more talkative but it wasn’t only because of the pleasure of exchanging words. The girl felt strangely out of place.

	''She ~~has~~ too ~~much culture~~''.		''She's too well educated.''.

	Obviously, most of the people who lived in a place like this had a hard time making it from day to day. He didn’t think they had the money to spare to buy books. Moreover, her mother wore drab and dirty clothes whereas Alicia’s were clean and beautiful and were made of fine cotton with embroidery.		Obviously, most of the people who lived in a place like this had a hard time making it from day to day. He didn’t think they had the money to spare to buy books. Moreover, her mother wore drab and dirty clothes whereas Alicia’s were clean and beautiful and were made of fine cotton with embroidery.
Line 502:		Line 502:
	“Is your mother always strict?”		“Is your mother always strict?”

	“Usually. But after we came here she might have ~~become~~ scarier than before.”		“Usually. But after we came here she might have gotten scarier than before.”

	“And your father?”		“And your father?”

Renuac: /* Part 4 */

2016-12-30T20:36:10Z

Part 4

← Older revision		Revision as of 20:36, 30 December 2016
Line 875:		Line 875:
	Dach shouted “Fall back” and leaped backwards himself. The glitter of steel struck from all directions. As yet more strokes rained down, he returned them with his own sword.		Dach shouted “Fall back” and leaped backwards himself. The glitter of steel struck from all directions. As yet more strokes rained down, he returned them with his own sword.

	– ~~The~~ had been caught in an ambush.		– They had been caught in an ambush.

	As the only one to instantly realise as much, Dach shoved into his men while spurring them into action.		As the only one to instantly realise as much, Dach shoved into his men while spurring them into action.

Renuac: /* Part 5 */

2016-12-25T08:43:03Z

Part 5

← Older revision		Revision as of 08:43, 25 December 2016
Line 1,172:		Line 1,172:



	Early one morning, a few days before the departure for Apta.		Early one morning, a few days before the departure for Apta.

Renuac at 23:50, 24 December 2016

2016-12-24T23:50:51Z

← Older revision		Revision as of 23:50, 24 December 2016
Line 1:		Line 1:
	~~{{Incomplete\|pages=3/14}}~~
	==The Little Fugitive==		==The Little Fugitive==

Renuac: /* The Little Fugitive */

2016-12-24T23:42:15Z

The Little Fugitive

← Older revision		Revision as of 23:42, 24 December 2016
Line 93:		Line 93:

	The reason why Orba immediately felt like clicking his tongue was because, although she courteously bowed her head, Vileena’s eyes were openly blazing with anger.		The reason why Orba immediately felt like clicking his tongue was because, although she courteously bowed her head, Vileena’s eyes were openly blazing with anger.



Line 354:		Line 355:

	He went rigid for a moment and right then, he heard footsteps pounding violently up the stairs.		He went rigid for a moment and right then, he heard footsteps pounding violently up the stairs.



Line 558:		Line 560:

	On the other side of the wall were two round eyes. It was exactly as though it had been waiting for him but abruptly and with no waste of time, it turned its head away and, once more elegantly sashaying its behind, the schypa cat walked off.		On the other side of the wall were two round eyes. It was exactly as though it had been waiting for him but abruptly and with no waste of time, it turned its head away and, once more elegantly sashaying its behind, the schypa cat walked off.



Line 648:		Line 651:

	When Dach and the others left the room, Jurgen’s mind was already pondering about which mistress to call next time and when that would be.		When Dach and the others left the room, Jurgen’s mind was already pondering about which mistress to call next time and when that would be.



Line 721:		Line 725:

	“Well anyway. I’ve held you back,” Prince Gil said coolly and went back into the palace without sparing him another glance.		“Well anyway. I’ve held you back,” Prince Gil said coolly and went back into the palace without sparing him another glance.



Line 778:		Line 783:

	The shop owner was terrifyingly strong and easily pulled her down. As despair as dark as night was descending on Sasha’s heart, several shadows approached the shop from outside.		The shop owner was terrifyingly strong and easily pulled her down. As despair as dark as night was descending on Sasha’s heart, several shadows approached the shop from outside.



Line 838:		Line 844:

	The gladiator Orba had passed through many scenes of bloodshed but there was the unmistakable sound of tension in his voice. Perhaps because she was sensitively aware of it, ragged breaths started to escape from Alicia's nose and mouth.		The gladiator Orba had passed through many scenes of bloodshed but there was the unmistakable sound of tension in his voice. Perhaps because she was sensitively aware of it, ragged breaths started to escape from Alicia's nose and mouth.



Line 880:		Line 887:

	Dach’s men finally started fighting back. The clash of weapons resounded within that shadowy space.		Dach’s men finally started fighting back. The clash of weapons resounded within that shadowy space.



Line 1,162:		Line 1,170:

	When Gil Mephius gave a heartfelt smile, the like of which he never showed at the palace, the soldiers who were hauling Jurgen away looked a little astounded.		When Gil Mephius gave a heartfelt smile, the like of which he never showed at the palace, the soldiers who were hauling Jurgen away looked a little astounded.

Renuac: /* The Little Fugitive */

2016-12-24T23:25:12Z

The Little Fugitive

Show changes