Rental Magica Volume 1: Chapter 3 - Revision history

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	==Chapter 3 - <Night> of the Magician==		==Chapter 3 - <Night> of the Magician==

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	From beneath his eye patch, Itsuki's right eye was supporting his body. From inside of it, something was determinedly fixed to the funnel in the ocean.		From beneath his eye patch, Itsuki's right eye was supporting his body. From inside of it, something was determinedly fixed to the funnel in the ocean.
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	'''[LOOK]'''		'''[LOOK]'''

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	To her, Nekoyashiki made a wry smile--tinged slightly with impatience.		To her, Nekoyashiki made a wry smile--tinged slightly with impatience.

	"Sorry... If this analysis is certain... it looks like ~~there's~~ someone's magic ~~on the other side of~~ the core of this <Night>. That is to say, it seems like it's because of that magic that the spell wave pollution is corrupted."		"Sorry... If this analysis is certain... it looks like someone's magic is behind the core of this <Night>. That is to say, it seems like it's because of that magic that the spell wave pollution is corrupted."

	Mikan's breath stopped.		Mikan's breath stopped.

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	"They were pretty low-quality, as expected. Are you alright, president?"		"They were pretty low-quality, as expected. Are you alright, president?"

	"I'm... just a little... sick from all the moving..." Itsuki nodded with a blue face, holding his hand over his mouth. It was ~~strange~~ that he hadn't been thrown off.		"I'm... just a little... sick from all the moving..." Itsuki nodded with a blue face, holding his hand over his mouth. It was a wonder that he hadn't been thrown off.

	After it was all over, his tongue hurt, he felt sick, and he was in a mess.		After it was all over, his tongue hurt, he felt sick, and he was in a mess.

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This whole goddamn passage confused me so I'll just change it so the meaning gets across

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	Honami didn't understand.		Honami didn't understand.

	A<Night>, after all, was a natural disaster consisting of spell power.		A <Night>, after all, was a natural disaster consisting of spell power.

	From the scale of the damage, the <Organization> handled assignment of a rank to the work, but in this case, the recompense wasn't very large for the ~~level~~ of ~~difficulty~~. She didn't think ~~<Goetia>~~ had the kind of merit that would ~~allow them~~ to push away <Astral>.		From the scale of the damage, the <Organization> handled the assignment of a rank to the "work," but in this case, the recompense wasn't very large for the amount of effort required. She didn't think the 'work' had the kind of merit that would cause <Goetia> to push away <Astral>.

	''Or... is there something there?''		''Or... is there something there?''

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	Itsuki moaned, having finally recovered from his vertigo.		Itsuki moaned, having finally recovered from his vertigo.

	{A primordial sea--though somewhat unique, as it looks like it's been quite polluted with spell power,} Nekoyashiki's voice chimed in from beside. Honami, putting her hand do the back of her neck, looked down at the demonic ocean.		{A primordial sea--though somewhat unique, as it looks like it's been quite polluted with spell power,} Nekoyashiki's voice chimed in from beside. Honami, putting her hand to the back of her neck, looked down at the demonic ocean.

	"It's deeper than I thought. It seems like it'll take some effort to find the core."		"It's deeper than I thought. It seems like it'll take some effort to find the core."

	"This 'core' thing... where is it?"		"This 'core' thing... where would it be?"

	"I dunno. But its form should be changed into something in the sea, so it might be a fish, or a stone at the ocean floor. Moreover--"		"I dunno. But its form should be changed into something in the sea, so it might be a fish, or a stone at the ocean floor. Moreover--"