Rakuin no Monshou:Volume2 Chapter3 - Revision history

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	The humming continued for some time, when Vileena suddenly stopped and turned around.		The humming continued for some time, when Vileena suddenly stopped and turned around.

	A ~~swordsmen~~ in silence in the dead of the night, his face concealed by a mask and standing behind her—it was certainly eerie, but Vileena did not utter a single sound, only staring slightly in surprise.		A swordsman in silence in the dead of the night, his face concealed by a mask and standing behind her—it was certainly eerie, but Vileena did not utter a single sound, only staring slightly in surprise.

	“About before...”		“About before...”

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	“Will her highness allow the unworthy me as her partner?”		“Will her highness allow the unworthy me as her partner?”

	The name of this man was Baton ~~Cadmus~~. He was a man of significant stature, and in terms of appearance, was fit to act as the princess’ partner. Vileena would have been fine with anyone as her partner. As this princess took his hand, she failed to catch sight of Baton winking back at Ineli.		The name of this man was Baton Cadmos. He was a man of significant stature, and in terms of appearance, was fit to act as the princess’ partner. Vileena would have been fine with anyone as her partner. As this princess took his hand, she failed to catch sight of Baton winking back at Ineli.

	It was Ineli’s plan to have him slightly shame this princess from another country on this one occasion. Up to now in such showy events, she was the leading actress. She was sent for not only by tutors within Mephius, but also from those around the world of different varieties of styles, and was confident in her own sense of style. She was greatly knowledgeable in fashion, theme selection, dance, tea, a bit of esprit, painting, and music. All the girls Ineli’s age strived to be like her. And all the more so when her mother, Melissa, had become the empress and her status had been elevated to that of an imperial princess.		It was Ineli’s plan to have him slightly shame this princess from another country on this one occasion. Up to now in such showy events, she was the leading actress. She was sent for not only by tutors within Mephius, but also from those around the world of different varieties of styles, and was confident in her own sense of style. She was greatly knowledgeable in fashion, theme selection, dance, tea, a bit of esprit, painting, and music. All the girls Ineli’s age strived to be like her. And all the more so when her mother, Melissa, had become the empress and her status had been elevated to that of an imperial princess.

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	“Nothing is clear right now and anything is still possible.”		“Nothing is clear right now and anything is still possible.”

	“B-But, this doesn’t make any sense. General Oubary is a general long serving Mephius. Besides, he doesn’t want peace with Garbera. The princess…couldn’t have possibly come here from the beginning with this purpose, but ~~then—Mmpphhmmfuu”~~		“B-But, this doesn’t make any sense. General Oubary is a general long serving Mephius. Besides, he doesn’t want peace with Garbera. The princess…couldn’t have possibly come here from the beginning with this purpose, but then—Mmpphhmmfuu.”

	With a plate of grapes stuffed into his mouth, Dinn was for the meantime preoccupied with chewing.		With a plate of grapes stuffed into his mouth, Dinn was for the meantime preoccupied with chewing.

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	==Her Royal Highness’ Gladiator==		==Chapter 3: Her Royal Highness’ Gladiator==
	===Part 1===		===Part 1===
	The following day and the day after that, Orba refused all invitations from Ineli and Rogue Saian.		The following day and the day after that, Orba refused all invitations from Ineli and Rogue Saian.
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	As his black hair swayed to and fro, it glimmered with the shine of a naked blade.		As his black hair swayed to and fro, it glimmered with the shine of a naked blade.
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	“Even if you ask me what kind of person he is...”		“Even if you ask me what kind of person he is...”

	“It might be an embarrassing topic, but despite him being my fiancé, the times I have spoken with that man are fewer than I can count. Even now, there are too many things I don’t know about him. If I could get to understand him ever slightly more, I could better fight my own battle here in the lands of this country.		“It might be an embarrassing topic, but despite him being my fiancé, the times I have spoken with that man are fewer than I can count. Even now, there are too many things I don’t know about him. If I could get to understand him ever slightly more, I could better fight my own battle here in the lands of this country.”

