Rakuin no Monshou:Volume3 Chapter2 - Revision history

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	“Is there a land route? One that soldiers can move through?”		“Is there a land route? One that soldiers can move through?”

	“I’ve never actually seen it so I can’t say for sure, but—” ~~Zaat~~ began before breaking off into his thoughts for a brief moment. “Very well, I shall have one of my slaves accompany you.”		“I’ve never actually seen it so I can’t say for sure, but—” Zaj began before breaking off into his thoughts for a brief moment. “Very well, I shall have one of my slaves accompany you.”

	“A slave will?”		“A slave will?”

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	''Oh right.''		''Oh right.''

	Orba had been none other than this Birac. With the succeeding villages burned down by Oubary’s troops immediately after Apta had fallen, the city he scrambled to arrive at was this very Birac.		Orba had been in none other than this Birac. With the succeeding villages burned down by Oubary’s troops immediately after Apta had fallen, the city he scrambled to arrive at was this very Birac.

	There, taking the role of leading the boys, he passed four years robbing and running an illegal gambling house.		There, taking the role of leading the boys, he passed four years robbing and running an illegal gambling house.
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	Standing behind him, Haman respectfully offered a cup of wine, which Orba received.		Standing behind him, Haman respectfully offered a cup of wine, which Orba received.

	“It’s among the merchandise we’ve brought in from across the globe. But having grown in age, it’s colour has faded. However, it’s vibrant voice alone hasn’t changed in the slightest. Though its appearance has changed, ~~it’s~~ songs do not forget it’s birthplace—as versed men like to say.”		“It’s among the merchandise we’ve brought in from across the globe. But having grown in age, it’s colour has faded. However, it’s vibrant voice alone hasn’t changed in the slightest. Though its appearance has changed, its songs do not forget it’s birthplace—as versed men like to say.”

	“Oh?”		“Oh?”
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	Orba never drank from the cup handed to him. The same also went for Shique, so it was their end that spoke more frankly of their caution. After a short time passed, Orba spoke in bits.		Orba never drank from the cup handed to him. The same also went for Shique, so it was their end that spoke more frankly of their caution. After a short time passed, Orba spoke in bits.

	“That wouldn’t, be worth your while.”		“That wouldn’t be worth your while.”

	“Worth my while?”		“Worth my while?”

	“Ax Bazgan has been a thorn on Mephius’ side for a long time. If that threat were to be taken away, you’d be able to freely do trade. Ah right, what do you say to leaving over half of the trading route in your hands?”		“Ax Bazgan has been a thorn in Mephius’ side for a long time. If that threat were to be taken away, you’d be able to freely do trade. Ah right, what do you say to leaving over half of the trading route in your hands?”

	“Wh-What are you...”		“Wh-What are you...”

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	“Won’t your business proceed smoothly regardless of what happens?”		“Won’t your business proceed smoothly regardless of what happens?”

	“Surely not~~! Negligence~~ is your greatest enemy. It only takes an instant for everything to fall apart without exception.”		“Surely not, negligence is your greatest enemy! It only takes an instant for everything to fall apart without exception.”

	Zaj was past his sixties, and even now frequented the store to show his face and stop by for a friendly chat over a drink. His business handled many clients that came from other towns and countries. If Zaj suspected the information he wanted was present amongst these clients, he would listen to their long, unending conversations even if it was their first time meeting.		Zaj was past his sixties, and even now frequented the store to show his face and stop by for a friendly chat over a drink. His business handled many clients that came from other towns and countries. If Zaj suspected the information he wanted was present amongst these clients, he would listen to their long, unending conversations even if it was their first time meeting.
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	His height wasn’t too prominent but his darkish skin and lean figure denoted a body belonging to a soldier, and above all, the fleeting glance cast his way was surprisingly sharp. Zaj did not see anywhere the man rumoured a fool. However it was also common for impressions of people based on appearances to differ from the actual contents.		His height wasn’t too prominent but his darkish skin and lean figure denoted a body belonging to a soldier, and above all, the fleeting glance cast his way was surprisingly sharp. Zaj did not see anywhere the man rumoured a fool. However it was also common for impressions of people based on appearances to differ from the actual contents.

	''This is~~....~~...but what could the prince himself have possibly come here for?''		''This is...but what could the prince himself have possibly come here for?''

