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	“That’s a cold attitude you’re showing me. And that while all this time I’ve been counting the days, looking forward to your return. I’ve been worried about you these last few days, brother, and could hardly stomach dinner. And now you won’t even tell your cute little sister one story about your travels?”		“That’s a cold attitude you’re showing me. And that while all this time I’ve been counting the days, looking forward to your return. I’ve been worried about you these last few days, brother, and could hardly stomach dinner. And now you won’t even tell your cute little sister one story about your travels?”

	“Ahh…” Gil forced a smile and made eye contact. “I have enough to tell, but can we do this some other time. I’m just a little tired.”		“Ahh…” Gil forced a smile and made eye contact. “I have enough to tell, but can we do this some other time? I’m just a little tired.”

	“Fine…”		“Fine…”
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	With those words, Ineli left it at that, but not because she was worried about the prince, but because Gil had already avoided her gaze and turned his heels to walk away. She was unable to call out to him again, her pretty looks warping into scorn. But then she suddenly froze for a different reason.		With those words, Ineli left it at that, but not because she was worried about the prince, but because Gil had already avoided her gaze and turned his heels to walk away. She was unable to call out to him again, her pretty looks warping into scorn. But then she suddenly froze for a different reason.

	That was because that one look the prince had given her.		That was because of that one look the prince had given her.

	It looked the same as the one from the masked warrior in the arena.		It looked the same as the one from the masked warrior in the arena.

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	“It seems you’ve used various ideas. But I’m truly pleased that Ryucown’s head has been severed by Mephian hands. This is more of a victory than we expected.”		“It seems you’ve used various ideas. But I’m truly pleased that Ryucown’s head has been severed by Mephian hands. This is more of a victory than we expected.”

	“This was all because of ~~Duke~~ Fedom’s wisdom. General Oubary has also been of great assistance during my first campaign. It was also thanks to the soldiers and retainers by your guidance, father. I merely borrowed their strength.”		“This was all because of Lord Fedom’s wisdom. General Oubary has also been of great assistance during my first campaign. It was also thanks to the soldiers and retainers by your guidance, father. I merely borrowed their strength.”

	“Oh?”		“Oh?”

Dohma: /* Epilogue */

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Epilogue

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	His smile showed he was making a joke.		His smile showed he was making a joke.

	Embarrassed, Gil bowed his head and said, “I will.” It invited a laugh from the ~~rows~~ audience members.		Embarrassed, Gil bowed his head and said, “I will.” It invited a laugh from the lined-up audience members.

	Princess Vileena had been given a private room in the inner palace. Together with her attendant Theresia, she could expect a well-established way of life for now. Moreover, when they decided upon a new date for the marriage, Garbera would no doubt return the captured territory of Apta in the form of a ‘gift’. The Kingdom of Garbera wouldn’t be able to face Mephius properly anymore if they didn’t.		Princess Vileena had been given a private room in the inner palace. Together with her attendant Theresia, she could expect a well-established way of life for now. Moreover, when they decided upon a new date for the marriage, Garbera would no doubt return the captured territory of Apta in the form of a ‘gift’. The Kingdom of Garbera wouldn’t be able to face Mephius properly anymore if they didn’t.

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2014-03-04T16:25:16Z

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	The expression on Guhl’s face was unusually calm as he nodded. It looked like His Majesty was definitely pleased, and the senior statesmen made eye contact with each other showing satisfied looks. Earlier, although it seemed like he showed a much more severe attitude towards his true son, all he wished for was his own child’s growth. There wasn’t a parent that didn’t love his child.		The expression on Guhl’s face was unusually calm as he nodded. It looked like His Majesty was definitely pleased, and the senior statesmen made eye contact with each other showing satisfied looks. Earlier, although it seemed like he showed a much more severe attitude towards his true son, all he wished for was his own child’s growth. There wasn’t a parent that didn’t love his child.

	“As a result from our conference with Garbera, it’s decided we should once again put our attention your marriage with Princess Vileena. Until then, she is a special guest of ours. But we can understand passionate feelings, so keep your lovemaking to a low so there won’t ~~cause~~ any trouble.”		“As a result from our conference with Garbera, it’s decided we should once again put our attention on your marriage with Princess Vileena. Until then, she is a special guest of ours. But we can understand passionate feelings, so keep your lovemaking to a low so there won’t be any trouble.”

	His smile showed he was making a joke.		His smile showed he was making a joke.
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	“Aahhh…”		“Aahhh…”

	The moment he arrived in his room he laid down on the bed, ~~arm~~ and legs spread wide.		The moment he arrived in his room he laid down on the bed, arms and legs spread wide.

	“That’s quite unbecoming, your highness,” his page Dinn berated.		“That’s quite unbecoming, your highness,” his page Dinn berated.
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	It was the first thing Gowen said after being invited to the prince’s room. Shique nodded and said,		It was the first thing Gowen said after being invited to the prince’s room. Shique nodded and said,

	“And during your audience. On one hand, you’re a former sword-slave disguised as the emperor’s son. But the other hand…”		“And during your audience. On one hand, you’re a former sword-slave disguised as the emperor’s son. But on the other hand…”

	Orba stepped in and took over the conversation.		Orba stepped in and took over the conversation.