	''Battle''		''Battle''
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	“Yes.”		“Yes.”

	~~“And—“~~ Vileena’s lips spread open. “I agree that the prince is childish. He follows a seemingly honest train of thought rivalled by his seemingly prudent simplicity. Occasionally, I can almost picture him as a newborn infant.”		“And—” Vileena’s lips spread open. “I agree that the prince is childish. He follows a seemingly honest train of thought rivalled by his seemingly prudent simplicity. Occasionally, I can almost picture him as a newborn infant.”

	“What!?”		“What!?”
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	Muttering some half-baked excuse, Orba hurriedly made his leave before the two.		Muttering some half-baked excuse, Orba hurriedly made his leave before the two.

	Even out on the roads, in the midst of the festival commotion, the horse carriages were by no means easily accessible. Left with no alternative, Orba ran and ran all the way back to the palace.		Even out on the roads, in the midst of the festival commotion, the horse-drawn carriages were by no means easily accessible. Left with no alternative, Orba ran and ran all the way back to the palace.

	''Shit! What does she want with the prince this time?''		''Shit! What does she want with the prince this time?''

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	Orba did not return any words. He himself wasn’t even sure why he had volunteered himself before the princess.		Orba did not return any words. He himself wasn’t even sure why he had volunteered himself before the princess.

	Passion coloured the night, and in the midst of the melody of the waltz that flowed into the ears, he took the princess’ hand and danced round and round. The night wind felt refreshing against his skin. The branches of the forest rustled, the fountain bathed in an attractive golden under the fire lights, as gentle smiles spread across the faces of the guests ~~as they watched~~ the ~~unfolding~~ scene ~~take place~~.		Passion coloured the night, and in the midst of the melody of the waltz that flowed into the ears, he took the princess’ hand and danced round and round. The night wind felt refreshing against his skin. The branches of the forest rustled and the fountain bathed in an attractive golden under the fire lights, as gentle smiles spread across the faces of the guests watching the scene unfold before them.

	This one night. This one scene. Orba did not dream it.		This one night. This one scene. Orba did not dream it.

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	Kaiser Islan’s execution was said to be scheduled in a few days. Moreover, it was in the course of the gladiator tournament, where the masses could watch as he would be made out as live bait for the dragons. Having heard this, Vileena’s skin crawled in disgust and horror.		Kaiser Islan’s execution was said to be scheduled in a few days. Moreover, it was in the course of the gladiator tournament, where the masses could watch as he would be made out as live bait for the dragons. Having heard this, Vileena’s skin crawled in disgust and horror.

	Kaiser practically wasn’t even given a chance to defend himself. At best, he had only expressed his opposition to the emperor’s proposal to relocate the shrine and erect a new building in its place. If such things ~~were~~ came to pass, even the country’s management would spiral out of control.		Kaiser practically wasn’t even given a chance to defend himself. At best, he had only expressed his opposition to the emperor’s proposal to relocate the shrine and erect a new building in its place. If such things came to pass, even the country’s management would spiral out of control.

	''‘These men of high stature who know only to stare at their master’s countenance in fear of incurring his anger are the ones participating in the country’s politics—I would never think such a country would last this long in a warring society.’ Grandfather would most certainly say such.''		''‘These men of high stature who know only to stare at their master’s countenance in fear of incurring his anger are the ones participating in the country’s politics—I would never think such a country would last this long in a warring society.’ Grandfather would most certainly say such.''
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	''I will make sure of each and every one of their positions and views, and so that I may use it to somehow benefit Garbera, I must determine my own standing.''		''I will make sure of each and every one of their positions and views, and so that I may use it to somehow benefit Garbera, I must determine my own standing.''

	The party began exactly at sunset. In the halls and the garden, mountains of food and people were readied. And amongst the constant chattering and music being ~~made~~, Vileena revealed herself to the finely dressed people of the party. To the Mephian nobles who called out to her, she started off with an affable smile.		The party began exactly at sunset. In the halls and the garden, mountains of food and people were readied. And amongst the constant chattering and music being sounded, Vileena revealed herself to the finely dressed people of the party. To the Mephian nobles who called out to her, she started off with an affable smile.