	He had suddenly shown up together with a soldier whose looks could be mistaken for a woman’s. If he had only come here to shop, then dealing with his son Bart should have more than sufficed. Zaj prayed nothing would happen on some ridiculous whim, but he feared that exact possibility would bear fruit.		He had suddenly shown up together with a soldier whose looks could be mistaken for a woman’s. If he had only come here to shop, then dealing with his son Bart should have more than sufficed. Zaj prayed nothing would happen on some ridiculous whim, but he feared that exact possibility would bear fruit.
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	“I thought I’d come here for a small chat. You see, I heard information on various countries could be bought here with money.”		“I thought I’d come here for a small chat. You see, I heard information on various countries could be bought here with money.”

	“Whether it be goods or information, I handle them all. You could call it the trade of a merchant. It’s quite the bothersome trait. When asked ‘Do you have it?’ we cannot readily say ‘I do not’. That is why day in and day out we search high and low through all means possible, but as expected, I fear as to whether our services may satisfy the expectations of a prince.”		“Whether it is goods or information, I handle them all. You could call it the trade of a merchant. It’s quite the bothersome trait. When asked ‘Do you have it?’ we cannot readily say ‘I do not’. That is why day in and day out we search high and low through all means possible, but as expected, I fear as to whether our services may satisfy the expectations of a prince.”

	“It’s nothing much,” Orba spoke as he took out a pocket watch from the shelf and examined it. “You’re aware of where I’m heading to, right?”		“It’s nothing much,” Orba spoke as he took out a pocket watch from the shelf and examined it. “You’re aware of where I’m heading to, right?”
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	“Gil-sama,” Zaj began without changing his expression.		“Gil-sama,” Zaj began without changing his expression.

	“Trade in Mephius with the west is strictly forbidden. Directly obtaining information on them is somewhat difficult. Tomorrow, I am expecting visitors from the northern coastal nations and I can see what information I can get, but with what I have at present...”		“Trade in Mephius with the west is strictly forbidden. Directly obtaining information on them is somewhat difficult. Tomorrow, I am expecting visitors from the northern coastal nations and I can see what information I can get, but with what I have at present....”

	“So you ''don’t'' have it?”		“So you ''don’t'' have it?”

	“At present~~.....~~...no.”		“At present...no.”

	There was a short pause. Gil was, still as ever, examining the pocket watch. The surrounding slaves and workers nervously sent occasional glances as they watched the exchange.		There was a short pause. Gil was, still as ever, examining the pocket watch. The surrounding slaves and workers nervously sent occasional glances as they watched the exchange.
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	“I don’t need your small talk,” Gil Mephius firmly stated. “''I'' believe it to be true. That makes it unquestionable. There’s no need for me to establish further proof, nor do I have any intention of purposely declaring it. You ''get'' what I’m saying, right?”		“I don’t need your small talk,” Gil Mephius firmly stated. “''I'' believe it to be true. That makes it unquestionable. There’s no need for me to establish further proof, nor do I have any intention of purposely declaring it. You ''get'' what I’m saying, right?”

	“~~.......~~....”		“....”

	Maintaining his expression, Zaj felt a faint shiver creep down him.		Maintaining his expression, Zaj felt a faint shiver creep down him.
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	“Ax Bazgan has been a thorn on Mephius’ side for a long time. If that threat were to be taken away, you’d be able to freely do trade. Ah right, what do you say to leaving over half of the trading route in your hands?”		“Ax Bazgan has been a thorn on Mephius’ side for a long time. If that threat were to be taken away, you’d be able to freely do trade. Ah right, what do you say to leaving over half of the trading route in your hands?”

	“Wh-What are you...”		“Wh-What are you....”

	Zaj instinctively cleared his throat. He thought to laugh it off for a second but Gil Mephius’ face was serious.		Zaj instinctively cleared his throat. He thought to laugh it off for a second but Gil Mephius’ face was serious.

	''This man...''		''This man....''

	If he was seriously saying this, then he’d be far from the spoken fool unworthy to be a successor. He’d be a seldom seen idiot.		If he was seriously saying this, then he’d be far from the spoken fool unworthy to be a successor. He’d be a seldom seen idiot.
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	“I’ll ask you one more time, merchant of Birac.” Orba asked as he wiped his mouth with the back of his hand. “Do you ''have'' the information I want?”		“I’ll ask you one more time, merchant of Birac.” Orba asked as he wiped his mouth with the back of his hand. “Do you ''have'' the information I want?”

