Saijaku Muhai no Bahamut:Volume 6 Episode 1 - Revision history

SkyeFar: /* Part 4 */ Improved the English....

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Part 4: Improved the English....

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	~~“So~~ the ~~result, “Over Limit” can no longer be used?”~~		Back on the school grounds after the prior storm from Blackend had left. Lux and Lisha were gathered in the Princess's Drag-Ride workshop (Atelier).

	~~In the school ground after the storm had left.~~		“So, you're saying that “Over Limit” can't be used anymore?”

	~~In the Drag-ride workshop (Atelier)~~, ~~Lisha who was wearing~~ a white gown ~~said so suddenly~~.		Lisha, clad in a white gown, asked Lux about this powerful ability that was now no longer accessible to him.

	“Yes, it seems so.”		“Yes, that seems to be the case.”

	~~Putting his waist on the~~ workbench, Lux answered Lisha ~~who was watching~~ him~~, and~~ released “Bahamut” armor.		Leaning against her workbench, Lux answered Lisha as she gazed at him. He released the “Bahamut” Drag-Ride armor to demonstrate.

	~~A special system which released the~~ output restriction ~~of the Drag-ride which was usually restricted~~ to ~~avoid~~ the burden of body and mind, Limit Break (Over Limit).		Normally, Drag-Rides have an output restriction put in place to limit the burden they place on the pilot's body and mind. Earlier, these two had unlocked a special system which fully released that output restriction - Limit Break (Over Limit).

	For a while, ~~it was~~ thought that Lux’s body ~~could not~~ bear it, ~~so it~~ was forbidden ~~to use~~ it since the training camp~~, and~~ as his physical condition ~~stabilized now~~, ~~in order~~ to be prepared, he tried to ~~repeat~~ the steps but was unsuccessful.		For a while, they thought that Lux’s body couldn't bear the strain of repeatedly using this dangerous technique. So, he was forbidden from using it since the training camp. But as his physical condition improved, he wished to be prepared for future battles. So, he tried to recreate the steps to activating Over Limit, but he was unsuccessful each time.

	~~“But it’s~~ strange. Don’t you remember it? The way of perfect Limit Break (Over Limit), even I don’t know it clearly——“		“That's strange. Don’t you remember the method? The way of perfect Limit Break (Over Limit), even I don’t know it clearly——“

	“I ~~do not~~ know. ~~Why only that time,~~ I can do ~~it——”~~		“I really don't know. I can't tell you why I was able do it just that once and not since——”

	I remember seeing the method of Limit Break (Over Limit) that La Cruche had ~~done~~ as the Ruin’s Supervisor (Gear Leader), I wonder if that was ~~the reason for~~ my memories?		I remember seeing the method to activate Limit Break (Over Limit) that La Cruche had used as the Ruin’s Supervisor (Gear Leader). I wonder if that was what triggered it in my memories?

	~~(…..Memory~~? No, I ~~should have~~ used ~~the~~ Limit Break (Over Limit) ~~for the first time at that time~~. ~~Or——）~~		''…Memory? No, that was the first time I ever used Limit Break (Over Limit). Or——''

	Am I forgetting something? Lux mind ~~emerged~~ this question.		''Am I forgetting something?'' Lux's mind began to ponder over this sudden question.

	“It may be because Phi-chan was there. Maybe I forgot something——”		“It may be because Phi-chan was there. Maybe I forgot something——”

	“…..!? That, that ~~airhead~~ girl has nothing to do with this!? That…. this is still a problem, I’ll think about it myself. ~~Hum~~.”		“…!? That, that airheaded girl has nothing to do with this! That… this is still a major problem, Lux. I’ll think about it myself then. Hmph.”

	After hearing Lux murmuring to himself, Lisha ~~somehow~~ anxiously shouted.		After hearing Lux murmuring to himself, Lisha anxiously shouted that she'd work on fixing things on her own.

	Lux tilted his head ~~curiously~~, as time ~~went~~ by.		The oblivious Lux tilted his head in curiosity, and time passed by.

SkyeFar: /* Part 3 */ Improved the English

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SkyeFar: /* Part 3 */ Further edits to improve the English

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SkyeFar: /* Part 3 */ Improved the English Substantially....

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SkyeFar: /* Part 2 */ English Improvements.

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SkyeFar: /* Part 2 */ Further significant English Improvements....

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SkyeFar: /* Part 1 */

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Part 1

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	This was a large room in one of the largest buildings of the academy.		This was a large room in one of the largest buildings of the academy.

	Besides Drag-Ride training, ~~most~~ of the ~~other~~ physical training - like kenjutsu and taijutsu - took place here. So, the first floor was padded with a non-slip material.		Besides Drag-Ride training, much of the remaining physical training - like kenjutsu and taijutsu - took place here. So, the first floor was padded with a non-slip material.