	“My, another beauty has joined us this lovely evening.”		“My, another beauty has joined us this lovely evening.”
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	She decided for a change in location. And if this topic came up somewhere along the way, she would attempt to join in.		She decided for a change in location. And if this topic came up somewhere along the way, she would attempt to join in.

	Between the Moonlight Palace and Main Palace, a small, but strangely unusual forest stretched out, and made the view ~~from the garden far~~ more enjoyable. In the centre of the garden was a water fountain where a flock of people gathered and were having a friendly chat. And in the corner, a group of musicians took up their positions and ~~created~~ a melodious symphony as they played their instruments. Couples, young and old, embraced each other and danced.		Between the Moonlight Palace and Main Palace, a small, but strangely unusual forest stretched out, and made the garden view much more enjoyable. In the centre of the garden was a water fountain where a flock of people gathered and were having a friendly chat. And in the corner, a group of musicians took up their positions and produced a melodious symphony as they played their instruments. Couples, young and old, embraced each other and danced.

	''Oh?'' Vileena stopped her feet. She spotted Noue Salzantes. In Garbera’s palace, he was a man popular amongst the young ladies and children, and it seemed to be similarly so in Mephius. He was showing a magnificent dance with one of the ladies, as the surrounding groups of women threw glares of jealousy and envy.		''Oh?'' Vileena stopped her feet. She spotted Noue Salzantes. In Garbera’s palace, he was a man popular amongst the young ladies and children, and it seemed to be similarly so in Mephius. He was showing a magnificent dance with one of the ladies, as the surrounding groups of women threw glares of jealousy and envy.
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	“Yes, I think so—Ow!—Yes, I couldn’t agree more.”		“Yes, I think so—Ow!—Yes, I couldn’t agree more.”

	The ‘ow’ was because Theresia had elbowed her. It was a delicate situation in which they determined their relative standings, but right now, it was better to conduct herself with the standing of a guest. And also, Theresia had intuitively realized ~~that~~ this girl Ineli was someone her mistress would not come to like.		The ‘ow’ was because Theresia had elbowed her. It was a delicate situation in which they determined their relative standings, but right now, it was better to conduct herself with the standing of a guest. And also, Theresia had intuitively realized this girl Ineli was someone her mistress would not come to like.

	“Just now, I have had the pleasure of entertaining a dance with Lord Salzantes, and as expected, Garbera has such refined characters. His dancing techniques and of course, his ability to escort a lady, are far superior to the likes of Mephius’ men. Elder sister, say….will you not also entertain yourself to a dance? Surely, everyone present here will gladly come to arms.”		“Just now, I have had the pleasure of entertaining a dance with Lord Salzantes, and as expected, Garbera has such refined characters. His dancing techniques and of course, his ability to escort a lady, are far superior to the likes of Mephius’ men. Elder sister, say….will you not also entertain yourself to a dance? Surely, everyone present here will gladly come to arms.”
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	Ineli grinned in enjoyment at the other girls’ confusion.		Ineli grinned in enjoyment at the other girls’ confusion.

	“I suppose you’re right. That is, in a way, something that doesn’t make you happy. I mean, think about it. Riding such a thing, and using it to fly in the sky—and then ending up scared and fainting. Wouldn’t that ~~just make~~ you ~~embarrassed~~?”		“I suppose you’re right. That is, in a way, something that doesn’t make you happy. I mean, think about it. Riding such a thing, and using it to fly in the sky—and then ending up scared and fainting. Wouldn’t that embarass you?”

	“Ah, you’re right. Such a thing is improper for a lady.”		“Ah, you’re right. Such a thing is improper for a lady.”
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	“Is something wrong?” Ineli smiled sweetly at her. “Elder sister, have you changed your mind? Will you accept a dance?”		“Is something wrong?” Ineli smiled sweetly at her. “Elder sister, have you changed your mind? Will you accept a dance?”

