Rakuin no Monshou:Volume8 Chapter2 - Revision history

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	From under the window, there was a roar like a beast howling.		From under the window, there was a roar like a beast howling.

	''~~Gunshot~~.''		''A gunshot.''

	His eyes suddenly wrenched open.		His eyes suddenly wrenched open.

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	The defence corps led by General Bouwen Tedos had successfully repelled the first wave of Mephian troops who had marched over the border.		The defence corps led by General Bouwen Tedos had successfully repelled the first wave of Mephian troops who had marched over the border.

	''Ho, ~~that~~ man~~... He~~ gets things done.''		''Ho, there's a man who gets things done.''

	He was the adopted son of Archduke Hirgo Tedos, who had lost his life during the drama of the rebellion. Hirgo, who had served since the time of Ax's father, was such a large presence that receiving notice of his death had not seemed real to him, but now it appeared that Bouwen had grown into a figure no less trustworthy than his adoptive father.		He was the adopted son of Archduke Hirgo Tedos, who had lost his life during the drama of the rebellion. Hirgo, who had served since the time of Ax's father, was such a large presence that receiving notice of his death had not seemed real to him, but now it appeared that Bouwen had grown into a figure no less trustworthy than his adoptive father.

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	It was about an hour before Shique received the news and had sprung up in delight.		It was about an hour before Shique received the news and had sprung up in delight.

	It was an infirmary within the Court used exclusively by nobles. At a glance, it was a pure white room filled with a sense of cleanliness. If he had not stopped to reconsider it, Orba would certainly have thought that he had lost his life, been called to the Dragon Gods' side, and joined the ranks of those-at-arms<ref>.</ref> as told in Mephian tradition.		It was an infirmary within the Court used exclusively by nobles. At a glance, it was a pure white room filled with a sense of cleanliness. If he had not stopped to reconsider it, Orba would certainly have thought that he had lost his life, been called to the Dragon Gods' side, and joined the ranks of those-at-arms<ref>The author uses the made-up word ikusabito (戦人) which reads as "war/battle person".
			</ref> as told in Mephian tradition.

	''The gods really don’t want my soul, huh?''		''The gods really don’t want my soul, huh?''
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	But on the night of the day after he had received that report, a commotion suddenly erupted in the barracks of the Sixth Army Corps...		But on the night of the day after he had received that report, a commotion suddenly erupted in the barracks of the Sixth Army Corps...


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	They were sitting on their knees facing each other, in the middle of a drinking contest.		They were sitting on their knees facing each other, in the middle of a drinking contest.

	Kadyne had suffered under Garda's control for a long time, and had furthermore been bombed, so even among the western lands the damage it had received was considerable. During the day, even bold generals took part in the city's reconstruction. With sweat on their brows, they carried away debris from the town area and helped with the building work. ~~Moreover, a great many people had been injured during the bombing raid and, as there were not enough doctors to treat them,~~ Moreover, a great many people had been injured during the bombing raid and, as there were not enough doctors to treat them, Nilgif and others rode their prized horses and travelled to and from Eimen, carrying more doctors.		Kadyne had suffered under Garda's control for a long time, and had furthermore been bombed, so even among the western lands the damage it had received was considerable. During the day, even bold generals took part in the city's reconstruction. With sweat on their brows, they carried away debris from the town area and helped with the building work. Moreover, a great many people had been injured during the bombing raid and, as there were not enough doctors to treat them, Nilgif and others rode their prized horses and travelled to and from Eimen, carrying more doctors.

	As they were so busy during the day, the brothers drank the kumis they both enjoyed together at night. Although both of them were willing to endure a frugal lifestyle for the sake of their country's reconstruction, when it came to alcohol, it was impossible for them to resign themselves to thrift and honest poverty.		As they were so busy during the day, the brothers drank the kumis they both enjoyed together at night. Although both of them were willing to endure a frugal lifestyle for the sake of their country's reconstruction, when it came to alcohol, it was impossible for them to resign themselves to thrift and honest poverty.
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	Elsewhere, far to the east of Kadyne and across Lake Soma, lay the city of Helio.		Elsewhere, far to the east of Kadyne and across Lake Soma, lay the city of Helio.

	At the time of Garda's invasion, it was a state in which rebellions and uprising followed one after another and the ruler's name changed frequently. If the chaos dragged on, the people's anguish would naturally grow deep. It would not have been surprising if fresh conflicts had broken out, not only among the military and the nobles, but even the among common people or with other countries of the western lands; but instead the population's national unity had strengthened and turned towards the hope of having the legitimate royal line, comprised of Hardross and his grandson Rogier Helio, ~~wrest~~ control back from the usurpers.		At the time of Garda's invasion, it was a state in which rebellions and uprising followed one after another and the ruler's name changed frequently. If the chaos dragged on, the people's anguish would naturally grow deep. It would not have been surprising if fresh conflicts had broken out, not only among the military and the nobles, but even the among common people or with other countries of the western lands; but instead the population's national unity had strengthened and turned towards the hope of having the legitimate royal line, comprised of Hardross and his grandson Rogier Helio, wrestled control back from the usurpers.

	If Kadyne's heroes were the Red and Blue Dragons, Helio's hero was Lasvius.		If Kadyne's heroes were the Red and Blue Dragons, Helio's hero was Lasvius.
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	An unpleasant colour crept up into Lasvius face. It was a characteristic of his that he could not stand being an object of mockery. Rogier laughed all the more.		An unpleasant colour crept up into Lasvius face. It was a characteristic of his that he could not stand being an object of mockery. Rogier laughed all the more.

	"That's also like the retainers say. That you can't take a joke, Lasvius."		"That's also like the retainers say. That you can't take a joke, Lasvius."

	"..."		"..."
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	Currently, Ax was not only the governor-general of Taúlia but also held the title of leader of the Western Alliance.		Currently, Ax was not only the governor-general of Taúlia but also held the title of leader of the Western Alliance.

	Galloping forward without a thought, leaving it to his allies to follow, severely reprimanding those who were slow - he could no longer behave as he usually did. He had told the lords and military men from the various countries gathered in Eimen about Mephius' invasion ~~and~~ they had then ~~and there~~ promised reinforcements.		Galloping forward without a thought, leaving it to his allies to follow, severely reprimanding those who were slow - he could no longer behave as he usually did. He had told the lords and military men from the various countries gathered in Eimen about Mephius' invasion; they had there and then promised reinforcements.

	Consequently, he had left Eimen in the middle of the night of the day after he had received the news.		Consequently, he had left Eimen in the middle of the night of the day after he had received the news.

	A few days later, as they were resting along the side if the road near a relay-station town on their descent of the Coldrin Hills, a messenger arrived from his home country of Taúlia.		A few days later, as they were resting along the side of the road near a relay-station town on their descent of the Coldrin Hills, a messenger arrived from his home country of Taúlia.

	Ax received the letter in his armour. The sun had already set but, after their break, he was up for starting off anew.		Ax received the letter in his armour. The sun had already set but, after their break, he was up for starting off anew.
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	Watching this from the highest point in the village was the merchant. "It stinks, it really stinks," he muttered as he crinkled his nose. "An evil stench. This won't be settled easily... but it can't just be overlooked."		Watching this from the highest point in the village was the merchant. "It stinks, it really stinks," he muttered as he crinkled his nose. "An evil stench. This won't be settled easily... but it can't just be overlooked."


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