	Zaj felt his head swoon as he looked at the prince in front of him. His impression of him as an idiot hadn’t changed. However, if it were the meaning that defined an idiot...		Zaj felt his head swoon as he looked at the prince in front of him. His impression of him as an idiot hadn’t changed. However, if it were the meaning that defined an idiot....

	“I do,” Zaj nodded and also drank his whole cup. He struck the cup onto the table.		“I do,” Zaj nodded and also drank his whole cup. He struck the cup onto the table.

	“On second thought, there won’t be a need for a second helping. I still don’t know if the information will be of any help to the prince. If it were to help you accomplish what you need, then by all means...”		“On second thought, there won’t be a need for a second helping. I still don’t know if the information will be of any help to the prince. If it were to help you accomplish what you need, then by all means....”

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	“Settle down now, Krau. I’d like to leave some work in your hands.”		“Settle down now, Krau. I’d like to leave some work in your hands.”

	“If it’s cleaning duty for the airships, I’ll have to say no,” Krau unconcernedly pulled her chin with a start for a short time. “Your vase smashing doesn’t fall on me anyway. It was that battered cat your grandson picked up on the streets. Since that stupid ill-bred cat’s come, the kitchen’s been laid to waste, and sharpening its claws, its even targeted my secret stash...”		“If it’s cleaning duty for the airships, I’ll have to say no,” Krau unconcernedly pulled her chin with a start for a short time. “Your vase smashing doesn’t fall on me anyway. It was that battered cat your grandson picked up on the streets. Since that stupid ill-bred cat’s come, the kitchen’s been laid to waste, and sharpening its claws, its even targeted my secret stash....”

	“Now now...I’m only asking you to listen to what I have to say. It’s also my first, hearing about the vase.”		“Now now...I’m only asking you to listen to what I have to say. It’s also my first, hearing about the vase.”
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	“I’d like you to lend me ships. And a few able-bodied men as well.”		“I’d like you to lend me ships. And a few able-bodied men as well.”

	“Ships....well, how many would that be?”		“Ships...well, how many would that be?”

	Zaj raised his eyes with a sure-fire face. It was likely because he was aware Orba’s forces comprised a small battalion.		Zaj raised his eyes with a sure-fire face. It was likely because he was aware Orba’s forces comprised a small battalion.
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	“No, there’s no point if they’re not merchant ships. And also—make arrangements for when our flagship, Doom, comes to Birac. Then have them convene with us. As for the fine details after that, I’ll leave someone with the information, so you can just follow his instructions.”		“No, there’s no point if they’re not merchant ships. And also—make arrangements for when our flagship, Doom, comes to Birac. Then have them convene with us. As for the fine details after that, I’ll leave someone with the information, so you can just follow his instructions.”

	“Very well...”		“Very well....”

	Having already finished the calculations in his head, Zaj didn’t try to ask for any more information.		Having already finished the calculations in his head, Zaj didn’t try to ask for any more information.

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	As Theresia watched the princess who saw off the departing prince’s back, she quietly murmured.		As Theresia watched the princess who saw off the departing prince’s back, she quietly murmured.

	''My, what a strange relationship the two of them have. They’re like a little brother and sister playing at war. That is amusing in itself, but it seems that it will take much much more time before their relationship to develops into a romantic one.''		''My, what a strange relationship the two of them have. They’re like a little brother and sister playing at war. That is amusing in itself, but it seems that it will take much much more time before their relationship develops into a romantic one.''

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	Everyone just barely arrived finishing lining in formation, and they then departed through the Birac gates. Their departure this time had been by the prince’s own discretion, so there was no crowd to see them off.		Everyone just barely arrived finishing lining in formation, and they then departed through the Birac gates. Their departure this time had been by the prince’s own discretion, so there was no crowd to see them off.

	Serving as vanguard were the dragoons riding atop the small-sized Tengo. The carriage the princess rode in was protected by the best warriors handpicked from the imperial guards in centre, and the horse cavalry in the front and rear, ~~their~~ clicking of their hooves echoing into the distance, with the foot soldiers fortifying the defences in all four directions further out.		Serving as vanguard were the dragoons riding atop the small-sized Tengo. The carriage the princess rode in was protected by the best warriors handpicked from the imperial guards in the centre, and the horse cavalry in the front and rear, the clicking of their hooves echoing into the distance, with the foot soldiers fortifying the defences in all four directions further out.