	Vileena understood it now. Ineli seemed to have great confidence in that area of expertise. Even Vileena held some knowledge of dance. She was the princess of a country after all, and at the very least had an education in the etiquettes of being a lady.		Vileena understood it now. Ineli seemed to have great confidence in that area of expertise. Even Vileena held some knowledge of dance. She was the princess of a country after all, and at the very least had a basic education in the etiquettes of being a lady.

	Vileena pulled back the sleeves of her dress in confidence and raised her chin.		Vileena pulled back the sleeves of her dress in confidence and raised her chin.
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	“Is there anyone out there. This benevolent man is not suited to be my partner. Is there anyone out there, willing to show Garbera’s princess a true Mephian waltz?”		“Is there anyone out there. This benevolent man is not suited to be my partner. Is there anyone out there, willing to show Garbera’s princess a true Mephian waltz?”

	“Ahahahahaha,” Ineli laughed in a shrill voice over and over. Noue was also surprised, but with his dance partner ~~Ineli~~ before him, he was unable to offer any assistance.		“Ahahahahaha,” Ineli laughed in a shrill voice over and over. Noue was also surprised, but with Ineli as his dance partner before him, he was unable to offer any assistance.

	Vileena was surrounded in stares. Everyone cast down their eyes and turned their faces. There were also those who pretended to be actively engaged in idle talk. Even as she cast her eyes through a full turn, there were no signs of reception. As she held back her anger, she could feel the startled reactions.		Vileena was surrounded in stares. Everyone cast down their eyes and turned their faces. There were also those who pretended to be actively engaged in idle talk. Even as she cast her eyes through a full turn, there were no signs of reception. As she held back her anger, she could feel the startled reactions.
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	This one night. This one scene. Orba did not dream it.		This one night. This one scene. Orba did not dream it.

	Before long, the music stopped and the two hoisted there fastened hands up into the air. Cheers and applause echoed. The dance was clumsily executed, and yet it ~~had~~ somehow touched their hearts. Their fastened hands separated and they each gave the other a courteous bow, during which Orba found himself overwhelmed by a wave of intense emotions.		Before long, the music stopped and the two hoisted there fastened hands up into the air. Cheers and applause echoed. The dance was clumsily executed, and yet it somehow touched their hearts. Their fastened hands separated and they each gave the other a courteous bow, during which Orba found himself overwhelmed by a wave of intense emotions.

	===Part 3===		===Part 3===

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	“I understand.”		“I understand.”

	Unaccustomed to ~~being addressed~~ this ~~way~~, Orba called out once more to Aeson, about to leave with the compensation money in his hands. “Sir?” he responded, turning around to find a gun pointed at him. Aeson turned stiff.		Unaccustomed to this manner of address, Orba called out once more to Aeson, about to leave with the compensation money in his hands. “Sir?” he responded, turning around to find a gun pointed at him. Aeson turned stiff.

	“I’ll say this one more time, just to be clear. Not a word to anyone.”		“I’ll say this one more time, just to be clear. Not a word to ''anyone''.”

	“Y-Yes, sir.”		“Y-Yes, sir.”
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	“No, it’s the opposite. I would rather not meet some strange faces. I shall ascertain Zaat’s situation—”		“No, it’s the opposite. I would rather not meet some strange faces. I shall ascertain Zaat’s situation—”

	He stood up from the seat and walked away from the room, ~~preventing~~ any more of the speech from being heard.		He stood up from the seat and walked away from the room, barring any more of the speech from being heard.

	Orba played back the conversation he heard from Aeson once more in his head.		Orba played back the conversation he heard from Aeson once more in his head.
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	Oubary and Noue were scheming something outrageous during this festival. And to add, it was something big enough to shake the very core of the Mephius’ foundation—no doubt about it.		Oubary and Noue were scheming something outrageous during this festival. And to add, it was something big enough to shake the very core of the Mephius’ foundation—no doubt about it.

	''Oubary is selling out his country, and Noue who should be promoting peace, ~~seems to be~~ bringing trouble to Mephius.''		''Oubary is selling out his country, and Noue who should be promoting peace, is bringing trouble to Mephius.''