Dohma: Volume 1 Epilogue complete

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 He hadn’t forgotten to give the anti-imperial groups their fair warning.
-"Ah," Obra's face squeezed out what look like a false smile.
+“Onii-sama!”
-"Can we stop for now? I will definitely accompany you next time. I am a bit exhausted today."
+Nobody knew.

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	He hadn’t forgotten to give the anti-imperial groups their fair warning.		He hadn’t forgotten to give the anti-imperial groups their fair warning.

			"Onii-Chan." Ineli suddenly appeared in front of the departing Obra, and offered her congratulations. The princess lift her skirts in a bow, but Obra only responded perfunctorily, and quickly turned away. The beautiful girl frowned (?)

			"You are so heartless. I have been counting the days until the day onii-chan comes home. Because I have been worried about your health, I couldn't even eat properly. Yet Onii-chan couldn't even reward me?"

			"Ah," Obra's face squeezed out what look like a false smile.

			"Can we stop for now? I will definitely accompany you next time. I am a bit exhausted today."



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			==Epilogue==

			There was a lot of wandering.

			The strong emotions that got carried along weren’t meant for the current Orba.

			This was not the road he himself had expected to walk, but if he expected to obtain something after all this wandering, for someone who’d been forcefully manipulated this way, wasn’t it the means to take revenge with his own hands?

			''I…''

			Can’t you take up the sword for your own purposes if you didn’t hate someone? With those feelings in his heart, dressed in brass armour, he got down on his knees on top of the bright red carpet.

			The imperial capital Solon - at the audience hall.

			“You’ve decorated your first campaign with a brilliant victory, we are more pleased than anybody else, Gil.”

			Courtiers sitting in a row to his left and right, the man sitting on the throne before him was the emperor of the Imperial Dynasty of Mephius, Guhl Mephius. His white hair and beard were both long and full of waves. Although he had deep wrinkles on his face, and deep eye sockets as if they were hollowed out, he was still fully shining with vitality.

			“Gladly.”

			“It seems you’ve used various ideas. But I’m truly pleased that Ryucown’s head has been severed by Mephian hands. This is more a victory than we expected.”

			“This was all because of Duke Fedom’s wisdom. General Oubary has also been of great assistance during my first campaign. It was also thanks to the soldiers and retainers by your guidance, father. I merely borrowed their strength.”

			“Oh?”

			The expression on Guhl’s face was unusually calm as he nodded. It looked like His Majesty was definitely pleased, and the senior statesmen made eye contact with each other showing satisfied looks. Earlier, although it seemed like he showed a much more severe attitude towards his true son, all he wished for was his own child’s growth. There wasn’t a parent that didn’t love his child.

			“As a result from our conference with Garbera, it’s decided we should once again put our attention your marriage with Princess Vileena. Until then, she is a special guest of ours. But we can understand passionate feelings, so keep your lovemaking to a low so there won’t cause any trouble.”

			His smile showed he was making a joke.

			Embarrassed, Gil bowed his head and said, “I will.” It invited the audience lined up in rows to have a laugh.

			Princess Vileena had been given a private room in the inner palace. Together with her attendant Theresia, she could expect a well-established way of life for now. Moreover, when they decided upon a new date for the marriage, it was expected Garbera would no doubt return the captured territory of Apta in the form of a ‘gift’. The Kingdom of Garbera wouldn’t be able to face Mephius properly anymore if they didn’t.

			For many different reasons, Prince Gil’s accomplishments were grand.

			The atmosphere in the hall had been calm from the beginning to the end, but at the final moment Guhl spoke these words,

			“Even Ende won’t be able to make a move so easily. However, if this happened in Garbera, it could’ve happened anywhere else. From now on, to keep the authority and strength within the Mephian Imperial Family, we will have to protect the peace within our country. Gil, you also bear this responsibility.”

			He hadn’t forgotten to give the anti-imperial groups their fair warning.

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	“Gladly.”		“Gladly.”

	“It seems you’ve used various ideas. But I’m truly pleased that Ryucown’s head has been severed by Mephian hands. This is more a victory than we expected.”		“It seems you’ve used various ideas. But I’m truly pleased that Ryucown’s head has been severed by Mephian hands. This is more of a victory than we expected.”

	“This was all because of Duke Fedom’s wisdom. General Oubary has also been of great assistance during my first campaign. It was also thanks to the soldiers and retainers by your guidance, father. I merely borrowed their strength.”		“This was all because of Duke Fedom’s wisdom. General Oubary has also been of great assistance during my first campaign. It was also thanks to the soldiers and retainers by your guidance, father. I merely borrowed their strength.”
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	The expression on Guhl’s face was unusually calm as he nodded. It looked like His Majesty was definitely pleased, and the senior statesmen made eye contact with each other showing satisfied looks. Earlier, although it seemed like he showed a much more severe attitude towards his true son, all he wished for was his own child’s growth. There wasn’t a parent that didn’t love his child.		The expression on Guhl’s face was unusually calm as he nodded. It looked like His Majesty was definitely pleased, and the senior statesmen made eye contact with each other showing satisfied looks. Earlier, although it seemed like he showed a much more severe attitude towards his true son, all he wished for was his own child’s growth. There wasn’t a parent that didn’t love his child.