	Pulling the cages with several Baians within were the large-sized Houban<!--I think there’s a typo in the Japanese raws of the first volume. Makes sense this dragon should be large-sized, and not medium-sized-->. A flat body with eight long legs. In terms of appearances, it might as well have been a giant spider covered in scales.		Pulling the cages with several Baians within were the large-sized Houban<!--I think there’s a typo in the Japanese raws of the first volume. Makes sense this dragon should be large-sized, and not medium-sized-->. A flat body with eight long legs. In terms of appearances, it might as well have been a giant spider covered in scales.
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	“What is it? Enlighten me.”		“What is it? Enlighten me.”

	“Once we get to the fortress, maybe you could let me have a match with that gladiator, Orba. And a long sword, for a one-on-one. No, actually, I don’t mind if I have to do it bare handed. I’m sure it’ll be an exciting sideshow as you drink yourselves off.”		“Once we get to the fortress, maybe you could let me have a match with that gladiator, Orba. And a long sword, for a one-on-one. No, actually, I don’t mind if I have to do it bare-handed. I’m sure it’ll be an exciting sideshow as you drink yourselves off.”

	“I was wondering what you were going to ask. You two already fought plenty in Solon, haven’t you?”		“I was wondering what you were going to ask. You two already fought plenty in Solon, haven’t you?”
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	The Bazgan household rushed to set up a successor, but by that time, civil strife had already begun appearing throughout the entirety of the Zer Tauran lands.		The Bazgan household rushed to set up a successor, but by that time, civil strife had already begun appearing throughout the entirety of the Zer Tauran lands.

	Having lost its cohesive force, the Bazgan family secretly fled from the capital, Zer Illias, they once ruled in splendour. Amongst the two claws that could be said to symbolise Zer Tauran, one was in the Bazgans’ hands, but the other of the pair had been dedicated to the temple and they hadn’t ~~the~~ time to retrieve it.		Having lost its cohesive force, the Bazgan family secretly fled from the capital, Zer Illias, they had once ruled in splendour. Amongst the two claws that could be said to symbolise Zer Tauran, one was in the Bazgans’ hands, but the other of the pair had been dedicated to the temple and they hadn’t had time to retrieve it.

	Soon after, the Bazgan family, with the bare minimal number of troops, arrived east to what is presently the fortress city of Taúlia.		Soon after, the Bazgan family, with the bare minimal number of troops, arrived east to what is presently the fortress city of Taúlia.
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	At this time, in the capital of Zer Tauran, at the temple in the town of Zer Illias, a priest of the Ryuujin doctrines, chief magician Garda, tried to protect the temple from the hands of a hundred converts in addition to mercenaries and pillagers. He, at that time<!--God, the author is using this too much-->, performed a number of atrocious incantations that made such a tremendous display of power so fearsome it continues to haunt the Zerdians’ dreams to this day.		At this time, in the capital of Zer Tauran, at the temple in the town of Zer Illias, a priest of the Ryuujin doctrines, chief magician Garda, tried to protect the temple from the hands of a hundred converts in addition to mercenaries and pillagers. He, at that time<!--God, the author is using this too much-->, performed a number of atrocious incantations that made such a tremendous display of power so fearsome it continues to haunt the Zerdians’ dreams to this day.

	But even a magician could not completely eliminate a group made up hundreds and thousands of cavalrymen, and Zer Illias was eventually engulfed in a sea of flames. However, while steel swords sliced off the heads of the priests and rams destroyed the fortress gates, Garda left a final declaration.		But even a magician could not completely eliminate a group made up of hundreds and thousands of cavalrymen, and Zer Illias was eventually engulfed in a sea of flames. However, while steel swords sliced off the heads of the priests and rams destroyed the fortress gates, Garda left a final declaration.

	“I will ensure the dragon’s claw alone is handed to no one, should this body perish or turn to ~~into~~ ashes and vanish into grassland soils.”		“I will ensure the dragon’s claw alone is handed to no one, should this body perish or turn to ashes and vanish into grassland soils.”

	And with that, he vanished. The invaders killed most of the believers, and although they plundered a good number of treasures and sculptures from the temple, the pivotal ‘claw’ was never found.		And with that, he vanished. The invaders killed most of the believers, and although they plundered a good number of treasures and sculptures from the temple, the pivotal ‘claw’ was never found.