	He did not know what their common goal was. At the current phase, he could not even offer a guess. But two points were made clear in the conversation. The first was,		He did not know what their common goal was. At the current phase, he could not even offer a guess. But two points were made clear in the conversation. The first was,
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	The names of these two people, at first glance, appeared to have no connection; but, it was clearly evident that these two were caught up in some plan that was, even now, steadily making way.		The names of these two people, at first glance, appeared to have no connection; but, it was clearly evident that these two were caught up in some plan that was, even now, steadily making way.

	If it was something that would only simply bring troubles to Mephius, Orba might have even ~~found~~ it ~~interesting~~. He hated Mephius. If it meant burning the nobles in flames and causing them suffering agony, he would jump at the chance, even if by himself. However, if Oubary had to do with this, then that was a different matter. He would never go along with that bastard’s wishes even once.		If it was something that would only simply bring troubles to Mephius, Orba might have even smiled upon it. He hated Mephius. If it meant burning the nobles in flames and causing them suffering agony, he would jump at the chance, even if by himself. However, if Oubary had to do with this, then that was a different matter. He would never go along with that bastard’s wishes even once.

	''And also…''		''And also…''
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	Dressed in clothing fit for a gladiator, Orba headed towards the Moonlight Palace alone.		Dressed in clothing fit for a gladiator, Orba headed towards the Moonlight Palace alone.

	The Moonlight Palace—its original name was ‘The Palace of Moonlight facing the Dragon’s Left Wing’. It ~~was close to~~ the Imperial Dragon Eye Shrine, contained one of the most magnificent gardens found in Mephius, and was more than often used to host large parties.		The Moonlight Palace—its original name was ‘The Palace of Moonlight facing the Dragon’s Left Wing’. It neared the Imperial Dragon Eye Shrine, contained one of the most magnificent gardens found in Mephius, and was more than often used to host large parties.

	The guard at the gate saw Orba’s mask and bowed. He wasn’t a man with much of a prominent character, but in accordance to the rules, performed an inspection for weapons ~~after which he~~ granted permission for ~~him~~ to enter.		The guard at the gate saw Orba’s mask and bowed. He wasn’t a man with much of a prominent character, but in accordance to the rules, performed an inspection for weapons and then granted permission for Orba to enter.

	No sooner than he had entered the garden, all the men and women called out to him. The name and appearance of the gladiator said to have defeated Ryucown had become well-known. The nobles as guests of the party hosted in this mansion that came second to their own welcomed him.		No sooner than he had entered the garden, all the men and women called out to him. The name and appearance of the gladiator said to have defeated Ryucown had become well-known. The nobles as guests of the party hosted in this mansion that came second to their own welcomed him.

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	In short, Noue had not shown up personally. The one Oubary dined with was his messenger. The location was a private room situated on the third floor. Any person in the store wishing to enter had to, without exception, ring the bell and obtain permission. It was ideal for confidential talks.		In short, Noue had not shown up personally. The one Oubary dined with was his messenger. The location was a private room situated on the third floor. Any person in the store wishing to enter had to, without exception, ring the bell and obtain permission. It was ideal for confidential talks.

	Orba first had several sword-slaves infiltrate the store. Naturally, he had handed them money and prepared them in the appropriate attire. After drinking several glasses of wine, they started an uproar at the set time. They even dragged the people in the store into the fight, though they took care not to create a bigger commotion than necessary, and then immediately vacated the store. In that time, the light-footed gladiator Aeson climbed over the fencings and walls and aligned himself against the balcony of the room Oubary was situated in. Aeson was a born ~~pirate from~~ the northern Zongan seas and experienced in climbing up and down the mast.		Orba first had several sword-slaves infiltrate the store. Naturally, he had handed them money and prepared them in the appropriate attire. After drinking several glasses of wine, they started an uproar at the set time. They even dragged the people in the store into the fight, though they took care not to create a bigger commotion than necessary, and then immediately vacated the store. In that time, the light-footed gladiator Aeson climbed over the fencings and walls and aligned himself against the balcony of the room Oubary was situated in. Aeson was a pirate born in the northern Zongan seas and experienced in climbing up and down the mast.

