Rakuin no Monshou:Volume3 Chapter4 - Revision history

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	''Next, is how Ax will move. There’s no way he’ll stay back and sit tight, and the possibility they realized there’s no rear guard is high.''		''Next, is how Ax will move. There’s no way he’ll stay back and sit tight, and the possibility they realized there’s no rear guard is high.''

	If he were in Ax’s position, what would be do? However, even as Orba immersed himself in that thought, there was still another immediate problem he needed to settle.		If he were in Ax’s position, what would he do? However, even as Orba immersed himself in that thought, there was still another immediate problem he needed to settle.

Darkoneko at 14:19, 29 September 2017

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	Gil Mephius stayed still, his arms folded and him standing. His glance coincidentally fell on the map laid out on the table, seldomly blinking.		Gil Mephius stayed still, his arms folded and him standing. His glance coincidentally fell on the map laid out on the table, seldomly blinking.

	Noue would not ~~break~~ be the one to break this silence Orba created.		Noue would not be the one to break this silence Orba created.

	''Now, Oh arrogant, inexperienced, Gil Mephius. Won’t you surprise me? Won’t you teach me the vastness of the world?''		''Now, Oh arrogant, inexperienced, Gil Mephius. Won’t you surprise me? Won’t you teach me the vastness of the world?''

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	The Mephian airship pilots all collapsed onto the ground in total exhaustion. Vileena was skilled enough to go head to head against Garbera’s world-boasted, finely trained pilots. Keeping up with the princess had likely taken their all.		The Mephian airship pilots all collapsed onto the ground in total exhaustion. Vileena was skilled enough to go head to head against Garbera’s world-boasted, finely trained pilots. Keeping up with the princess had likely taken their all.

	“The sky is wonderful. Even as the lands are divided into countless countries, the world is tied together by a single sky ~~even as the lands are divided into countless countries~~.”		“The sky is wonderful. Even as the lands are divided into countless countries, the world is tied together by a single sky.”

	''Oh my.''		''Oh my.''

Detalz at 07:13, 5 September 2015

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	Noue did not speak. His face was far superior to the average beauty's, his lips slightly pursed, and his expression emotionless. Lit dimly under the cover of the night, his appearance emitted an ~~uncanny eeriness..~~		Noue did not speak. His face was far superior to the average beauty's, his lips slightly pursed, and his expression emotionless. Lit dimly under the cover of the night, his appearance emitted an uncanny eeriness.
	Noue did not move nor speak. His face, far superior to the average beauty’s, was faintly lit under the cover of the night, looked down upon them, his lips tightly pursed and expressionless. He emitted a uncanny eeriness.

	“Our respective enemies are one and the same.” The hooded man said in an emotionless voice. “If you would, allow us to accompany you.”		“Our respective enemies are one and the same.” The hooded man said in an emotionless voice. “If you would, allow us to accompany you.”

Monsterbandage at 06:31, 17 August 2015

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	“That? It seems to me that she’s laughing though,” Shique replied, surprised.		“That? It seems to me that she’s laughing though,” Shique replied, surprised.

	“I’ve finally understood it after being tied together as parent and daughter and living together,” Gowen said with a strangely bashful face that didn’t suit him. “That’s really an abundance of expressions. Or I should be saying that she never knew how ~~to her~~ to hide her emotions from the start. She only knows how to express them in a way that isn’t easy to understand.”		“I’ve finally understood it after being tied together as parent and daughter and living together,” Gowen said with a strangely bashful face that didn’t suit him. “That’s really an abundance of expressions. Or I should be saying that she never knew how to hide her emotions from the start. She only knows how to express them in a way that isn’t easy to understand.”

	“Right...”		“Right...”

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2015-08-17T01:19:37Z

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