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	"I warned you. --If only you had not gotten yourself involved in this <Night>..."		"I warned you. --If only you had not gotten yourself involved in this <Night>..."

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	Seemingly satisfied with Itsuki's answer, Honami nodded.		Seemingly satisfied with Itsuki's answer, Honami nodded.

	"Right. Both <Astral> and <Goetia> are registered. In the beginning, it was a support union made by magicians in Europe in the Middle Ages. They could never intervene in anything directly, but they had a lot of influence worldwide. For example, ~~even~~ if you weren't formally registered with the <Organization>, no one would treat you like a real magician."		"Right. Both <Astral> and <Goetia> are registered. In the beginning, it was a support union made by magicians in Europe in the Middle Ages. They could never intervene in anything directly, but they had a lot of influence worldwide. For example, if you weren't formally registered with the <Organization>, no one would treat you like a real magician."

	Giving a simple review, Honami looked at Itsuki.		Giving a simple review, Honami looked at Itsuki.
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	"Okay then, what kind of 'job' are we doing this time?" he asked, crying.		"Okay then, what kind of 'job' are we doing this time?" he asked, crying.



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	==Chapter 2 - The Magician's Offer==		==Chapter 2 - The Magician's Offer==


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	"A~ah, President ''Onii-chan'' is dea~d..."		"A~ah, President ''Onii-chan'' is dea~d..."
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	The next day, during lunch, Itsuki walked up to the curry meal... and moved on, taking the udon meal.		The next day, during lunch, Itsuki walked up to the curry meal... and moved on, taking the udon meal.
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	"I'll tell you about it," Honami Takase Ambler said flatly.		"I'll tell you about it," Honami Takase Ambler said flatly.

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Amazing Buffalo at 17:36, 31 May 2011

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	That is to say, 90% of their income came from these activities.		That is to say, 90% of their income came from these activities.

	"Since we rent out magicians, I call us 'Rental Magica'. Ehehe, it sounds sort of cool, doesn't it?" said Mikan, puffing out her chest.		"Since we rent out magicians, I call us 'Rental Magica.' Ehehe, it sounds sort of cool, doesn't it?" said Mikan, puffing out her chest.

	She seemed to have come straight from elementary school and she carried a red schoolbag over her ''miko'' outfit. No, she must have changed clothes in the office or something.		She seemed to have come straight from elementary school and she carried a red schoolbag over her ''miko'' outfit. No, she must have changed clothes in the office or something.
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	"Er, um... I guess they exist out of necessity?"		"Er, um... I guess they exist out of necessity?"

	"Ahaha. A no-holds-barred response. I like that. If you think about it normally, there's really no need for them at all. If you need to fly, you use an airplane. If you need to talk to someone far away, you use a telephone. And if you need a familiar, there's always Sony's AIBO. Those robots are much cuter and functional than your typical magical beast, aren't they? Oh, but of course, cats are the exception."		"Ahaha. A no-holds-barred response. I like that. If you think about it normally, there's really no need for them at all. If you need to fly, you use an airplane. If you need to talk to someone far away, you use a telephone. And if you need a familiar, there's always Sony's AIBO. Those robots are much cuter and more functional than your typical magical beast, aren't they? Oh, but of course, cats are the exception."

	Putting emphasis on the last part, Nekoyashiki then made a solemn expression.		Putting emphasis on the last part, Nekoyashiki then made a solemn expression.
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	"The most dangerous magic is... when the magician becomes the magic himself," Nekoyashiki said, narrowing his eyes into crescent moons.		"The most dangerous magic is... when the magician becomes the magic himself," Nekoyashiki said, narrowing his eyes into crescent moons.


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	She angrily stood up.		She angrily stood up.

	"So how about now? If you value your life, you will pull the next offer."		"So how about now? If you value your life, you will pull out of the next offer."

	Simply declaring that, the girl swiftly turned on her heel.		Simply declaring that, the girl swiftly turned on her heel.

Tetsu-nii: /* 1 */ Mostly to correct the Adelicia/Adelisia issue, but also inserted a couple of references.

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1: Mostly to correct the Adelicia/Adelisia issue, but also inserted a couple of references.

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	"Heheheh, I thought that he might have the makings of a genius since he could see ghosts and monsters. But it doesn't seem to be so, does it?"		"Heheheh, I thought that he might have the makings of a genius since he could see ghosts and monsters. But it doesn't seem to be so, does it?"

	"Rather than genius, it seems like just genes. Something close to a ''kenki'' or a ''jougan'', I'd think."		"Rather than genius, it seems like just genes. Something close to a ''kenki''<ref>Someone without a family history of spiritual power who gains an ability like "second sight" or "fairy sight" in Western lore; usually due to an eye injury.</ref> or a ''jougan''<ref>Someone born with "second/fairy sight".</ref>, I'd think."

	"There is the legend of the ''kenki'' becoming a powerful mountain wizard, you know."		"There is the legend of the ''kenki'' becoming a powerful mountain wizard, you know."
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	That is to say, 90% of their income came from these activities.		That is to say, 90% of their income came from these activities.

	"Since we rent out magicians, I call us 'Rental Magica.' Ehehe, it sounds sort of cool, doesn't it?" said Mikan, puffing out her chest.		"Since we rent out magicians, I call us 'Rental Magica'. Ehehe, it sounds sort of cool, doesn't it?" said Mikan, puffing out her chest.

