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	Directly before them, Orba had called over Gouwen and the mask-wearing Kain and, under the pretence of giving them encouragements, he was speaking to them in a low voice.		Directly before them, Orba had called over Gouwen and the mask-wearing Kain and, under the pretence of giving them encouragements, he was speaking to them in a low voice.

	"Kain, just do whatever Gouwen tells you ~~too~~. If upon seeing this ship Ende doesn't retreat, join up with the garrison at Zaim. Do not use the ship to attack. There are a few escort ships, you can send those out."		"Kain, just do whatever Gouwen tells you to. If upon seeing this ship Ende doesn't retreat, join up with the garrison at Zaim. Do not use the ship to attack. There are a few escort ships, you can send those out."

	"U-understood."		"U-understood."

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	During this time, prince Gil Mephius never once left his own room, and while Shique and the other Imperial Guards were worried about it, they could only practice the sword dance as they had been ordered to by Ineli.		During this time, prince Gil Mephius never once left his own room, and while Shique and the other Imperial Guards were worried about it, they could only practice the sword dance as they had been ordered to by Ineli.

	Amidst all this turmoil, Oubary Bilan was the only one whose attitude was unconcerned. When an enemy wasn't threatening to break through the border but was instead warmly welcomed, there was ~~another~~ little that a man who, like him, relied on military arts could do. From morning onwards, he devoted himself to just drinking.		Amidst all this turmoil, Oubary Bilan was the only one whose attitude was unconcerned. When an enemy wasn't threatening to break through the border but was instead warmly welcomed, there was little that a man who, like him, relied on military arts could do. From morning onwards, he devoted himself to just drinking.

	Whenever Oubary got drunk, those of his subordinates who were in attendance thought it was strange how he would stroke the wound on his cheek, saying "It hurts".		Whenever Oubary got drunk, those of his subordinates who were in attendance thought it was strange how he would stroke the wound on his cheek, saying "It hurts".

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	"Orba, are you awake?"		"Orba, are you awake?"

	"Yeah."		"Yeah."

	The door opened as Orba answered. He stared blankly at Shique who was standing before him. Shique hadn't really thought anything of that rapid response, but unexpectedly, Orba was already getting dressed. He smiled to see that he appeared to have pulled himself together,		The door opened as Orba answered. He stared blankly at Shique who was standing before him. Shique hadn't really thought anything of that rapid response, but unexpectedly, Orba was already getting dressed. He smiled to see that he appeared to have pulled himself together,

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	"Miss Hou."		"Miss Hou."

	"'Ran' is fine."		"Just 'Ran' is fine."

	Ran spoke without turning around. She gave the dragons their feed, gently stroking the Tengos' necks.		Ran spoke without turning around. She gave the dragons their feed, gently stroking the Tengos' necks.

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	"Ah, aah, right. That's right."		"Ah, aah, right. That's right."

	"So I was able to meet '''him''' again."		"So I was able to meet ''him'' again."

	A new calamity stepped up. As if to ignore Vileena, Mephius' Imperial Princess Ineli smiled at the swordsman in the iron mask. On the receiving end of a sweet smile that in no way befitted her age, Kain was at a loss what to do.		A new calamity stepped up. As if to ignore Vileena, Mephius' Imperial Princess Ineli smiled at the swordsman in the iron mask. On the receiving end of a sweet smile that in no way befitted her age, Kain was at a loss what to do.
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	''Ha!'' Spurring on her heart that had become timid, Vileena went over to where Hou Ran was.		''Ha!'' Spurring on her heart that had become timid, Vileena went over to where Hou Ran was.

	"Hou~~-san~~."		"Miss Hou."

	"'Ran' is fine."		"'Ran' is fine."

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2016-12-04T10:52:02Z

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	"Air carriers are made from dragon fossils, aren't they?"		"Air carriers are made from dragon fossils, aren't they?"

	"Yes. The frame is made using metal refined from fossils. The ~~backbone~~ of maritime vessels are called 'keels', which is written with the characters for 'dragon' and 'skeleton', but these here are literally dragon bones."		"Yes. The frame is made using metal refined from fossils. The backbones of maritime vessels are called 'keels', which is written with the characters for 'dragon' and 'skeleton', but these here are literally dragon bones."
	<ref> That really is how you write "keel" in Japanese. I added the explanation about the characters since otherwise the line makes no sense in English.</ref>		<ref> That really is how you write "keel" in Japanese. I added the explanation about the characters since otherwise the line makes no sense in English.</ref>

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	===References and Translation Notes===		===References and Translation Notes===
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Renuac: /* Part 2 */

2016-09-09T08:37:27Z

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	"I don't know what she means by 'seriously'."		"I don't know what she means by 'seriously'."

	"This ''she''<ref> In the original text, this is the first time that Hou Ra directly addresses Vileena and she does so using "omae", which is normally a casual-to-rude way of saying "you" to a social equal or an inferior. In this case, given their respective social positions, it's very rude.</ref>, to whom do you refer?"		"This ''she''<ref> In the original text, this is the first time that Hou Ran directly addresses Vileena and she does so using "omae", which is normally a casual-to-rude way of saying "you" to a social equal or an inferior. In this case, given their respective social positions, it's very rude.</ref>, to whom do you refer?"

	Vileena grimly narrowed her eyes, finally pushed too far. She had shown calm and tolerance in her way of speaking, but it went without saying that the title of Third Princess of Garbera wasn't something cheap to be looked down upon to that extent. Because it wasn't a problem that only concerned her.		Vileena grimly narrowed her eyes, finally pushed too far. She had shown calm and tolerance in her way of speaking, but it went without saying that the title of Third Princess of Garbera wasn't something cheap to be looked down upon to that extent. Because it wasn't a problem that only concerned her.

Renuac: /* Part 2 */

2016-09-09T08:36:22Z

Part 2

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	"I don't know what she means by 'seriously'."		"I don't know what she means by 'seriously'."

	"This ''she''~~, to whom do you refer?"~~		"This ''she''<ref> In the original text, this is the first time that Hou Ra directly addresses Vileena and she does so using "omae", which is normally a casual-to-rude way of saying "you" to a social equal or an inferior. In this case, given their respective social positions, it's very rude.</ref>, to whom do you refer?"
	<ref> In the original text, this is the first time that Hou Ra directly addresses Vileena and she does so using "omae", which is normally a casual-to-rude way of saying "you" to a social equal or an inferior. In this case, given their respective social positions, it's very rude.</ref>

	Vileena grimly narrowed her eyes, finally pushed too far. She had shown calm and tolerance in her way of speaking, but it went without saying that the title of Third Princess of Garbera wasn't something cheap to be looked down upon to that extent. Because it wasn't a problem that only concerned her.		Vileena grimly narrowed her eyes, finally pushed too far. She had shown calm and tolerance in her way of speaking, but it went without saying that the title of Third Princess of Garbera wasn't something cheap to be looked down upon to that extent. Because it wasn't a problem that only concerned her.