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	Two days passed, and it was time to depart for the examinations in Wanheim.		Two days passed, and it was time to depart for the examinations in Wanheim.

	There were a total of 60 Academy students, who'd passed the mock tests at school. Accompanying them were several men from the New Kingdom's Military. ~~They~~ all ~~took~~ the test ~~together~~. Together, the ~~group~~ set out for the Principality of Wanheim.		There were a total of 60 Academy students who'd passed the mock tests at school. Accompanying them were several men from the New Kingdom's Military. These men had all taken the test as a group. Together, the expedition set out for the Principality of Wanheim.

	Although it controlled an area smaller than the New Kingdom, the Principality of Wanheim still held a vast domain. Thus, it too was ranked among the major powers of the world.		Although it controlled an area smaller than the New Kingdom, the Principality of Wanheim still held a vast domain. Thus, it too was ranked among the major powers of the world.
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	”……Amazing.”		”……Amazing.”

	”Beautiful… Such a glorious city exists.”		”Beautiful… Such a glorious city truly exists.”

	The other girls hopped down from the carriages parked on the hillside. As they laid eyes upon this scene, they too let slip sounds of admiration.		The other girls hopped down from the carriages parked on the hillside. As they laid eyes upon this scene, they too let slip sounds of admiration.
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	Reflected in their eyes were the majestic white-gold walls surrounding the octagonal city.		Reflected in their eyes were the majestic white-gold walls surrounding the octagonal city.

	There were ~~watch towers~~ located at each of the eight corners~~, surrounding~~ the giant hemispherical palace in the middle, divided into beautiful blocks dotted with numerous ~~jungle~~ and clear ~~lakes~~.		There were soaring watchtowers located at each of the eight corners of the walls. These surrounded the giant hemispherical palace in the middle from which radiated numerous streets that were divided into beautiful blocks dotted with numerous parks and clear ponds.

	Inside those blocks, one could ~~also~~ see ~~lots of house built with~~ red ~~bricks~~ and buildings made ~~out of marbles,~~ with ~~distinct order of elevation, covering the entire block in~~ bright colors.		Inside each of those blocks, one could see numerous red-brick houses and other marble buildings, distinctly arranged by height. They made sure that each block dazzled with bright colors.

	Antique castles and buildings ~~were characteristics of~~ the city.		Antique castles and buildings defined the city.

	~~People~~ probably built up this city based on that theme.		The people probably built up the rest of this city based on that very theme.

	”The Ruin City, Ruin’s Gear. ~~Right now~~, inside of the Principality of Wanheim it ~~can be compared with~~ the ~~capital~~ as ~~big cities~~.”		”The Ruin City, also known as Ruin’s Gear. Where we are, inside of the Principality of Wanheim - You could easily place it on the same level as the Imperial Capital in terms of a City.”

	Jumping off ~~from~~ the carriage next to Lux, the Academy ~~Headmaster~~ and also Philuffy’s sister——Relie came to ~~them~~ and ~~said~~.		Jumping off the carriage next to Lux, the Academy's Headmistress and also Philuffy’s sister——Relie-sensei came to Lux's group and started speaking.

	“Ruin, City (Ruin’s, Gear) ……”		“Ruin, City (Ruin’s Gear) ……”

	~~In his childhood, back when~~ he ~~started~~ living ~~inside~~ the Old Empire palace, Lux had heard about this ~~city~~.		When he was a child still living in the Old Empire's palace, Lux had heard about this place.

	The Second Ruin “Dungeon” was located just ~~below~~ the city~~, and it~~ had already been integrated ~~with~~ the city.		The Second Ruin “Dungeon” was located just beneath the city. It had already been integrated within the city's construction itself.

	The city had ~~set up a lot of defense bases~~ to combat the Abyss that ~~came~~ out ~~from inside~~ the ~~ruin, at~~ the same time there was also research of the treasures that were excavated from the ~~ruin~~, ~~causing~~ this place ~~to become~~ a ~~stage~~ for ~~the~~ research institutions ~~to compete~~.		The city had constructed numerous defenses to combat the Abyss that often found their way out of the Ruin. At the same time, there was also active research into the treasures that were excavated from the Dungeon. Thus, this place was a major hub for competing research institutions.