	He stealthily listened in on the middle of the conversation without making a sound. The meet lasted approximately thirty minutes. What Aeson could make out was no more than the mere five minutes at the end. Still, there was some harvest. About the same time as the two finished their meet, Aeson got off the balcony.		He stealthily listened in on the middle of the conversation without making a sound. The meet lasted approximately thirty minutes. What Aeson could make out was no more than the mere five minutes at the end. Still, there was some harvest. About the same time as the two finished their meet, Aeson got off the balcony.
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	''Oh?'' Vileena stopped her feet. She spotted Noue Salzantes. In Garbera’s palace, he was a man popular amongst the young ladies and children, and it seemed to be similarly so in Mephius. He was showing a magnificent dance with one of the ladies, as the surrounding groups of women threw glares of jealousy and envy.		''Oh?'' Vileena stopped her feet. She spotted Noue Salzantes. In Garbera’s palace, he was a man popular amongst the young ladies and children, and it seemed to be similarly so in Mephius. He was showing a magnificent dance with one of the ladies, as the surrounding groups of women threw glares of jealousy and envy.

	Once the dance ended, Noue came to realize Vileena’s presence. He offered his greetings if not one second ~~earler~~, and for some reason quickly drew towards the direction of the party.		Once the dance ended, Noue came to realize Vileena’s presence. He offered his greetings if not one second earlier, and for some reason quickly drew towards the direction of the party.

	"Good day to you, elder sister<ref>As with Gil, it is written as お義姉さま, meaning stepsister but pronounced onee-sama. Note: Ineli is actually older than Vileena. However, she addresses her as onee-sama as a form of respect, rather than one of seniority, so I will be using ‘elder sister’ henceforth. </ref>."		"Good day to you, elder sister<ref>As with Gil, it is written as お義姉さま, meaning stepsister but pronounced onee-sama. Note: Ineli is actually older than Vileena. However, she addresses her as onee-sama as a form of respect, rather than one of seniority, so I will be using ‘elder sister’ henceforth. </ref>."
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	And suddenly intruding into her domain was Vileena. The Mephians were somehow rather weak to expressions of ‘cultural’ origin. Even though Garbera was until then an enemy country, many Mephians could taste the refined flavour of their culture. Particularly, tales of Garbera’s chivalry, of how men would take up arms for their lady and risk their lives fighting for them, had garnered high popularity amongst the women and children.		And suddenly intruding into her domain was Vileena. The Mephians were somehow rather weak to expressions of ‘cultural’ origin. Even though Garbera was until then an enemy country, many Mephians could taste the refined flavour of their culture. Particularly, tales of Garbera’s chivalry, of how men would take up arms for their lady and risk their lives fighting for them, had garnered high popularity amongst the women and children.

	During tea talks, the subject of their gossip would shift towards Vileena. And, whilst she stayed in the same country, her situation of being holed up in the women’s chambers was strangely exaggerated. Just today, they passed by each other and exchanged glances, and with the slightest of efforts Vileena caught the attention of her ~~surrounds~~. The very thought of this sickened her.		During tea talks, the subject of their gossip would shift towards Vileena. And, whilst she stayed in the same country, her situation of being holed up in the women’s chambers was strangely exaggerated. Just today, they passed by each other and exchanged glances, and with the slightest of efforts Vileena caught the attention of her surroundings. The very thought of this sickened her.

	''I’ll knock her down a peg here.''		''I’ll knock her down a peg here.''
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	She might be coming to utter some sort of complaint again.		She might be coming to utter some sort of complaint again.

	He ~~had~~ Dinn to ~~hurrily~~ help him change clothes, and just as he slipped into his bed, the sound of the bell resounded.		He hurried Dinn to quickly help him change his clothes, and just as he slipped into his bed, the sound of the bell resounded.

	“Let them in.”		“Let them in.”