Rakuin no Monshou:Volume12 Chapter3 - Revision history

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Part 2

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	Gil Mephius.		Gil Mephius.

	Orba, the former gladiator who had falsely ~~take~~ that name, had his sword raised from where he had just beheaded an Allion soldier who was near the cannon.		Orba, the former gladiator who had falsely taken that name, had his sword raised from where he had just beheaded an Allion soldier who was near the cannon.

	Who would first become aware of the other?		Who would first become aware of the other?
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	It was just about then that a gunshot resounded.		It was just about then that a gunshot resounded.


	=== Part 3 ===		=== Part 3 ===

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2017-12-28T00:42:27Z

Part 3: typo

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	The nearby Pashir quickly placed his horse in the direction that the bullet had come from and put himself in position to act as the prince’s shield.		The nearby Pashir quickly placed his horse in the direction that the bullet had come from and put himself in position to act as the prince’s shield.

	It was not only the Mephian soldiers, but also the ones from Ende, who had been gathering there, who were thrown into confusion, and the place became a jumble of those who threw themselves to the ground with a cry, those who ran off to look for the ~~snipper~~, and those who positioned themselves to shield the prince.		It was not only the Mephian soldiers, but also the ones from Ende, who had been gathering there, who were thrown into confusion, and the place became a jumble of those who threw themselves to the ground with a cry, those who ran off to look for the sniper, and those who positioned themselves to shield the prince.

	The soldier who had taken the shot was not fatally injured. Perhaps because of the distance, the bullet had only penetrated as far as the muscles of his arm, from which darkish blood was flowing.		The soldier who had taken the shot was not fatally injured. Perhaps because of the distance, the bullet had only penetrated as far as the muscles of his arm, from which darkish blood was flowing.

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2017-12-26T14:46:20Z

Duplicate sentence.

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	Meanwhile, eight kilometres east of Dairan and at around midnight, a commotion also broke out all at once at the mountain pass where the allied Garberan and western forces were confronting Allion’s army. The reason was the same as for Eric’s troops: brilliant flames had risen from the direction of Dairan.

	Meanwhile, eight kilometres east of Dairan and at around midnight, a commotion also broke out all at once at the mountain pass where the allied Garberan and western forces were confronting Allion’s army. The reason was the same as for Eric’s troops: brilliant flames had risen from the direction of Dairan.		Meanwhile, eight kilometres east of Dairan and at around midnight, a commotion also broke out all at once at the mountain pass where the allied Garberan and western forces were confronting Allion’s army. The reason was the same as for Eric’s troops: brilliant flames had risen from the direction of Dairan.

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2017-12-24T23:49:10Z

Created page with "==Chapter 3: Dairan in Flames== === Part 1 === Although isolated within the enemy’s formation, Eric naturally did not just stand by with his arms crossed. While sending a..."

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