	Zer Tauran in this way changed rulers and continued as a country for the ~~meanwhile~~. However, there being civil strife on end, it ultimately collapsed without lasting a third year. The small states governed the scattered towns one by one, raising their armies, tirelessly and repeatedly exchanging or breaking alliances over their disputes. In that time, they received attacks from the northern coastal regions and Mephius once more, but the Zerdians were strangely cooperative against the foreign invaders. They stood side by side with the enemies they should have been brandishing their blades against in hatred for their slain relatives just yesterday, and attacked the invaders who had come from the north and west<!--I think the author meant east here?--> together, taking on the name of a ‘Crusade to protect the Sovereign’s Seal’.		Zer Tauran in this way changed rulers and continued as a country for the meantime. However, there being civil strife on end, it ultimately collapsed without lasting a third year. The small states governed the scattered towns one by one, raising their armies, tirelessly and repeatedly exchanging or breaking alliances over their disputes. In that time, they received attacks from the northern coastal regions and Mephius once more, but the Zerdians were strangely cooperative against the foreign invaders. They stood side by side with the enemies they should have been brandishing their blades against in hatred for their slain relatives just yesterday, and attacked the invaders who had come from the north and west<!--I think the author meant east here?--> together, taking on the name of a ‘Crusade to protect the Sovereign’s Seal’.

	A long time streamed by coloured in blood and war, and now at present.		A long time streamed by coloured in blood and war, and now at present.
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	''He did mention that Ax got closer to Garbera during Mephius’ ten year war with them.''		''He did mention that Ax got closer to Garbera during Mephius’ ten year war with them.''

	With his body rocking up and down atop his horse, Orba recalled the minute details of what Zaj said. They had even proposed to join hands with Garbera to attack Mephius, though that notice was directed to Vileena’s grandfather, Jeorg Owell. Of course, Jeorg had already stepped down from the throne at that time.		With his body rocking up and down atop his horse, Orba recalled the minute details of what Zaj had said. They had even proposed to join hands with Garbera to attack Mephius, though that notice was directed to Vileena’s grandfather, Jeorg Owell. Of course, Jeorg had already stepped down from the throne at that time.

	And yet purposely choosing Jeorg showed that, even now, he held tremendous influence over Garbera, and that they presumed if they could gain him alone as ally, the king who did not amount to his father according to rumours, would have to concede.		And yet purposely choosing Jeorg showed that, even now, he held tremendous influence over Garbera, and that they presumed if they could gain him alone as ally, the king, who did not amount to his father according to rumours, would have to concede.

	“The very thought makes me sick.”		“The very thought makes me sick.”

	Jeorg, having seen through this flew into a rage. Of course, negotiations broke down.		Jeorg, having seen through this, flew into a rage. Of course, negotiations broke down.

	''Just what I’d expect from the man having influenced Princess Vileena the most. That itself is a merit.''		''Just what I’d expect from the man having influenced Princess Vileena the most. That itself is a merit.''
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	He felt the winds beginning to blow.		He felt the winds beginning to blow.

	However, the leaves and branches showed no visible change. He tilted his head, wondering if he had imagined it. And then, a mere four, five metres away from Orba to his flank, a cavalry soldier, and of course, the horse he was riding on, tumbled over. The horses following along behind it reared to a stop, with several soldiers being thrown off their ~~horse~~.		However, the leaves and branches showed no visible change. He tilted his head, wondering if he had imagined it. And then, a mere four, five metres away from Orba to his flank, a cavalry soldier, and of course, the horse he was riding on, tumbled over. The horses following along behind it reared to a stop, with several soldiers being thrown off their horses.


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	Carrying the wounds from the Solon arena on his body, pain shot through him starting with his fractured right collarbone, but he nevertheless paid it no heed.		Carrying the wounds from the Solon arena on his body, pain shot through him starting with his fractured right collarbone, but he nevertheless paid it no heed.

	On the other end of the trees, the clustered figures of his enemies came into sight. A single enemy stood up from his knees and readied his gun—Orba’s eyes ~~started~~ directly into the muzzle.		On the other end of the trees, the clustered figures of his enemies came into sight. A single enemy stood up from his knees and readied his gun—Orba’s eyes stared directly into the muzzle.

	“Fire!”		“Fire!”

	Orba waved his hand as he cried out, and his artillery unit under the cliff fired. With the time he drew the enemy’s attention using himself as decoy, he had the artillery unit camouflage themselves under the trees and assume position. The majority of the fire had only ~~bore~~ holes into the bushes or ~~blew~~ away branches, but blood spurted out of several of the enemies and they collapsed.		Orba waved his hand as he cried out, and his artillery unit under the cliff fired. With the time he drew the enemy’s attention using himself as decoy, he had the artillery unit camouflage themselves under the trees and assume position. The majority of the fire had only bored holes into the bushes or blown away branches, but blood spurted out of several of the enemies and they collapsed.