	“As a result from our conference with Garbera, it’s decided we should once again put our attention on your marriage with Princess Vileena. Until then, she is a special guest of ours. But we can understand passionate feelings, so keep your lovemaking to a low so ~~there~~ won’t be any trouble.”		“As a result from our conference with Garbera, it’s decided we should once again put our attention on your marriage with Princess Vileena. Until then, she is a special guest of ours. But we can understand passionate feelings, so keep your lovemaking to a low so it won’t cause any trouble.”

	His smile showed he was making a joke.		His smile showed he was making a joke.

	Embarrassed, Gil bowed his head and said, “I will.” It invited the audience ~~lined up in rows to have a laugh~~.		Embarrassed, Gil bowed his head and said, “I will.” It invited a laugh from the rows audience members.

	Princess Vileena had been given a private room in the inner palace. Together with her attendant Theresia, she could expect a well-established way of life for now. Moreover, when they decided upon a new date for the marriage, ~~it was expected~~ Garbera would no doubt return the captured territory of Apta in the form of a ‘gift’. The Kingdom of Garbera wouldn’t be able to face Mephius properly anymore if they didn’t.		Princess Vileena had been given a private room in the inner palace. Together with her attendant Theresia, she could expect a well-established way of life for now. Moreover, when they decided upon a new date for the marriage, Garbera would no doubt return the captured territory of Apta in the form of a ‘gift’. The Kingdom of Garbera wouldn’t be able to face Mephius properly anymore if they didn’t.

	For many different reasons, Prince Gil’s accomplishments were grand.		For many different reasons, Prince Gil’s accomplishments were grand.
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	The atmosphere in the hall had been calm from the beginning to the end, but at the final moment Guhl spoke these words,		The atmosphere in the hall had been calm from the beginning to the end, but at the final moment Guhl spoke these words,

	“Even Ende won’t be able to make a move so easily. However, if this happened in Garbera, it could’ve happened anywhere ~~else~~. From now on, to keep the authority and strength within the Mephian Imperial Family, we will have to protect the peace within our country. Gil, you also bear this responsibility.”		“Even Ende won’t be able to make a move so easily. However, if this happened in Garbera, it could’ve happened anywhere. From now on, to keep the authority and strength within the Mephian Imperial Family, we will have to protect the peace within our country. Gil, you also bear this responsibility.”

	He hadn’t forgotten to give the anti-imperial groups their fair warning.		He hadn’t forgotten to give the anti-imperial groups their fair warning.
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	“That’s a cold attitude you’re showing me. And that while all this time I’ve been counting the days, looking forward to your return. I’ve been worried about you these last few days, brother, and could hardly stomach dinner. And now you won’t even tell your cute little sister one story about your travels?”		“That’s a cold attitude you’re showing me. And that while all this time I’ve been counting the days, looking forward to your return. I’ve been worried about you these last few days, brother, and could hardly stomach dinner. And now you won’t even tell your cute little sister one story about your travels?”

	“Ahh…” Gil ~~forcibly~~ forced a smile and made eye contact. “I have enough to tell, but can we do this some other time. I’m just a little tired.”		“Ahh…” Gil forced a smile and made eye contact. “I have enough to tell, but can we do this some other time. I’m just a little tired.”

	“Fine…”		“Fine…”

	With those words, Ineli left it at that, but not because she was worried about the prince, but because Gil had already avoided her gaze and turned his heels to walk away. She was unable to call out to him ~~once more~~, her pretty looks warping into scorn. But then she suddenly froze for a different reason.		With those words, Ineli left it at that, but not because she was worried about the prince, but because Gil had already avoided her gaze and turned his heels to walk away. She was unable to call out to him again, her pretty looks warping into scorn. But then she suddenly froze for a different reason.

	That was because that one look the prince had given her.		That was because that one look the prince had given her.
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	Indeed. Exactly because he didn’t know what to do, he only had to do all of it. These were the only means Orba had available for himself. He couldn’t wish for a better position than an imperial prince.		Indeed. Exactly because he didn’t know what to do, he only had to do all of it. These were the only means Orba had available for himself. He couldn’t wish for a better position than an imperial prince.

	He now stood among those that he once, in his childhood days, believed weren’t looking at the same things the common people were. If he ~~embraces~~ all the things he couldn’t reach before with both his arms, he might be able to discover something new.		He now stood among those that he once, in his childhood days, believed weren’t looking at the same things the common people were. If he embraced all the things he couldn’t reach before with both his arms, he might be able to discover something new.

	And besides, he wanted to find out how far his own existence, and the power his existence held, would take him.		And besides, he wanted to find out how far his own existence, and the power his existence held, would take him.
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	Nobody knew.		Nobody knew.