	The second floor of this building was used as a venue for meetings from time to time.		The second floor of this building was used as a venue for meetings from time to time.
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	''Wh-what’s going on here-!? This is bad!''		''Wh-what’s going on here-!? This is bad!''

	As the footsteps ~~got~~ louder, Lux hid deeper in the building.		As the footsteps grew louder, Lux hid deeper in the building.

	''Am I stupid, what’s the point of hiding? All I’m doing is cornering myself and digging myself in deeper!''		''Am I stupid, what’s the point of hiding? All I’m doing is cornering myself and digging myself in deeper!''

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SkyeFar: /* Part 1 */ Cleaned up the English....

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Part 1: Cleaned up the English....

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	~~Currently~~, the color of skin filled his ~~sight~~.		At that moment, the color of human skin filled his field of vision.

	This was a room in one of the largest buildings of the academy.		This was a large room in one of the largest buildings of the academy.

	~~Other than~~ Drag-Ride training, most of the other physical training, like kenjutsu and taijutsu, took place here, ~~hence~~ the floor was padded with a ~~high friction~~ material.		Besides Drag-Ride training, most of the other physical training - like kenjutsu and taijutsu - took place here. So, the first floor was padded with a non-slip material.

	The second floor of this building ~~would be~~ used as a venue for meetings from time to time.		The second floor of this building was used as a venue for meetings from time to time.

	Standing behind the wooden railings on the second floor, he could see all the girls in their underwear.		Standing behind the wooden railings on the second floor, he could see all the girls below in their underwear.

	(Wh-what’s going on-!? This is bad!?)		''Wh-what’s going on here-!? This is bad!''

	As the footsteps got louder, Lux hid deeper ~~into~~ the building.		As the footsteps got louder, Lux hid deeper in the building.

	(Am I stupid, what’s the point of hiding? All I’m doing is cornering myself ~~like this~~!)		''Am I stupid, what’s the point of hiding? All I’m doing is cornering myself and digging myself in deeper!''

	Luckily, there wasn’t anyone on the second floor ~~originally~~, so all he had to do was to continue hiding and not be discovered.		Luckily, there usually wasn’t anyone on the second floor, so all he had to do was continue hiding and not be discovered.

	Lux hid in the shadows. After waiting for the girls he was trying to avoid ~~walked~~ past, he darted behind the armrest of a chair.		Lux hid in the shadows. After waiting for the girls he was trying to avoid to walk past, he darted behind the armrest of a chair.

	(Calm down, though I’m not completely sure how it ended up like this, but I will be killed if anyone finds me!)		''Calm down, though I’m not completely sure how it ended up like this, but I will be killed if anyone finds me!''

	While trying to recall his original purpose in this place, Lux’s eyes drifted further into the Shangri-La that was before his eyes.		While trying to recall his original purpose for winding up in this place, Lux’s eyes inevitably drifted further down into the Shangri-La that was before his eyes below.

	Under the sunlight that came in from a window, the glossy nudes of the girls were as clear as day.		Under the sunlight that came in from a window, the glossy nudes of the girls he called his schoolmates were as clear as day.

	Their skin shone in a healthy tone, they were even putting on some really alluring underwear.		Their skin shone in a healthy tone, they were even putting on some really alluring underwear.
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	“Sen-senpai! Don’t be so loud! After all, this place-”		“Sen-senpai! Don’t be so loud! After all, this place-”

	The room was filled with the soft breathing and sweet scent of ~~the~~ girls, all of which were extremely stimulating to Lux.		The room was filled with the soft breathing and sweet scent of girls, all of which were ''extremely'' stimulating to Lux.

	Feeling something was amiss, Lux decided to look for his target again, as his eyes landed on the half naked girls, his heart rate started to ~~go up~~ again.		Feeling something was amiss, Lux decided to look for his target again, as his eyes landed on the half-naked girls, his heart rate started to rise again.

	(W-why am I doing something ~~like this~~ that makes me look like a peeping ~~pervert~~?)		''W-why am I doing something that makes me look like a perverted peeping-tom?''

	But Lux had no choice.		But Lux had no choice.

	Before his ~~secrets~~ could be found out, Lux couldn’t shift his ~~gaze~~.		Before his illicit presence could be found out, Lux couldn’t shift his focus.

	Lux trembled as he recalled what ~~happened~~ a few minutes ~~ago~~.		Lux trembled at his situation as he recalled what transpired only a few minutes before....

	===Part 2===		===Part 2===

Sapper: /* Episode 1 – Blue Tyrant */

2018-01-23T10:22:30Z

Episode 1 – Blue Tyrant

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	One of them, was a girl with beautiful black hair that fell on her own skin——Kirihime Yoruka		One of them, was a girl with beautiful black hair that fell on her own skin——Kirihime Yoruka

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	And the other one, being pressed under, was a girl wearing a blouse and a skirt.		And the other one, being pressed under, was a girl wearing a blouse and a skirt.