	“Cut them down!”		“Cut them down!”

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	“A slave will?”		“A slave will?”

	“She’s previously flown a merchant ship to the west and as such, familiar with its terrain.”		“She’s previously flown a merchant ship to the west and as such, is familiar with its terrain.”

	“You let a slave handle a ship?” Shique asked, revealing his utmost surprise.		“You let a slave handle a ship?” Shique asked, revealing his utmost surprise.
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	“Ahh Krau, come here.”		“Ahh Krau, come here.”

	Casting a side glance at Krau appearing at the entranceway, Orba found himself at a ~~lost~~ for words. She was completely different from how he’d imagine her. Taking his reaction in good humour, Zaj enquired,		Casting a side glance at Krau appearing at the entranceway, Orba found himself at a loss for words. She was completely different from how he’d imagine her. Taking his reaction in good humour, Zaj enquired,

	“As for whether being fat in itself is a virtue, I’m sure the views of the Mephian nobles differ.”		“As for whether being fat in itself is a virtue, I’m sure the views of the Mephian nobles differ.”
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	''Master and slave both, I can’t stand either of them.''		''Master and slave both, I can’t stand either of them.''

	A rather bitter aftertaste lingered. He had marched into the Haman Firm hoping to get the ~~upperhand~~, but the sudden development likewise left Orba little room to ~~breath~~.		A rather bitter aftertaste lingered. He had marched into the Haman Firm hoping to get the upper hand, but the sudden development likewise left Orba little room to breathe.

	''At any rate, I got what I came for.''		''At any rate, I got what I came for.''
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	“You knew.”		“You knew.”

	“Why, what might you be talking about? Oh look, this dress is wonderful. The stand-up collar conforms to Garbera’s culture. Just what I’d expect from the trading town of Birac. It has much ~~the~~ better collection than Solon.”		“Why, what might you be talking about? Oh look, this dress is wonderful. The stand-up collar conforms to Garbera’s culture. Just what I’d expect from the trading town of Birac. It has a much better collection than Solon.”

	Theresia feigned ignorance and looked at the pile of clothes brought over by the attendant. The wife of ~~the~~ Fedom Aulin, the lord of Birac, had somewhat taken a liking to the princess and promised to have her attendant bring over some clothes today as well. Theresia had arranged the time and told all of the soldiers acting as guards that an attendant carrying a stack of clothes would be coming and to let her through.		Theresia feigned ignorance and looked at the pile of clothes brought over by the attendant. The wife of Fedom Aulin, the lord of Birac, had somewhat taken a liking to the princess and promised to have her attendant bring over some clothes today as well. Theresia had arranged the time and told all of the soldiers acting as guards that an attendant carrying a stack of clothes would be coming and to let her through.

	“Could you be thinking of getting back at me?”		“Could you be thinking of getting back at me?”
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	Vileena had turned the revolver of the gun with her finger. Though it could be considered practice, to preserve a feeling of tension, a single bullet had been loaded in.		Vileena had turned the revolver of the gun with her finger. Though it could be considered practice, to preserve a feeling of tension, a single bullet had been loaded in.

	“Since some time ago Theresia, you’ve been acting out in spite.”		“Since some time ago, Theresia, you’ve been acting out in spite.”

	“Well why shouldn’t I be? You directly spoke with the emperor without any prior warning. When I heard about afterwards, I thought I was going to faint.”		“Well, why shouldn’t I be? You directly spoke with the emperor without any prior warning. When I heard about it afterwards, I thought I was going to faint.”

	“If the alliance were to disappear, it would also lose meaning in my being here. There’s no point in being afraid of back-talk arising calling me things like a forward princess.”		“If the alliance were to disappear, it would also lose meaning in my being here. There’s no point in being afraid of back-talk arising calling me things like a forward princess.”
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	“Now now princess. If that immodest appearance of yours were to be seen by the prince, you can’t hope to even begin to awaken a hundred year’s of love.”		“Now, now, princess. If that immodest appearance of yours were to be seen by the prince, you can’t hope to even begin to awaken a hundred year’s of love.”

	<!--Omitted: It didn’t go without saying,-->		<!--Omitted: It didn’t go without saying,-->
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	Gil, after seeing her hesitant action, spoke up.		Gil, after seeing her hesitant action, spoke up.

	“...You’re worried about Garbera, aren’t you princess?”		“...You’re worried about Garbera, aren’t you, princess?”

