Ryuu to Aitsu:Volume2 Chapter1 - Revision history

Jonathanasdf at 10:20, 27 January 2014

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	Saying this, Tomoe's sights moved towards the Magic Academy that could be seen above the streets.		Saying this, Tomoe's sights moved towards the Magic Academy that could be seen above the streets.

	Soleil was discovered at the base of an extinct volcano that was once called Phoenix Mountain. However, with the discovery of Soleil this Phoenix Mountain began to be known as Soleil Hill. Now, Soleil Hill ~~was~~ the more common name (though what's with a volcano being called a hill).		Soleil was discovered at the base of an extinct volcano that was once called Phoenix Mountain. However, with the discovery of Soleil this Phoenix Mountain began to be known as Soleil Hill. Now, Soleil Hill is the more common name (though what's with a volcano being called a hill).

	Constructed above Soleil was Fullbright, and as the population increased so did the size of the city, now even extending up along the side of the mountain.		Constructed above Soleil was Fullbright, and as the population increased so did the size of the city, now even extending up along the side of the mountain.

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 ==Chapter 1: The Girl of the Academic City==
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 "So that was Remuria..."
-"Yes. Mer is probably the one most like Remiel out of the siblings."
+"Yes. Mer is probably the one most like Lady Remiel out of the siblings."
 Tomoe moved to my side, and said.
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 Ahh, what am I panicking for.
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Jonathanasdf at 19:24, 15 September 2013

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Jonathanasdf at 09:31, 3 September 2013

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	At the start I didn't believe it either. It's not so much that I couldn't believe it, but more like I didn't want to believe it.		At the start I didn't believe it either. It's not so much that I couldn't believe it, but more like I didn't want to believe it.

	Regrettably, no matter how much I regretted it, the fact that this Rex Ir Heidfelt was the master that I had to ~~serve~~ did not change.		Regrettably, no matter how much I regretted it, the fact that this Rex Ir Heidfelt was the master that I had to follow did not change.

	Spilling the umpteenth sigh since the start of this journey, I focused on the chant for the next spell.		Spilling the umpteenth sigh since the start of this journey, I focused on the chant for the next spell.

	~~The~~ threads of my consciousness have already reached beyond "the scars of the world".		My threads of consciousness have already reached beyond <i>the scars of the world</i>.

	"<b><i>{{Furigana\|Narukami\|Lightning Bolt}}</i></b>"		"<b><i>{{Furigana\|Narukami\|Lightning Bolt}}</i></b>"
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	"The original reason was certainly because of General Raven's command. But now, I am journeying with Rex by my own will."		"The original reason was certainly because of General Raven's command. But now, I am journeying with Rex by my own will."

	"Ah, that's a good answer. It seems my brother ~~had~~ picked ~~someone~~ very suitable."		"Ah, that's a good answer. It seems my brother has picked a very suitable person."

	Remuria replied with a softened gaze, and turned heel, facing Tomoe and I with her back.		Remuria replied with a softened gaze, and turned heel, facing Tomoe and I with her back.

Jonathanasdf at 09:26, 3 September 2013

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	Eyes bewildered, he topples backwards.		Eyes bewildered, he topples backwards.

	If you told ~~someone who didn't know~~ that this dumbass is the great-grandson of the hero Rayjack Ur Heidfelt, nobody would believe you.		If you told anyone that this dumbass is the great-grandson of the hero Rayjack Ur Heidfelt, nobody would believe you.

	At the start I didn't believe it either. It's not so much that I couldn't believe it, but more like I didn't want to believe it.		At the start I didn't believe it either. It's not so much that I couldn't believe it, but more like I didn't want to believe it.

Jonathanasdf at 09:25, 3 September 2013

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	Seriously... I thought he would've grown a bit from the battle with one of the Demon Lord's daughters, but his incompetence was just as before.		Seriously... I thought he would've grown a bit from the battle with one of the Demon Lord's daughters, but his incompetence was just as before.

	"Gyaaaaa! Blood~~, there~~'s blood on meeeeee!"		"Gyaaaaa! Blood! There's blood on meeeeee!"

	Eyes bewildered, he topples backwards.		Eyes bewildered, he topples backwards.

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Chapter 1: The Girl of the Academic City

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	Unfitting of her cute doll-like appearance, she was far more skilled than the average warrior.		Unfitting of her cute doll-like appearance, she was far more skilled than the average warrior.

	But that is to be expected. After all, Tomoe is an artificial life-form constructed by the magic from the ~~old world~~ — a <i>golem</i>.		But that is to be expected. After all, Tomoe is an artificial life-form constructed by the magic from the Old World — a <i>golem</i>.

	Her maid uniform ruffling as she dispatched <i>black dogs</i> one after the other, Tomoe was much more reliable than my other teammate.		Her maid uniform ruffling as she dispatched <i>black dogs</i> one after the other, Tomoe was much more reliable than my other teammate.
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	The ultimate goal of our journey is to defeat the king of the demon world, May-Hem, who has his eyes set on invading this world.		The ultimate goal of our journey is to defeat the king of the demon world, May-Hem, who has his eyes set on invading this world.

	The one who entrusted this impossibly impossible task to me, a Royal Magician of the City of Swords Randall, was General Raven Gir Heidfelt—the dumbass's older brother.		The one who entrusted this impossibly impossible task to me, a Royal Magician of the City of Swords Randall, was General Raven Gir Heidfelt — the dumbass's older brother.