	Built in the center was a palace~~, the~~ upper part was the residential ~~area which was called~~ as the Canopy~~, the~~ middle ~~had~~ a ~~big opening~~, and ~~underground there was~~ a gate that connected to the Dungeon.		Built in the center of the city was a great palace. The upper part of city was the residential quarter often referred to as the Canopy. The middle area was home to a large clearing, and lowest portion held a gate that connected to the Dungeon.

	Originally, if ~~there was no~~ exploration license ~~you couldn’t go into~~ the Ruin~~, but because~~ of this site ~~was too special~~, ~~so to a~~ certain ~~extent it could be an exception~~.		Originally, if one did not possess an exploration license, entry the Ruin was strictly forbidden. But due to the special nature of this site, certain exceptions were possible for the certain guests.

	”I used to come here ~~to negotiate~~, ~~but~~ this is my first time coming here since I became the ~~headmaster.~~ Wait till ~~after going through~~ this mountain we ~~will~~ be ~~able to get~~ to ~~the~~ Ruin City ~~immediately.~~”		“I used to come here often for negotiations. I will say, though, this is my first time coming here since I became the Headmistress! Wait till we get past this mountain, we'll be to Ruin City in no time!”

	“Yeah, right on time, I’m also ~~feeling~~ a little motion sickness, I can breathe ~~out~~ a little after hearing that.”		“Yeah, right on time! I’m also starting to feel a little motion sickness. I can finally breathe a little easier after hearing that.”

	Lux sighed with relief, Relie smiled at him and said.		Lux sighed with relief, Relie-sensei smiled at him and said,

	~~”You have~~ nothing else to say? ~~But well~~, ~~this~~ is ~~Lux’s~~ style.”		“You've nothing else to say? Well, I guess that's is our Lux-kun’s style, after all.”

	~~”What~~ do you mean?”		“What do you mean, Sensei?”

	Lux was ~~puzzled~~ a little, Relie revealed a rare subtle expression, and then ~~remove her line of sight~~.		Lux was a little puzzled. Relie-sensei revealed a rare, subtle expression, and then turned away. Her voice became somber.

	~~”The~~ messenger from the palace ~~told~~ me, that you acted as ~~the~~ bait ~~for~~ the “Imperial Capital Recapture Plan” in order to save me? ~~Sorry, only now~~ I ~~come to say~~ thank you.”		”A messenger from the palace informed me... he said that you acted as bait as part of the “Imperial Capital Recapture Plan”? That you did that in order to save me? I'm sorry that I couldn't thank you earlier, Lux.”

	”You really don’t need to thank me, I ~~also~~ volunteered to do so. As Airi said, I’m just ~~messing around~~.”		”You really don’t need to thank me. I volunteered to do so. As Airi said, I’m just doing whatever's needed.”

	Lux said with a wry smile, Relie also faintly smiled and said.		Lux said with a wry smile, Relie also faintly smiled and said.

	“You really haven’t changed at all, really——It’s great to have you beside Phi.”		“You really haven’t changed at all, really——It’s great to have you here beside Phi.”

	Relie seemed to think so from her heart, but the fact was, it was Lux who wanted to say those words.		Relie-sensei seemed to think so from her heart, but the fact was, it was Lux who wanted to say those words.

	When he was little, Lux witnessed the Old Empire abandoned its citizens when they were in dangers and fell into a hell of despair. If not for Philuffy who saved him at the time, his future would not have been as bright.		When he was little, Lux witnessed the Old Empire abandoned its citizens when they were in dangers and fell into a hell of despair. If not for Philuffy who saved him at the time, his future would not have been as bright.

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	==Episode 2: Ruin City (Ruin’s Gear)==		==Episode 2 – Ruin City (Ruin’s Gear)==

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	Two days later.		Two days later.

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