	Though she had been speaking about how to get the prince send reinforcements to them just now, having that directly said to her made ~~startled~~ Vileena. The single worry she didn’t want him to know felt as if it had been pricked open.		Though she had been speaking about how to get the prince to send reinforcements to them just now, having that directly said to her made Vileena startle. The single worry she didn’t want him to know felt as if it had been pricked open.

	“It’s nothing that has to do with the prince.”		“It’s nothing that has to do with the prince.”
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	''Everything about it was, princess,'' Theresia whispered to Vileena in a hushed voice, but then Gil waved his hand.		''Everything about it was, princess,'' Theresia whispered to Vileena in a hushed voice, but then Gil waved his hand.

	“Ah, I get it. Then I’ll exercise my plans in a way so that ~~the~~ you won’t have to enact your sure-kill plan.”		“Ah, I get it. Then I’ll exercise my plans in a way so that you won’t have to enact your sure-kill plan.”

	“Sure-kill...you’re making fun of me. I’ve thought of others. Really, I have,” Vileena obstinately insisted.		“Sure-kill...you’re making fun of me. I’ve thought of others. Really, I have,” Vileena obstinately insisted.
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	As Theresia watched the princess who saw off the departing prince’s back, she quietly murmured.		As Theresia watched the princess who saw off the departing prince’s back, she quietly murmured.

	''My, what a strange relationship the two of them have. They’re like a little brother and sister playing at war. That is amusing in itself, but it seems that it will take much much more time before their relationship to develops into a romantic one.''		''My, what a strange relationship the two of them have. They’re like a little brother and sister playing at war. That is amusing in itself, but it seems that it will take much much more time before their relationship develops into a romantic one.''

	===Part 3===		===Part 3===

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	Everyone just barely arrived finishing lining in formation, and they then departed through the Birac gates. Their departure this time had been by the prince’s own discretion, so there was no crowd to see them off.		Everyone just barely arrived finishing lining in formation, and they then departed through the Birac gates. Their departure this time had been by the prince’s own discretion, so there was no crowd to see them off.

	Serving as vanguard were the dragoons riding atop the small-sized Tengo. The carriage the princess rode in was protected by the best warriors handpicked from the imperial guards in centre, and the horse ~~calvary~~ in the front and rear, their clicking of their hooves echoing into the distance, with the foot soldiers fortifying the ~~defenses~~ in all four directions further out.		Serving as vanguard were the dragoons riding atop the small-sized Tengo. The carriage the princess rode in was protected by the best warriors handpicked from the imperial guards in centre, and the horse cavalry in the front and rear, their clicking of their hooves echoing into the distance, with the foot soldiers fortifying the defences in all four directions further out.

	Pulling the cages with several Baians within were the large-sized Houban<!--I think there’s a typo in the Japanese raws of the first volume. Makes sense this dragon should be large-sized, and not medium-sized-->. A flat body with eight long legs. In terms of appearances, it might as well have been a giant spider covered in scales.		Pulling the cages with several Baians within were the large-sized Houban<!--I think there’s a typo in the Japanese raws of the first volume. Makes sense this dragon should be large-sized, and not medium-sized-->. A flat body with eight long legs. In terms of appearances, it might as well have been a giant spider covered in scales.
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	It was a tale from two hundred years ago, and even before then. The denizens of the grasslands that surrounded the desert, perhaps owing to their inherent nomadic dispositions, chose not to place trust in those of the same race and instead constantly engaged in strife.		It was a tale from two hundred years ago, and even before then. The denizens of the grasslands that surrounded the desert, perhaps owing to their inherent nomadic dispositions, chose not to place trust in those of the same race and instead constantly engaged in strife.

	And the one who set his eyes there was the man called Jasch Bazgan. Being the commander of the Mephian ~~calvalry~~, he commanded his forces and forcibly tore the Zerdians apart from their territory. Of course, the Zerdians’ counteroffensive was also fierce, and it was then that he received reinforcements from the Mephian homeland and held out against them. From this occasion, he was said to have received one of two of the sovereign’s seals handed down since the olden era of magic kingdoms, the ‘Dragon’s Claw’, from the nomad elders.		And the one who set his eyes there was the man called Jasch Bazgan. Being the commander of the Mephian cavalry, he commanded his forces and forcibly tore the Zerdians apart from their territory. Of course, the Zerdians’ counteroffensive was also fierce, and it was then that he received reinforcements from the Mephian homeland and held out against them. From this occasion, he was said to have received one of two of the sovereign’s seals handed down since the olden era of magic kingdoms, the ‘Dragon’s Claw’, from the nomad elders.