	General Raven is a young and valiant general whose name is known not only throughout Randall, but across the whole of the continent of Adair. On the other hand, his brother leaves the fighting to females as he tries to run away, then trips up when showered with blood. As grandsons of the same hero, there's too much of a difference.		General Raven is a young and valiant general whose name is known not only throughout Randall, but across the whole of the continent of Adair. On the other hand, his brother leaves the fighting to females as he tries to run away, then trips up when showered with blood. As grandsons of the same hero, there's too much of a difference.
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	I pointed forwards.		I pointed forwards.

	Where I was looking, on the opposite shore of the stream flowing on the right—there stood someone in an overcoat.		Where I was looking, on the opposite shore of the stream flowing on the right — there stood someone in an overcoat.

	Due to the distance and a hood completely covering his/her face, one couldn't tell whether he/she was male or female, but we could tell that he/she was watching us.		Due to the distance and a hood completely covering his/her face, one couldn't tell whether he/she was male or female, but we could tell that he/she was watching us.
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	A darkness darker than shadows expanded soundlessly below Remuria's feet, and Remuria's legs started to sink into that deep darkness.		A darkness darker than shadows expanded soundlessly below Remuria's feet, and Remuria's legs started to sink into that deep darkness.

	While carrying the dumbass, Remuria was consumed by the darkness—together with the dumbass, they disappeared from the area.		While carrying the dumbass, Remuria was consumed by the darkness — together with the dumbass, they disappeared from the area.

	Teleportation magic—is probably what it was.		Teleportation magic — is probably what it was.

	"So that was Remuria..."		"So that was Remuria..."
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	"I see..."		"I see..."

	I had heard that Remiel—the dumbass's grandmother, was a very bold person.		I had heard that Remiel — the dumbass's grandmother, was a very bold person.

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	"<b><i>{{Furigana\|Kamaitachi\|Razor Wind}}</i></b>"		"<b><i>{{Furigana\|Kamaitachi\|Razor Wind}}</i></b>"

	Howling, the magical wind cut across the dry ashen ground, sweeping up a cloud of dust as it assaulted the crowd of <i>black dogs</i> blocking ~~their~~ way.		Howling, the magical wind cut across the dry ashen ground, sweeping up a cloud of dust as it assaulted the crowd of <i>black dogs</i> blocking my way.

	As their name implies, these monsters ~~were~~ in the form of black dogs. Their weapons are ~~the~~ strong teeth that can bite through even metal armor, ~~their~~ claws ~~tinted~~ with a paralyzing poison, and more than anything, their overwhelming numbers.		As their name implies, these monsters are in the form of black dogs. Their weapons are strong teeth that can bite through even metal armor, claws tinged with a paralyzing poison, and more than anything, their overwhelming numbers.

	Just counting those ~~ahead~~, there were around 30. If the ones behind were included, the total easily surpassed 50.		Just counting those in front of us, there were around 30. If the ones behind were included, the total easily surpassed 50.

	A novice explorer would probably not have been able to do anything. But, to me, Ange Cerezo, they were nothing to worry about.		A novice explorer would probably not have been able to do anything. But, to me, Ange Cerezo, they were nothing to worry about.

	The <i>black dogs</i> caught by the raging winds were decimated, ~~turning~~ into a spray of blood.		The <i>black dogs</i> caught by the raging winds were decimated, turned into a spray of blood.

	Holding down my violently fluttering manteau and ~~looking~~ backwards, I caught sight of a petite maid with a halberd dancing around the battlefield, spinning like a top.		Holding down my violently fluttering manteau and glancing backwards, I caught sight of a petite maid with a halberd dancing around the battlefield, spinning like a top.

	It was Tomoe.		It was Tomoe.

	~~Unfitting~~ of her cute doll-like appearance, she was far more skilled than the average warrior.		Unbefitting of her cute doll-like appearance, she was far more skilled than the average warrior.

	But that is to be expected. After all, Tomoe is an artificial life-form constructed by the magic from the Old World — a <i>golem</i>.		But that is to be expected. After all, Tomoe is an artificial life-form constructed by the magic from the Old World — a <i>golem</i>.
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	The ultimate goal of our journey is to defeat the king of the demon world, May-Hem, who has his eyes set on invading this world.		The ultimate goal of our journey is to defeat the king of the demon world, May-Hem, who has his eyes set on invading this world.

	The one who entrusted this ~~impossibly~~ impossible task to me, a Royal Magician of the City of Swords Randall, was General Raven Gir Heidfelt — the dumbass's older brother.		The one who entrusted this impossible task to me, a Royal Magician of the City of Swords Randall, was General Raven Gir Heidfelt — the dumbass's older brother.

	General Raven is a young and valiant general whose name is known not only throughout Randall, but across the whole of the continent of Adair. On the other hand, his brother leaves the fighting to females as he tries to run away, then trips up when showered with blood. As grandsons of the same hero, there's too much of a difference.		General Raven is a young and valiant general whose name is known not only throughout Randall, but across the whole of the continent of Adair. On the other hand, his brother leaves the fighting to females as he tries to run away, then trips up when showered with blood... As grandsons of the same hero, there's too much of a difference.

	"Mr. Rex, please get up."		"Mr. Rex, please get up."
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	I am aware that waking someone by knocking them with a staff is rather rude, but this is fine. After all, he is a dumbass.		I am aware that waking someone by knocking them with a staff is rather rude, but this is fine. After all, he is a dumbass.

			He's an idiot and also a useless bum, thus 'dumbass'.

	It's already been firmly established as his label when I think of him.		It's already been firmly established as his label when I think of him.