	She seemed to have come straight from elementary school and she carried a red schoolbag over her ''miko'' outfit. No, she must have changed clothes in the office or something.		She seemed to have come straight from elementary school and she carried a red schoolbag over her ''miko'' outfit. No, she must have changed clothes in the office or something.
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	"Huh, presents..."		"Huh, presents..."

	Itsuki's ~~jaw~~ dropped. He was way off.		Itsuki's chin dropped. He was way off.

	Nekoyashiki smiled at his look.		Nekoyashiki smiled at his look.
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	"N-No, it's nothing."		"N-No, it's nothing."

	Adilisia lenn Mathers.		Adilisia • lenn • Mathers.

	That was the name of the girl who now sat to his right during class. Thought it was difficult for him to admit. Perhaps it was because of Honami, but she hadn't given him any trouble. Still, he could feel the terrible sensation that a pair of green eyes was glaring at him from time to time.		That was the name of the girl who now sat to his right during class. Thought it was difficult for him to admit. Perhaps it was because of Honami, but she hadn't given him any trouble. Still, he could feel the terrible sensation that a pair of green eyes was glaring at him from time to time.

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	"Then finish reading from "Hand of Glory" to "The Book of Albertus"."		"Then finish reading from "Hand of Glory" to "The Book of Albertus"."

	Recovering from his near-death experience, Itsuki shook his head and picked up the old book. It was now almost a conditioned reflex. With emptier eyes than he had when he was under ~~Adelicia~~'s control, he continued to read the Grimoire.		Recovering from his near-death experience, Itsuki shook his head and picked up the old book. It was now almost a conditioned reflex. With emptier eyes than he had when he was under Adilisia's control, he continued to read the Grimoire.

	— A week had already passed since the incident in the park.		— A week had already passed since the incident in the park.
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	"Heheheh, I thought that he might have the makings of a genius since he could see ghosts and monsters. But it doesn't seem to be so, does it?"		"Heheheh, I thought that he might have the makings of a genius since he could see ghosts and monsters. But it doesn't seem to be so, does it?"

	"Rather than genius, it seems like just genes. Something close to a ''kenki'' or a ''jougan''~~<!-- No idea what either of these are, nor was I able to find anything after googling the terms. -->~~, I'd think."		"Rather than genius, it seems like just genes. Something close to a ''kenki'' or a ''jougan'', I'd think."

	"There is the legend of the ''kenki''~~<!-- "The ''Kenki''"? -->~~ becoming a powerful mountain wizard, you know."		"There is the legend of the ''kenki'' becoming a powerful mountain wizard, you know."

	"Isn't that, itself, an exception to an exception? There's no logic to it, so you can't include it into the calculations."		"Isn't that, itself, an exception to an exception? There's no logic to it, so you can't include it into the calculations."
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	That is to say, 90% of their income came from these activities.		That is to say, 90% of their income came from these activities.

	"Since we rent out magicians, I call us 'Rental Magica'. Ehehe, it sounds sort of cool, doesn't it?" said Mikan, puffing out her chest.		"Since we rent out magicians, I call us 'Rental Magica.' Ehehe, it sounds sort of cool, doesn't it?" said Mikan, puffing out her chest.

	She seemed to have come straight from elementary school and she carried a red schoolbag over her ''miko'' outfit. No, she must have changed clothes in the office or something.		She seemed to have come straight from elementary school and she carried a red schoolbag over her ''miko'' outfit. No, she must have changed clothes in the office or something.
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	"Huh, presents..."		"Huh, presents..."

	Itsuki dropped ~~his chin~~. He was way off.		Itsuki's jaw dropped. He was way off.

	Nekoyashiki smiled at his look.		Nekoyashiki smiled at his look.
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	"N-No, it's nothing."		"N-No, it's nothing."

	~~Adelicia Lenn~~ Mathers.		Adilisia lenn Mathers.

	That was the name of the girl who now sat to his right during class. Thought it was difficult for him to admit. Perhaps it was because of Honami, but she hadn't given him any trouble. Still, he could feel the terrible sensation that a pair of green eyes was glaring at him from time to time.		That was the name of the girl who now sat to his right during class. Thought it was difficult for him to admit. Perhaps it was because of Honami, but she hadn't given him any trouble. Still, he could feel the terrible sensation that a pair of green eyes was glaring at him from time to time.

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	"Then finish reading from 'Hand of Glory' to 'The Book of Albertus.'"		"Then finish reading from 'Hand of Glory' to 'The Book of Albertus.'"

	Recovering from his near-death experience, Itsuki shook his neck and took the old book into his hand. It was close to a conditioned reflex now. With emptier eyes than he had when he was under ~~Adelicia~~'s control, he continued to read the Grimoire.		Recovering from his near-death experience, Itsuki shook his neck and took the old book into his hand. It was close to a conditioned reflex now. With emptier eyes than he had when he was under Adilisia's control, he continued to read the Grimoire.

	--Since then, a week had already passed.		--Since then, a week had already passed.
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	Whatever this 'job' could be, there was one thing that was certain.		Whatever this 'job' could be, there was one thing that was certain.

	"W-woah, time out! Wait a second! Then, ~~Adelicia~~ came--"		"W-woah, time out! Wait a second! Then, Adilisia came--"

	"Because <Goetia> took the offer. If <Astral> takes the offer as well, then the reward is first come, first serve. That is to say, we'll be fighting one another."		"Because <Goetia> took the offer. If <Astral> takes the offer as well, then the reward is first come, first serve. That is to say, we'll be fighting one another."