	Jasch, using this chance, christened the lands of ‘Zer Tauran’ under the name of the Dragon God and began to announce himself ‘king’. Furthermore, he gave the various fortresses located in a region of grasslands to his subordinates, and rebuilt the ancient ruins centred between into a grand temple. Using the Ryuujin Faith, he planned to unify the tribal collective.		Jasch, using this chance, christened the lands of ‘Zer Tauran’ under the name of the Dragon God and began to announce himself ‘king’. Furthermore, he gave the various fortresses located in a region of grasslands to his subordinates, and rebuilt the ancient ruins centred between into a grand temple. Using the Ryuujin Faith, he planned to unify the tribal collective.
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	At this time, in the capital of Zer Tauran, at the temple in the town of Zer Illias, a priest of the Ryuujin doctrines, chief magician Garda, tried to protect the temple from the hands of a hundred converts in addition to mercenaries and pillagers. He, at that time<!--God, the author is using this too much-->, performed a number of atrocious incantations that made such a tremendous display of power so fearsome it continues to haunt the Zerdians’ dreams to this day.		At this time, in the capital of Zer Tauran, at the temple in the town of Zer Illias, a priest of the Ryuujin doctrines, chief magician Garda, tried to protect the temple from the hands of a hundred converts in addition to mercenaries and pillagers. He, at that time<!--God, the author is using this too much-->, performed a number of atrocious incantations that made such a tremendous display of power so fearsome it continues to haunt the Zerdians’ dreams to this day.

	But even a magician could not completely eliminate a group made up hundreds and thousands of ~~calvalrymen~~, and Zer Illias was eventually engulfed in a sea of flames. However, while steel swords sliced off the heads of the priests and rams destroyed the fortress gates, Garda left a final declaration.		But even a magician could not completely eliminate a group made up hundreds and thousands of cavalrymen, and Zer Illias was eventually engulfed in a sea of flames. However, while steel swords sliced off the heads of the priests and rams destroyed the fortress gates, Garda left a final declaration.

	“I will ensure the dragon’s claw alone is handed to no one, should this body perish or turn to into ashes and vanish into grassland soils.”		“I will ensure the dragon’s claw alone is handed to no one, should this body perish or turn to into ashes and vanish into grassland soils.”
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	A long time streamed by coloured in blood and war, and now at present.		A long time streamed by coloured in blood and war, and now at present.

	The current feudal lord of Taúlia, Ax Bazgan, was ~~fourty~~-one years old. Naturally, as dictated by his name, he belonged to a former house of Mephius, the Bazgan House, once ruling supreme in the west.		The current feudal lord of Taúlia, Ax Bazgan, was forty-one years old. Naturally, as dictated by his name, he belonged to a former house of Mephius, the Bazgan House, once ruling supreme in the west.

	Having also crossed swords with the current Mephius emperor, Guhl Mephius, his hostilities with Mephius had not died out even now.		Having also crossed swords with the current Mephius emperor, Guhl Mephius, his hostilities with Mephius had not died out even now.
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	It was Hou Ran. The young girl, riding on horseback, drew near the Houban’s feet which would wholly crush several grown men and, bending forward from the horse, lightly touched its foot. What happened after couldn’t really be seen, for a cloud of dust had flown up, but when the view cleared the next moment, Hou Ran was riding the flattened back of the Houban, and from there she was extending her hand to inside the cage.		It was Hou Ran. The young girl, riding on horseback, drew near the Houban’s feet which would wholly crush several grown men and, bending forward from the horse, lightly touched its foot. What happened after couldn’t really be seen, for a cloud of dust had flown up, but when the view cleared the next moment, Hou Ran was riding the flattened back of the Houban, and from there she was extending her hand to inside the cage.

	“It’s as if I’m watching a circus trainer. How ~~marvelous~~. If a dragon were to get as attached to a person as that, perhaps we might even be able to keep and raise a small-sized one in the manor.”		“It’s as if I’m watching a circus trainer. How marvellous. If a dragon were to get as attached to a person as that, perhaps we might even be able to keep and raise a small-sized one in the manor.”

	Theresia spoke to Vileena excitedly now, when the men, horses and dragons had finally calmed down.		Theresia spoke to Vileena excitedly now, when the men, horses and dragons had finally calmed down.